【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& t6 h2 u! m6 @歌词我附在后面。
0 [& X( v$ q. k  k$ |& gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 a5 u  H& h  c8 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& X9 I! T9 }: K3 m2 W; x4 G9 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 N2 B9 y1 H" `4 e, n$ q7 QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 Z4 u& p5 ^# FThe sky is happy down to its soul
* ^+ i0 `; n* ZWith the moon kissing it every night
* m; P- {6 t' g0 zSeeing the sky content with its love
3 f4 N* ]; ]* t4 x, EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; Q0 h0 ~" s1 V8 [1 q  _9 v$ HNothing can compare to my love
! h  c9 x) @6 k. r. B+ aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
$ F7 ^3 U, h( x' pI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- z% R7 V% O. C, m/ }9 |I’m still filled with fear
" H5 l" C3 H& t3 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 E! X5 f$ o. E7 p1 G) zI regret not dying
" `! A# n; Z( q) _0 M# H( JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) {8 y, l! Z" _# B& _. rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 ]3 @- P- ^5 c3 K) q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 u! x% M( x  j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- j" {4 g) g7 I% D8 h+ A<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; K  r& H+ l  ~/ p1 |$ }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ E+ g0 p6 D1 C. }6 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ o6 w/ s2 Q! k- ]$ c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ c& A; F3 N# w' S8 [  x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  T* B) g# a4 l  d3 g8 X# `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& |( h) ~; c) C; G0 q+ D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" L) z) v& ?- i2 w  P( |9 s( D, ?) c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 V8 l* ~' h% v8 [3 S2 x, [<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" C: P* e  x/ o+ x- d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% H! c3 C* ^$ G8 j, ?7 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ f# T9 D# H  c; G8 p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 j' O8 q% f. U. p* X! ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( @0 ?# v8 c! n( h9 _7 B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% [5 U, \# ^% a) y  I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 L0 I; I  E; p7 h8 T* O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' D0 \8 J! {9 W2 |( q1 }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) x+ j' o# Z  W! E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 G6 g/ Y- ^- o" \% i8 e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
0 g+ P( D3 \& S( A- V6 g. n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: G8 ]. A/ k- }( |7 _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- t3 y4 M" h  a' C4 [7 v, S  O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 t( y2 Q# D: e2 }  M, ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 y5 U9 n( O  d: Z9 A8 Y- f  R( G; k$ w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- e* ~9 V1 q( S我请你剖开它
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3 R0 R8 v( F- F, P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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