【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) S" S. U. e1 r  sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ P+ f! }0 j0 c/ j; B- r  u% g9 XWith the moon kissing it every night
+ ~$ {4 D5 }; y, v/ mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! ^2 Z2 R  _, VYou needn’t fear anything
& {- T3 v8 c! G( S  k! g: LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; ?$ f1 d# _9 C3 a1 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- e3 W, v2 Y8 |" gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 N& G* Y4 F2 T- S( w% II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. C& x; `5 E) f1 R# i6 d3 EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 I& d" T" X  q4 j, i2 d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ W3 \# D- P* ]. T. R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 F) [; ?2 [* r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ n6 _- r+ D6 [, ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 I7 p1 S* `, S3 P4 b+ C<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ f- u5 L& C7 r% c% I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* c  o- a% q- o$ B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ @5 Z0 o; U8 z' j2 G3 j9 x<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" y$ Q; D7 h% o: Z<P>你无需担心</P>
6 q& k/ L1 x, \% Y$ w- |* F/ p  H" L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% `& w0 [" o) F. b1 x$ w: c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! D; y4 A  F* _4 C2 J) v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( E0 f/ L+ X# _, w8 m% q% N  w<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  a  s2 J/ j+ k' Q2 _" S<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( ], @6 g: j) w% R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* Y% \) h. S" \; a; G' u* H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ W3 S. B  u% `# m8 ?, d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- ]# {4 N5 L% z) v  s; @% P% ]3 C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ |) K0 y- z+ T8 K- ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; d( H" ?( O4 [9 g- R+ ?2 p$ @" @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& i7 |" w& I; k1 b<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" d4 o7 ^0 a, u; r* Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' m0 m" @" u5 }9 m" E/ k: q, S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: Z3 P* z  m/ w* @! [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, v6 Y/ u% \/ S3 V/ j' a<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) X; b9 U3 C; a. o$ S3 K2 Q: h<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ \& a% h: I, o3 v" _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ H3 I# [; G+ i6 d4 _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 t* I% F" Y# U: I0 @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ z3 v0 X! V' V  }3 |<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ Y4 g4 x- u, {8 W! A$ a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" L* Q  z- K& _: H* M9 M+ _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# `9 o3 \: n9 ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>