【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# m' G2 e. I% UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, I) H& H8 F, z( z7 Q* M# sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# T0 L2 n: {2 E1 G$ c- F! d. d) H' mThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ `5 m2 k/ C3 q/ H, ~With the moon kissing it every night
9 V7 H6 ?/ l4 U" u* F( r2 PSeeing the sky content with its love
! a$ Y5 G: W1 R9 M; U+ ?  BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ E. k# j9 [) W2 WI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 O5 I; P) W. z4 O8 T9 CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 ]( z. s0 C2 HI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* d! I5 `0 K! T. mI regret not dying
3 g+ X3 y! J1 N( ]& l0 v& l9 L* cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 `, f) Z% f9 H4 l& n! ]3 H! WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 ?" {3 A* \) x3 B+ x! B& YIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  y. \; E  s1 y' Y* h' L<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( t2 f8 V; [5 {, R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. O' H$ c7 I! N) c- X5 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- J5 U2 \" e9 Q% ?9 a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 d' B" H" F2 g* H( s4 w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& T. q3 w/ \7 _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 K. M& m% m. O6 Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% B  ~( q! p; t6 O$ i1 i5 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# d5 I# n! g! D1 q! b2 _<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ ]2 t$ p" l5 Q0 O8 }9 Z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- ]  |& E; U' ]. L<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; ~  P% v8 t- E$ J; h( ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- N1 V8 k: G8 z' Y( {% v3 E0 S<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 F. c8 R2 O* D0 h, N8 u<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) ]5 n: d  c  ?  p! V3 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 A" S( z" a& ^5 ^' W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; F! n! c% _" i8 \! v0 R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 m; J" F* Y# a2 ]  A$ l5 c& E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 w  J' I6 p& X. ?  l* [$ J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ c" Y2 s, A7 _' p! G5 e" Z- I5 c% M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 t4 `% L& Z+ ?4 ~& v$ ]* G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ F$ Z. ]& Z# T; ^: V/ ~8 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 {0 l- D* f1 `& ?0 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  l1 X3 Q. B% Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* r7 O) o7 k; p7 v( k7 ~1 p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 w% w  e) _# {% u( a( [+ g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' l# k8 M: Z2 z7 O: F, ~/ I; d8 @我请你剖开它
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0 @5 i3 _) e- c) I! m 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ t: E3 \% s, \* @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>