【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 Z/ M; j4 B- d2 y, p) r歌词我附在后面。
9 P1 l! V0 K3 DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 O4 I/ I9 k  @Making the sky glitter like gold,
# @3 k$ X1 s, H( WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% B- A5 g: H0 A. _; s) Q6 t) j% PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, @# ]. E$ ?' r' ], l9 e* wSeeing the sky content with its love
& d) T2 |5 g4 ?9 ^# S& XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ }9 O: r2 h0 p) U& tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, U$ x' m" N; }4 INothing can compare to my love
% M6 m( f9 T* Z* k0 ^7 i: |+ a4 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 ^+ U# v, k3 e, o2 j3 U0 V! hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 a% a1 N- j! U' \0 WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( w# T. e+ c! tRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  J& g! p* r9 U1 k* e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  ?. W. Y7 E6 b+ N+ |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" V; B% L  Z8 t$ R7 X2 t6 Z! S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) ^& a% ~! H6 U. x! N; [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- ^6 x+ e0 i" Q9 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
) r; S  O6 n8 `8 \4 ^! ^8 u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 P4 h6 ^" v3 |& I. E* Q  q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! N5 E( d+ c3 M* D' A, m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# z$ c5 k$ w% f9 l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. j/ f$ j# }# l1 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 f+ J+ F0 h# r5 r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 ^0 u' n. e' Z4 A7 ^1 T6 d$ [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# |2 H8 b% @6 R: N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! f1 _1 w0 p7 _! g% K$ R- |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* w9 k: U4 H6 V: W& @0 T5 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  |8 Q0 I) `/ k& ^4 ^* T' d2 k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 b" U' f2 I0 G0 i1 j( j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' x% B* o- x) H8 _1 j6 Y1 b<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 o6 ]! b6 u# B3 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" Z. t6 c/ I8 Y8 b1 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% {: b: \1 Y8 o3 s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 `; @( T1 }; z( V, J* z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 {7 t5 t  p1 P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 w: f2 Q; q; z! [1 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. z6 E8 ~2 k) ~4 c<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' o5 E) I% h5 }) R# {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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3 z' \. b" H% Q2 O" ]9 a5 x* e: U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! {5 R1 [1 R- ~! x9 C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>