【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 y  V  E, V4 ?- H0 U歌词我附在后面。
" d* _/ _  Y* Z" |8 j; _9 {1 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! }1 G# Y/ r2 c8 k. v: oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 `, m7 r+ a6 K) c5 ?! EWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  d" z5 Y3 Q! s4 R4 z% q* @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  a9 p! L/ T1 a0 uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* r7 D9 T* p9 I* D* x& eSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( x! s7 k% ]# I& J3 n) Q6 tYou needn’t fear anything
/ t8 i" D  f/ r) W4 [: D2 ?2 D( _2 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 H4 V' T& `  ?5 lI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" r" C, u" G7 v6 D5 V& z; |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 P3 q" C; Y1 n3 m2 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 I* M' @  W& GI regret not dying
: v0 {" ^, V& X# kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# F4 C* Q7 f6 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 m5 _/ k! q- ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 f1 y' w" p* |: x: @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ T# c$ ^( _, V8 ?6 \) [% X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 s7 g- r; ^1 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; E4 G0 S& q" V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 V: r0 c/ E3 u7 Y- A0 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, u1 N8 J# b! o5 T, Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 P$ U" }( r' I$ D' G. r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' ?' g5 O' E7 |- w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; H( G6 t9 l. ~2 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 Q6 m5 C& K5 T, W$ z) v2 v<P>你无需担心</P>
  ?2 T5 N9 J' U% P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- ^5 F, c5 L% W! Q: H# {<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 H0 O6 c7 f1 c5 Q. M* C<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
: G- r/ d  X0 G6 V( Y$ R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 [- O8 y/ @9 \5 G0 o9 q( ]<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 U: z9 {& F* v2 Z<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  E7 V9 m& U$ x5 A& @/ B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. |  _5 a+ g5 k& T<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ l9 l) F( j# b5 m$ u# |- E* I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ T* Q8 P6 L- g6 E" [<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! {5 v; D  t+ u6 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 j' {  t& [4 [( @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! @! j: D' _& I1 r. o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% ~1 ?3 d7 K; u& E8 X4 q( s0 J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* h8 ^9 d- A2 a2 c# S! O0 f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 M1 S: E8 y( _: E# |! t) G<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 I) i: j1 O- @) o2 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>