【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# C  S/ Y) c; N2 w- ~" a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% h9 ]* i: R% YMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 @$ t- c: [6 H. U" t. B( UWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; N6 I& @& e0 w, k& dWith the moon kissing it every night
$ x8 @! |3 x0 H. r5 o; nSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# O7 @. b& B# ^* Y. a/ \You needn’t fear anything
1 y2 _, g7 e9 b- F; n, W8 Z9 JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
, f' {6 M3 @* S6 P7 OI love you I love you with all my heart
, J" Z1 c$ C- mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 ]% v3 ^' y, m) x$ w2 KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ S' W; S, {. @( T, c1 ~% K' ?  AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' y+ s9 i# R+ t0 D$ f0 Q* c+ yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) \$ T* m! j' R( Q: c- m9 N6 v8 ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- ?* a$ L3 h9 S  h; U) p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" E8 L1 G$ Y1 |; |% z$ s/ e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* @& \1 \; ]1 @! s<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 j5 O) n. _: I& C. x/ r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ i( e; {% L# R; M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 ?9 Y8 j. s5 |% L<P>你无需担心</P>
. S, ^# O+ A5 M, B* M! A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# _+ s2 r/ X, R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 ?$ a' K0 h7 W- f0 p) t2 x/ g- W<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 ]3 p" w, G5 Z$ N- r& ?<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 c9 R) X+ n. N+ S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; I6 ^7 L) _! B- J3 x, z5 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* w$ S8 a% p5 J0 H$ \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- x( j* J/ V$ J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: {* k1 i* ~7 w3 x+ c' f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* R. h/ E+ w9 k6 ~: B9 l- p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 d. [) q3 ^1 z( W* n* T6 a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 h5 ]! v, k" U- q4 l0 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: N' Q  C- l* O: E! }" }<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 L8 k1 m, l' o<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
% `5 X* ?" ]3 a# J9 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 b& o! F$ D+ Z: G# c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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7 l' Y: Y# o! ~: r4 G( ~我请你剖开它
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7 {: P/ S6 d4 O2 Q9 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>