【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* Y; D) l; B% X7 l& t' V8 o; jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 {( X1 m& H0 y4 p" ^The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 X4 N+ v, a$ B& K! xYou needn’t fear anything
, S! u. b4 ?% f( G1 j9 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. \$ i- q$ `/ d1 uEvery other word you utter is love
* J1 o$ V6 m2 m  {2 sI really want to know just how much you love me
6 o& {1 q9 A3 ~! WI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 I. f+ W; v; B0 s" n+ fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" z: j# A& ]) K0 c' w! v$ CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 d: ?  J/ |6 b% u+ vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; G  C3 T% Z$ S5 {* e) y3 @I’m still filled with fear
' V6 E  {* f& qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 m3 A1 @+ U' d8 Q& x7 EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* W/ T8 o' W4 `With such a tongue as yours,
, e: S, l9 j  P) s7 ^1 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  [2 s( z! Y0 y5 U+ s; d1 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 V2 f7 F, Y" G  b- [: x& j5 n. }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 `9 I, Y0 b4 v9 L3 ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* M+ _. Z$ e/ V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& r9 v) e. h# z0 L/ Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% o. j. |( `5 {( W2 g$ Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# x: W7 ?6 D# t# Q* }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
1 N( m2 |/ S# R6 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  g8 b1 c* |* M4 Q8 y% H3 h. q0 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ |: Q: q- B0 z( s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* n/ [3 H+ c5 K1 T  ], ~( x. q<P>你无需担心</P>
" I* {5 ~5 u3 }4 }+ a/ j$ o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 z# v2 o+ X: C$ M<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( L# N$ ]5 G$ S# P. I: x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  ^( O2 u0 o: h  A$ G, K& G" g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! M# w9 A8 P8 z<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 M0 N9 h. ~3 P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 o) |! f7 D* q; x; e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 z1 c( M# D: h4 [- ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 i$ O5 A% F: F8 G, Q  {: D7 r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 x7 @  a) ~, m2 x1 \$ t0 f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 F' }1 e. j3 v1 Q) m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; S* j: H! z* t$ B3 ^& p' V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 \. P" b" s/ }6 m! E* b3 B: p<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- H9 f9 V& v  i; e$ T0 W2 T3 {7 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 ]$ s: A# o) M0 O0 y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 D- \6 ?, |1 c- c" I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 O  ^4 `4 R$ K. y8 t: Q, m<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ H3 h: b- Y' W0 `: s, F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( c3 \* \: j+ X# J7 v* n<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( a1 q2 Q2 w: R- Z% J3 m<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" }9 B0 M" @, a0 G) h9 ?  D9 N<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 q3 G9 i6 w+ h' Z/ z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! p0 `5 A) {" j4 ?, X) t; G: |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 C' X0 e" o! i- ~- ~# d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 o7 C# ]5 U& k! b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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# R( O! D3 f2 T/ L  B$ ?2 h0 W9 D 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>