【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 x  B) L# O& ?8 ^( U; U歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ ~9 l" |: _% T7 ^% g: EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 l- M/ o+ ]* k; U" RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# R3 G0 w: [6 p! t' Y1 k0 {Seeing the sky content with its love
( C" ]' u$ s+ ]) XIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 F4 {" P: z. ?2 U! O8 FYou needn’t fear anything
+ q5 C: V, x; t  NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# c8 m" ~6 z+ v. ICan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ N+ }5 q/ y' N, E+ F% SThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 p2 X. X3 _) H1 hI want so much to see inside your heart
, w2 S# h6 V% U" e# x2 b0 MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& c* a3 L& `- O0 t! JYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 b4 J9 Z0 f4 U- p& Z5 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ z+ S. C" I: x* eIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) n. t6 r# H# M0 `! r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# [  B# F# ]8 y1 T% E: W/ X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ [$ ]6 G0 E& a' ~' H2 |7 A' v( o* N<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" B- d4 c9 k( }, m$ C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 J8 Z4 L# i; z$ `  ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* Z6 |; {0 O* v0 {- L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# D( Y' J7 ]# j' C4 B5 b, z! d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 y" u. T0 Y) S$ Z) p" w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 M  z+ x: Z6 V: h0 O$ t5 d5 m4 |2 M+ Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 X! s2 f* r3 L' [! Z8 m; k- C+ `" q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 T' {: x& i/ o5 U- m: V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 Q: b2 L- {+ V8 a1 g/ P4 {& W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: m/ [& C8 y# W( p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ L8 [7 H) M/ c8 a9 I7 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& I3 Y& \! s8 U! g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! K7 }9 Q% L) x  N. M; B: a( E& o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 R" J* R" @; h+ f) G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 D; C* n0 f5 r, x5 h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ x- e. \& ~, B. s  R' D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 Q% ^! G3 i% `5 b+ u1 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* ^; T! T5 B  C- Q+ t& s4 ^+ Z) v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 h. E3 z- U( K$ T* i<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ a2 E  R  c& v% r1 d5 M8 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ ]' ]7 j$ V5 g. W$ ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ L- _0 W. c* s4 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% ]& `! |5 p8 N; R1 V+ z& ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; N# [5 E, N/ y  F5 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

; ]5 g+ H0 H) [+ p& o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>