【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
  K# ~- A& k5 |/ M6 q5 G# IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: U, h+ o% F2 v: bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 h  ]1 h2 P5 L3 T8 I3 C! xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) G1 s5 y2 \6 O: L/ U6 RSeeing the sky content with its love
% g  K' t) a. d; Z+ _& D$ BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 e4 |$ |4 F2 \& KYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' E  _9 u8 ^5 ~) {% Y% ^Nothing can compare to my love
6 W) C) y+ Q, [8 Z! q7 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; R7 N& L* y" r% j& y" g2 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 W/ l5 q/ e$ r! J6 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# J, p4 O# G, s( z( FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) S; {4 J; q- i" cI regret not dying
% R4 g& {8 A( H9 m8 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 i0 Z* \# |) i7 n. RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ w! H9 H0 k% K# R( B3 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 f/ P9 n. O# D4 w' `0 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 a0 y+ p2 u  ~  q4 H& P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 L% M# g) d4 g, q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* [$ Y. K& O. b: _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: L. Z. P- N- _' P+ Q  ^. ^  Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# ]0 f4 t1 C- q% S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 l' u1 W0 V  {3 \2 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# R/ ]: i- w" V, n2 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' e* @  t7 r" q2 w8 d' }0 i2 p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: r% d; o0 @: Z$ `  w+ `! H! L. g<P>你无需担心</P>
1 O$ q! i) K0 D4 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 w7 W3 _+ M# f<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: z: Q- `& h  H4 L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ ~/ B! Y! k6 d0 H6 `  @) U/ l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  `2 R% u3 d2 V<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, P0 ]( n$ z+ \& Z5 M7 ?9 S8 f. i<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( E' K  u; J  ~# y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" F0 a3 R* W1 a% ]- N* x( z# b: B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) M/ p. K# K( c+ ]+ _* b( v<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 l" d- T' J: g4 X  S, E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ F" T! t9 e5 F/ u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 S( T' K6 {. }: {; t- C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 Q/ m3 A. d5 M# ^' P<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 D1 D- e  H0 U$ F  p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ V4 L+ C3 g5 U  ?  X% ?; F" N# x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
) h. m: Z8 T* H7 [3 L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* y# M/ m, e1 q, v! F/ m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ G- R" X) z6 ~& N) |, K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* [5 ?' @. D! t7 h0 L, O1 L<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 V/ [+ Z1 E* E3 X! a3 y9 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
: s0 z1 @- A% i8 V" G' r  o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 ]( F- K+ U1 f2 x$ Z  ^/ ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 |% F$ \8 E( }. ~6 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ w5 d# T$ J' u( |/ g$ {' k. y+ ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* w  }+ I6 P7 E' M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 y: d6 q$ p2 l3 I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 h- w) e$ {' ?/ D, W: Q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" u5 j; ?! V% e; s5 M$ n<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

5 I& d& E# \# ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 A2 J0 r/ F  i7 x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>