【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 b* O  Y7 l4 z- t, G* F- N5 |6 g2 W歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' B! d0 n. Z+ W$ y. pThe sky is happy down to its soul
; V$ Y  q/ O( j8 g) X" Z& [$ YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ D0 z& x; p9 @$ p8 x; _# {It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
9 `# i- v; U6 EMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ [8 Y6 t/ C" D# M4 hI love you I love you with all my heart
7 w5 t$ |- w/ g4 ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 f7 M7 o: g; G0 X, V# }  h# uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ R$ N" Y% j/ F- ?, CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ [% _; M# x0 U3 p1 y9 r# \) j7 iI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, B" o3 u! _: QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* r* Q( M& U+ m9 r- N0 y" mYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ C  _% T6 H3 o# s/ N2 q) PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 c) I! I( J$ l! i+ |% L% o; ~# iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  N$ c6 q1 M+ ?- V5 @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( v  @- u4 b8 ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 [' b6 |0 G+ \* ?$ s* |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" J  l$ R4 n0 N+ j; Y8 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, w8 W) ]/ ]% O1 g: ^: w7 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 B/ u9 k+ j& M) Q/ x- [3 ^<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! W- R" l1 t$ V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  v: q6 J: [+ g& Y" \7 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- _& V% \0 n) N, c) E1 J3 F* D<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 y( Q  k" s# C  G. T1 h- T7 @+ Q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* ^. U& V3 h( C: o6 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ B# [* h9 E0 N) D+ S- D: p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% e+ o9 G+ V1 w: N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 }7 r% i* b- }3 i' C0 t' W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ a1 @0 O( M5 L; @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, R! N2 t1 G5 ^9 Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: G) k- A  [+ \( O- E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 [) v; K# k. E1 c0 r8 u6 y<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 M8 W! h% [% C2 }* }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
. c- O& y) Y1 t, {& }; w: h; V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( e- }+ Q7 f$ P0 @, b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; B. S9 D* H4 i, R: W" Y9 Q: L<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 V& k2 Y' R, c( T' K% z<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- e; K: P" O# ~* v5 w1 P我请你剖开它
& b: N$ i/ C0 F- {. t9 Z5 g
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& v9 i8 ]+ x% c8 M# G5 t<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>