【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' E, i# B! h+ u+ G5 EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 {- l7 Z  I- Q9 U3 p7 H" qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, `8 d2 Y: {" m7 Q2 y% R' iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; `' F- G# a& g' T: ?, EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) l3 \; g% n) g, q( P6 U5 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
9 k: x" {- U2 ^$ n& `3 ]Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& }" Q: m) x; y( y0 cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# r# Y$ E4 R& ?  GI really want to know just how much you love me
: X, J. Q5 a; ~) w( aI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- i$ f! T8 K9 Y: J7 k" l: R4 e4 G& }Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) h" q. H9 V8 uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ ~9 ]7 ^9 D1 P5 UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# L* j7 x* g7 u% L/ e9 k/ aI’m still filled with fear
8 x3 S" H+ b; }3 q% y. k3 P1 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 ?) k6 {' h2 X% VI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, v* ?3 Y+ V* [- F; ?+ d& R5 HIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, H# V. a* J8 |8 P$ s* L2 jRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* g/ f7 R' d) r, L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 Z% Q  o+ f* A( K: _2 p+ G5 Z% \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% w# O  ^0 K: d4 J) ~, X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 W/ v4 f4 j' o/ h( ^7 A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  u8 J6 L7 Z) I: n! K  t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 G2 ~9 s! G  H. v3 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 w: ]/ [$ d9 ?( x, |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  `9 y, Z7 j( F. X- Q1 O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' ~! `0 l3 t& e( \, B$ c# g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 n% S( d) o# B( X' p! E$ V. u+ W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( O, ?$ Q7 a2 ]0 K<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. v6 A' I/ E5 M6 G* L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, j2 F+ B/ ~* b1 @6 ], z3 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 V5 p# a4 U# h" q- c  X+ n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  M% \: Z) q+ A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% n' Y" e6 c) ?  {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 A" X2 m* l; f) q; s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. ^, @$ P; x" C7 N: c$ _( E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ Y2 @. G0 X* h2 Y5 z% k9 r7 K2 S<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# A  H, w+ m( p6 C0 d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 P( }4 w1 n1 f! V( q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 R6 |: w$ E; V5 t) c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 N) J0 Q3 ^* F; f  ~% J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ J! Z0 ?/ Y! H! E  A我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 s5 D8 F* X2 L- s8 R1 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>