【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( Z7 f  G! P- w  |# yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 C6 g" H' ?+ V7 L7 M& N/ C% }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! v- [' G' S# y" v# q- e( ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 H1 J. o4 D7 `7 n5 S1 w, R5 V2 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' M$ u# g- ?& K, vNothing can compare to my love
8 e$ T( i# R; u& `/ a) G- y7 P% aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" D# b% J4 D. @0 b! [, Y6 PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ R* P% G& U) ?1 {$ II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ e& B9 T, L) k8 ^. V: oI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 U8 z7 a' @% d- c6 vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  _2 x/ Y* Y& @6 B9 `* \& ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  T2 G! _! ~5 Y2 l& k6 j8 G) `0 o5 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! D. g/ K. b8 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( M7 l" ?  A4 e2 H& |( [! r8 R7 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 N5 C- r* H3 K/ U8 B2 i8 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" ^# s2 \9 @3 R" W) N) Z  W' R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* a; N) _* c: A$ L) W<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" x0 a1 ]. _! c  K/ e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: F: H. M" R/ j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& R1 j$ _! p: k; e- C4 E2 ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 T$ J. L# z3 |$ L2 T. D- Q+ [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) l8 ~+ {3 i- V+ S5 x! k. g' ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 h% ?7 L; C+ {9 a8 W3 B<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 A. A( Q3 x7 D" U, m- ]! Z9 B<P>你无需担心</P>
7 W. P1 T% Z5 G1 d. c1 t! B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) c# o5 Z! ]7 j( @5 T<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 ]6 S2 ]" N7 n: `8 _+ l<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 }+ A5 B# L, A: C  l+ G) Z/ B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 J8 a7 d( |' }<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 J- J# A- y0 t6 J& [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 {* w  k- o9 n. U7 ?! Q& \% W. T: v; J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) ^3 P. @) t2 k( I9 ]2 A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 o' U$ c7 V( Q; a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. x  m! i/ S: V: ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  S- q1 O9 v& \$ ?7 r<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 M' Y' v/ Z. D6 b- [& e, V<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 J! p1 a) W2 p- a& w+ x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 S1 a: f! G; I. q7 {# C2 R<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, `# H9 @8 ?: c+ V0 S' `: F1 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 |$ o4 q2 }( p6 n+ {7 L) c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 {% a7 l4 T4 Q6 ?7 t<P>I regret not dying</P>
. n; b4 u; O7 X" c% r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 ~1 X& F: O- q% v! W+ _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; {+ b. M; ]8 U" u# O% G: M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! Z! U6 }1 V% C; T. @2 h" E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; X" s! w6 _$ A# \- z9 ?; G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' n0 T/ ~( f# h3 D6 w& x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 p- r. T- _6 e9 u9 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>