【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# V/ R! U+ i- z4 _# `+ x" e# ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& [* v$ y6 m. p: h2 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ a7 i# }: I! `The sky is happy down to its soul
! [& }8 P, W& ?3 _! bWith the moon kissing it every night
$ i9 H* K" |, s% U: E: k& xSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 U: F, \2 ^  ]" x6 K' hMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& T* j% l6 @6 I3 k! X( kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' A1 {  s% O% f$ jI want so much to see inside your heart
- T. b+ @( y8 ^  w9 t/ VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ Y, L1 l7 ?. `( r9 [+ f7 cI regret not dying
: ?1 h7 q5 e& M& S% PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# ~9 a& M  @& t3 r7 k* t7 P4 Y# aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ O% E& [, O% R% _4 U% e7 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ a; Z0 f. O( Y" Q5 I( i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# Q# E* `$ s% G<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- w% |, O) Y# @" ^& ?0 M5 ?! A: ?4 Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 N+ l$ {1 Y4 t. B: q0 @; f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 H/ }, T, P, N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 v8 f& y0 G. l- i8 g" `" ?" f: u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; N$ g) m& s7 _5 [8 o' s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. x) j. a  {* \+ G  h6 B' `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! f; s$ X9 D0 g; J7 {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# V1 D1 U$ J. N4 `& Y$ d. k; |( w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" W9 V* \9 ]: V2 T4 i6 X+ Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) Y6 R' L5 y0 m* ?; @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 c$ U7 M6 t% D. v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# f! I  ?; g/ T1 Z, N$ Q. \2 {* Z& \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ x7 ^$ i  v6 C8 s) V: Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( M5 ?, i+ v  m- ~% u) p<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 O% p2 P) Z$ a0 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) ^3 m4 S, O! ?) n; S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 ~( u' f5 ~+ u) `; ], G  A<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 h7 p; K# g- b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% {$ G$ u7 u. C" f! F' r2 @1 c2 w2 t9 u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 ~8 e; w  Q, a7 a2 c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, P6 _' x2 [( |  v7 B) {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, J" _* q2 a5 N; {! A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* u" a8 Q( F) s1 q* H0 ~- p5 e) W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>