【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 F! ]8 L$ [" f. j歌词我附在后面。
6 Q5 ?  n" s- z8 ?; qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
: u* Q* U5 N$ c* Q1 w9 hWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; z9 Z' y+ M) Q: V4 [& E1 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 Q' y; p! k: iWith the moon kissing it every night
2 D2 v9 K% x3 ~, b2 u* fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ v$ Z3 g0 k6 F. O1 w6 y; |5 RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! ~- D5 D0 h8 t1 vI really want to know just how much you love me
: \9 B/ I3 L# I8 u/ MI love you I love you with all my heart
5 t5 N" L! Y& M) [Nothing can compare to my love
2 ~2 s, \$ t# i* iCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  u1 P' a: s# p1 k1 D; zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  h' I- A% S& G: R' {# m$ l$ uI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 B6 p9 F' ?) P. b  H4 |4 j, FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ n8 x& c' ^$ n1 s+ l0 f: XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 e' n3 t- K% g7 iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. W) s4 n# E8 N& xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; @! k$ W: W+ s$ j: z' ?9 z4 Y8 G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 s3 {, d- e* X, c0 q1 _1 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( Z% \! E; r& _$ ]/ ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! H( h3 r. b7 ~1 c- f" {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
% M% w' ]3 ]4 g. E9 {" T0 {8 f" U2 C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ S, }* L9 \, v" Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ I" K* K$ r- K7 o2 P7 R) |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( ?, a9 d% ?5 f% |( ]1 e<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 s- H. f# D' @4 l  y; T$ G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' x5 z% s' L+ {" ]7 z+ v) P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" }  S! m! O. X2 `# p+ h+ Y" f% H- a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; y' L3 G3 \7 Z9 n' R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( m9 s* V1 s* A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& O. O; A% K7 @5 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; Z2 b* {, o3 I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 q/ U4 x1 j( n<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ z4 g/ v7 {% y/ Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 z! D, h: e* Y* h# a4 ^6 U<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 G! @+ k* ]& W& H& O8 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% x! D; R; v0 y$ e3 K3 i7 c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 g* V3 U4 O: o& r+ @& o" G" ?- I( q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 `% j: p) e/ X$ U' _9 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 W) N0 n' a+ k2 ]" F# B; g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. O8 l/ Q5 W3 \4 t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: @+ m. R- u6 x8 ?7 y# h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; x  ~/ {* C6 h) q4 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ?. C# K& E1 ?9 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! C# a" c5 ^1 |' S7 l; b4 e' C<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( Q& t- X1 u- d  L" e: J! M+ K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 t1 d% o2 J0 j. y0 Z/ K  `( ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) _; i& O0 N" J" _/ |* L) t$ ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ ^2 P- q* ~, \. N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 G" R. o/ W5 n0 }1 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>