【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 \& X* F2 @% b! n2 f7 L; B( X( ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% {' l1 N9 A( XMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. Q: C* o8 {4 H1 l$ T( [3 `: @6 S4 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 D* ~9 B8 X  Q$ ?$ W5 mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ t) i4 r9 E; F, q  PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
' I) y& ~, i( V  z# @& yNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; P; I0 U: T7 \. ~8 {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 r5 W( [6 F4 f/ V2 Q* BI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 Y) Z1 U) c& T% P: @8 hI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. Y/ m. h9 O2 c  L. D9 S" dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" {: w4 E' p& ]( w7 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- _" Z5 H- W! a5 t  F<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
& y1 c4 |+ \' B  h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' s: d  M2 p+ B9 h. p6 }8 o" l) V+ w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 V( v+ g% t8 F2 [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- [" R$ D$ J4 W) H+ |, a* e8 a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 ]2 }1 G, o7 C# H& a, Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' N4 a3 R0 U5 z, [; w<P>你无需担心</P>
0 W4 ]9 X3 K& O  U9 o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ [% L; \: d. n) I# q2 p; @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; I$ X% K& E1 |! C. M, P9 C6 c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( r) e0 q0 j- B9 |5 D6 n/ P" ~<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 J; Q/ X! Q: u  C/ l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 n# o+ Z7 Z( O! X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ J4 o0 ^+ u- R2 C* j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! e; H( S+ n& d( @; p/ J: k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% _9 i% A' g' o0 _: s5 i. }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 b1 K: D- V* A. ], l  k# @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* B( z) U! W) I% J2 L/ y$ T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' Z6 H8 D! b, X& k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; A! [6 S3 `3 X' c' S<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- T; }  O5 Z. K5 V, t7 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, Q* F% r) j! [+ |5 }  u" {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, K) E+ t6 E9 `7 r9 B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 @- Q) y4 f2 j2 A<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>