【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* j7 o  @& H8 p6 k* \, OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& ^# ]9 g# ]% g1 zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 `% l5 g6 s7 }4 W7 MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. \' V: Z; L9 T- B& v) @The sky is happy down to its soul
& P4 V3 J. j/ a$ P% o, hWith the moon kissing it every night
9 c8 k+ [' G* c/ {& ^& [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# e, O& R; @. g& Y1 M: w1 y' n0 `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* `; Q4 T) n& ^/ V( Z7 mEvery other word you utter is love
  N$ P' d' h( f( o$ f; uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 y' c1 U3 k6 NNothing can compare to my love
+ f/ f3 i: m: c" I- r  pCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' U7 p4 E/ a7 r; }I want so much to see inside your heart
" E3 D  O5 k4 U9 e: }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 ~" r" E" N) `; }I regret not dying
. U7 A! h. g) L% l5 s, J' ]8 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- ]1 J, \. ?  m& l) v; WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* E1 o! m5 C8 W; F  M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; F# s, c; d, p3 v* I+ q. R( x8 m1 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' o7 F2 N4 m7 d* ]+ w+ R$ o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ Z2 `. N3 }1 J$ g9 i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, I6 t% j+ U$ r& f7 E0 t/ ?! U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 }. b5 q! C1 s' b, a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ t' J9 ?, z+ y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 b) {: \9 O) x# t6 o( X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ Y+ T# \9 d$ R, f: ^5 L9 X- a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ j' A1 w0 n9 g1 A* G- R  o& g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 M/ G, z1 k7 ?4 u; W$ Q$ T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 P+ }% j  |' H+ e/ _% ?( Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. ]; w' n7 n5 C6 C& ~+ G. k0 p/ a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
/ K, B6 @  O2 D* F. ?' X. C) ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ O( L9 S3 n8 |* F5 n( v7 V* K2 W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! g- ?" n  H% X: L3 \& W( Y- ]" {, ^<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. {& r6 Y$ f* N<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# C( e3 y& W: ^4 f<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# J4 H' T2 ]2 L) |% c$ p<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ T% {9 H2 e. X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ V9 e0 n5 {- Y9 {- h% [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' S' k, }) H& D7 |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# l& E' b/ \6 {5 t) w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>