【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 Z9 `  x  O) o- [/ kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& B; d: \5 G0 ^9 w+ W8 f; UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& Y( Q) }/ M: z) A; ZSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& }5 Q: L' q+ N4 OYou needn’t fear anything
0 Y; q0 d- G$ XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, Q5 B: b2 B8 Q1 u7 H; O* D, qNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 s3 p3 J  S8 H. x2 PI want so much to see inside your heart
$ t* w1 a3 J% {1 w2 M. |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" Y4 e3 V5 g; P& {I’m still filled with fear
) E% m9 E* w. B* j! }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" x2 w2 K& L: O/ C' h- OI regret not dying
# n1 n9 [* K* ^2 v: DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# b, N. Y# W6 _  UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; B% \: U4 B  C1 o+ J3 n% T. PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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: Q) x" D, \- p- v  u9 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 L0 V8 `: y& W4 m) ^0 m. [<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 F! L/ _2 |0 H( n; d  q% ]  X; S; r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) t7 C2 w' q9 V( f: h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 X0 x6 Y6 s  X; A3 ~  f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) v5 G+ S9 L, n; ?4 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 e* X  |: V/ B& i. `  K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 |) k3 d4 H. ~8 S) C4 C, f' Z' e<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% X$ H* X, C+ |8 N$ |* t7 o2 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& r/ C' a1 h3 u1 A8 Y3 Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- q4 @( y4 M: t% b( p1 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ g. q$ U" S* s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# B3 Z% B1 p1 T. c* W9 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; {4 q0 O4 s1 ^% n9 N% X! B0 X% }5 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 i/ Y7 B0 Q/ p. k0 y8 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 Y& C0 d/ ]! x$ M6 j* d* `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& N5 N' @. e# W* d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 n' R3 L% v* t* |% w8 ^1 @. J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" x/ r  ~; y2 Z5 B: B) s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- ?5 Y# y  H* J: k0 X4 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# x; s- o  w. o$ ^5 t* x2 U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 x; U. _* w3 F0 ~* m* F1 e. ]我请你剖开它

$ x. J, c* p8 ^+ d5 O" r 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>