【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
, O- g( W. F5 k6 I/ f% }* c: mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* p5 g/ \* c$ Y& H+ l9 P, SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& d6 C, M3 ]( a0 D! N3 q$ _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
  J8 C2 i* j* ~9 Z/ zWith the moon kissing it every night
& j2 Y" W1 P- c( ^4 F1 n! l) {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 E1 H& L6 t. c1 h; O; n1 }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" \7 e6 E% A1 O3 P) k7 R# qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ H) N* F8 f' v5 ]  |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. W1 F+ U! L4 r6 [3 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% M  {* Y( }; a- ^/ d8 kI’m still filled with fear
% ]6 @) S& V9 zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 m* x' Q% Z- eI regret not dying
! @. a8 Y1 ~6 o9 Q. Y3 II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ \- M6 x" m) W# Q8 d8 oWith such a tongue as yours,
; Q& `6 i# c5 uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 j0 g7 K% R  s6 q# W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 y( \, f, a+ i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: @& Q& K3 d' k2 \<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 X; ?$ f* R1 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( w  j5 f/ A, F8 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  A4 o2 x* w) \, R; d1 K* f) r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 T1 O* @3 Q2 x6 m7 g/ D- D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 F/ J, a$ I7 E5 ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 t: K( g9 d& O/ v<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 K: ]/ r6 b6 s4 d/ f( G$ p) y<P>你无需担心</P>
0 N2 s5 }- W& b/ z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# V4 k3 ]* W# A" p6 D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* @: B- n7 v: N: E5 h# T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 I& n3 y0 x% Q# R1 D% f) ~8 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 r0 K' Q- p8 L9 }! v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ r6 B: r  P3 J" I6 v5 \6 h' t( J8 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 W) f& ]8 u9 C7 ~% `; {4 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 E* O1 n4 z- s7 P9 e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 y0 h# D# k5 y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 R7 Z4 h' m6 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 T1 R& b8 q7 I+ p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 I- U  q7 k( z9 K9 f0 i6 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: V/ e  w! ^* W9 `. T- L1 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 V5 d) ~  Y0 H) g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 B" N$ E# ^2 v- d% l( r  W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ G7 Y7 b0 M. f  n, f4 b7 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* }2 e) c2 s9 d  c/ N" l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 s+ J  u4 ]- E/ k5 R5 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 u  P- q% ?3 {+ n( q: I) R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 @; l) X+ N$ P5 F( C3 G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

2 i* X% Y5 T- E, J& h+ T( m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( Y( R8 v7 ]5 F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>