【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 x9 A6 _8 Z. [5 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
/ ?! L1 i' T7 g9 X$ K' LSeeing the sky content with its love
% v- u# f4 i  f6 @: W7 yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 \- v0 Y) E  \- kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: f) Z3 Q/ t; WNothing can compare to my love
1 y- k6 l- k5 S% T/ YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 ^! o# O% J3 p  h# i5 ~I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 z; [. L1 l! O/ ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: Y8 }! g, H* e* v  k9 ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& j, O7 u# K5 H# f9 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

# ?7 e! y5 v* [% F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 d- s; |; e( p/ [1 G& [6 o* u<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! i& W% _2 O+ O8 @& T2 C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 q2 R. X) Z" q5 Y; Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! L0 U5 J: N- n! `- C5 l/ Q0 j  Z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# |* U7 t  B& S+ X0 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ X6 A; d* A- O( }# o$ A3 G& Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) A8 U) f. o& y: T& f# a7 S: Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! [+ ]$ ?9 O2 N( q: V, @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- p1 ^; [- v- Q: ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% t: J' Z; D3 N) _6 n  W<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ U3 a$ l5 }7 x) M% M' W3 @: w+ t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
2 }# M; d; b" M& T' X6 ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( `  _: @- G5 ^$ M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 U, m/ D" \- N: r7 ~& ?: r<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 o7 E1 J- J1 q! r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 H' ]5 _( a3 c6 a5 C2 q9 Q9 k<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# Q7 S, p3 w. @% W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! l( `, {% b& ^, ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& _1 t& x, x! F$ g6 h<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 H% f5 W4 B6 f6 z6 d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  n/ j  {' V6 T! x, {- L8 s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ [* Y" A% c+ r/ k0 ?<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, C& P% q( \# ?& \# y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: e5 J* ?# a' g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, _" {' l: n, _( [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 k5 g8 Z+ G" \% C% G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
1 u2 f: J9 C+ F7 G5 X
我请你剖开它

. R- j( r7 k" t6 w& e: e 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* B2 N$ _4 Y+ J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>