【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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. I4 f3 C9 W* @2 @歌词我附在后面。
& b6 [" E+ C% u0 ^  S1 A( c! x. `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! S' c; f  r+ |9 x, g! DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 V' I$ }+ w4 \8 g8 S; X" PThe sky is happy down to its soul
. C' M9 m7 Z& k+ C  {6 i0 oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 |* ~/ e- [5 k% w6 ^# ^3 G* L* GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; G) R5 j3 h- B' L1 L. h+ G+ h9 W% TEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 G" h, P- L3 _: v' v/ A' H( VI love you I love you with all my heart
: z/ d2 ]( `5 Q! hNothing can compare to my love
" Q+ V8 k0 @1 |% i3 s3 VCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 ]$ W3 g1 ^( m4 cI want so much to see inside your heart
+ @' F, X" t, _0 j' PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! j/ H4 \! ?. S9 n. m. fI’m still filled with fear
6 N" `4 P3 W$ ?. }' k! |# oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 W  a! ~, k4 @I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 \9 r7 s8 W) l7 JYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' I7 {; w7 b4 ?: B) kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! k, }2 E  B/ J# {) N& A<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 y* M3 j* B! h4 M4 m+ P, R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) I3 C9 g8 H! T' \+ U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% v4 Q; p" n# k% }* e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 ^* }0 d! O; Q$ W9 H; D6 n2 C: r<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 F$ d# M4 i) g# @" H- T<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' _; D3 Q5 z' A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, ~2 V9 ?+ S) x, S# s7 U+ p$ T9 R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' R2 D) @( k& x( \<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# H  a8 ~4 I+ B' M! ^" c- j<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 v2 L) x- d8 _* d<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, V  H7 `2 K" |: _& k0 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: A4 I) E5 j2 }# @: s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ e7 C& c. G% X0 [6 n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; R" c8 C) F; c; i# \6 Z! M) f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ E: y, p- X7 j1 n/ [# L) a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 H; O2 h6 n/ D- ?7 L7 y0 x5 ?<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 _3 D/ }( u9 O9 y+ X7 ?" q7 b0 \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 |/ G9 e7 ?! k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) v- `, a+ s5 J* S<P>I regret not dying</P>
% P0 C; K/ j4 U4 y* H$ }2 E) O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* s! v, J; {& U/ ^6 P' e; G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 R# A; f4 F  g7 u<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. ]* n! \4 b) i9 T/ q, j' s  m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) K8 u# o1 U4 B+ a0 l8 n0 g6 ]$ U<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 `( P7 p" E4 u0 m我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>