【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
1 K7 _  T9 ]% c) S  u3 k( yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 n6 [+ o, u2 S! `3 DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& j& s  Y0 R! @- OThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 z3 m% X( D; x# F( SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ S( Z: S! w/ A# }& ]$ ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 _) ]- b; y  m0 z  B, N  y! n: I, HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- y5 @% i9 U7 w) X5 N, @! k! U# a/ hNothing can compare to my love
6 B6 a! \2 K5 r3 {. HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 ?+ i! Z# U2 F3 ~- @2 F7 E# kThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 G) W% F  ?3 ^4 o- I3 i4 YI’m still filled with fear
* }$ t* G. o" k% b% P5 TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' f8 o' F1 C8 f3 n2 vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, y' w. W2 f% ~- e/ QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 L0 ^/ k# b, E* N3 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 g: j8 @, v1 U5 n% ], `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ K+ ?6 I7 a2 \: d" v( j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# @1 s3 k* W" h# O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 n9 t5 [+ l1 J  u: {2 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 E8 }1 c! f! c# {6 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 v8 S' @, K5 n+ ]; G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 c0 ]* m# H  d6 D$ l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: `- c$ ]/ L/ l( g( Q+ z/ r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
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<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: }" s) z5 X# j# v  z4 h$ |+ N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 V4 h9 R+ }* w  [' X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 b: e3 F# c) D1 n% P7 ?" T* X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ Q1 ~) ~8 H) U1 J& K9 M# a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: t# m& A5 j4 C: t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) e7 D$ P9 x+ l2 k! ]/ J' |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( S. S- n  b9 x" Q. B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 H/ @7 R7 Z. t4 J. H4 \' G5 O<P>I regret not dying</P>
# T' @/ w2 N9 Z$ Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! e# ~+ |: n7 D$ U- I% K3 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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0 B. s2 c  h: ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 I- D. o/ `" r; P: G$ M8 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 F3 m4 e7 e; E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' ]  s/ r+ f% i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>