【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" h1 N9 j* Q/ g! C: }: I/ b: Y2 `6 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ S* B9 k% @6 y. B) ^Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% ]: |: G# f) k1 V1 z$ Z2 K7 `The sky is happy down to its soul
: |. x5 a" |& V: R9 N* x" g( BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  x- B8 W2 w. N# \& W; M: m' V, }Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
8 e# q3 E$ i$ P4 E4 @I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" O4 t2 }' Z1 v% ^2 UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" a8 N* |0 ]! [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
! ]. g+ Y9 B" n& N$ a4 A- ^<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 z/ p& P) X8 F# A1 k9 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  R3 z+ w5 p: C) x+ Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& t( z, `' i+ N/ O% E5 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 ~, k9 q9 u9 l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* Y9 \. x- y) U1 Y3 y% [0 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 W- v: U' f& i" ]1 U. w( D<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: H& q5 y8 N2 y( f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* Y; z( O. @: f) X4 B& Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" T. u! u) T& w$ d0 F) l* Z+ ^* A<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: @: B# ~6 j" ]; P+ p6 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- c+ f$ E/ n6 B* I- j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ l$ }0 z( i$ s, x* `3 `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 Y4 P) E# P/ p  u' M; X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 w7 w" d" _5 w+ D. x+ Q2 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 p0 R. ~6 Z8 _# U% Q5 Q8 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. V- [' z8 A% [! |9 \<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. _; d5 w: D  e0 z- A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) L! [5 d7 S% {5 V% l' w2 h/ _3 u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* w4 _  G3 H$ |" _1 Y+ y$ }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 W$ v: T* ]: i% w/ _' h6 m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ f/ r( y% y4 R, L/ e. Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 V! i/ J  U, e6 [! p. [) n7 I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* U- C& a0 L4 W) y$ ]9 \" _  Y+ k. e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ f9 N& T5 u" m+ \  E/ {/ X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( x& O6 Z0 q5 T5 G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  W- l* W. ~6 k# X# W  I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- A0 ^; J! L7 B( l- o/ T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! b$ o+ _# b8 c- B. ?. O$ t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: n; V8 V0 m7 T- }2 [<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>