【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- I+ G- M3 z6 p歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ U) n" ~  k: {& L+ OWith the moon kissing it every night
& ?' e: H* \- m( R3 |Seeing the sky content with its love
" |/ }+ m4 N1 w4 i+ R+ K8 ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) X* y* \9 b, a+ [& t& G& cYou needn’t fear anything
' G" V7 [2 e; U& S3 @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 n0 H2 ]. S$ S" b3 `2 P& ?! A- OEvery other word you utter is love
9 J5 ?  Q7 s8 U; OI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 g4 C$ S) G  y, EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  H6 Z* G8 h( O1 `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" c9 l1 H6 q0 }- I1 m; vI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# w9 @3 m, M! I( x7 N1 a( s; CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, F0 _' ~+ [6 S! SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" k: `9 m4 ^1 x& n# zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 O; I' J( C% S5 T% R7 n1 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. ?# W- _3 F" `" _' m( D/ e& d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 E# @) J* R7 S4 V<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 b4 k1 \& j3 @, N' n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 C  N8 A; V! }; H( }5 W7 P# B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( Y# L; E: l5 @% H( j3 {( `5 v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 e( T+ p$ L- A& o/ U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) c2 z- h) X% d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' f2 {) I8 \+ N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, `# ]6 w0 r1 m3 n9 e, d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 \* H! G2 g+ [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, P, @7 c$ x& p4 f" O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 W9 |3 \  X: f/ U. I  ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 }6 {; x7 ^0 Y/ M5 H4 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 C6 P0 S; y9 ?% ^3 ]+ T" V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 M9 L; T! F! b0 u$ Q$ L( K; r<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- X8 g) a! p% a3 A' ]( F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# i" K2 H1 I- I9 c6 L7 S$ M! C' U/ D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: A; b' a2 H) {<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 I5 ?' z( U# V& ?: s& D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! n& W& `5 ~( }<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 g; f: X+ U) v& H1 N<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 d* o" q% {; h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 X$ N5 `  `+ ~, r( j4 ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: \# V" A7 y. i2 j& a我请你剖开它
6 F7 r5 ]9 c  I" l. O5 J4 l8 R
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ D- r% ]! J1 F" r: l  t/ M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>