【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  k8 {- }6 [" xThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 w3 i( P6 L/ P' ~1 b* Y" m0 kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 ~8 k' I5 a" T+ Z. ]0 LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 L& F8 O0 ]! |6 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 J" Q4 A8 k& m5 W# X' C, c4 nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- W: }6 F! R2 PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- Q4 @* k+ _: `- v; c0 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ r& m+ V6 v8 j7 c1 Z6 \" VI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 p. M. K; j& v- d; f' p, c! W" LI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! e6 u6 [" |0 U* PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 P- L' q+ n2 }" U3 y- |5 ?: H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* Q. {! l3 M' W7 Q- E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- N( c' M, T# g% B4 K! N<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: f. Q: \5 L- l2 G2 x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( Z7 h* w% ]5 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ I, X2 c* R- ?) T6 @, u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 k9 l4 `, c. a0 R/ E' I  N  r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 Q: n+ e  a$ \7 b' d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( }  V' s3 b$ ]; [( j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, I& b& [/ x5 j+ z; X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 e# F+ s$ {8 k! h<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ t' {# Y% N6 y! d- q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! p0 {% g$ s8 b- P0 c<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( c1 d4 x8 [0 B# c1 ~! o  ~7 M<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 M  c! e, e; x2 T! l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ e5 y. L& E( N" [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 O  M& b+ d1 H) \% v# H3 X% x1 [6 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; z* w1 ?$ L/ s9 G. `9 [0 |! y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 |6 w5 J4 T0 p: g9 @3 X0 V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
) h) b+ _) ]! d+ a<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 f! G1 b: b, E% X6 R/ Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
% O9 y+ x6 h' q' m  \' L" q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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1 R1 s# ^% n2 x3 r我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 v4 a- g: Z6 K4 ^0 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>