【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 {" u2 Y$ U/ y4 ]6 K歌词我附在后面。
9 |5 V3 r0 c9 i; x6 g. O% z' E- wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! S! e6 a& v" A/ @9 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 O# w% s( c  [9 g) D* S9 _The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- y5 `6 s( X  H/ b5 Q; Q+ `4 {Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 K4 h( }/ e. H- r& QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
; H8 y. }1 v9 g4 G& g3 J( {) Q9 }I love you I love you with all my heart
4 n# O  q9 M2 e/ Y1 z6 SNothing can compare to my love
9 \& l, }* T# c& K6 _: gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 e; z5 X% K7 m- A5 s+ FI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
* X; H7 E0 D2 t- ]- }( \4 S- x" sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 h7 q; g$ h7 x- G6 V' m% e1 m- S: bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 P6 \3 l9 [7 K3 L3 n* S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 Q, R, Y2 q/ f# H* e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 B% y8 i; w( t% t- o<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: L9 G& ^; O6 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* q6 R! Z1 j! q! ]<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 S) M  f' w: I% N6 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 F( E& ~- H( l! Q! r2 P; S<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 r% j( x, t+ c" l3 X, z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 W, }# f$ R* Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, o! n' y5 Z: [: x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 G; W* b0 `2 W- }; I7 O3 T* D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 H0 s  e7 f( e, o& @( M1 E1 e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; G1 G  [. ^( H4 ~+ s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& p8 j; M" _% a1 T8 {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ @4 v% _& ]; e+ C( [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 D5 L3 D: v7 X3 B; D# w: J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, a; ]! B0 E, D" ?  S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# z2 k7 k* v8 W1 O) z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 o6 N' U& ?/ @0 Y1 D! L9 S" s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* L  O  p0 [: d! ?5 O7 v, {( `0 O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# F  B+ l1 f' C) m1 B( ]! E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& Q! _& }/ L0 F2 V6 w5 g" N<P>I regret not dying</P>
" Z& D( r1 v+ r  V5 {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% `# S% @; ?# q! [1 l$ X0 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 J& X  t- L" S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 b% y  s: w! m6 o0 b7 `5 _; v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ i3 W6 h8 u! T<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# X' V$ \: Z9 j: |3 P( H; h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& b0 C  N2 E0 w! ^- J3 z9 e<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 G8 m- T0 K- ?1 q( g+ r7 y0 q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ r9 B4 p7 Q; [6 a+ v4 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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3 H1 Z( L5 `4 Z1 ^# T  @- C3 l 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>