【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

2 ?$ H/ {$ {8 P" v<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>


% L" x4 _  s3 s4 \% V* S7 L/ f3 V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! {: T2 U8 Q$ KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 n4 n, S2 m* y' n, ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; ?8 b  V0 k$ U* ^4 z5 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 r% W4 m1 C; ~8 u! oThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 s% G1 h* H( q6 Q; w- Z& GWith the moon kissing it every night
) {, C  W- ^# ?% W# n3 j" bSeeing the sky content with its love
  D9 R# ]- ]& M$ P% B. Q  i2 J! QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& r3 ^2 ?% J4 R/ {" @2 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 j8 Y0 ^1 H7 g( L: k- R( A6 xEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
6 H7 i: i: v; L5 i% g7 \  e$ t! g; NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ l/ `/ l7 }6 Q, B6 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( [* `! W1 _$ YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 Y7 j& j9 h& E7 |" `I regret not dying
% c( m6 ^7 h: _I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* X7 [, ~0 Y/ G; Y3 X2 MIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 _; ~, K* ?  ]% I; R& ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( h' g7 h0 W( q8 ^0 I, F# ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) W1 f+ R9 `/ I3 j<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 ]& V5 Y0 w- p- K6 ^( y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& W# Y) ]+ c( I4 T' T) T, d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ p7 x3 s' `8 i4 p8 _) a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* z6 d, B7 s' y9 i3 C; k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- n( B/ H+ k7 R) f* }& N$ B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# L" g0 }7 ?& P. k. U7 @/ B" I% B5 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  H; K$ |6 u4 N- Z/ p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 W8 \; y% C+ g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ f( V7 Y$ v2 X0 ?0 q7 |( p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ G2 _4 Z8 S  M+ T, z5 _* |<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 f' @/ r' K. f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 T, f. ~9 t# c, e6 G' [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% V- ~5 s0 H3 j# w<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 E7 K3 v: H- f. ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" P3 v+ b8 N% g8 [. I<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- M# Y* x1 q$ [) v2 V4 o( `! b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 Q% x3 c; ^& G8 i4 S/ j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; z3 m* X1 R: U, U3 |# @5 H<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; T8 f/ s. @4 N: n9 g, a我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
& H8 I. x2 w7 D4 _" F7 D<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>