【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( s# H0 Z; b( Z) K$ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( e" `  S" B  ?8 e' Z) f* f+ uWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* z# a2 L4 j$ `; EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 z' R- l6 |; r- X; y" d$ d# EWith the moon kissing it every night
1 b, q' Q" U; \, u' PSeeing the sky content with its love
& Q$ @% B( l4 S; ?; OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' n' J' n& R( j5 jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ~. o5 U4 l- s8 I, nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 Q) J! h( X# eI love you I love you with all my heart
, h  U% w8 G% w% ?Nothing can compare to my love
, D* b  R) T% s' p1 hCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) }2 g' O+ Q5 D  R% [+ bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- b$ h% L8 G# N& h& b! pI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ e- v6 u" q3 D5 S2 O- f3 mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
9 S, I! N6 K- R' ?' gIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: t8 |! t/ ^- x7 ^" B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' O+ n: z2 _" X9 u+ y& S8 F$ [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. R& s2 t, ^1 ^/ j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# {# L( U% C  _2 S) D8 g* Z; P* x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, c/ @* a; p7 h; q4 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# g: ]5 N  d" R5 r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# w( K3 q0 v, n  L% N' z3 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* }$ |8 N8 D8 y) T" M; ?3 t<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 ]5 |" g. ]7 ]' T" O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
8 v+ ]! |1 c" @* J) b; r8 P# f: g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  K. @( u2 r7 k5 C0 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  N) O3 @  _. M2 y5 a) j. ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 ?9 }; c4 v/ C! F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( w& {% v1 a9 y' I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ Z3 ^/ y( y- X- r6 B1 \# Q' C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% I/ R, S5 Z. m# b" G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ J8 k2 W  x. c) Q  e) r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& w) C2 {" O/ J2 V* A5 O8 ]8 L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" j1 R: t, [5 @6 n! k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& N) k( t1 C: s7 h+ ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, N. N6 K, k" f+ `- A; u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 f. q' y' V; l# Z( \3 x4 T. {/ r* |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ C, a8 c7 [* H* R% D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 H7 D+ C* P$ ]. d$ i5 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, ~; u( _8 P7 d/ I* i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- X; W# s4 Q) ?  |) u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 R# G+ Q0 ]4 H0 q9 e% {9 z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- ]+ L, S! r! p' `2 B" z  u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% X" D% M# \1 ^<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" q3 Q, K7 u5 q; K4 k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  [  s/ F& h$ F8 C8 _+ S' r<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( c6 H# x) {+ `- m' L; `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! g' \/ w( y. W  i$ q8 D" q- R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 p- s& `# W' L! i1 G6 t& D我请你剖开它
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& h  a$ w/ ^* G# m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>