【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
2 m7 M% L. A" ?6 M$ c. JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ `' Z& G2 X6 M$ }3 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 ~1 k! O$ D% G6 MSeeing the sky content with its love
% O. o& u' V* n  f3 {: z% ~5 KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 D" i5 `: t$ D( `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: I9 l# w# f$ W5 yEvery other word you utter is love
' p$ \. R9 n6 vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 J# F) p! a! H- |9 a+ ONothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 _4 j1 u8 n0 Q1 i/ bI want so much to see inside your heart
/ D% N* {# W' W9 v' ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( o% u- w1 D1 f: hI’m still filled with fear
" M6 P2 w7 ?) _1 y& K* }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% A  e) j2 s0 v% {# _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 z% T& a* t$ Q. H$ eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 }; h3 Y) `* f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! G2 N* P) U( @7 a( Y7 n0 P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- }" y, Y" B, V+ k2 d. n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; O8 ?$ h- b6 y5 n' |: W  K) ^% J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 c- a) J: M/ }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 S5 r7 ^- v# N, `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% U5 h- [, B2 e<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# ~0 o9 `' O. @+ B  m5 j# V<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ {* [  T7 {. x/ z2 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 H+ V: p2 |6 A4 @5 C  g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' Q5 i( z! V! F$ l/ y1 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ w% P9 e4 q$ w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" a8 b& o. u9 O# K6 R( ]7 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 x! V6 K& D3 |- ~5 B  {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 {9 l' D" r# T/ I6 E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& O/ {7 l! |. q2 }( [$ U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, s; ^& l7 v& J6 i4 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; {3 k0 C) |0 ~7 e2 U5 Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' ^# d* ~  d0 m4 d( f6 l1 h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 F7 G8 D* n8 o7 d$ I8 B7 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" U7 k4 a% ?5 }0 l, [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) [3 U  h& S1 x% j7 r6 J4 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 X, p2 M( t2 `# P3 S# x* r<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- [* ]# {" T- g) ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>