【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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5 N$ `5 g0 _1 u, u歌词我附在后面。
. D0 W2 B% P1 PThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 k% Z! b* |7 F2 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 s5 A( {, V0 L3 _( U" x' ]# M# eThe sky is happy down to its soul
- W+ ~; f! q: X/ T& Y2 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 K; }8 G4 ~1 D) H% yYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 [2 G# ~1 w. @3 a% l) e6 G; UEvery other word you utter is love
& |. g" w5 A" D6 Z7 Z2 g' QI really want to know just how much you love me
  D2 x  `. b# q+ e0 y' gI love you I love you with all my heart
1 \& d: s1 |" F# |Nothing can compare to my love
* e& z3 I" _2 @2 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; [4 u4 B. a0 @  ~, rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  _$ {) ^$ T! u1 C6 fI want so much to see inside your heart
& q; z4 E" e$ Z2 RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! w0 u: G/ V& y* V. o: mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
0 `) d  ^2 e1 }" _) o' DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# Y# d9 v- W& X- P: D" {With such a tongue as yours,
) X* W5 u$ E1 c* B+ X) TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: k- ]5 Z* _' uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ f, u9 w5 f: U( Q8 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
. Z7 L1 b& p% R& R8 u2 ^6 e; w) [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" l3 u. M- s8 u5 _$ f) {5 L$ W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 ]8 t( E' c+ }* d& e6 J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 v1 w$ L! r, O$ m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 U# a* \# J+ h4 f# X* e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ G" `) W- s7 g4 W1 o- W<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 T- x# q7 }, L+ M2 S: U; G- u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ W0 i, |/ J  B9 T; S% U<P>你无需担心</P>
/ h% S& A5 }, [2 t2 |* Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* W3 S8 V: b" ~$ a/ k. z+ U5 w! `( m<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 ~( B- |$ O  r' F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ C8 ]; J3 I/ ~) S7 u4 B, W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; L. B4 k! e: \) X! d7 R: A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 c6 R' V" R. e: M8 d: u5 c+ h+ J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# j( U) S* M5 O<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# p, Z; h: j5 y2 T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# Y1 \: j0 V  M3 J3 h<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# K. i& F# p$ S8 p4 m2 q4 u  h  ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ b/ h9 ^; J$ y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' K& ~* k" Y5 `, B<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 V: `+ V5 S8 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 P5 v& K4 ]. d3 J6 b/ m6 s8 ?<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) i, n% y+ z. h6 K) L6 H' q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( A7 P; R1 D  e0 d$ A<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 e) z( @0 f/ p5 X; v& Z( Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* i# K2 `* A+ t: x/ N& m+ n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. M3 G4 ~6 g2 p  j/ e: c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  d/ v' c8 k( u- ?6 V3 a<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>