【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  L4 ]' \% z) A歌词我附在后面。
' W- D+ K' q7 I; f6 ~The moonlight is shining brightly,
" S  H8 E- t6 M' {Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ N0 [6 E6 |- E4 M8 pThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 ?+ B: W( ~; oEvery other word you utter is love
# A2 M! K' ?/ a- e2 SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# }- T7 Q6 V# \* V4 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! s) a8 {, s+ B8 b. F! zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( o# A: N$ i1 C# j6 ]) l. b( xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* O* a; W& A9 n- }8 |Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! N( M  w6 _% ]& K8 Z) a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ W* ]+ V9 w$ n; H3 }. E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& M9 r4 d% e2 P7 ~- S. {& L: ~, l3 g<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) Q8 M5 H; e2 ?5 U4 o4 h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ q+ e3 x% G; `1 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 y3 M0 m9 ?# k4 N5 R: r' s6 B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 F0 E) R! T7 t# f0 g<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% @2 n& I; E$ }5 P9 [9 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 C. h. f) u' \  g1 {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 r/ S" |! v5 y# x6 T. b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 y' y3 u2 a' w/ O7 m5 F' A% O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, E! _8 v: h- ~- q1 J<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ r( v& @6 n% s1 z% W2 y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) T5 u% Y8 _( ]. @( }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% z5 [- @0 c' [9 |1 V+ ^1 u1 G! I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ v  x# W* v6 l. l# j6 Q<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 _* f4 u/ i7 M" Z' y$ x2 u<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 U3 v& p# e1 Y$ l$ M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ S5 J/ g  |' ~* ~+ w7 D. w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ i7 s, y/ T% t$ c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 k! |8 _1 E8 K! q4 }. ^9 g$ Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# d8 G# Z* y6 H( M1 Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- Z# A" _/ l$ h1 q+ B( W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ O0 K( r7 g- L" k! r  C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
3 A) p. D  E8 c& ^  R; d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  M( a/ F& q1 ?8 S<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 v+ V2 o; Z( s0 V! x/ G+ S+ k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

8 T* `. E1 f( V- x: X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>