【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 `2 [" h0 o. u1 C/ LWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ F3 c' c- `) E+ _The sky is happy down to its soul
+ i. u. l( _6 L8 T. F, wWith the moon kissing it every night
+ @  w- _/ v. E/ Z; j' eSeeing the sky content with its love
, N% z7 `2 s) x/ W) NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# b- d/ w7 h- F0 c" Y1 uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 y; _9 R7 }) a6 MNothing can compare to my love
7 H; _' W. m9 E( r, i) ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. S' c6 ]* b1 G: aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ r* q. e  D0 A% g* tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  ^/ ~# f- h% B. V; h! [. J- P0 tI regret not dying
" \, t$ t3 G% f, d- I" fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 D9 `8 s" ?# E2 \3 o9 XWith such a tongue as yours,
7 r* `. f# \2 O5 ]' X# W* vYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 F/ n& x) W' {+ eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! y% {8 {, Z: g) D" k+ y  x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ `$ e( W9 X, r1 t3 R3 W7 N' e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# }: N! o; V9 L1 `$ Q; T( g<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; f$ e2 `7 w: T6 L7 u/ k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 p, a6 H) u& Y; P8 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ X* V" X9 X3 b8 k$ u3 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& ?  p5 V& @4 v3 ?8 X) o, c3 T. v: s3 r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* \% b7 e% h8 c/ v, ^3 ]<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( u$ m$ J/ Q# v# I+ `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: S0 Q+ a1 o) X9 q# [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 u. r& z3 n6 @8 n: B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 y# W6 r# g1 k0 \- U8 G( `: o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ r- Y& J2 A, K+ W7 A$ P9 ^5 H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- D5 j' f6 o/ U7 h& d<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 j. S5 n: S! V: s) z/ q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# |: x' D, ~0 x- K2 J; y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 A  U' O5 x! C+ e6 N/ e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& O1 a  a1 }1 ^9 J$ Z5 O7 [; l# w  x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) l4 k$ q$ p& A! ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 {  i0 x# F% i& W; R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 C! W, o9 W# P* Q  W. \: r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 t$ O9 `% M! w) l7 k8 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* K. D, c( ]/ I: W; ~% x; ~- R  W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
+ x# x( H8 C5 ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 s4 C) T% \& c, `2 U8 b8 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
; l9 {9 w. c; E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: J# ?  `! Y; _+ g; T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 W- M+ X; _$ o- H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  m! ^1 L! R/ I' X- h  q( r8 D9 X我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% F0 T5 F5 i" J: q4 |! Q' Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>