【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' H5 a2 S: x6 n6 B3 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 Z, W5 C* u+ ?; _Seeing the sky content with its love
9 Y3 O8 l7 F5 L- @: w0 A; z2 o- hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ x- N2 I" j4 p' l/ m- |, @! _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 q# I- u; w1 Y8 K. w, nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" o' |' T) ]# {3 RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 x8 c; G* ]7 CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 M6 X; f8 b2 J  \4 w% RI’m still filled with fear
! K9 p2 o. b- A, a  e, [5 i% _' KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 G4 B/ c, k) e% {Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, v- ?" ]$ |" m3 a8 CIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  V5 H6 A% z& O! Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ J4 e8 L) M, f; `  p5 T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& M' D, w. V; J& ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) |( q, c8 l  V# a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& F: g/ Q+ ?0 r% F  O3 ?8 N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; J" k( ]! }9 w2 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 L( h- O( @3 N8 t/ B2 ~<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' g+ _% e+ j! R. }0 B& k. r) t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 s4 c. X* K4 O2 ^<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 j% X4 u" }) d1 I7 e( ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 Z9 L7 H# [# a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& v  K& i0 K6 R/ R  T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ L' x4 l7 w  r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 h) }8 ^- p8 V- l& X- E! a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; Y& \9 s1 u+ t: J( d  Q8 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- Q, f3 T# X# p9 W7 ^5 ]& k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  b" n1 n7 K9 P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 Z$ r: h; b- ^8 _; h  N* x9 S$ M<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 x5 \0 q7 g9 l, N+ _8 J. v! M  w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ {4 }5 ^6 G3 x<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
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$ y( f2 S/ i, d8 E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
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/ O1 P' X9 Z* i; u1 R5 o, m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" O3 @6 f2 f0 }. o! i& s2 p8 N4 p; y8 w+ N- Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% I5 R. Y: a" @) d1 _5 w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 g* v2 N; a% u, R& J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 R  a/ \1 }0 p; H: C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ _; o" u" j3 P( b4 v# Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>