【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: N9 ?  h7 z1 H$ b  {8 o歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( ]3 r* j' b1 Q# [/ yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% D5 L" {3 C& |# FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' E) n; T' B' M2 y% p( {The sky is happy down to its soul
, `5 ?! n2 J2 gWith the moon kissing it every night
. A% }( M: F2 @( e! b  QSeeing the sky content with its love
- Z2 H6 M% k( FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 U* ]2 P3 ?2 i3 h7 R! O$ x2 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  d. P0 [7 L+ K# G2 a+ h5 WI love you I love you with all my heart
6 c, |, u: c1 B1 r2 jNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ S6 ?' v- d# LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 R+ M+ \7 N3 F0 Z! i8 Z  ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ S% }7 ]$ {" W# ]I’m still filled with fear
; n" {* o) a) B$ I+ i+ U0 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# W: x7 h; D: @$ b* ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 Y* ~0 ]+ M8 ]) p) m; h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# N6 [( G0 l: t9 a. p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
: H" h/ k) \$ h) ~+ _. n5 K, E8 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 J. L9 j( f9 J( o1 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% A! e" G; u+ r! l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ I. Q. u. M6 i' d' b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ T: V  [  k8 B) s4 K$ Y7 x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, U# ^: s* o/ K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 N' r( c4 r2 h* M* j  y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* Y1 T, H- r/ x! T3 R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( W. z0 P) v* f- W9 m, A" l<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 @7 w9 B1 y9 y- A$ G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ v, j- T8 i, _& g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 }) T6 w, @$ D" ~7 T9 P* F, b1 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- m5 b5 E- j! E( W$ k2 N; h/ \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! V" m/ U1 T$ O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# E, z3 n  c; c& Z3 D0 K<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 F5 L" j& O1 m' M7 X0 e<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, ^) Q" _$ S1 ]* b( e: E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 W) i4 [' G' r5 k% T. V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( I2 Z% C' ^. V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 L7 p  [: N+ `2 D4 p<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  Y5 I8 j( W0 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

  q" P( H; x$ }( ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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