【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& A0 T( _% S) V1 j1 ]2 b$ V0 aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' r# `- ]6 |* ~3 V( J, i; ?& nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ z# b6 D: H; f! @* T( p6 Q. @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  \& l& O8 `2 e5 ]) Q6 P7 iThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
- ^: i# e; V  I5 b2 ?% h9 [3 v' ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. A2 d  t: J7 f3 K" WYou needn’t fear anything
. y( Z! Z( U5 c% X% g- F( A' tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ `  h* o3 x: p0 b, II really want to know just how much you love me
9 L2 I* z4 {( ^' T8 G+ gI love you I love you with all my heart
3 q' e& [, R. `" S/ f: dNothing can compare to my love
1 }& Q  [' q0 h2 h$ GCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 M2 K, H1 F2 h0 P6 NI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* c# o$ ?2 F" Q8 H7 \$ P9 a4 aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, g0 S- C$ Y8 k9 \- KWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 U) Y2 G& i. CRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 K- c+ [  I1 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ I  ?1 h4 `& o4 k0 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ b& |+ l/ T* k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* T/ [. k0 n/ X+ c' V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% }2 P4 ]8 E; n" j$ T- f9 {<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 H8 R9 q& y1 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 P- |9 r7 E* I6 H3 ]<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- S* F3 o, L2 s2 [% @) b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% N: o/ A  x6 e2 Q5 b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! a5 u& b' B$ ~. t1 l8 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 K4 L* O+ |! z# X, M# E! Z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- o7 o. W$ |- n. M8 U% b5 |& S# o, Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 I2 I7 G* T0 F! P6 L1 L<P>你无需担心</P>
. m1 d# D0 V6 r* h2 S9 v: W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* |% ^; n; g" L1 a( R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* m% s# u! a+ e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ _7 u- m; ]) r3 _  f9 X1 U- V  P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 L9 n6 T/ e9 l) N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 d2 [5 d1 B. o# L. F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  j& o7 @2 |3 a) w5 D<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ q+ S' u6 L! W: ~' x  ~0 W  H/ Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! R- E5 O. K1 f9 ~& O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; e1 F3 `4 d# U+ S" J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 F; Z' ~+ M) X- [! l0 {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! P" o; L+ G& a. g<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, m2 E. W" Z9 m! o- G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, [' j+ ~" s; |  e: p* o; a( ~: ^0 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 S2 G4 G' h- P- V4 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( j# P$ l4 `: J/ l' c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ J8 A/ s" K: p9 ]# M5 ^  x, D0 a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ x- {. p' C8 @! }1 ]. L, w, H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  E9 \2 z. g# s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>