【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, G. W0 u% j; a3 E3 X! K8 E, ?The moonlight is shining brightly,
' W( v6 S6 Y- e& I: w/ I. x4 V- ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
, q9 A9 j2 m) I! G  h  B' {' fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 k' R& `- S" w/ ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" R5 p* n" n7 _6 l5 N8 JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ p  s2 O* _& ?: S. zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, i9 M2 O6 w. q! O- }You needn’t fear anything
6 k% a; {) _4 i: RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 j5 u5 Q, @, I& uI love you I love you with all my heart
6 I; Y/ H/ B2 l9 L( YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# @3 n- L* f' G$ YThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. P. Q  U) J& o* U1 a! K0 k3 T8 ZI want so much to see inside your heart
! {# F" r/ C, T3 C2 g( H' q- u7 fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; D# y. ?* p0 h1 _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" e$ k6 u" W: o; O9 JWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% B$ u8 \# Y4 [. T* rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

, T3 V7 [  U( Y. M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 T( j1 k) C6 \# Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' Z( m  e1 {# ]) O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( g4 {7 F$ w" b! A) \$ @& B/ w+ l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* n+ v* z4 t) ?4 J9 j<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 d2 N6 H0 m7 i, d7 k( b- g$ Q* x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! n+ S( `# b$ H$ T. z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) D! I" U+ T6 w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ T$ d* w) D( q: }9 w  r/ f( g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ L( }* }- y1 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& t7 h& ?' y$ N  M<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- j) o$ k& E* t: J/ |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- X; F) ]( g& z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( |# v: k1 y$ u" p, p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 z; C5 C+ X! k. H  h  Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! l3 m% k# w9 l  }- P' k) K) Q. W<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: E7 h0 w+ U; _$ L. |2 y: @+ [  U& ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 r6 M1 I& D' ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% h% R4 m; M- _% Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* w$ c' d2 ?' K* G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: V  U: f9 p! V' S/ l0 r, C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 {- s: ]1 K# b; V# ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 A" P) c9 X! S# g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" j. }7 S* D; Q& @<P>I regret not dying</P>
4 D7 o: X# L7 p<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; ~4 Y2 |; A) v* @$ b<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* Z3 b3 Y* q4 _& ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ T% y0 h! u% v. r+ c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 V) N% V* U! J, ~9 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% @; p* R5 r8 p! D% S% I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
: s7 P! Y: u" [9 J3 {- {4 r
我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>