【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 M6 V5 n- y  F  s7 Q' s歌词我附在后面。
* u7 m, [5 Y, o/ m7 O$ kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 a/ |& \6 V1 M. `+ {0 cThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& I; c) K$ l: T" q8 U! W  YIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ ~( x* N  c' H  F" `You needn’t fear anything
; s# _3 R! J8 m9 l- X- ]* cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ _. N6 ?  U' t3 F" O; ^) N+ M0 o; iEvery other word you utter is love
, v6 t' X) h/ L3 @! }: m0 R: t% ^I really want to know just how much you love me
; X0 B$ x2 G3 G, a1 b) uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ O/ e% h& k1 N3 H, b* c: V7 H! lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' N- j. `0 ~0 ?8 e. l3 NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 W$ _: q; u& a' Z6 c+ OI want so much to see inside your heart
% s& d, Z. v7 v% X9 q8 ]I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" W3 X" p' U: d( h9 t+ k/ I3 bI regret not dying
" h$ `# D& n* I6 H2 K$ k3 ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- @8 z: C5 M$ h. YWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  [  }- M% A( I: zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' f, s9 l5 y9 o: X3 O7 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 s, d' V+ _+ k& x; o; V+ J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. |/ I" x6 X2 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ]5 K9 x( o4 r5 b<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 Y$ l$ X/ d4 B- z7 c6 O* U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 D) U8 ?5 ~. x! {& r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& }% B2 Q/ I+ x  B' i5 F<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- ]. r0 r# P& Y7 K<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 d" H9 a4 J8 D1 R% V+ T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ H' H+ L$ v  b; b+ l<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 m/ S+ m  w0 \4 n0 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 Z: u8 m+ k  N% z; Q- Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# N/ V8 ~- J* u/ F: v6 e" ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 M3 X* w. ~" l6 A2 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: @2 n$ C3 d; }- L8 ]. u8 y" J<P>你无需担心</P>
4 b2 `. I8 v; H' q  t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( l  E2 A3 J; ]0 X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; b6 d% P0 E5 S; t8 @% G2 O7 d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* S9 ^( L) x# v+ O# Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 e# G/ X5 r. T0 m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 x  @# x# J/ }3 x, D8 [4 N, B4 `& d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: Z& M' b  |% K0 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 X/ O% b: D8 G4 t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) Z) g, \( y1 k2 b1 [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 E6 A2 O2 u6 R! }<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 D* ]5 z$ t! f5 {+ ^( V<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ f( P$ d+ h( H8 `  d, o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 X% d6 ~7 |% [* x3 w2 B0 u2 p<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 x, r: H8 E' i. @" s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ b# n$ q4 |# @7 B' M/ J* f, ?! b3 V2 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 |% i9 }6 x, ^- H% w$ j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ X/ L0 {* e: T+ {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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& h: w1 R# S$ B* ]8 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>