【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; G, W5 b2 s3 y# I6 f歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 H8 k6 p& s! E' x7 B3 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 d; J* a# L5 R! w9 M1 n0 M7 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ T% z' j, x8 k8 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
# q/ w* x- ^; g0 y. |With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 w% s( h5 i# ^$ i! e2 N# c. J  |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: c; e' g: x$ j& c$ S" I9 fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) a8 I$ w8 F: Y5 Y  U0 d% WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
- `- N% K; h. kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. F+ V) \3 L& G- |! `I’m still filled with fear
# Y- L: F" T) t% \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ ?: m0 l( r3 ~  g$ b0 k7 {- F2 O1 [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
$ i) x( m' s! X6 R7 {1 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) z2 ]( F3 [* M$ `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ b1 p. ?# t4 S' o7 S. |& X" iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: a" T1 K8 E5 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* V% \) y  V( g! e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ M) c! c/ g" G* v3 I5 V8 v5 z' j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, \- A: b' i! W9 c1 S0 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 K: Y; u- O" ?7 F; @1 d' O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& f" m. S$ K1 Q% K# B9 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 t) H# v" d, B& R4 K* ?9 p$ I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ [& o& M$ E8 K' E$ H: U; p% k6 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 x' |$ ]4 c0 A( o<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 q  M3 T5 k" u" j1 `7 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
; I, U. v( O+ s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, x/ q5 E- X6 G1 _3 ^3 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, A6 U3 q( t4 ]: C0 g% D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 d2 N3 y: A% F5 r. v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 c! d3 \* |$ Z1 e4 I. ]% z6 v! G) P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ ~% W: B0 \# |, F% h8 ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ R. I" B8 {: {7 _' W! k' Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& L8 O8 r( A. |: S# G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
1 }, u! n; F2 ]! f3 i1 j/ f9 \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. h: J1 r6 c( @. M9 C" J7 Z2 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 g/ m' T% `, r- `' Z) D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 L7 Z$ E$ R0 E  k$ R* Y8 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 E9 e& i$ \6 `) ]- r<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ G$ X( }* ]) G7 l$ N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ T' u7 l! s) h- c& d' j<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: r4 f! v8 n, P, s7 U9 X0 m! X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: T$ |; ]! K$ x6 R1 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  W; J4 R3 I- N4 y8 \  [0 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
" U% ]0 U$ p3 w) Q( \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  C; e% _: e. R% q+ E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  z1 D5 c; ^. ?8 w* m/ i我请你剖开它

3 q3 e4 ~! z& Q3 u  E& }1 o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" Z9 Y" ]3 S3 e5 B3 J1 m( H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>