【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- B3 h* Y+ X- G2 A1 |8 Z! H: b4 FThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ h6 y' y; |$ ZWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, j8 k  h. S. N0 Y8 ]( ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! b' w6 I3 e$ Q0 y/ y" VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ P4 k: ]5 u9 P% ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; }* q1 x/ `0 Y3 Z/ YI really want to know just how much you love me
8 x/ H9 W$ P. i1 @# a0 z  _I love you I love you with all my heart
# A% _- [6 M) ?Nothing can compare to my love
0 g0 T6 f# c, [2 x1 X" G  S- f* NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* K0 Z* _' h4 E  |5 P# y: RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- r# }5 {2 g" A3 Y+ N% j4 Z; pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* x0 G; K. k2 V8 F. g& h: S9 tI’m still filled with fear
" x+ v6 |! ^' l" lYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' [) H* {& g8 B% hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 e* E0 w$ V: F8 S2 l& H5 c! R8 W6 IWith such a tongue as yours,
  }% x. M6 z3 t0 g4 F+ v2 oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; T) L6 N4 R8 ~* S& N. O( o* sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 |' q+ X, M+ u: s8 tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 I( ^8 Y- G- n" J( V; @. x1 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( a" S% k9 }0 F7 h5 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) g3 {4 ?! ^3 K4 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) Z7 a; F% t" D/ [<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 i: [% @7 |9 v) @% g; p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. _, @+ T9 L/ g& T$ \: B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- f: ?# G2 b, E. F) E4 b: n<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  L- v, F7 \2 C  i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; g0 g4 T- z9 d+ ~4 R' ?4 W<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' Q' q2 X$ z2 h, f2 X2 h1 K6 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ i* S1 P2 L" x5 G9 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& K7 F% @. }$ T% |4 y7 l# ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 Y4 I2 F" S) i. u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% z6 y; y2 C8 B" c; i% S% Y& [  U0 F$ `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( r8 W4 p* q& @! q/ l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ y1 `! o9 X( m9 Q* N8 `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 v7 Z9 Q2 h5 {3 w2 h6 w6 `! _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 v' V' w8 x0 n: L& m1 T7 G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 f4 c- N( Y$ n2 l# g: o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 z% w' b, g! g7 B; |0 a- I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) D- M  g. T( H0 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 u. P$ V/ T2 b1 a6 z, L9 W' y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) G) X) v2 E& z8 r0 d8 g2 v3 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. i& G( a4 m" u0 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ B0 `3 Y3 l, b9 |' A% `6 q& Q" z- ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, f8 `( o& F  L# f+ f/ ^  `我请你剖开它
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% j' R' I" a* k2 \# g0 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 F* i( Y% c/ k) P: [3 R<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>