【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 E" W) J1 r% q0 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) u  Y: J) @( G9 G0 g6 F3 t7 ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% o. n( ]9 z9 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
; r* M" @4 Q# O5 x! n$ X, a  i1 I1 eWith the moon kissing it every night
7 L5 R$ _* h2 v5 h3 W# Q, l) wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  Q0 h* y4 r. F1 NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; }6 R5 p& Q9 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' T. n" ~* c9 ~( ]$ U$ z5 fI love you I love you with all my heart
$ {0 _- e% Q- g& o% C$ M! WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 Y$ ?/ m& B' o8 V2 F8 x8 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
" |( O( R3 c( \+ j5 Z, GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; b6 G# S; T  z( Q) a: `1 }( OI regret not dying
* {" m; C" f9 c+ wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 q/ T& J/ A+ T4 o' V8 gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( v: O5 V) c" v" ~% K3 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ?  x" J5 s/ Z- K1 O<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 \( ?% n# ?  _2 c" B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ H( B  T" \2 v7 _6 e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- n& y3 B0 ?0 q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 r/ u0 U0 }  d( i( ]" n1 R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' a- g- [: u0 y2 R( Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. p' f( A+ U' f" Y  u' \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! F! N+ h/ S2 O5 A4 L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ k1 q/ S( P0 G( K$ b. @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 N9 x& N6 U: p: l! L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! K/ {/ ~+ b0 U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 ^( ~, p# N. L2 z$ {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ t/ y' n2 R5 y- W8 h. t1 P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ I& {0 _6 _8 C' k( k<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
1 i( D# ?9 q, t4 t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- F' }+ O& e; |& Q; i<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ x% b) Z& c& l, W: T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ o: G7 W* a+ Q* U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' ]9 u) c( v8 ^, M: k; l<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ o3 p7 Y# V9 N1 r. e<P>I regret not dying</P>
: g# G0 j7 C% @7 {/ h1 T7 y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 W# D3 N: U* N5 t: t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" ^4 O& c# D; z) Y9 @. Z. V4 I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
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<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>