【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) g7 j* M  W# j9 W  \% G" gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ N* b( |! V- O3 c5 K( h% N5 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ X1 P- K* B) r7 s2 i3 _- dWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
/ s0 @  S/ _" dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! q7 |" f9 U  ^. l8 \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- |0 V  E5 }! C2 G9 b- G# s8 X% Z- eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* `' q4 ?- s* |0 H0 E8 [# XI love you I love you with all my heart
7 A; ^9 T( p. p- l0 ]  hNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ p8 F' i6 K/ A! _" ^The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  ^0 I% x6 p+ V/ jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) a9 _! {! c3 L9 o: a  @! R; OI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" t! T5 ?+ f/ G2 q" u1 O3 G; vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
& q4 r* U$ I/ h  P- K$ eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ l! D9 }$ ?+ SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ A9 E/ L+ }0 ]6 ?# r; r, N% ]<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 w2 @, s9 q8 ^; \6 i6 n3 ?: ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 ?2 J' F2 H3 j$ Z" m+ Z# m; ^9 w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 z4 `; U6 i  j0 c% l; S- C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 Q0 A! b# H5 N* K9 Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& D1 a; |- |* V+ o; H6 K<P>你无需担心</P>
- ^2 g# d7 S; @  X+ d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 \6 G- L% q; j- _6 R4 M" v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% Y) T& B7 |& Z9 l, d8 y( m/ r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; C3 J! E) M+ k# U5 g( m8 g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ q" |6 n$ P- U! p7 Q2 G* F<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 c8 t/ g& t5 Q8 q: S4 m% q0 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ Z. q$ @1 Z3 s$ `/ F' b) h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 ?9 ^+ e3 t9 j. Q! D  a<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 r( l* h; r* [9 H" x8 X<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  x6 B% M( t7 f6 G& n: `" P* U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  g' E4 I# `9 @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" w( k  [( I9 p- P; V4 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% f& v1 ]0 }! F6 Z- P: ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 D* @, \' W* v/ c6 @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- X9 J: q- \. Y# Q% f% z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# F0 S; x2 o# Y) |  l( R' l& S$ k& M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 \; |, V$ ]- J, h1 O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& O0 Q; c* w/ W* q4 D1 o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% [' V! j# i* A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 I2 _2 K% e1 m3 T6 k" ^# _: _<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 p2 G, a/ q; h! X我请你剖开它

4 u* |3 `% D$ A; b3 D$ Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 A- u. C" n" |* t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>