【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 J& |  b) X& V3 l  A歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% g/ e9 ^4 c) ~8 ?. f* A8 R& RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 a8 z5 w7 p. e  G- ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 K' m, J0 ]) s1 A$ f3 H/ ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. z- _! f3 a& m  Y: {% o0 W6 zEvery other word you utter is love
# k. q" x/ M( F& B8 KI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
  ~* F& x2 J! }7 sNothing can compare to my love
+ E8 ]+ p, d9 q& z7 a6 J* V  tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 T3 `- `: F1 z  ?* I" ?% [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 a5 ~6 u) U( T' fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  K) p: I5 q, M2 Q% R0 p( \With such a tongue as yours,
* }2 b- M2 `# d; S9 E' P# vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" f4 N& A: u$ l3 U1 y! U+ c- UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 X. |; j- Q% ?9 \* H" \4 H7 p; ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 G3 w5 n9 f# t) ]; }7 v% X# m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# x9 v/ C3 u$ E1 n+ x3 Q/ ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( n; a1 C" U' ?/ z+ T2 }2 k5 f0 e# _<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" u% s  }7 J" D. ~  E8 h$ @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ _) D1 x$ A- b( M$ O" u, e3 {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 s$ H2 D/ B7 r! O( M- \- |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ ~5 t2 j+ K8 i' N! S/ e: Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ u  A6 E6 N: c. d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ D- @$ u, ~; ]0 P<P>你无需担心</P>
' X0 T0 G0 {4 b* w% ~8 B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' W' u: y$ i# X) i/ _+ C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' W' P* M! U0 u# M) ~$ i; d9 e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& [& g3 \; C, Z' c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' E+ c2 z7 @) K* c0 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 R% g9 x, N# j3 x' |# P4 l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 l- k# K5 l+ C% J6 n- a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' L1 Q8 T9 D, i1 E- _( e! u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) o+ Z* u8 {  j& R3 K- p( K<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" V" s: G5 B3 P: q' e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ O& j% `' U' [) ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; A  a- ?% u/ X) |5 Q' `3 j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' F6 B0 E4 U: J, n3 ]4 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, }' e2 n$ A$ P5 {; q, A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 g: ]; E9 |# u# p6 a" [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: G& j/ j# x, ^8 H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. O% M; S/ ]  `0 ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 ?3 C& T! P/ Y. s( d; D<P>I regret not dying</P>
- D0 Q, @, i3 M# l<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
9 g- j, S- d% u( P! `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 j% O/ G. j4 c$ F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 p+ [8 n5 A+ M! V0 V/ g) u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" m5 g& D0 I+ t/ W8 f& n<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 Y* r& }* q0 z0 t' \& V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 ~' q" c! ^+ P1 t2 V' m4 f# A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 h7 ~4 Y7 `; x, C  ]* u  x) u<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>