【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- J7 ?) R" Z9 ^歌词我附在后面。
8 E7 Y- K' z3 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
# [. [2 j1 Y9 I" ]* I# [Making the sky glitter like gold,
% P' ^( b3 B$ _% ]) S# u5 y  TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  {" x& A" T  U) z0 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 s5 _- S2 ^) c' b! P" H5 ]* @2 RWith the moon kissing it every night
- a: I5 j/ L# z9 y/ qSeeing the sky content with its love
3 S0 L6 i4 @6 ~1 {8 K% Z2 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' \9 ?) C: Q: u3 yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 z# z6 T* ?9 uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% f: p4 a( W7 jI love you I love you with all my heart
# X. @7 X0 T) g7 b% JNothing can compare to my love
+ B/ G8 s0 P& J2 B/ Z) cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 D3 r$ K' Q3 U3 t, aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 J# u- ]4 }! S. W$ h+ nI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, O+ d' @# b. b* C  z" `5 HWith such a tongue as yours,
+ l6 D# \& y) ^: _# IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; I/ N$ [$ T1 v5 _8 F( AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 m3 ^  Z4 e. a9 X, mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 C8 V) g7 v- z% W6 F, J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ ^% c' ~5 ]8 h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ u! H: P5 }8 z* h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 d! b& @9 W+ ~, ?# T, O" z6 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 {6 B2 ?4 U; Q0 m/ a8 ]( L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 w$ k4 q9 t' R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, V8 k6 r0 G1 }; B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 Z, B3 E2 u0 x) w  n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 }! {  V; i2 X) G$ I4 E) G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 b8 W$ w% B& J% R5 ~5 Y9 f& q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 E4 }* V+ x' R, U) w; x  A) h<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" l4 {5 m+ t  S4 r8 v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 ?* p* o9 g  ?- f<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 d& q) J. A8 O) L* n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) `* t7 X% ~. [# ?9 Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 i, R# @9 v9 |1 |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 K7 Z, z- [' J. L# `; i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 H& `' {/ F7 B' p3 t8 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! t% {6 R1 ~" ]& z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, M, z" t6 U" v: k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 m, `2 G" U# i* i! G; t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ N0 D2 Q% }, K7 a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 \/ N# P% q9 R' c; E<P>I regret not dying</P>
  D) N# L$ z0 a) g* k/ L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" e" ~+ v# j7 A; S: k: T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 Q' N+ M7 m  `! J: P, i" k' j" Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 S$ T7 }1 Y- j+ a: u/ d3 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 R2 @) m/ c) v" v  Z2 n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. C7 h* A, G9 |8 Y0 {. {<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 E! r) H' G& F' N; v" s0 m4 [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) [/ F& z$ k: L' Y9 u8 P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 q" w( Q2 v& r' ^8 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 K3 \- B& r% ?+ b% C" G7 c( U1 V<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. g; l; h& V/ B我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>