【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; B5 M5 S- H! U) i歌词我附在后面。
; b8 C8 D1 b9 J8 Z+ I1 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
" l, c( w& z$ r% `6 J' T- b. Y! HMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" U* @6 W, y2 Y  _! t  a# cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 v, n0 f0 f9 H  [  F( aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 j9 c0 l% ?- pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) K( ^; l6 Z9 ^  oYou needn’t fear anything
0 h# R' t1 |# ~! ^, ^: zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
& g) x* \2 J- M/ D! f- b7 y3 m2 @) zI really want to know just how much you love me
6 \% E! i% Z9 U1 N" q" C/ ]I love you I love you with all my heart
' x8 T6 E! G+ _. \# _Nothing can compare to my love
0 p. A( H6 i! q6 w+ @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; G1 N* N) e, |' V6 z( z* Q# S. DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) ?. g+ B* i$ T+ u% }9 lI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. f, N8 p  C( N0 R! p! T( MI regret not dying
- w5 L, w# _1 q  R. a9 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, g& E( I6 ~# H2 {6 z  PWith such a tongue as yours,
/ B% {+ l( B# H( E. @; K% Q- IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ Q8 \) k8 k. m7 B7 a/ Y) v2 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' R4 j( k! \$ T% g' k9 u/ z* Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 _& Q1 y+ Q6 _$ S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! a" O9 [4 v& a5 o$ i) U( W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 V  h! S$ N1 m/ G; {7 I) c: a. r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 n, l3 ?& q6 {" i$ r# z2 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 C- e9 q, }) D# R+ i9 `9 \0 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 l5 u: i1 t! s" F0 B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 o& `; ~5 L" {4 K! A7 r: P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  b8 d+ `- |& }: E9 _: T; Y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- }0 H1 j% o; I3 a: `9 k6 p8 m5 j<P>你无需担心</P>
! d, c7 @1 Y! ?! F<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& S7 a5 |& m8 d, l' J4 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  N; r" M9 `  K* ]( Z% @8 G+ d; |( q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ r. G! N5 y$ R# B2 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) \6 D9 V0 C: b3 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ I: H2 K; w) C5 _. B. j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. R( @# h5 H2 D& E4 ]- Q<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* p9 H; Y9 a% O% r4 r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! e. [. w. Y7 I1 U; o) a: G<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% B& o. p4 _7 {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! @# p0 G! T9 ^( M<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 u- B3 c. n3 j8 F7 L<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ B: |0 j+ ^# r4 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. M! ?/ o! v2 H& }$ s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: k' H% W" U( _; |# x. q' Q$ q& ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  U8 }2 e; u8 o; E; ~5 r5 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 d# t1 Z  y" A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, v1 G; Z7 Q8 r  _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 O2 `( o/ w# w  h' ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- e5 i/ p, ~  c0 r; ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 f7 L/ d4 H4 W, y: E我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 K* M+ c. a5 _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>