【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ e2 P; y0 R7 a$ e: r0 r" tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ K% K7 g% E% I( B1 }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 M7 U" Y+ _0 J9 s& }$ D- O8 B7 cWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 w$ u9 U3 R* r" B- E$ O# H) _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, N& X# D$ f2 T6 C' gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" i% o; \6 `3 \+ M8 xI want so much to see inside your heart
& F2 e/ J* u, O: P/ sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' @# }2 f2 D$ g/ E: E2 N" JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 v- d; w$ B6 x  QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* x% Z% h. m8 `4 _: Q: O7 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! T$ m2 j: t; [/ p, o, o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ F1 O2 {6 ]: H# D9 J/ \( w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# R6 H" X' W. ~/ \! q/ C7 @) f<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 s% A+ w6 X2 a( _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 h! p; P: e- H$ f) b. W6 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% n0 ~& h4 }4 m! T0 _) C<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; M. x& ~$ ]8 ^2 n  I' ]5 F7 x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! k) H" T- K: }1 [- B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; R, z  X* T  K1 k/ }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* i( @( P9 Z( A6 e<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: d" Y3 |7 m: W4 W# L2 r<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 b  L3 X; }( {# v4 M* p  }3 S9 ^3 \; y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 i/ H. V8 T) }( e, s<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, N3 y# m* l7 P& `& y4 S. S: G9 l0 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ Z% l5 Q& d( Z/ E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# y' Z. |0 E3 ~: D# ]" ?4 m7 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ J/ m& P; [5 O0 f* I" c- X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, x% \- Q! Q/ u+ W! a" u2 ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* _5 s) j7 ?' c+ E! k% l# |' p8 V: K<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  |) X* v7 a: ]& O$ x5 L6 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% Y, ]" s( H/ }3 a2 k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 x& [7 L( b: Q  ]<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& c4 W5 F' L* \, E7 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; ?8 x# f) Z. c3 J* i  h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 K! U- G+ j2 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( ~' a* F/ E! C% B! Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 O; J7 W0 I( v<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 Z" s* ~2 A" ~7 ~; O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. l' V  ]% p1 \9 v8 ^! E1 u/ K5 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 Q: D% T$ `) G7 \! F 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 Q6 n% f* T: F  ?- |* T+ {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>