【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 L* G( I; R. m4 {5 PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- ]! G  Z- S1 \0 H) vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 o! N5 K+ A% P3 y# ]0 y, oThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ K' Y/ h0 N- |8 ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. [; w& z' Y) }  ^# HYou needn’t fear anything
# |& `: X/ q0 R4 lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ^( Q2 B3 O9 k" m! s% Q3 D" xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" A' A7 D7 J2 @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ C/ E/ N9 g4 T# U6 J, PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
% n2 Z/ m# i  r0 }3 O3 qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 o5 V; ~! L2 U/ t2 VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 H' V: Q5 A9 V( _" aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 {! d4 \; R) OWith such a tongue as yours,
! _8 A: d5 s0 C1 S, v( e* N$ TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. F5 ~* `8 Q; IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ ^, X3 I- L6 p; T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
4 a; {9 G# B  l/ ^+ \2 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, ~* u0 z: G" E' q( x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! Y! K* |# z( y* N1 N. R# r1 \<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 P" E6 `5 M6 F6 w: s% a5 L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) j5 @% B$ ^" S! p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% |1 V3 D. K4 B/ |9 Z4 @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* O! ^- [' `/ v1 E( H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, a' Y0 c2 O3 H$ x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 P4 M4 q1 B2 h/ a% C4 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* @/ r; R& R- @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; s* t; X1 u3 d  n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  D8 L  }+ y; |, e0 [+ d6 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# @8 [9 o6 `: E/ X0 f  r* I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' D5 v" |! n3 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. k+ |& D* h9 u/ I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 y9 E) ?' C2 V  k# }, A: O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  X1 N0 K% `5 q8 v$ }5 W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 m$ v/ F" y# k6 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 p6 J  h; |, J+ ~# f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 g! ~8 w/ }3 k4 [4 C# q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 v6 e; |  w8 B0 C5 ~- Y9 C4 d' E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: B" S" G% M9 x: N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 u1 ?6 U* Y8 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 N5 g+ x3 R7 R, R' h<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. c$ j! D8 J- K# h- Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* H/ j* M% {' L" {( u* f<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' N7 w% T' O) }, a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 y4 ^8 A) L4 d) v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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