【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
/ s, F3 E' N) rThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 j- ]: p  Q! WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
- ~6 f* e2 [4 E1 DWith the moon kissing it every night
5 c5 c* K6 o7 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; A- a: o- V$ S' h7 }& |  v" OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% A! I* G, T" S2 c' ~- O+ X; uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" Q* E3 ^6 W* n3 c5 I6 qI’m still filled with fear
& G& o9 i: i" m5 @* ?' JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 Y1 C! c. l8 w" cI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! `/ E4 W9 g' l% YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 k/ m: v! Z+ j2 z7 c2 L* w. CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
% q. D8 _% Q# L" r3 z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  Y" \! U0 |1 Y( x* C# \( ?3 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 B' O" g- L$ G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 U3 [4 s( t( A9 H' N% G/ ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& }6 h1 |" I% E4 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 j7 O/ Q' v. y- @0 }+ d9 l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) K/ m6 }; h8 o, Z6 Z4 ^* S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: p' g, T6 F. Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 s! y" b, n/ C- H$ H! F* h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 P5 R% m8 b6 a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! Z& O* S0 E% g; ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) o/ O. u# o0 ^7 x  Z/ C& `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. b9 _& V1 `* H* `1 p) o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& o- Y2 m4 V8 c9 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 [6 k/ l/ ~  C$ W' g<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 J) x$ o5 y2 q# K' S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( C& U8 M+ J( K$ W/ W1 q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- a$ i) }2 v8 I<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' H" M5 ], i$ C1 T0 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ d+ k# k! p6 Y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. b3 f& E5 W8 `  c& U5 ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 p9 }5 P  e8 e/ a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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' J" P5 }$ o( q# j  ]3 U<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 e0 G0 |4 }; ^3 I/ T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# a% p& C( ^. c2 h( B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, R) u8 D9 _5 @. k# c8 H- ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 A2 Z9 f" D' C" {$ m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ j9 y7 G4 K4 e" I3 v2 y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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1 }' j* z5 j6 { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>