【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ w, `+ ]1 O' J歌词我附在后面。
* M, Z& {) s9 ^, A% l6 Q$ b0 t- ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 M* v: ]+ R5 |% ?% m5 w8 MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' |. Q$ D" ~! zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: g! \: j) p1 I# K; X" mThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ X0 q2 {( r7 N! U& vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ ?7 W* u7 e+ F2 V5 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, O- L  l+ j; I, GYou needn’t fear anything
( K8 T# o0 ?/ d+ N8 @% dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 @0 t6 H3 j5 p# z! GEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 n0 y2 Y6 V8 J' @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  D/ r5 Z! M1 x2 [! x2 _' TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 T( y# y$ q. s2 S/ U% s% TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 M: n8 w" j# Q$ l+ f4 h( R  _I’m still filled with fear
3 ~) A& S6 y$ a; FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( T% q% C0 B" V4 `I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( `9 n7 W( h" m8 P' R. ]* v# x8 u* fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. _5 _  n$ ]0 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# M: Z9 G- O  [+ C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 R3 K  n7 {% l5 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! n( t7 G8 n$ n& W" T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' o# N0 y: n- `7 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) f4 p+ t/ l7 W0 Q/ a' C% I" m; ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# l0 m; v# n. z* s7 \; i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ l$ Z7 `+ `# [! ]0 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) c- Y' t/ d/ W3 |  i( _# l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 j0 }8 d" H, z: Z3 C$ \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; q% b3 p% L; u( j9 K' E$ h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 Q5 k$ G2 T, R. ~1 f% R) F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& Q3 G- m9 y9 D, t/ d2 p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 t! S; z/ b: O# H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 o$ @7 D# y' M/ T8 ?* D& [# z9 l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
$ H2 Q! J+ [1 {8 n( ^2 l2 |( a2 H, S<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; ^! E4 B; T/ s! a2 v4 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* B( _0 c/ }& I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 M- a. ^( }/ P. D/ s4 n( r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% x* l: R$ B1 R4 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! A, M" \! {/ F1 w  K& R7 m8 W<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 r5 `. j' P" |& f6 K, P* ^+ z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! ~! y5 _- Q8 l$ U- a3 ]<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' C, J0 x  C' V" `8 S% |4 o5 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! V0 B9 a0 o* S7 H( N: e9 P<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  |; k' D0 L' p' b3 q: E<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& u) l' c9 ]& j6 J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 e4 x% P4 A$ L' \. u- M2 h! ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' V+ c/ G  O# P& M, `8 i" c! A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>