【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 P# U! x. z8 h歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ {, V8 j0 `) w! ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 I, c$ C% I3 f+ f1 }$ a+ YThe sky is happy down to its soul
' H9 i' a; O, x/ BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# `, m: b/ y% i& R% ]1 w. A& `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 b8 Z  A/ D% O% ]You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 A% C. ]! \  G3 x) Z- G6 @Every other word you utter is love
# A% v+ Y$ K# {* E3 f+ hI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 \4 ]8 y$ |* _; X, U1 T# K+ INothing can compare to my love
/ \8 A; P0 O( N' X2 A, R& KCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ p" R1 ]3 g1 YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 {6 k+ K5 c  ?5 L9 cI want so much to see inside your heart
' E  o9 [! z8 `- S( P# Q! yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* m* @  Q$ O  ~, GI’m still filled with fear
) d. J6 E& ?6 X" ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 \$ t& q. c" m9 O" x3 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 U0 u) {1 ^) E0 a. A( DRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 h: {" r' ~2 k. d; {' M/ l6 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ X& J, R( I  }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 @' f( L* m( _/ d  `+ s/ k- d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 d# I) V3 N" n; H<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# O2 [1 d. Q: N7 Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 d5 \6 k( F2 ?0 `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: |) ~9 U2 A6 _0 |+ Z4 c4 l- ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ Q; l- I% M. r5 a5 ?4 ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# g4 z3 z) J. w' [4 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( R. a7 o+ _7 ]5 \4 ]( O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& v2 b+ m4 z# L: Y" F% h4 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ D2 d+ ~2 w' H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" D" l. B# d' I6 {. l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! d8 ^  e+ T. j/ m; C) {$ s. u& A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' `0 L: h' f! Y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 r/ t3 s  N0 C) p% Z3 c" q- e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 M8 i# c* U9 `  O. s6 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 w7 ], Z6 ?1 I# [2 u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# B( U  h/ S' k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; ?3 @2 W' O$ m7 J% z; U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: Y) V9 P1 J2 b; `  X; y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 B$ Q7 y0 A( V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" k% X! ^! a4 @) P$ |2 |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 G5 o+ D3 S3 Z0 e/ W8 ?0 n! x! l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& l4 F; ~% b! h7 _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 P4 P! U9 Q2 s4 v* a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# ^5 O# f9 E- n9 L7 b$ J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! ~& {7 `$ S: z, b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) s, k, n* D' l( K5 G8 y1 U9 L, M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 K% `8 S2 {# {7 `9 o1 |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) j. p6 H; y' t: q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; R! j3 ]) e% s% ]9 t% X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

2 A' P1 ], D( ~% A我请你剖开它
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/ |0 ^* Q  F1 V( K6 x& Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>