【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; ]& J5 R7 b' D+ w$ ~! W6 x歌词我附在后面。
4 a. y- `) n7 Y4 G5 R. pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
/ `4 M4 i$ }- c% _Making the sky glitter like gold,
% x+ i; m8 w& D# gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  n8 d- w; Y- m, E) R, b1 P# ^' KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 X4 H/ Y2 C# [$ d. o7 [- c8 A/ N5 b9 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& F" l8 c, w6 e! wYou needn’t fear anything
) i. t5 s: B# ?0 v. VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 V5 x1 `# H/ F0 V& f" REvery other word you utter is love
3 P* [5 y) |5 z! t. ^3 SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; A/ g- ]6 K& J$ [$ [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 [- e( c; v4 n" I: vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; I0 s- x: R5 }4 |I regret not dying
. w. M5 t1 e: ~1 y! Z; Z& B9 i/ hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. y( F2 X9 c, n5 D/ MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& ~/ [& r. \' ~% H& I' W! s' @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ h: J( ^$ ?: X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ W" \1 B( q, L- p. o$ ^<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* P1 x" r5 j7 \3 v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
( F/ ]9 N. ^, i, W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# W5 S- Q+ \0 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; Q  N6 `" M( V* ]7 i1 W/ ^& f; M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 k7 V; P9 O% B* y. |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 Q: d0 W0 p" T7 ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" h2 P( Z* A6 e" K, o$ p! X8 P<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 m+ U/ Y" l3 F, Y' Y) H0 k9 p<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) h) R& A( b9 n* P2 d<P>你无需担心</P>
4 [3 v5 o8 s+ s% |9 ^- u<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( E% S8 f7 X! `+ m  v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* m3 h6 s1 Y: F+ r3 T, _# [<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ q, y4 ~) I3 F; z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  z6 d+ n) `! D2 X6 d# H0 Z  W4 H: \<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# [) v! g& A& I* s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- S8 Q' E* p9 ]# ?6 {3 @<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" F0 u: c; L" s. ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 O' ]) H/ t9 B2 W/ b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) \; R7 s4 |* v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) k+ t9 N$ Y. k5 `. e<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 k( w$ s; n7 `, x0 w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  ^( h% i7 @! o0 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 F- t$ o/ r  ?4 d9 ~! {; Q5 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 b5 w  b3 g; O' H$ j& b4 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 p+ c2 e* [/ t5 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; r! d1 l1 A: o) Q9 S& ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 m/ n1 h1 h1 ?! s- M/ D/ N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 O  S0 J: K$ R. v2 B) F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ t4 S, q* t6 N7 ?- o<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 w- `: u8 }2 N# M; d$ g" ^9 h我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>