【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. S( G$ I9 }& v5 ~- `4 q5 F歌词我附在后面。
) {5 |! U) }! W/ k9 q3 u5 o* VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 L* ?! c; W) k" s  LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 y* J; S( d+ ]$ h; u  GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 n% E0 I# O& G" t) n$ S7 }5 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
" K% b) A& H: P/ v$ e& ~. y* rWith the moon kissing it every night
& u! G2 `* @& H5 O5 hSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
0 S: e; c* D$ z- @# G8 ^- ~4 DI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' W. P( ^# V1 n0 U$ P1 B. h/ LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" [4 P3 l: B' h; J4 H* K6 S5 hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( X+ B5 f# w9 i3 z6 QI’m still filled with fear
' H, `2 [8 a% J; J: c# G9 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, {* y) q1 J* C$ TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
% g; v% u+ l* r: PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 V; V& G! J: ~) J# B+ Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* h( s( F( h9 L* D+ E+ K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 z& s2 V3 a' C% Q: o' p6 X1 q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 N3 f& T: v* h& R9 O, i5 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 N" ?0 M/ O0 r2 J$ y1 }- t/ d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 ]7 M" Y& d* @& x0 o6 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* f! ]& @; ]' _6 r8 e& m2 v3 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 p5 K( a7 T* D3 F* e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; d: i" t6 J+ n* Z9 J, O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ `+ f1 W  A& G$ Y: }, v' j& ~<P>你无需担心</P>
- |" }: H/ A# U' J( F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; n1 v+ u/ [* t$ \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 q* p' x( |9 z# ?<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# |6 u* ^( L5 y- x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' P1 b. U& L4 w& a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ e0 Z6 W9 b+ ^5 H: D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 v* u; P6 K9 p+ b7 l. B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& w: E( {$ Y. A: m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 \) n% q5 Q$ ?7 Y% u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 w2 Z4 |8 Z: p  t( g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ b  M- |1 E; q! ?; ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! }1 z1 O- ?, Z1 i, N( J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 X5 ?0 b! g4 I7 H( S7 Z! e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 H1 d9 I: t2 o% y  x0 w<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 r% e  M1 j0 n% |/ s8 X* G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 b. u+ q6 h) {  `<P>I regret not dying</P>
) n; [/ H5 N5 D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 ]! r7 ]$ ?- S3 k5 h( D# P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 l" n) p7 D" F" X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
+ b  ^, o( m( X+ Z/ F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
8 q( d' r7 s# a5 t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( F( p4 f! p$ f- E+ d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, C% I, M5 S) j/ g3 u我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>