【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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' H: c$ r9 Q; e歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 ^/ i7 }0 }. F$ u" l  d0 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
" |# L( v; V) {1 W: H" p' i- mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 N. C5 _2 B  u+ n, C( `$ `The sky is happy down to its soul
% o$ E- r8 R4 w0 n6 r( W; |With the moon kissing it every night
( e8 r5 s- ~. ISeeing the sky content with its love
  x5 H8 Y2 H1 i1 H- D* \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 Q( z  z) m- N3 T, @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ V$ _6 _* |  g/ ?* Q* W2 J0 T3 yI really want to know just how much you love me
) j. g: }# w' B- q% t( ZI love you I love you with all my heart
1 k! }( H+ U$ YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' O1 M2 K7 ^" Z) ^I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
$ ^* ~7 \6 N2 i% [- AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  ^' N$ T8 F, ^4 I5 `8 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" F9 B/ ], {; c" x; U* m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  z. H! X2 _: r! [2 w2 z5 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, y' U3 p; O  P<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( _1 J9 ?' o0 ?. I& U- m6 u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 C, {: q' k/ t" a5 O$ }, J% A<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% E$ n' ^1 r& J1 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 t; C  ~3 T0 F7 h! l4 y1 m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 J# G+ `: c/ j$ p9 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& [# h1 m% h0 B9 g<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( W* t8 b, J3 Z6 D# d9 |6 D8 m<P>你无需担心</P>
9 l0 x# e& S9 K) }! }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! S7 @/ P/ N8 f0 f/ W' `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* C( d2 H" j; ]) j3 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 {* R! ?0 P% ~: c) R; T# i! D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" C" Y2 @9 l7 V0 T. i  z( q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ Y* z: _; j3 W  K; }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ E0 K( `( A% d$ e, X# g- z! |<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 o! m3 d  W& [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. O5 B& p0 J) I# I/ L" \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 K& k5 _6 x* X  R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! O' @' j- ^: W8 m7 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( A! }# s2 D1 n4 w5 i! _8 C% n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: ^2 T* D( |. n" v" @$ m4 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, A0 C* Q1 }- r: c) n) y, I5 U4 H! v! J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' w3 v- ?7 i" ?9 E$ H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 [* H$ A& \  W' t6 y4 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: L+ v8 M8 ?& @- `+ g9 A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ O" N8 p" U+ w0 X% I' q/ j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- _. [1 H# u/ R1 p! q7 E7 K5 N' u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>