【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( V8 i/ N0 a6 y$ ~7 @The moonlight is shining brightly,
% R, f4 s6 G+ O/ t. m) J% OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' R' R3 a; m3 z$ cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 v4 D; @+ s6 T! ZWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
1 u  z/ \. T# sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! r3 S8 |: Z7 z1 L" C. mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 y/ w, N$ q, lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ `$ s8 U" Y/ q0 ~4 B9 sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 G0 h1 M9 ], J/ d8 d/ d+ p# EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! W. R2 I# l; f4 B8 }0 rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 \* }# ?+ [% T& I/ BWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 P1 f$ s. ]3 `8 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 Z6 ]4 W+ L/ }( b" ^2 }% N5 E) s<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 |' B* E% K' P5 {/ M! Z. o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 b% f: O$ f) {% M7 u* u. {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" D; J" v. q7 B- }) J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* Y. b9 X) v# t& t8 F- I6 m9 B4 [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, N  o2 l* T" b9 v5 `% F& O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( G8 q, q, V. ^( N3 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& X0 A; F/ b9 j1 G& }4 r8 o- j4 [<P>你无需担心</P>
. ?  z9 M' s. j' X# i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 N# K. g+ ?4 f/ d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ j7 _. j5 r/ N$ {. i* Y# v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) j  E+ Q! L$ {# h/ f7 ]+ H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 y& X# r; q# Y. B! l8 |0 ^# e$ {& m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 ~4 X0 v% Z( o9 E' C7 @+ a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% w4 ?3 i6 k- o/ I+ @: P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* J" b8 l' Z: s4 ?7 S: T/ Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 a$ J* H4 @' j2 h7 |4 M! X<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# `' m5 k# B7 Z, {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( P3 R! {. l/ ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' G* p  O& A% q4 M+ B( s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* o4 z1 \1 E& g1 }. {2 u4 w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  H9 I& E7 b( Z7 o- J/ R. K2 ]3 Z# g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 d6 q  u1 t3 S/ Q/ d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 I% ?0 Q2 |" O' w* T6 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 W' S2 Z! z# m- w% M) I" I- w! U1 w; m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 Q' O) m& b$ f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' }2 V# O+ @8 |6 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ }. r* ]4 V) r+ C4 M, P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 v, Q- W# t8 c( m, H6 W" f5 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ R( Q$ G* g6 j0 c5 C<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; C7 S: h- K$ X<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  w2 g) c" O+ h5 ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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* F  R0 y/ m: d) d1 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>