【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 k. D* y' j( D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" C0 `. L% r1 D( @5 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
8 l# r, y6 Z. x" C& `* C1 dThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' |  {( f% l- v+ g4 WSeeing the sky content with its love
/ X5 S4 V; X& p8 _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 b9 v2 f' C" O% d8 a: R, R! U1 Q8 dYou needn’t fear anything
- C+ ~" T2 {8 j0 V* u& ?9 XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ `9 ?9 S* i4 A" K4 T! HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 i; \$ [3 f3 }8 \6 r7 RNothing can compare to my love
, w( {  V4 V3 J9 J& UCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. E  R) j& l3 E5 x- UI want so much to see inside your heart
6 Y0 v) ^7 H$ H  M3 e/ L  p% XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( W. z7 h/ `' F9 {& rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 U3 T" ^( V# n3 n6 {* RWith such a tongue as yours,
- O+ y+ d  _8 c; tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& J3 G# W8 _& E6 F: }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% N, M, r' H. U0 l) t1 F3 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. j% A. g5 i  H( l2 r' b4 `) w<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
( a+ j/ k. Y. S4 E2 W, @9 I<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  C$ o5 h! K: `, r) }5 f# E: H( ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  n1 _: V5 q. a" v- o* g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' m# e7 ~) R3 M' i$ @" f  b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% |7 l; t+ w: V% |# _/ t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
# {$ F& M9 ^8 ^; b. |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 z2 H. X) f) }<P>你无需担心</P>
7 O! Z9 N" n: B; q; y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 U: [, n2 |* j4 v4 _" I3 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 V; r) X: N5 Q6 U' b<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 B1 `+ H0 P6 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  `: X2 I" V- D* }( o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 B( Q5 c8 J" Y8 g& v: N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" |. J2 s+ ~0 g4 L: a) e& s* c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* L# |4 F/ h( ^0 f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* R2 D% D) B% ^' i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# M( N# L+ Z2 c% j9 v7 ]' Y1 ]; d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: {5 ^0 p/ f; q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. Q  m' M7 s: M- x- G7 u: y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! p# z+ p: I$ y: P, n2 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: y8 i" v5 `/ K' x我请你剖开它

0 J, t8 p4 v! t1 X2 \, | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>