【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% m. k( ]' H# d& o# v+ SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" j3 }8 F- {: l1 f( bSeeing the sky content with its love
+ P- j0 V' W& e% T8 _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- I5 x& n" f3 J4 \0 S) ^  J. SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% i: o' w; T) s9 o* s/ ]+ i7 ]Every other word you utter is love
" S) y% Q# T' V! pI really want to know just how much you love me
3 \7 ^' B7 G+ `. V$ HI love you I love you with all my heart
* n5 }7 F) a- }! E; {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 `# l% T: W8 j& h. t0 }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' |  a& X( E1 i) S  d% O3 aI want so much to see inside your heart
3 s6 Q) E7 z( B2 S) z: i0 \+ PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" u$ Q3 ^% ?. C/ u* r$ P7 oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ q6 }- r0 s& @7 ~$ I8 |7 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, t4 q& g$ \% u) f8 L( jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" |( |6 v. E: f' ~& {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: T( U) W) w# D" P: F/ o<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 w1 ]* n, o, t' s<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ x8 X6 Y1 @' B% B7 k  ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* q. I8 ?. h% B: e2 J4 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 d# ?1 K. p7 `- i! d' Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  J! H; Z3 a2 v4 F8 Z: i/ ?- c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ P' B# o$ J2 M( \7 n, p% \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ z4 P( O8 Y8 {& C5 i% K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. P  z& X) ~* V# F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. z0 ?8 y# }2 }; w8 {' B/ Y" c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ A- D8 W& g) _4 o' U5 q1 }) Y: ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 w6 [* w, v5 g; i' V: g) L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: J7 \1 T3 t8 m* h5 V* {<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: ?& d  K/ h6 Z5 y/ C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 ^$ n6 E) o0 o8 b6 K8 \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! L7 d7 m/ z* b$ J  w* D* L" U. T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* Q# X5 \: W' }$ `7 @% G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& g8 Z6 E; q+ {( F. e3 L( a) G' i<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ L  P3 V; W# u" J7 f+ {! x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# F# P4 p& `' @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' G5 r0 k  H3 {, i2 v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ h) j: \! D. \8 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: C/ S: ?2 ~4 `' a: p' {" z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; ~3 o4 i: p# h9 g! Y2 F( B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! j* W6 B6 V" i( T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 A6 F0 K1 k, o4 |: F9 d$ X! K/ |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 S4 k. D# r) W" }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, N+ \1 u2 K; b1 ]" I, V. J<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  j3 A* ?* y+ ?3 {5 {. c0 b我请你剖开它

  `' l$ C, D3 i# [7 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>