【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
" M" [1 H3 G0 k$ V2 v" ]7 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! `+ P& z- _* s% p! z2 S' h- \- hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
1 j$ O) b/ \2 n+ @$ L' M4 }Seeing the sky content with its love
0 j& K7 l5 J5 M1 T2 e7 d8 nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
% ~: ]; m' v  cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' s9 L7 q: a2 J( tI love you I love you with all my heart
% N. o! D+ t; A" t6 TNothing can compare to my love
1 S4 b$ u4 W/ T7 a# r) ]Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ ]  Z' p- r- BI want so much to see inside your heart
/ g4 C0 u7 j, o# E3 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 R  j- n+ d: ^9 w: M: WI’m still filled with fear
8 k! E; i3 s+ }/ i( IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& V9 }, D0 j! d# S2 I% `& o' D* WI regret not dying
) i9 r' i( D! k3 S) kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 H0 h  V1 y) a! p  |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! {4 u9 }  u  F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 ], S, i+ v0 {: [7 {' d, N<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% l$ q( }" T$ @' J; ?4 n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* ?3 q0 Y  H6 T6 d4 I) U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 `" t) z# r* }( C3 h) f2 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% x' t2 Z4 F3 {+ O+ r/ G. o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) W6 g: f6 [7 C- o, G8 @$ f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 J2 S7 K5 X- q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. ]3 p2 r* w$ W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 E6 u: h& N$ t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 n( a& r  q) D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 u5 T- K& a0 O& d2 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& Y0 l6 W; w& Q4 x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 Q4 ?0 s6 M! v2 ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 q5 ^2 @1 u9 k<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; s; S0 |' K: q0 P) G- W5 Y1 ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 e  R" H5 K4 B0 j) h9 c% K4 {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: M- T0 E. b. ^+ I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- m2 p* M5 b; J0 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) |' Q# k4 m( @9 Z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: a" h  u4 W' P% Q' T0 A+ a: z8 h, [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
4 I  ]0 u5 f( c2 u" B0 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: M7 n& Y$ |$ \8 }7 Q, [1 K& e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 q3 M& X; i- c  M, o- {: I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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5 e7 [2 _! _$ A" K. c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% _& X% c7 H1 ?* e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>