【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- j6 U" y% I8 C+ G6 a4 \5 zThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 x0 G! h% Q' a! ~& D0 N+ vWith the moon kissing it every night
  K* z! N8 C! O: FSeeing the sky content with its love
' m' M& ?' h& `1 V0 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# d; P7 y( S1 d; m# \5 \, \0 ]/ vI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
8 v5 ?& Q, a) O* b7 J6 U  B& ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) ~: f, _2 w- D+ r2 w2 J* N+ hI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; g5 E; |) T, q% ^8 t8 ?I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* U. z& E; L  B7 J( O3 m# W4 u8 \7 f1 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* W2 }7 I6 ?. y: B1 [" ~/ lWith such a tongue as yours,
9 w" ?/ {6 L0 c, d' X2 k5 G+ ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 }; Y+ l& u0 j: ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' W  n8 O7 o. c8 k( W, s6 z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, Z) y0 G. a" k' G1 Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 v& p/ O. g) M- f) F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; j4 }1 `3 t! R% `, Y3 [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" D% K/ a& N3 k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 u% R+ m1 d5 K$ {* y: d! ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 |6 U# s" T2 l; X8 f7 K9 r! U/ J. y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 |6 v1 V; U- ]+ d- ^. o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  J( c' @* }# A: u: L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ I  J# V8 u3 `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, N" m. `! f+ D0 ]- u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 v- _! z8 B; m6 p2 o5 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 T2 m, c. ^2 E/ Y" i- z# W( \<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' k! e/ ^$ c9 i8 _3 ~" [& i" w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( R2 d3 D5 }7 X) O# `# G<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
% a8 X# V' Y" [! e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" \. n6 A% s! ^4 N, c  Z( o& `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 r1 n: ]% P8 x4 S$ V! X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& i/ n5 p7 b6 \9 o<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ r, I& Z4 ?0 M: z4 w. J* q+ C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 X, B. S, D' t2 p" V  D6 n7 L1 S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; r7 t/ T' a/ h3 B( Z1 b% ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ |+ m6 s7 n# c* b' b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" p: Y$ B5 p- O. q. q) U' a: w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 }/ y6 {# n! G4 H" J& r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 @" u& P" L7 s5 b<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 ^6 g; X. N3 l" L- Y+ X0 Z% Z我请你剖开它
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. y7 C* x! o" ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>