【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% _- w, B5 H4 H) [& lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, N4 i) o% x+ {. N5 e0 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* X3 B9 O2 Q7 B' J" |9 VWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  R: Q, U6 a+ g, JThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* Y6 I7 f5 S- k" C3 KSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% E: J" s2 A% m5 l: BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ f! a1 V! ]! E: g7 M: p6 n9 M6 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ e' G: w! ]5 C* R0 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 J' [6 f+ g$ @2 a; j: MI’m still filled with fear
+ C" v" i& }: x5 V- _& CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" Z% }1 }! }! m0 L- N+ r, oI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& h. M7 d, Z9 a# P( w" |9 [' B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ [7 |; K! d( I) B1 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 r6 q$ p) V- i7 i$ i+ x$ e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ j/ {8 W# p( t+ k  S$ ?9 L; g  N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  K) w6 ]! K! X9 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ D: y+ n; k" w" C6 P4 S* ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- J9 e' c  g& R$ w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. t" Z2 S5 ~2 M; n* _7 `. d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% Y( u% e5 g- ]- j8 T# u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 y5 {' {) t6 w) }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% Q* ~( f5 j6 a' P( u, u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 x" l' e! r* V  h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& _# _/ B8 K$ _- h9 d$ J& P; C. w2 a4 J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( |% m, I% m+ d% Q: q" T# w% c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ S( `  z, I2 N# m+ g! n3 h* E* Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; M$ U9 L4 S) k" u( P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 X% I3 Y& C8 I7 Y% n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  B8 P1 r  V% P1 k( P- e! |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ d- J. ~' T. p& k" g<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ p! k7 U# ~3 I0 n9 ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- C% Z8 g0 ~+ \0 ]: O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 O/ h2 ~/ k1 I$ H) |+ L/ v2 i. H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. y, E! x) V3 t4 a( \8 O) v$ {; m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& d; G3 R, U: Z% l+ W0 g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 g$ P# F; s- D1 @" C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 q, s% E* @$ W! y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ h* \; A% e: H( C, o<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 b4 f* C1 _9 i4 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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) F/ R) {& j6 y/ u1 p9 X# |5 h 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>