【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 R5 W5 U8 E! Y) u" E: j5 [! O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 |$ f( w% T* G( s( V( TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" O3 q1 c# S) z; R" g9 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
4 A& S9 v, V7 @, ]* m  \9 {3 QWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 ~/ n9 f8 Y! B7 v6 ]* MIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" M# H1 e8 u. [) Y3 @) nYou needn’t fear anything
5 ?1 G) ?2 R" w- PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# I- f4 _, z- II really want to know just how much you love me
5 R7 j- ]) d7 k- _+ [  b1 OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 e) R. P$ T. y. J, y" }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 b5 ]( s+ c" R$ E) Z4 a: gI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: J+ @; s7 J' |$ e, PI’m still filled with fear
6 n* `% [- U& S! \7 F* k( eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- p$ K2 W: t' a. y! g. YI regret not dying
& f; @! h# T5 [# A% t, ]& hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" i* E, ~  ~8 y6 m  y, {; z% dWith such a tongue as yours,
( k) K1 A* [: GYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. K3 O+ @# `/ o" GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! B$ R) J0 U& [! F! `* ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- a* P) Z5 M- h8 z3 Z# s7 Q7 B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 B/ O- {; G( J; i" h: O, \: \% ?1 L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* H# D) }$ p' r! c4 Z( a8 C! R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 V" Q2 H  W3 v& A2 R0 z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- m5 |$ E# ]1 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ O6 \) |% V3 o3 O1 |# o) R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& h- }/ m) g) n/ L3 U) a4 Q% S) e# m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' J. p; I" B) o8 M) n<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 d  j/ m3 e7 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 r' O* J6 ~% v# p  Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. T8 Z( A  Q% C  ]4 P9 T8 I2 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
- l' P1 G& Z: _/ x1 \' j. u, d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! q3 d' l% [+ T, t- i' t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* M7 e$ k% C! b% `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 X* x" w" e7 X2 c) s9 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 ]% k3 l6 Y; O) O- b* q8 y" k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  b1 z' J5 N6 C5 i+ v5 e3 i) w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( W) d% }, L7 P% P6 S2 j- J0 N4 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' ]: w0 i7 S6 H% J% [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 L2 L6 U( Q5 E- {/ {2 F- ~. S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 U5 w. }$ A* o: [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! z1 p1 t0 ^8 o% ^<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" J0 H$ F& s0 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- {* ?0 H; S. B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ G: @; v) Q% y3 u% T<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" [( ~- q/ _, o2 c1 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# G# ~: B" x% m) R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) c% U/ d- Z' ?) n& @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 d3 G+ ~  O: n. y( C1 b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 L/ W% m) J: [* s) Y9 u<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>