【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 |" L' l5 f( K3 v! M  V" X- ZThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ M! c2 ]. i3 WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- Z/ L% c. g) M. O: qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' [  J0 N" v: J5 e3 R4 oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ v) m; l5 t8 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* ]5 q& P: l" ]. Z$ q# f0 uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 a' O5 s7 c$ }# g4 \! C5 B2 pI want so much to see inside your heart
, Y" }. ?4 ~7 }) a% P$ Z$ J: ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  I1 t. ]+ z' H6 s- `I’m still filled with fear
( Q% s) N4 y# H6 e# R  |" @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( n. T1 w( L' ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: _/ H: G( }" n. u9 p* e- [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# N1 I3 A( M8 L" \' s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 c! I- D* b  i8 V) S* b" x: f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ g) E( S7 `" I+ m+ |" r+ P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, q! z( H2 j% I8 Y# v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" Z# C* J# D, y! q/ B! s1 ~' \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 M" Q; w7 T5 O' i* J  w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* P, a8 X* \! g. d' I: N4 ~0 v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' k- |& s" w' |! ?5 \& ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  a3 N1 ^# o% R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ ], p! a8 q( Q& ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ Z% `+ q/ J6 T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: R( r8 x) |' j$ o, B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; E% ?" g- V! X* _. J' S; H5 A- q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 E. L1 r$ d" Z: s9 X' n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& ~) b5 S) n/ k4 c& X; Z! A8 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 X1 O# G; w' P- K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( O4 S2 I" e+ W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' S2 V5 e( }# M, }" O( S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, y! c4 G0 f+ r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 i" b6 @  b7 }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  _+ [& C" w8 U8 X+ B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  Q: t3 ^/ ]2 l% D) `- l' Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' R/ X' L; O( g% a( g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; J$ v% h( s0 @+ L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, ?( ?7 s2 i0 m+ a& F9 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- |; I+ J+ c& w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>