【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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  f8 `# h) Z4 W  x0 k# v8 G歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- E$ B1 d1 f  y; [( |0 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 E% Z6 L/ n* H6 k0 y: P2 JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 e% e; E8 q3 p# [$ v0 _With the moon kissing it every night
% A* h. \7 Z+ U1 aSeeing the sky content with its love
1 E5 a3 f7 Z2 e3 M* NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. f5 \, ~7 i( n/ k3 K0 N2 }. eYou needn’t fear anything
( x5 F% K1 i' eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* @& ~9 l" g" b8 o2 y" ^0 JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' G3 `5 ~$ x* R, _* E1 B: NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 {! x; ~9 h! h6 A0 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% b+ z# b- R6 @6 J8 o# YI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; ]$ m* f5 D4 m6 ~# n  [I regret not dying
  B; s/ T. p0 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ j9 l, `1 @5 \- |9 sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  p: `1 l/ y4 _7 h! e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  e9 o7 G. L: B- |0 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! v( f: ^0 v5 ^; O3 s7 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" R% w  B. H- k; A+ ]1 N<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  q* r2 ^. r  J; B8 F) Q& K* ?5 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' G1 Y- p) R$ b. `5 T  h<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 M9 w4 `3 R0 H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! e4 u; @$ p# ~; C7 u<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# x0 N8 L" v0 M1 ]$ \, v1 f3 O3 w<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( w3 Z( ^3 ?) L8 H# B1 s0 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 z- G* K6 |. x' T% n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- x" m8 ^+ p, ^2 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) Y) x, M' c  |7 K& o7 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# b/ J4 z. c- k6 D1 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ M" o: J, k, J) g+ K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: c5 p3 U7 Z( m$ G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 b. n5 @9 N8 ?4 t" s% L0 S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 w8 u% `, P) p7 O9 k2 R<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 s7 _- Q9 y2 X& M% ]0 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
5 }3 X* \6 ]& O( r<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 y- Y0 `: K+ O* o: m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, |$ |3 B9 k/ o' h. I" ~' o# i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! b! Z3 A- K0 e* t/ h<P>I regret not dying</P>
% Q  x* n, W+ J; U" B0 E+ B  \% u<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 X9 y  K1 Y$ z$ u9 K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
7 @0 E( c* W6 N% B% L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; M7 e5 j6 M- \) B2 H' K<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 q$ B/ r/ h1 H; D& W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: y; }+ J% j6 ]3 Y' r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ w+ q; U) i, l6 s 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 W5 `: p$ j2 `. T+ ]* G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>