【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
5 f5 b  W7 Q. ]7 J0 h" ?# BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! u: `$ r; B* AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# o1 l$ v0 E% M3 h, BThe sky is happy down to its soul
  {' E. a, A6 [# WWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, F: c* @# M3 |& a' V6 j7 k' F1 WIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 j0 Y6 i# H. g- i. G) _I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 M9 M3 r- G( m2 R& F; X5 A) RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: m+ U6 r3 e- nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' x2 M; i# n% x* M/ m; lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 C& ~4 ~/ K4 fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" D, L1 O2 B! N3 QI regret not dying
3 B+ Z# E7 w7 z7 m  {9 o+ gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: e* T+ n0 U+ v& P# EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 ~3 L# ^) v7 l5 W! M6 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( G* B# S$ o3 r+ ~<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) ]* e# n  I- f* v% p8 V4 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 D2 ~1 F, o( r* A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# q% E& [' u: w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ ^% g6 h* P' F  K+ ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 c, \9 w3 \0 a. c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 F- I: m2 Q* p/ u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: s9 Z: a% @( ?5 f) k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# b+ S1 T5 |" u9 M+ V% V1 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 X5 G2 L: l+ M8 I1 l<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 R+ f" x5 Q6 ?) t0 R% E<P>你无需担心</P>
' F; b9 D2 g) N6 z6 H7 A- {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 a/ P) q! h5 K. r$ t' Q0 a" [+ R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; l5 c2 I  ]5 `- G5 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ n3 V# d/ |; |$ K; e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# j$ E; C% `3 c6 o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* ]3 H* Q) [4 C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* O" w& H0 D9 `/ D( z0 ?) _: @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( m! M# S+ n) r3 {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* f  m! }) T( G1 a( g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 C9 C+ j8 [5 m/ m$ e) e/ v5 a4 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, S  g! }! ?: y0 i# n( |5 t3 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 n# g+ C* u+ C3 }" ^4 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 E3 H6 Z9 {6 I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! E  u% Q# r: }: F/ p# E7 ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 B; N- l- a' a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! U* Q2 g. V' G3 ]" Q+ V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 Y9 h2 a) H& h# A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( Q7 d4 x' R* e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 x' o) N* I2 E- ^6 \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 ]. b: D. H$ B) @; n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ w- i( o0 H, r7 ]0 D; I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 N* V; V' E$ M3 h( V1 }8 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 `( V! r* a( b2 h我请你剖开它
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9 T( i( ]3 ?/ _; [' ?. Y. w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 g7 f* x5 r* c  J$ i/ o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>