【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 T, A9 v- m" }9 D  q8 y# d/ L, yWith the moon kissing it every night
; ^$ ?- q" u0 K1 rSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
0 B! y/ U7 J0 _( l) }. c5 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 [* U; t# v) V, LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( m& R& i3 T+ z8 AI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  Y) L; G! c& C0 [) u& s. o5 |5 ~  bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 O( J; m% y- GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ F( i8 E  f6 [# i0 q" WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 N# T8 r  v8 ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 t! l. D) E: T, |$ K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( n$ ^% y  e4 v' f; _2 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' w2 Q0 `% u5 v2 y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
1 z7 \1 g1 c3 F& g4 b) v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 O+ ^* U  W2 q" l5 [: o" y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- r% S. z* S8 Q' Q- ]( x0 `& z" J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- L' T% P( g, b: m8 u- x1 E<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 h) N4 s1 e. H; ~* a) ]# l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( x% y) g  W2 Y2 N, m" o" F2 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; {7 t/ k* c6 {2 C( b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 v4 P- U" o. k& }* S1 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* @4 X6 s4 M: u: m; Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" X4 c/ D& Z' E! G  R0 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; {- Q: m6 t, a% |) q4 O# s3 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% h3 U$ k; ^8 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 U& O* Z$ O5 I- V6 k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- r9 v; f0 N" [* s1 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! s1 Y) h9 p" G  Z; H6 p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 a4 z9 K! }8 \: u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& t( U; b& e$ D; @8 G2 o, R1 o( O# {' Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 b2 L) L( v  B<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ G# G* O& h' r  f% G5 a$ w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 W) c+ e  e& _<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 J2 Z6 ]+ o1 [& ?9 C! H5 Q- V  H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: X* s- C  Z% Z9 d' _, R6 u; z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 C' Z; k- X0 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
' m7 a, ^: j0 h" C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>