【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. E4 F5 X8 q5 T1 x4 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
: S/ b8 o" K+ ]' [4 a8 i' ]: _Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* [, u/ M: g- X, OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& v& `! v& T5 NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 B( [$ y: }7 a: f7 W) F8 X0 zYou needn’t fear anything
5 H, N' ?( c! n( _( T. bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 n5 d5 S) V6 |. f. w# q: qEvery other word you utter is love
5 r  g# K' b4 vI really want to know just how much you love me
. d; @. S9 M4 X9 C: UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% d( y: m) ]/ e0 U4 l. o' J' aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# L2 ]" ?6 B! |8 A) y; cI want so much to see inside your heart
0 U2 H) \4 E. K- BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 V& m8 e6 r/ [& ]" M2 dI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" g$ g5 {; W& F5 z: LWith such a tongue as yours,
* }9 J( M7 _( e1 \" s7 RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 i4 \; ~( z  G$ r- [- n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ H4 n4 K' v3 m6 a, X+ O( D) K5 z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 Q$ o1 |7 J. `/ ^' m/ i% b$ ]9 A<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 q) B! b- u' o3 T1 U6 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, k+ v7 n( u5 B7 |: h1 U. k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& S9 |$ ?1 q2 Y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 t6 I1 |) b( ~: c( s- P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# U: B8 ]/ I( l( l$ n! ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 n5 J$ G: M( a$ F' \7 V6 C- N<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- \$ I$ P/ @* e9 P$ I# q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# D2 z- Y* O  W& v( Q2 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 y1 l3 o4 [# f6 C1 q) L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 ?8 o( `5 |- G( [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ u1 b8 {$ ~& d# l" `<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 j1 o% G% N% _9 t/ d/ U3 G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ A6 \4 N  g5 x& Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 H8 O8 \4 u9 |- W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 a' D! S, D& l' t9 ?7 V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* v) o4 r1 u. u" ]* ]0 R9 I- G( y( M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ ?# s; ~4 v/ t% t& h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 ?/ r% B9 J7 I% d+ A: O4 N% m( ]4 F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# |. r+ g+ k1 Q, e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& L' ]+ i1 j: B9 q/ }" X! U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( G/ I: N7 y, f% P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 M6 T" m. i: ]4 c+ L5 s/ s) \/ {. X  m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- [0 w; p5 z! _( ]" S& J* q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 ]. }3 i2 r! U- S' B! i9 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
2 y5 W- T! O. A9 E& }+ v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 v" J- O/ U% b+ L3 L  C我请你剖开它
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  v- N0 X9 J* O: p: a/ K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>