【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 q$ j( q4 x- R; c4 d0 ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 d1 V$ D# j( v) z+ t3 A# bWith the moon kissing it every night
+ X5 ?) a: u, l1 Z5 q$ U5 HSeeing the sky content with its love
# @( y4 x+ I, m. V# B9 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" }; n/ i+ u: \- n; U* h1 x9 _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 x2 g. R8 r+ D. [I really want to know just how much you love me
8 B9 l, k9 A+ |" {8 z, R3 JI love you I love you with all my heart
, ]5 Y0 U& v% ]1 H& u, B5 _0 bNothing can compare to my love
1 q' C7 C8 r/ l9 w6 Z. J, _3 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* j  [" [0 Q% P) y3 _' ^5 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ m  N- l( p- A. dI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 F+ L7 c; h/ H, YI’m still filled with fear
0 x; S  T" K% L5 A" AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 Y- s$ b0 h/ h  O% z7 YI regret not dying
9 b, s5 Q0 q' WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) I! x/ X( H/ m% O0 Q2 O) ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% G) s1 Z8 N$ b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 A- m! ^' n  H0 U! P; `2 ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ U: u/ j+ y" P  u. k" H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 i/ L5 f: Z0 {+ W$ M% m$ D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% _6 b: ^8 L) [9 r% }7 q3 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) X1 x$ B6 r7 t# s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! T/ w' D" n) L& V. H- z8 c* K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' M* M  _0 P3 @' L" i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 l$ z7 Y* V1 O& B+ ]3 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: f2 U6 \/ F4 c% B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( a) {, x; R0 p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" E3 Z! T" _: M  a; L& U" X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' ]: d6 y3 U0 d0 M% v2 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( D3 _( I/ {: o5 R& R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 _3 E6 L$ r8 }9 p& b* I1 J$ R2 f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 t- |6 H8 k- f$ N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 x% R; S& [' t; \, L<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 p- ^" ^& c6 h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 i% a, v, I3 x0 ?$ z' Q9 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 {0 B5 t) h2 V+ ~  |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. w/ D/ W) z0 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* K+ q& T8 V+ V3 x2 ?+ O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- {' i( j; F& I3 P# l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, m4 R- [5 P4 [! D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 t3 [) f" r3 u" G3 L1 R1 y& c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>