【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) u* K: v$ n2 L# _7 Z1 a7 o% x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
9 y0 D% b! {2 B: Q% sWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' c9 Q, d& m$ e% vYou needn’t fear anything
# B% I& v& P% g) mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 |! d( F" {: |! aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& j3 v; i! p7 I" G" rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 }9 i2 u5 ?- ~  d3 e/ zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 C, u$ K8 A& o* P3 P7 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; W7 s! O1 C; ^& oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* l, x- ?! B3 cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" N; v( o9 j5 e* j1 a3 Y  ]# e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. n" \8 O0 B( m9 h! I) f7 i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- Y/ p! F7 X) w. H  N<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ C' O. ^7 h, D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 P+ |# E# f* \( H* }1 O( a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; O+ f; g# b8 w$ i<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: D; p, l' n4 q6 ^9 Y& A<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 g4 D) J! J  S" H+ |7 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) l; o/ b( G( R( _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, s# p, K2 f# [1 L5 [: }2 L. |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. ^) d9 b# r0 X" I( P$ O0 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 z' Y8 ^6 }$ a8 S  `/ w9 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, D7 b) A0 }& b1 L  Z$ a- u6 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, W5 s& p3 C1 v<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 j& C! F/ h  D8 Y$ H. V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# J! F+ z1 t* i$ C5 X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! P. e; y4 K, k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# |2 J2 l7 |% ~, f: Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 S" A1 W0 q  I$ ]7 H' d, a+ @<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* j* K; D' x* d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) h( _5 E/ n$ P1 O- Q0 G! _2 {<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 [% Z2 N4 q: u# f$ X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! w3 ?% N$ R! U! x. J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 m2 U* ]! U; ]; A1 U% Z" v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 f2 \- }; M& R* V3 z" s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. R9 f9 V3 \" k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
/ I7 g/ Q  r/ ]$ F+ Z; u+ m( _
4 x0 [7 f" T" [1 G) @# Z我请你剖开它
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% Y) T( }9 Z3 b( J6 S  R3 k  i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>