【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
6 d, P1 V$ {# o5 R# dWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; ]" K# M+ m$ o6 ~6 Z* M+ T5 [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! R% i8 M7 V- j) CYou needn’t fear anything
- C! {/ a! W* C. k+ QMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 D9 D- J! a6 q1 M7 d7 x+ sEvery other word you utter is love
- F* e4 S8 c8 e3 F. NI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) g) U* E( I1 @# VNothing can compare to my love
- z  H9 I2 [7 I0 E6 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 y7 e: F& c+ ]" j) {" jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ {" K% l- N9 N( AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: z( F$ Z# b0 ?$ A, XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" I! }& B9 G, |& JI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* h# A9 R4 F' q' _. M' i: m2 i& gWith such a tongue as yours,
  S& \5 ]  ]( S" O- z' @+ LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. p2 x" ]9 G! o2 g$ z+ O( u% o<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 \) }7 J7 p% a$ ?- l/ c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 g9 G' t+ t) H9 G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" G9 g5 V5 @2 p6 r$ }<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 _- \$ p/ L2 K  |4 D0 X<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) \: T/ v1 Y) Z; F$ L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: s+ e& l8 y7 q& v1 D5 r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( n- J7 b# y  L/ C4 Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 x' c3 ~6 d+ z- w( n8 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 S8 G/ R; V& m, G* o) i3 z7 c1 O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% r; r, p0 O. G: w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: q- E0 n. i9 f* W0 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( b% q* ^( H% v/ A, V  ^<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 `" R8 j/ g% D1 F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- x, n4 P' _' r& c# \# r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* w9 S! w! h$ _; u<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 z6 k9 r: Z# Y% P7 ~6 B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# J* M8 d4 X1 I, |# A, m8 x<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. f: J* ~. t4 T$ u; P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 [9 Z+ Z2 E- R% J<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 q- Q8 X% O+ d4 R2 N' z7 H/ ~% J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 r' z% |5 n+ ?. ?" c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ b& K) W7 j0 E5 \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
% s; U- R$ K! s7 r
: s$ J3 v2 a- ~ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>