【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# V. n" M% L1 S$ V. m2 a2 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 M6 g4 X, r% ?# w( `% VThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: e2 d5 @7 x; ?1 \. NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' N. s# K) I, o& ^! SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  m5 }' `3 s  q0 x- q/ q6 hEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ L2 l- P  C* U' G& GI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. |( T. p" d) p  i8 hI regret not dying
8 D; P9 U: ?0 P# E9 tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! c! o& \- J/ ?: ^7 d: U( m' `2 ^& v9 PWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# u  f! T/ q5 K" g+ T( ]1 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ [( f( _! T" w: W, j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: H/ A/ T5 S3 Q' [! O. z0 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- I3 ~  `3 F) U$ F- Q7 e5 B0 `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. d0 \& V: ~3 ?% G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% }& i! a9 A8 c+ E* V2 c9 n4 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; l) F7 v4 m  \2 k$ `' {0 D  v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! k8 ^: L8 U7 F8 k7 s( l+ ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 p0 d7 y" l; O" m% z8 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 ]4 ~" ^# y, V( g* C5 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% |- I( Z( D" _9 r" N( W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 i/ I8 r" m% Y. A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ k' R' {5 v$ _$ t2 z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 l& z6 R# a$ V; @  B; V& F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, `1 o( ]8 d, C7 n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
. K$ l8 k* m  {9 S: u' B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, E3 a: d( r: w* {% K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& w& k( E% M; _/ T  Q; |1 S7 h8 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) ]# L8 R0 A+ n9 B# m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' S* m- D! `# b- L/ |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  p4 P9 q9 g$ j! k7 s) y& O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 n- O* |  O1 E5 y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 Y' P( I: X* A+ q5 p<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( |  t7 Y1 |7 S9 k1 b9 H0 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 V( v# B$ |' M/ I9 }) m<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ F7 |5 a4 h, i$ e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 }% g. Z8 I- k<P>I regret not dying</P>
& g. R1 c  n* k) D3 }3 q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 T$ A& S$ O% r2 J4 L5 u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 C, H4 x0 O0 v0 a! \+ f8 W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: s2 o) d% z% H# q( x<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ [4 [4 G: Y: X$ E9 {1 |8 D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: \' e4 R. u. F7 |( k' _6 U" b+ V我请你剖开它
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* [. B5 C+ T, n8 F+ Q4 q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>