【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 H! f8 o! p3 ^5 I: Q1 j' Y歌词我附在后面。
1 |. O) q7 v4 O8 J; |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" B9 h) _1 i8 T, aWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
. k3 e" g+ O$ Q7 v( VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 ]# U4 E6 G% @1 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ D9 d) E# s3 Y" |9 u2 k$ iEvery other word you utter is love
, W) g4 s; a6 nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 K; _( c: e: e% pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 J4 I- E5 b& X) @2 kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 P( N+ F9 K2 u/ D* b3 s% SWith such a tongue as yours,
6 C+ U7 Q  V- U, TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ W6 C* i( L9 B# I) h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 @6 D( J9 [/ O; H/ s. c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; F4 @/ K* |  s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 p! ~0 Y* M" P2 ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 _1 Q) Q0 y& K/ h: B<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) c% A8 k& z9 v6 K& R9 z, k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) ?( z, `: w2 w- g  a) h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, z+ p( F- V1 T5 L; \3 y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
* z2 b: T1 R6 h# O" _2 J( G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( }: G3 X& P7 A5 Q' Q: A! U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; y, B. a- v( d% |: O. G5 e' ]( N' A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, p5 ^, f6 M! k1 t( K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. K# ~* w5 k3 b+ _( g- r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& k+ i' |5 v3 W6 k# e/ o7 Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; z# X/ W- k: r1 Z2 I# H* ^3 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, ^  x/ L& V, Q) t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' U0 g0 [" }$ |9 K- \$ z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% I8 K$ r0 {3 w3 h' F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 b, B& ~4 s6 ^- t. @& U2 |% S: G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ f, a5 z( f, q. m$ z* ?3 M5 Z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! ?6 S0 f( ^, f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ A) {% a! H- I. X7 m7 B; q- e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: B' T$ }  |. u2 w6 I) f% Z3 a<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  b7 o) I9 P7 e8 o7 V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. O* b7 {2 J- R: T( U<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. E' X# a8 Q+ ]0 I- m5 P  \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>