【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. Y" x# \9 S: v1 U歌词我附在后面。
: }6 K) o0 ?! x; S! ^  dThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ k9 B3 k* N2 N9 tMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& u6 K. }) b% P6 x! a) ?+ Z( NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ V2 O3 }  y  H; t2 ]# @The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) g  u9 R, t6 nYou needn’t fear anything
7 {+ ~; W$ U7 m4 U1 l+ q% C2 p4 {7 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- B8 S2 }& \6 ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( n: r3 ]' z% q! l* l+ ~- Y( b6 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ c- G+ p# ^! ^+ T+ JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& w3 {, W# H: F/ ^, W* c. eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! n6 {/ s) q0 s; M; w1 N' N2 EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 Q& \% `; P5 Y6 _$ a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( g, K8 v2 j, x1 Z- q8 x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( {1 B6 Q) T/ s$ a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 S! _( Z6 m& j& E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ C4 G9 ~$ t) s: D4 n" Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 x4 V& N) s% Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. k5 m1 a! ?+ m  |; U/ l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 c' ~( o! c- w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  [; |+ T$ s% ]6 r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 ?! H: A6 ^7 ?: E* l, j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& w- K. T; N* z- G5 f7 B* H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 p9 a$ S# b! s; E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. s) T* h) \! c4 Q, O<P>I regret not dying</P>
) d* X& ?  C1 P5 |* ~% {! U* W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( S1 Y7 c2 |! D1 x. e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 k$ ?0 m) g& z4 j  P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ E; I/ i0 Z6 b5 }1 J  T- |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
( ~/ [4 }) F! m; P5 Q1 P5 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# {* }/ W; j5 L- e$ F  w% O3 i<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 J9 m! B8 G- z' G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>