【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 U0 b$ {' D% ^+ I3 W( TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) O; o. d% j" n" `8 [8 a  D0 g; bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 N- w" I) f! k( _With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# _* J: w8 b6 _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ |( P, z& B+ v: @: ZYou needn’t fear anything
0 E7 W1 B! Z* s2 Y9 J" ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 U4 T4 _4 U* F& U5 ?2 zEvery other word you utter is love
$ t& u+ q) ]8 V) lI really want to know just how much you love me
7 Z$ Y/ A6 g  SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& P  R9 h. @  ?! I; I7 h8 b6 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ K9 d& E4 L: Y+ yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 ?) M* J! l& a1 ^) E" QI’m still filled with fear
8 e- [3 i/ V( Q- d0 U9 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' I2 n! T: D5 _With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# S6 k" b: |  F7 i! MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 L2 Q# {1 ]! k: Z0 p<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- M! b8 e5 x$ g% n: G+ U* |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 {; R+ D) W' }* H<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  A" Y# @: Q. E# k$ ?  I<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  @- W. Q+ g2 `: Y" u" {<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 h2 U+ r0 C+ [1 B# ]$ A, U- _<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" z! {7 v/ L# g8 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 b$ Z) l% N2 Q! a: a9 ?: _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; S. W4 z6 L" L: Z8 W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& _! R% v' B" y; {- X<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 G/ x0 q8 N% R1 g8 ]- T4 i" J+ ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 O! n, z2 d. |- j+ O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( h0 @1 M! b  k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 m- L* l6 M" t% @+ @8 S7 c( c4 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) ~$ U( \/ D- |1 A. K& S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 ]1 |, A0 q2 i  Q& s% J9 ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- R" b8 ~0 N( |% A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' ^* ~* g0 t# E1 o4 O: n6 F( }/ J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' [0 n/ l8 W: |, z7 S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 ^; @( h5 ~/ R, k6 `1 |; @3 a0 M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, J2 g+ T! j. g9 \& s: o0 Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 e4 N; U0 ]& R/ y+ E: f<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' G+ {: S( c: `7 ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 I2 L2 {/ S* l, L6 `( z/ {3 b* ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, |& x4 q) m3 Z, u4 o4 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! w& R% D5 W) _+ A3 h1 _6 h0 T0 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. ?, K6 Z2 r: o& v1 Z* c4 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* ~2 _% @* D) p4 V" w* h5 g5 b3 ^( D8 X我请你剖开它
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9 H3 |( G2 c7 O, k8 E& n/ Q0 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>