【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 h, a7 Z% c. A% c/ ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
" Y2 a2 c' Y6 X0 o# k0 s/ h6 K& r1 V) U6 TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 C" j2 h/ t; M0 I, VThe sky is happy down to its soul
5 I/ y7 Q1 Z7 z4 d: DWith the moon kissing it every night
$ j( F4 l( t8 YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  O, N1 l% G$ R( a8 R0 JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 R' j; W$ _( R! ]5 L. eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ e8 a) W1 |( cI’m still filled with fear
* V4 f9 w2 A# j& k7 l0 d3 qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* B& k7 g7 V9 V$ V- TI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- T/ d& b; ^" _& N+ d6 e6 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
- j9 I" j( {( w$ u6 V( iIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, v5 ^- H# V+ x" Q% u$ YRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; c3 X$ \& R  p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( P' s/ b9 ~  C: L<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- M9 _2 |& Z4 ~4 p$ U" v- h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 Z3 m% D) [5 |+ z* D<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# r3 h7 O' Q" w0 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. @; D- r4 T; D* T3 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 m- T! ?0 R6 k2 G9 n# V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ w4 c+ P8 |: D<P>你无需担心</P>
+ f, ?. A$ R4 ?  y" I6 l+ [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 D8 O) ]3 e' @/ Z+ S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) ?- A! K5 F8 ^7 V1 h. l2 J/ ]# y. E2 H<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 m% O/ C+ E5 Z; b: |) _: {/ ]$ L( h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" N" G. |- ^: I( C6 \4 x8 X<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% Y( X% y+ n) t) P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ w5 _9 ^+ G3 _9 x- m: s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 _" z! i, b: a7 r$ r7 c3 V8 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 x$ r- F/ E- t, O4 g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 G3 ^. A4 ]! W6 t2 L8 Z& w2 ?6 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% k5 W; I6 w& f! D3 [7 ], _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* V4 u8 K% M* M. L2 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' ?4 u: L2 K6 ?. R: L! i* f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ d2 C7 g( E3 h+ I0 [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& X3 d6 {6 K. Y5 j7 V6 c" R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 f" L$ b9 l( M8 O: B2 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 |/ c& R# _8 }' F1 \; g4 G% f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. {+ i2 x, z2 @& l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% R' Y/ L" Q; y' V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>