【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, D7 G8 Q9 f. X! pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) Q1 U* W* }7 lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 g/ D5 ~8 k3 \9 R) U. OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 a9 e) K! x. a: IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& v+ r1 y. n3 }) |+ f" eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: P: o0 l( q* i( n- V* kEvery other word you utter is love
: u7 v1 p' Y* o) M; p# o- ?/ CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* a( ~# J( a2 L6 L1 }* C/ {, cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% Q, _6 s& Q& C2 y  ~. sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) d9 U: b9 V2 N# M# y5 q6 Z1 \I want so much to see inside your heart
9 o: b: y  z# P: v: D* m2 jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
- T: Q7 p' o0 K8 ^; t+ KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 C' w, M5 }. ?" K) T5 |5 l5 N7 y/ PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& m; o6 T' ^% U) BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' T  Z# `- ]8 ?; I1 Y' KIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ v$ }/ A4 V! J$ s* HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 w/ B& M9 U7 S7 D! r0 G; Y3 F9 I8 A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" F+ Z- n: e0 G1 y/ e0 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 P6 [% X; C/ V6 z: b" q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 O& P' f' ^; U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: U' L; e3 v' D/ T# b' d& j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ m/ b! }' M1 q* J. a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ G3 \3 W6 N9 P0 E" s4 ~! K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 I' C# o7 C2 ~" }  A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& ?* {8 C! Q8 H3 q9 l0 @; [% i<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' V& G1 w. G8 s- y% R2 _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
  G) E7 q" P- X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 X- o* O1 G: I; L- @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ A* E+ ]1 j) ], j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 Y5 J$ Q, B$ b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. }5 |& d5 [2 E) Q- G- h<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( N  s' u5 ?8 S- B. U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 e, L/ Q2 i4 i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& W; j: ^; J# }+ Q4 F& A<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 V* }, w& I! K2 M) g  B. l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; q/ d. n1 I/ z9 Z% ~& o' Z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) _$ v0 I/ L+ `4 z& k+ b+ z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) `# J0 C2 v" k' l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 j9 q0 D- Q7 F2 M) @: D<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 s, h# ?  U2 p# _- l: g. z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' G8 b+ J4 P" s/ h& ~<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: H" L: p' `/ ?0 H) \! ~5 z8 d+ s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
+ f' l# ^% B! D0 T# @' K) ~8 V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ X2 m+ G0 `& G1 _) M7 R: \: e! E" Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  F$ S; Q" R3 D2 j! _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ x% _4 X- Z( x6 N$ f3 W! _( W, v! o" y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! ^) G( a/ y( L. v" l- W5 ?  n+ x<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 U( s/ q) P) m7 T; k我请你剖开它
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/ a, q* }( S3 f2 N) S. b4 R  K- Q 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# X3 ~) y1 v% v- V, L: n+ J' A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>