【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ w- E% K/ m9 V: f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& }  j' W, g4 _4 r& |& xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 A% a% O/ M8 |6 L7 F5 u; A9 e5 \; zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ P; X$ A, f' B$ Q, ]+ {4 [* A$ fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
" x9 \6 `2 k  A( L, nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) I2 P: n1 B1 ]0 v5 N: Q3 rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ j2 A/ c5 k$ w: K) m1 C. MEvery other word you utter is love
5 O+ s$ c6 O- b, LI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ V* X( c/ y; q4 ONothing can compare to my love
# x! |1 f- M  h" HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- u  p9 s0 f2 [# ^3 H' m4 z. Y" }1 qI want so much to see inside your heart
% T* Z+ s3 ]1 R6 QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ B7 E. c) S* m! k  K& \I regret not dying
% g# |2 n  f3 n6 V% s8 eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) O% `2 @/ d$ M& LWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- K5 i* g; D' c# @9 U2 f' i7 DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. Y' u- _  W. m' }2 g- ^- L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: J, Y( @  B; ~<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ I( f' w2 A) J% j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 b) S* M, U$ \& _/ ?" v# n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 c- R! O: j+ d/ e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 Y8 L2 G& H* d% f<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ h; f% P& o" v2 S& y+ J' u  G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* F+ ~- \. }5 R8 G: o; V+ T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& B& P+ H; y3 w: e, M$ p! z( e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% S" k* p3 O2 T# f4 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 E% f6 g4 P- U5 _& Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ E$ r/ v4 \; m8 [4 G# L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 z$ Z9 v! ^7 L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) i! D4 D2 A' Q7 s4 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: T# l6 g' H+ f& Z8 @; A- n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% }% F5 Z$ s" m* {( g- M2 v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* s) j. z, b; z( Q( p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% G( q6 d# i2 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
( u  Q7 s( J. j$ Q' V; ^' s; }+ |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- e# C( }2 ~% q3 _7 ~8 V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 F* f( v7 T% t0 O% J  D5 c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" l' F2 B+ x* M2 I6 `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& d( o! \) }' P# ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 q1 @: G2 V. P' z) H8 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& z. l3 T% v# X2 E& X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% I; {( k3 l$ o& t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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$ |( s; K" T, g0 `' R* m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 l+ L" v" v4 y( J; n8 p! T<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>