【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 T; N' V& m2 yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ V9 t" f' A% pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) u) y8 V, l1 w6 m5 d$ u: cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) @: [8 s  ]+ w- L& aNothing can compare to my love
6 n5 H/ u" P( D! ^4 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; t& N& Z& c9 {3 S+ P, sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) ?! }# X) [" T2 G* k. T5 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 F- d7 S- s6 P3 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. Y8 G8 d8 k$ k0 M3 a+ AI regret not dying
- f. k6 T: \' J7 Y3 J! RI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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6 V! k% v( q1 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
5 x3 n! r& f* L# S/ F) u. ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# j  `+ k8 ?) m8 Z9 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, x; B9 q% Y: G( D8 G. w& |. I2 }- K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ K5 ~7 x4 x4 R2 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 F4 m$ J4 K- z' o+ t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 ]9 E9 |3 {! R% h8 Z2 ?4 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 I" S4 l$ ]( t: t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 r4 @9 }; W+ e/ c4 p4 b) `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; _7 |- ^  S  s" J6 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 Q2 g  [( x* z+ I* p$ @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- {+ g$ T+ \8 u8 x  z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ e* \) g4 b4 O4 }) ^8 K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( [( h3 d. a+ q  S: }) \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ z9 M, a+ V' z: {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
+ p& k8 ^3 k8 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ S5 S2 M8 w2 V2 S* o  }# m0 |<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: e" U7 ^' t9 m6 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: y( E" t$ @% j6 g3 X# d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' u) @8 @- Y9 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ p7 R+ Q! s7 c6 T<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& j1 T% n4 K- H) L1 o7 w<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 h6 G- z5 D  ~6 w* p: h% u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 r, G; l% _/ `3 O$ t<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: B4 F* v' W' i: K) ?<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  {. o2 N" s  S$ i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 W0 @* W0 ]6 _0 C<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

9 g, D8 S! a7 B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' e6 c9 T1 M7 [$ j; M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>