【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  p' Y7 [( Z% y* H( e" |歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ \  @) Q+ O4 o7 b8 p1 l" HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 }6 M- k# {) e; x2 fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 N  ]7 O8 j' tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ c6 d# E" u( Z% s8 H/ Y7 BI really want to know just how much you love me
( [# @6 |  R) Y( J( ^7 `! Y! KI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- {' `# E2 ?6 x. b% ^7 fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! X0 \! u6 C! ]I want so much to see inside your heart
6 E/ I+ a# I" O) t8 v9 ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' M" \0 y" U' Z/ n9 s! F* h  ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 S0 X. O5 E8 e5 x+ u: yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  M) |4 V2 m8 y4 u) Z. c. _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 x+ Y7 z% g. m/ V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 ^2 w  O5 w/ H4 d2 X, u' d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ y3 u) Q# w+ P8 L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 o- E0 X; m8 p1 _, ]& H<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ?5 b3 h  z0 d) G$ h' v$ f. C' F<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 K& A' ~9 Z6 t+ a- d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( L' t, c  f7 V4 r4 D; }<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 h6 h; j" l2 ]+ H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% O& P0 _0 f. l1 \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& K3 p' {# @# r1 d$ P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ |6 A$ s! o1 F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 g2 f! b6 n4 P; [* L7 p$ T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 }: q) Q# X& d! Y! ?9 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 m3 q! l% M* p) e7 V; I+ \0 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( {) I" X8 E9 V! a2 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 f% b6 \3 O& r<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 b8 o' w: U2 @5 r7 D. _6 k1 H$ t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' l* m& T0 O  U& v1 [, n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 S5 n8 r# L7 e* e9 {! e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! G$ Y: @, c, }5 D6 ~  K<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 Z/ m; i% p, {! s( {2 W" ?/ Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 h; Y; V/ ]+ [* h  n/ B: d% z; i$ g. f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 n; e" e0 s4 k8 G& Q. D' Z$ e8 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 v! o1 B) e+ A+ V' t% Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 _0 D$ i& ?# i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 B% _) x* x* K: q  P; G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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5 D  {; v" |$ ?3 k% t' r0 K0 s- J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 J" i, @5 H/ e; O/ E8 _$ k9 A, D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>