【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. n8 o+ V; g9 D  I. j& H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% B$ [, L" J1 Y- h5 u. E8 d0 l' r7 aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 o. g: S" e1 R0 f% @3 a5 CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" c9 m* M" A; d) V, T+ QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# H' ?3 h4 u0 g# G( v* A3 n0 PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ F( w- r+ ~* S" R* Y, h) o% TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& C+ G" U; v* q/ B  l6 x% CI want so much to see inside your heart
, j% s* n4 r, j6 y. [9 g7 c0 ~3 @I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 x2 z* _( k8 R9 x) D, _I regret not dying
6 m% X. e" u- I( R6 K+ X& xI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) D  M, K0 ?' e: xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 T) o, a! s6 tIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; e6 P1 {  `% M4 @  gRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* ~' L& V* X& X& m& {8 h# f' S. y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* b6 C, v; `! I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' C) Y5 o( _( x! k2 M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 C; R7 o, l/ @' C0 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 y4 P( D9 \: d# Y, S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: L- U& _2 W6 Y" \$ L<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 |0 {+ f$ s+ q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 L/ b1 x; q6 Z+ l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: y8 t/ I, b, q! J<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ g4 g# b  p0 g7 \/ }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 m. @+ ^; g$ `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# x& ]& ?/ h! n8 [8 ~; i9 T) @- R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" D" g/ N' p0 i<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# [( X7 k/ A$ v% S* K; x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  d  e9 h' r% A8 m3 Z, v' B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! `9 p! n+ P8 n<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 j. J2 l/ |6 G' q1 p# Y# F<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" U& m' R8 s7 @  v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 d) ~# B" d, r8 |, O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 M' Y2 J8 q5 c0 k# c: |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. O/ J9 S% H8 o; Y0 }7 e& l! ^9 Z4 U<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, ]* Z: ]5 o" g2 W" q8 m3 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 l( n1 {; h6 @" l0 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  H. U3 t/ E, e0 E# S8 s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 G2 t. B: D  f- Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: C7 s- j9 U* N1 [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 l8 l5 {# R( t$ k8 V2 l9 t5 K: u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# M1 V  f* j3 G- O<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" Q+ `" j: v; R  M6 ^8 q# B7 o3 P<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& t& X  w2 E4 E/ J6 n; ^2 A, s<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" Y- N( [4 y! k* }+ D" x8 I<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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% B+ r8 M/ k+ u, f9 B& j: X4 @9 y我请你剖开它
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9 E- J7 P% d  v. g9 ^% W" h1 P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>