【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 ]2 x& p2 N4 RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' s  F8 q( n' F& N" m. O. PThe sky is happy down to its soul
( @# t1 A9 f5 q* rWith the moon kissing it every night
. K; l) M) G9 E9 z% G/ r* `8 e7 zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ @) Z( T* e# S, M" o' j7 i# ]4 C; l4 [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' M/ l0 a5 ~2 U' TI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
6 I2 r: E' i8 j) c5 {3 _5 UNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 P8 R1 _- a/ {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 n, a/ t# g( A4 [! K) k7 k( `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' _9 `; ]' ?  o) {; s7 yI’m still filled with fear
, g1 B7 H+ ]' i* u2 p/ s$ C8 }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, v& F) Z7 W# qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 L- i7 R  I7 Q. v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: N. v! \$ t$ Z4 R$ P: K$ ~! c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 s% z; U" [* y" W% W  f4 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 ~# @8 t4 a" L# n. p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! v; d+ R# a9 a1 l/ |. u  h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 V8 o. q8 u* V& f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" @4 ^6 i6 E0 N# r5 d, W  J% f4 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 `9 s3 L4 j  d# n; u9 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 P' @% I% @$ D" J0 k0 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* }3 c( H' g- \6 [. U* ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& e/ n- \  z9 [9 }; ?& L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  j& T/ ?: J' D: e- h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 Y" _7 c. P- b; [3 Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 ], Z$ g, T. Y0 v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ k/ Z1 V3 |- G9 P: }) `) X% m7 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ E* S0 o) F3 _& C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  f0 j$ }7 k$ e7 \1 `9 J; Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 V6 o* d8 U) v! O& U  @5 J<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( r7 C" t7 [( V$ X7 [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 N$ x$ E  X+ M; _6 @9 H) S<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 a5 F& _+ H, U  G% O4 b; {. {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% L3 }6 y2 ^0 m: N7 J) \- K- O* I: L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" [; z+ @6 g+ `1 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 g/ m5 @# Q" e<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ b+ r- L) a6 Y% s- L0 B6 p6 Z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 J& R* _* E) b1 s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! r! q4 I6 d" G2 i( t) H/ Y. W+ }<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

( n+ d1 q$ q' P5 ]2 i9 `# `我请你剖开它
# `3 L8 k  a1 ^- J
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. |, Q% V- J' z! _- C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>