【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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% p8 ^8 H3 x9 C0 w歌词我附在后面。
4 K8 S/ T" e5 y7 l7 t2 h' r1 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 t$ E7 m9 R  D8 SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ j% Y+ G' t2 S1 N" ZIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 }! Z, v! ?3 u) TYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' \# \# g: Y7 L# dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. @, ], M) [- l/ M% yCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 L7 i) ?& l) t. BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' Z% W% f0 ?  N8 S/ h! oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
$ C# c' }/ k* N$ CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, C% a, ]! ?) G4 y- r% V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( z4 G2 d$ G" K) J0 W<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ K* e' F; p9 U0 @' U- q6 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; |) C. h6 n; V/ ]9 t, j( [<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 c, z- C! n* T1 e8 R: `* \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! L, i) C- i$ e9 p1 W! @<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 `$ `0 [& e& ?' n# y# V) W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 s( j% }2 T, f5 E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% k" Z1 X. g. _' L; L7 _3 \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! |' K* ~/ Z" D7 H0 t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# l- q( B. C- O3 n& Q: E" h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 h/ @9 m; q, p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) y5 C2 D' l7 n& C7 s8 a2 D0 K* M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& O% k& E& D, {0 E# f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& ~" b, t1 e; ]3 l8 H: [7 Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 }. k/ O  l2 i8 _<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ k* J$ A8 _5 K" ^/ u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  b: B. ^3 f1 _2 S/ i' j! B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* [* _) w2 S8 e<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( ?) A, G2 l' {' k* E% E* g* N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 j; P8 T; S' {. L4 }6 l8 O. h# R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- c7 S' C. O* t) w<P>I regret not dying</P>
, N3 Q- L3 Z) \! c/ m+ H0 n2 E! P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# _0 o/ J" J+ B1 L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ ^2 H; i2 ^& h0 p; o# z<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& m  N, B. y1 W. n( D* ]<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; h2 x6 ~5 R" g0 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

2 _3 c; j7 M$ p* a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, i6 x' o0 Q6 v  S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>