【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  r, Z: Y% X4 E7 ]  ~( G7 R歌词我附在后面。
" o9 n) n! V9 E' h1 A( q4 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 L4 q* l# C1 G' k+ ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* Y1 f/ O' V7 ~6 `With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 P  ?, a# k' t0 ~$ BYou needn’t fear anything
7 [5 {) _& O1 z8 pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" M( ^  O, T  U! M- e* {, y2 l; fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- {9 D" U5 g# B. ^5 G' m2 wI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 m+ u0 q, |. G$ `8 N! X7 V/ _4 A. UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 A$ c# F2 h# ?$ b$ B& uI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 d, H$ C5 e( ]( v" W; xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# C4 j* O+ u! A; i* g1 w' Q& ?' }With such a tongue as yours,
+ ]7 |# F4 s4 f) I8 k8 o5 U; LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- C/ ^3 U% d7 k# ]/ {) r& p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 z, |% r7 C" w. H& f/ D9 b5 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 J- ^2 u! G$ ~9 F# J5 T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 K3 u- l* l' ^0 H/ C8 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! V& x/ L2 B: p% I0 g! G1 z1 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 I" {$ q! {$ _8 V4 O# E* _3 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; M) a/ c- w  G# [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ e, Y  v8 z) {3 h2 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; Y: a. k; K1 A) t8 j2 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" ~! N. M+ D9 \" i& u* h* J<P>你无需担心</P>
1 C+ [. ~$ J3 r4 V& S' }" R( f6 d) u1 j" W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; X" K' X6 ~8 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" H4 f2 L5 e( F<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 m+ Z  G5 T" j) x1 F+ T<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ U; {  U7 ]! ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 {/ S! T1 m, z  d2 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) c; S1 W5 |4 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! S6 A" U2 P1 B! J/ z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- I' B2 ~+ y9 ?2 e: ]! L3 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- \' d1 v# o: _: e& P" Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) B. L# R0 B1 [. J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ V- }! [% J- ^9 h" s# c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 C3 B7 @" ~7 ]( k! l) N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 g0 r, Z8 B1 @5 z: R3 C  K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) V1 k, m6 W! t5 W5 P/ w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 [/ Y/ h7 ?5 N8 l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 k  I3 |. t% R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 m' f9 v+ k* A& H3 c8 H5 p我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 f" X3 h3 Q/ h7 A9 N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>