【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ }2 F2 u& s& N* E0 Y) n2 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
: G' L  Y- C& g4 mMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" e4 P1 G4 U, m. l) JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 B0 w: A; t$ |0 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 l9 N# E1 \- n3 h6 oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) C$ I: x6 W% b- II love you I love you with all my heart
8 f+ K# P; z% S% {Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) ^+ o# K6 o* N- G0 x0 C8 CI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 h  `+ U" q: lI’m still filled with fear
4 O  V. f7 F3 u- t0 X: zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  `7 l' B5 V2 C$ F) @& e) DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 X6 H+ W# [& ~- F+ [7 B, u4 J- `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
/ [+ }! m. _' i9 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ b9 N9 p) T- y% h; _7 g- e. |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% O" P5 a+ y4 Q) _% t<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* Z3 E: c. J7 V* {9 N, J4 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! Y; M  W$ {. J! }6 R3 T* C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 g# O1 u( f6 v/ x0 C3 b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* @; O$ M( e4 h% I2 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( h% M) r; N2 J1 X7 h$ c<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: x& O: m& P9 W1 @+ T2 N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# Z* E, E2 l* q  H! Q/ F7 {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  e  \5 z+ ^# Y! q) T( R, }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 P% s6 w# c2 r0 f( F  g<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- S  Y2 j! F4 n& E# Q! ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  ^  w. W% j) V1 c+ Z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! g& B, o. o5 i0 N; H; B- W: H0 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: e# g0 c+ d9 O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ E! ]  \6 p9 u. W" ^: \% D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! Q" ?. ~- L$ f6 D* r" s  G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  G* N  ?' P, R- T* E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
: n7 w1 D5 X" S" Q& _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 H. `1 u3 `  |/ W# \5 n# f' B<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 N7 p6 V/ g* ^/ |8 ]  N7 l1 M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 k/ W0 D5 L( m* z0 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>