【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# `# ?1 V, L. J# G# n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
$ H4 O# W$ a/ D: ^" k5 I5 W; {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) ?% t8 p1 e$ `( v% R6 DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) {2 l, n" T% }5 TSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 I& y' g$ I5 KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ y% `& u0 W7 I% v+ b, NEvery other word you utter is love
" u  }0 J, O% H3 J/ ^7 q7 }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
: \) Z2 S" H- ~6 j# }, A) T! v0 @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ Q: W# D6 o' R# s, [" e. xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% R9 W# g( M% d$ G6 r# ^+ _Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 e! t/ v9 t0 ^$ T/ x- F5 ^' bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' N3 p/ ?2 o* S9 F, nWith such a tongue as yours,
; E$ C$ T* x% s2 K; \2 J" h+ y% T: FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
% c* a. r: b5 t1 E( z" nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% @3 k( E1 I# g' V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* c  f) p8 o- R5 Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: i: o/ e, e8 v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
$ h) F% ]1 q7 n* L, n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 k7 B, x; o0 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 O  y+ C/ S" j( d% @% B  e  H2 [+ T$ B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- q1 r3 ^$ ?; G6 J1 Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 B4 \4 V3 O1 a% |" I" p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' A- F1 t0 q. u$ g' @" |. n1 T8 t$ v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  K' H  |( L* h/ C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 S* ?7 X+ T! b! X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 Z1 E5 D$ L/ c- E& ?' F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; O- g3 a6 Q5 C+ }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! k. c1 ^6 Z; v7 u% l<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ |/ [$ {2 @% a3 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ G  Y, w- {+ d! L<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 X* q' o2 r: R7 D" o2 G- \<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 T3 {" |& d2 K3 U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# L9 e+ K) g* ^3 D3 F1 ?<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 s. X" g3 G1 }+ A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  ~% F8 J" c4 F1 z! P/ ^2 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. M5 ?8 e9 M& c2 t6 E<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. b" j6 Z8 W1 D, T. \* S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( v) I4 ]9 g9 o7 J' N  {2 ?我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 z( J* L4 r; ?0 W3 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>