【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% a2 D9 c5 }, ?5 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ }8 q/ k  n; ?: c0 H' z& hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  I# j" \$ @3 q6 X  i3 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
  q% }, k. F1 X8 @+ l& kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# v4 J& p2 U& n  |1 \8 f7 u& [3 LIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, v/ b/ {9 p. Y( }You needn’t fear anything
8 R! P4 h1 p- t  NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- @  V% R& B) B1 }% W5 n. c# REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 ]8 b$ y( s/ V4 jCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 [  C* p* n, m9 U" z! U( ~. y+ h: f, h$ bThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% g5 ~; l- O+ u( c$ pI’m still filled with fear
* `2 G7 a: \$ R0 W( i7 o; z; uYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, q5 B/ f: J/ }6 h, Z$ |2 @3 ~1 F, SWith such a tongue as yours,
& d( N* n, {) CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 A3 ^/ K  j6 L( |5 ^# U- r( j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  _% z  P' D; g! W2 l6 u) g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ l4 P6 m& h9 z5 e5 l9 r9 o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 \; k- ~! T; I/ B# A0 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 j' W+ H$ E- c+ @6 @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 H. E9 `* C) m: }+ E- K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 K$ Y( ~2 ]% z7 Y0 |  K& c) m, w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! E2 F% N% X6 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; N3 [8 Y$ B) z2 Y9 m- J+ N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 Q3 C6 y' Q+ R( q' K3 g% z0 U* [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 A/ y4 V) w* Q7 _<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 s7 U8 ^3 y  h3 d<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 l! |$ @+ E7 G: [4 s1 y" H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 b% Y/ z% t. y+ e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 B0 H* N! f% e% U2 N& X4 L& K. E<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& A0 Q5 v( T; l<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% I+ K# p# G2 K3 s: b- R7 S0 b( p3 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* P7 \0 H; q0 h  ^  ?7 C8 ~* v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* ?( t- I; P) S3 N2 {/ ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: ?7 ?$ O' ?* X/ f+ @1 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% S, O1 B4 g2 x  M* E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  T. Z! ~, f- q8 o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* B, E/ R. i/ b- _" d8 a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: G- w2 K& {1 v* ]$ v<P>I regret not dying</P>
& P1 I3 c! k( B4 E: |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 i& w' z, [  W7 u- x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& P- k3 B* x* u+ |: \<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, x$ g! E" Q2 }, a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. F) i) @# X( u) F8 o0 J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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3 p3 D/ T& y( O9 _" q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& c: Q+ r* ]9 O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>