【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# k4 A' s6 i; |6 [, U歌词我附在后面。
3 s+ @& _7 t/ uThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ U/ N( C' ~0 _- ~3 c5 k+ Q6 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) R2 @9 T! @4 ]- V+ DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: u4 n% d; I: aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" Z1 y) s( N8 a: u  c$ {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# E$ L- Z2 C% N; v) B* kSeeing the sky content with its love
/ u+ S5 [' ?1 k5 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' ~1 I- G) t1 a2 L6 h; v* U* pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) P( O+ j5 T" o1 C2 }/ [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 m, \* m  i$ b+ RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ r9 D" s: R2 v) y( F: S/ WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: F9 g" l8 j/ k+ d% F  _* S0 p( h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 U" E  v  p" n  V5 T& C$ s: q9 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 Z2 a. h# v# [5 W* }4 k: W( W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, j! \3 M$ A6 W! r! z2 Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 }8 x+ @* P" ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ u; k/ k; x0 @4 O2 P) O" V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# W! x8 s1 k4 m: V* a5 |, J. o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& A$ \, b5 D$ W& R0 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, S9 p; t8 {6 @+ X<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) R: ^, q# Z0 P9 s<P>你无需担心</P>
4 w. ?7 S0 ?$ k4 p3 o5 F. B* [- a' S<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ s* D$ r5 [% U# T* g( _, {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! E- Q/ Z: R, B# v* V$ D# |) P9 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# @8 r/ ~7 D4 L6 z! W' W<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, A1 X1 R. b7 W( s! \1 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 |- t8 i$ \1 y* X! H7 {+ Q3 }4 \. v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  s7 x# V4 H% }& o! E0 d1 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" D- X2 O/ l6 u' p5 d; s! g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 F9 \2 G1 P/ E/ N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" u9 a" [7 G+ Q5 @' {" b<P>I regret not dying</P>
& w4 {9 u; O5 }" |, `/ ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* L+ d- S* {% ]( X3 C<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) o* ~% v9 V0 }3 r# ?- J: x; n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& M+ b! V( m4 P. `$ d<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% l! D% s' w  H8 f) P<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* `+ S: U5 b4 S% B7 t7 X& p<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ a. U! x! A+ O  s0 o我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 L3 M" L( N- H( m, I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>