【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
+ S2 f. X! F+ o8 B8 D1 E& ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 I* q7 \1 i2 O! }! I# @# w1 o, HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, _/ u+ p  K/ T8 M% ?7 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) ~4 x9 c* n) @4 CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 i5 W0 q1 B2 J! O8 g; {$ C1 VEvery other word you utter is love
5 b% d5 F4 D6 J: u3 i9 [! LI really want to know just how much you love me
0 B* K3 L" x/ b. s2 TI love you I love you with all my heart
: G' D. S& x0 u: |; Q, K( [5 y! hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& |* T0 x: e/ T8 d& q3 }: ]" d# nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ ?0 f- P. A1 Q: RI’m still filled with fear
1 j* @4 O5 p& \3 G, y. D2 [1 p' @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" b$ W8 x3 k- _) q7 q1 HYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 v! r. u; p! A% _- q  o1 z% TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 ]9 A" S( \% o8 E4 o; c$ j: {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 m8 s+ g, p/ R0 `5 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ \7 d# |( g, p+ U; e% f* k) X. b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
7 x+ C& W* f8 N. k2 [3 V3 a6 ~- \! v3 Q/ P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; k1 r; [5 @+ p- ~- V6 q4 J9 J: B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 j4 m* u. h0 d# C/ |, K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! Q, `$ r- ~( B( ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ I1 n- U! x! B( v4 V1 c% s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 H6 {3 I3 h3 r9 R& o# }+ w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ h2 e8 ]/ ]  y<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) d# V# M% N4 r. b5 G! i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 f% Z* {$ S" ^5 M" `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) w. D% G7 M) n0 `: v3 o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- i' z) q; v8 {) y! i8 G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 |/ F7 ?. P- K3 e8 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' H  F5 V) a: j5 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 W2 h  v6 H, A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  a0 C2 V- l& Q3 z% n* N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% k! d0 k. q: \1 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ S; C8 d0 a" I4 d- Y9 ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! f4 }, i$ N" o5 A8 r- p<P>I regret not dying</P>
: |3 a- Z& M  O9 \9 h<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& Z% |$ ~' w& w8 m" m) G- }0 o( Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  m/ Z; b+ n; |7 g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" \3 P2 ~+ e5 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& O  u* \/ E0 J8 D3 o8 A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; M# I; ?' ]  u- a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& n' d9 b0 H+ V- g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>