【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# z  W* ]" N$ g0 ?3 jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# G) N7 Y. ?' Q' YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 x' r; _' ]& `0 ^4 H' WThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* O0 M+ ~" m) N. U( LSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ ]' V# @8 a% |7 bYou needn’t fear anything
  w0 a2 v$ b  VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 I2 r5 v# e0 r1 ~1 vEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
( l0 u! y5 J+ q. \3 }2 u5 FI love you I love you with all my heart
7 Y' L; D* k7 y% F0 l: TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" C6 Y# C+ i$ G. X& f3 {! R0 J4 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! d8 E- E7 t' w8 J/ aI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 e; M9 o* {+ C( D9 M  u  o5 J) j6 sI’m still filled with fear
% v1 o+ O, L0 F- hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 F" Q, F" `9 |3 S: gYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* `5 i) k) ^( k8 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. w3 b/ Y$ j" O# B4 z- w<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" n  U5 ?8 ]1 {" K, K9 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 U2 x, r# X$ {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; Q' B+ ?& H, z& O  L& @: [( Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
9 W7 S3 m' O" W# ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 @' W/ v7 `+ k( `, k: m, E<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# T8 Z3 M( ]. h% H# i+ y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  S: e/ ]. u  t% {) c' l$ P. P<P>你无需担心</P>
0 p3 m) o; n- _0 W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! D* ?3 \; V* \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 [; [" d' b* @- r; P<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 |6 s4 t; ~' E+ }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ H2 N5 n; X+ ^2 K* v1 W- `9 J' {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ L: _$ k$ g( \. t. J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 P' M8 n5 L4 Q+ L/ L1 U' S* l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 ~) M* {1 k* Z3 o3 a. h( P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& F" Y* @* A% M) Q0 N. l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 h* {' L2 R. R, e( B- s" G<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 ]7 V) W' k$ A7 B: j  ~" K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# w# L9 C! |1 ?. j/ i! N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: `8 e, O( ]9 C, o& f4 f: [0 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ M% N3 Z; }) P* O: b2 J$ R! h5 ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* A# y  u, N. Z9 Y. r" z; T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; b2 P, t# W# y5 X/ v2 y$ o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
  u- Q$ J3 X, a<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 n0 T7 O# e$ t. r" Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, I+ n2 i, w4 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" N4 s8 L: z' v% L8 q* O. B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, U$ |( l' d% U7 v5 J5 M6 W0 m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 O# P+ U' Y* a# n. X/ T( Q! j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: |/ _# E# `4 u: h+ [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" \0 X2 H- q5 Z9 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

5 N! ]$ s9 {  y) D1 Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ~; b# G$ K& Y6 i3 S8 r& C<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>