【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' @( f7 E8 w9 A( @4 L; pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' [# P1 z6 h9 k+ O8 xThe sky is happy down to its soul
- t3 t1 E3 h# o3 [& v1 A. LWith the moon kissing it every night
9 ?, `/ k8 \9 F8 w5 @) OSeeing the sky content with its love
$ V3 l; A" `$ T3 @" gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 X+ J4 l& W1 W9 {. E* RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 A0 Z" [$ O$ Y1 t8 T! bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. `& g4 W3 R, o( e$ dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* x) B0 t6 U6 D0 m6 I4 U" gThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. O3 M6 k% u$ z! E) J- ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) F" i1 c, t1 fI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: T. y0 N' b  C$ u( f2 p: C( G: e2 `Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 r, `, d$ Y1 x: [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' r* z* H) I4 {# ?- IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. ]4 T/ Z8 [) w" i: g! |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) L' q8 E# O5 ^& [; M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ V) \0 |& w6 O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  e6 N; @2 B7 w5 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( H$ D" g) Z( H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 z  G; a7 a$ o1 l. i( L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 h- ~/ K: Y; o6 @6 Z- a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 Z) M6 I2 K' [1 W# O<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  W& }) B4 l" C$ I$ ?<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ y6 G( O# P; G! X5 b! T3 V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 e' v; e" I" ^6 D5 `/ N. C. a3 i<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 I  z; _% C' b' _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; V1 g% V) v1 ~- j: u6 N$ j4 S<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' E3 r9 V# L- @3 @4 [3 O: _9 Y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& Y3 k$ M  l3 D' X; H7 k  V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& c. r( N5 I6 O- q9 g4 Z8 Y0 a<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& G" @/ V( B0 s$ Q5 {<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& P* `: r5 a# @- m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. H! J. S( m8 p5 l- T7 g5 u- o6 i& v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 R& H. ?% y3 d3 p* V- P- F& Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ E; j/ q* L! u. `, G( ^! l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  C! }! k0 Z$ c; G6 B# A. G& g2 B% P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 e4 P: e) k- y' T5 x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ X( b: H5 C5 \$ F+ |( p  }; c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 f/ k/ g# }0 J7 x4 ^2 w8 c6 M<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 ^6 k9 Y6 W5 @6 A5 f1 l; U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 L' _% Z' V; w& _0 D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 Y# S0 t1 r& r<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& q" {, }1 d% E4 a+ H% T<P>I regret not dying</P>
; d( f9 W# k' F3 W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, ]0 b; l/ J# p2 u% z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' {2 r8 p9 T: `5 N$ r0 ~: w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 Q3 b) c* ]) C- e- }. d7 H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 F/ Q! m, v; y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

- d2 O' s( a: ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>