【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
" E" ^2 S2 a' J- T* D* qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 k! ]# L% q, N  A4 a# ?7 OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# l$ k0 C. |+ d; t+ X: nWith the moon kissing it every night
* G: P8 O. D- I6 V( ?* K5 OSeeing the sky content with its love
+ k) \# u2 D% I: ]' \, tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
/ V# @- x  j  r7 l! h. nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 c. k3 A# j4 p4 D6 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( h4 f/ F* t; B; m3 i4 s5 l0 aNothing can compare to my love
' M4 V+ ]* P; Y0 D4 lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ M/ H1 m5 V2 \+ UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 k8 f8 q& Z$ {$ h+ z8 J7 oI’m still filled with fear
: [! m# P, f% Y8 A# WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ o/ U) t" L, S% `" V1 ^$ LI regret not dying
# ?9 [( D+ ]+ E$ z( i; Q4 X3 e% aI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( A9 s, a6 c! E4 ]With such a tongue as yours,
" B  [! x6 z; `& uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
" Q' ]: ?/ B9 W$ `3 F7 m9 R* S, r4 kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ l' a, ]; Z+ w: ?' _3 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% S/ k: z9 t" c( E  t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: J# w6 L3 `; T2 r$ B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& O; @3 o, v! F, a2 I6 Q( f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 j3 ?( r0 r+ h! x; |; [7 ]<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ f; Z9 J; E9 y" |! a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
$ c' Y  N7 k6 g. |2 q/ [<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" k1 f; L+ ~7 w) W% \<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: q: w3 v4 ?8 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& _# L- i) p1 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- h" B. ^3 `9 H1 e  `; K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  }+ M8 u4 L7 k# G2 T8 D1 \( }8 \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 w$ {: F6 {- S5 f. s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ v7 ]  G3 |" Y6 C; {' V4 X( Z. i- _/ Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
6 T3 ~" ?( q; l! e2 E/ v7 B2 \, B<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( g1 D+ M6 `7 a- o9 D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; K9 R3 y# e4 L" p7 q$ X  ?  @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# j  K, C9 k3 ^3 b<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, \, N& c9 q; V& V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
; q. p1 l! L& ^% R+ i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 g# z+ C5 O. v  @6 I3 [' _8 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ `1 x+ v; l6 W$ n' l# I& w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- A' D+ m/ u' V; ~8 y% h, S. q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! B% T( N8 R, o: ^% z7 K! b<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ R- y  y! j, H% V) @, p: Q; P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 a# p  T; J7 D0 }% v. z% @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, W2 C1 ?- l- f7 f<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. e7 P7 U; l; @, ^7 r2 B我请你剖开它

; M7 a. y. \& N* H) J/ H; Y. [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>