【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 O5 A& r- e) w& J歌词我附在后面。
+ h- @3 {% F0 wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" A/ [7 L2 i) y9 @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 ]: {" _; X. v! F0 w+ MThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 a3 ]7 w1 \( iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- e7 _. g& l: l- O4 W( G6 HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 X* f, o" W( }/ L7 n) b/ VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 ?8 G$ N* a% N' P2 ]) |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" S* j; U7 T/ I7 t: R* L7 oI want so much to see inside your heart
& J+ j" p$ Q+ h. R1 W, S2 l6 |- @* jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ u5 q/ ?3 l+ x- W3 D& U3 WI regret not dying
; j. t& G2 \# m/ `3 D& o$ E; BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 b& }! P; s3 O/ i/ i4 j/ j) R1 KWith such a tongue as yours,
  [  S, Z6 {. [/ j, V  S$ R, d9 s% cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 j" [# h7 C  o7 J( G0 UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

; a) N2 ~7 g" l: D' m<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* g2 }4 o) m& i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, C7 W8 {# d+ H! ?2 _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! X% m/ K2 X6 x; T: f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 y/ H: F9 W; g( y) V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% o6 r  b( M2 A$ ]: E<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" J% }- H" ~- N2 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, {- a" ^) Z( U0 p2 S, v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ d/ t3 x4 v) }; o<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( r; K' C% C# v6 v  d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- a, a, L* @0 N+ i: J3 v. A) o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 c1 \% R6 T; g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" p; @* w  X8 u& H<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 ^( }/ U/ E2 T1 n; g2 l  {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 @* @" K% g. P5 R% X: v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  k% O! B. P1 L; ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' C# a9 G& T2 w2 o% ?5 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ E0 h( [9 I1 }3 c/ \9 M- ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 ?. _4 M. \* v+ I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  N8 E* Q% T$ B! C: P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ j5 F- F6 [& j9 g9 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  Q3 Q$ j1 Z5 W, W$ y* v3 E0 _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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