【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 l; f3 A' M  p4 Z0 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 s: @, ]# X+ ]3 |$ P2 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 f/ t$ p! F  O+ c$ q( oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 d! j8 C5 J- k. I8 sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
. i9 ^# a0 V9 y8 u6 i9 u" n* zI really want to know just how much you love me
; n1 Q5 J- x. z  H2 o( II love you I love you with all my heart
+ B$ n# y+ t1 D; ?: U: r2 z0 `% FNothing can compare to my love
4 q8 p2 p- _: f, }1 |Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ U# Y" C6 }) R& rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 p4 F0 B% a' j+ f9 h: o* h! rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 X! _; g. \$ `: G4 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' _$ {$ y/ Q8 e* oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! l9 l7 M8 r7 w9 f. t' @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ S/ }* B3 O5 _3 C$ U9 k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' R& ~* Z; p8 \+ k* R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- L9 `( d: G! l! Z6 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ l# `) r6 Y4 Z" _3 B2 e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. X, }" e3 o  _5 ]) \& Z6 t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! E9 q, L% Q% a! G( t3 c6 P" b# s& [3 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& M' h: _& m" J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 D  T8 W7 V, z, N" ]. }( W- O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, T# [) o* S2 b7 l0 F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 F# C- f) H$ J" @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 p( _# ?7 K" @# }+ B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 K0 ~" {( X0 k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( N" ~7 x8 x7 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- b% T: T. F, D' i. d' C+ U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; }: J: R5 x6 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 o+ P7 r0 g3 v5 F" ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ a4 \: X/ K- B3 f% R+ P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 A/ p# P7 O/ A( h% w<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 E" r& V! m4 u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
; D! k5 [0 |; K1 q& V' N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) W% V5 B. N3 K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 y# G7 x" Q" F2 |: |0 `5 K7 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' _' z0 D3 a2 y0 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 ~# F# c; s7 G5 l* i8 ?3 `我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# i: h( S) t' U1 k& W" G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>