【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 b0 \. q* A) D! G) R4 X( F/ t" gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- a6 d) L) X7 H" c$ P/ g" qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# Q" B8 F5 {9 t# wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 A! o! f; v- N% @7 ^+ NSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
8 K: P3 M  b' V3 J* d, [7 O, x. @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ g2 e& J7 K8 E0 p+ GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
7 D$ B' T! _9 p: _+ h9 {8 R& dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" a. f" x; O+ d1 t+ vThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, ]' i% ^: J9 h# N/ H# lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" U  A3 V: h# V( b9 P& v+ FI’m still filled with fear
! O, v0 b- b) e& p3 U7 @Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* b: w- C% m9 R9 X: @' {I regret not dying
5 \$ t. e! n2 z( R+ E5 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 t6 D: {* P7 r! p1 H0 W0 |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 ]- Q! L# h! u7 D% j<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 g* H- B$ \1 V& E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: V6 S! R% c1 H! c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 ?( ?$ k3 |' R- }1 J: {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" u8 E9 j1 Q8 D8 m: \( U8 y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- k; J. [" A. ], c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ S2 P; f5 P, k0 q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 ]7 E6 V$ O# {$ G4 ?  l- \3 Y% A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" Y0 c% S. Y  \" L" c: \* `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# W) M+ Q1 V5 w& S<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- s6 a  f* j. h8 z; @<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 W' }, D; T) `, Z+ ]<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# n; a! K, |% b) I8 ]6 Z+ F) d$ {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 B/ k* h5 f& U<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 x$ R, \6 o4 k% w; Z- s8 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# w$ I/ X" G2 q+ _" {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" y/ J. I. q0 L$ G6 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& z0 O! V+ Y& M$ K0 t) `; F( M2 _<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 W- ~+ b( W: a" C- `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, j& ~' K; A# I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 y! {& d$ C7 T+ l- B- \% I0 b0 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 O" f. ]  b, a( m$ {; o9 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 Z( B( I/ H0 o  M  F9 t<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. ^* U8 |0 e5 @( {7 h7 n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
. |0 Z- T# V8 D6 \& m9 R<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 D" b: V2 ]. k9 D& |<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 G, L4 f% f! |( n# v2 U* U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) l; z! Z" r1 H3 O2 N. }9 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

3 M) r6 N8 _+ j3 y+ D# v% E. ?' c我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  m0 t6 Z8 }  [; s2 ?' l<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>