【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 n1 q& `4 g6 m- `+ l歌词我附在后面。
3 e$ Q! I6 ?4 P! TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 e* P5 `2 }9 v( r/ n4 _+ IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 G9 p. P' |, X+ OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 e. E) z; y' U/ B! iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 C1 H* {% s. [% YThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 l8 V% T2 D) P' V4 r& {. C2 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: g) ?8 }; d7 b1 F" xYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" l: \' l. N# {) b) S4 tI really want to know just how much you love me
  S$ U% t  E/ q% O5 j9 tI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% `8 ]" O: f4 ?% @% a( I- Y4 [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 k- g6 t/ q( y; `5 Z% }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- U, F8 K% W4 Q8 h3 ]! f; J* UWith such a tongue as yours,
% N0 d0 v( U2 x3 k' C3 I5 r7 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: y2 ^6 Q0 Z. n) ^8 W4 _! o* `; vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) M: X& U7 B5 q% g5 WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ R# Y5 d  C9 h4 {) P- [1 y8 }<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' \. H# K1 x1 s# M<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 {4 G9 Z8 Q3 K$ G% H- B  s<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 t$ T& ^% V, i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 y( q$ s: P  H8 M7 y& J- a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 h+ j% Z& O' q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) C- O$ Z- c* U8 I9 _8 i2 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. @4 F# v- _6 w8 s# N; q) m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 I; |# U  u' i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 b: R& F. w4 K: W1 m- W5 K* t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% D/ s2 Y" A* l8 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 G( g/ m2 Z# |( u) m3 c<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; c$ E9 q& d  s  g5 w; ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* P2 ^* F* p0 O2 t5 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! z# {7 b3 Y1 \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. L) y% \* Z# f7 F( U6 Y$ P6 @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- d: l+ k8 C  t% s3 a4 Y7 u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, R8 P3 c3 l, `/ Y& ]/ B3 {- C% m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ h* i/ B5 R5 ^1 J; I- n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% k6 n" `4 p/ C2 d& n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- o3 i8 x3 f) k0 W1 m<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* }$ O. U# j4 _# B7 d1 V% D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. s8 G# d* B, x- [$ V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" v5 _' k5 M$ t9 C. v1 r* H" [- r  Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 m, p4 `. p2 D<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" ^5 G5 l- b; }$ t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 P! L) {5 O+ W; V0 H2 x0 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 {- ~1 n" d; N8 x+ M<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! A% U' b1 y8 ^$ [- {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

5 P! {8 P( {3 f5 [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>