【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) }* w" w& ^; B/ S. W5 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 g8 S. s- g) o5 _  Z* [: `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' t/ h( a3 l; f$ gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& C$ u: g3 e$ P! q" DWith the moon kissing it every night
) W: u' b5 p$ u& K3 fSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ o3 W- m3 C$ X3 D$ uEvery other word you utter is love
& f/ l" O/ O: X) c+ `& M+ M, {I really want to know just how much you love me
9 g+ [; i; H* s" _9 h. |- mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& `- H- X  d* ^3 {: c2 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
5 a. K# Q9 Y* p9 s0 pI want so much to see inside your heart
4 g: Z" i' s1 r% }% b9 sI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  o3 \0 `3 j6 r% ?/ |3 \# mI’m still filled with fear
6 O3 j% P  \% c0 H. H: V" IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
3 S3 C: V' R/ @6 p) J$ h( l, k7 eYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 ^, s  Y+ H* ~% u8 S0 M$ ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" A" F! q% w3 h8 J- G" D6 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 }* p: [" Z. C7 \+ h6 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 l8 g6 i. Q; e1 J% ^) |/ I" L6 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( M2 C0 M# [# _5 N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ m' L9 S8 X2 A( z9 Q  W<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 y5 y2 o; r; O$ G/ A1 N$ X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  R& f; s  q) p, i$ Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ C& e* E3 h  S& u  w3 x<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 {9 y- {# J5 P9 U- [2 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ E  u- ^% n4 b6 d# \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 S2 Q6 \2 ^) K2 p$ H4 h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# y" _6 ?9 U6 H- b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 b5 A5 s$ C* z7 q* G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 x0 S* A, c* X7 ^1 ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 U% x- M0 T* w$ E3 r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, [- d) @: G* R/ c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 X4 K7 `& X6 k% E& V( a( a! f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 s# y3 C  f0 z2 S" z<P>I regret not dying</P>
, j. C) q9 e- {$ ?7 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 H' R0 [  W7 @) [! C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' u" L3 n, ~4 h) K% p$ j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- Z6 q; X6 S* C3 A/ X+ z; z" q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ G3 D( g( H* f<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! @- a+ u' T" T6 z, Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( f& J8 f% s; Y- L/ f7 c<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* Y: _+ x4 f! O% E2 j( k我请你剖开它
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6 Y4 d% z6 C6 h& Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>