【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
. W* Z, h9 l2 @7 S5 ^3 N* a  |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 M9 `, z7 c6 ~0 E+ D4 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% M  y" q: L$ F, [9 nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. R/ m, b1 K9 p( A% ]  x3 CThe sky is happy down to its soul
6 v, j. q/ I. R9 qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, @. _$ f0 o# gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 ?0 i6 M) O9 d2 ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 C" h6 X, u: ?7 ^' l! I7 MNothing can compare to my love
0 H8 R. j4 D. I+ {9 rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
& N' `2 W$ O7 j( j! Q0 z0 iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" t( R, f& t0 E, H3 Z$ MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# u# S2 a- S9 A- x: r/ Z5 y* j3 J9 nI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; b5 D4 ?9 \4 QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* o& o& W- u! X) [3 V; E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) \3 T9 u- b; W, l1 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 v' i* h8 B' |. K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- B" \, X, P" {, h3 K! V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& d3 V# q% H  ^8 U* ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 t9 d- o7 @+ u7 J& |9 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 Z# q" U5 Z3 k/ ~) [: h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 q9 b$ s# ]5 W  F0 L; c( _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& {7 ]) u7 a5 x' ~. [+ M( T8 l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ i3 J5 R2 y4 }* q# J9 J$ Z  O6 f3 Y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; n& a( L4 x1 r0 I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# {9 a' t+ p% \8 q% U* j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 b0 [: v3 H/ F$ t+ ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 Z+ t" P! u' H<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 P- d* _- ?+ J# I" ^$ L( ?* u$ P3 B0 y! @<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) q( X0 c9 v6 O0 \) Q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* f6 B2 E4 J# H, J, w- I! Q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 E7 |9 c# F9 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 z3 q8 e# d; B8 k) Y6 a3 L" K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 I' {' C5 M- ]+ ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ e1 f" x7 v3 U) ^- @$ [8 r我请你剖开它

1 |5 @  `; |- S1 w2 H. H& Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>