【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( r3 X0 {  z. w( z4 v2 r" xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 `! ]9 v& s% f  B' n1 ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 `. T% X- J: C: G" H9 d- ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ l" k4 @/ J; w* D2 t/ b8 F3 P# [( qEvery other word you utter is love
  ]% d8 z! Z8 I: Z% F8 Y9 JI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; b  {! t9 a' Q4 n' d$ U- gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* r, }! J' h) Z+ T9 A5 ~! B% D+ oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* B& }0 i' J8 ~( B/ A$ p+ V5 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 C' m0 i4 t0 q! X! xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 v3 b7 H1 b" ~With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 W* v* a, ^& k- B0 m! k: yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. `% [! J) ]4 V# R1 l! b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; ]) N; U# _( B6 I9 g4 d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) `5 T) [, N1 P. `) Y6 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 L% b6 ^1 O* P- F: c4 @<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ c+ E7 `( V# {5 i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 j6 k5 n) b' F: }3 F, B! q8 P, n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 }# @$ f, E0 [- S$ @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" j, {) |% |* V' H& o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' o, W, a  B1 l* ]' _<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ Q/ R+ e! ~% c  N: |9 V$ k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% i; t. T" v0 F- U9 k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 y. }; G! @) x& Z& S<P>你无需担心</P>
0 u0 \/ e$ @  _, `6 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ y+ Y' M" t% c' G( d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ e) s) y  b' ~6 A, v* ~5 v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# m$ i; I- S% ]" E- y! s<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( ]3 h0 M" w  f! G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: L# t& [( v7 {0 j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 q( Y1 c" i3 n" I2 {# {! ^; }) s<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
$ H9 ]4 X3 k0 d. a2 v  L& J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ U1 ]+ j' i- ~2 m5 C; C6 `4 v8 Y3 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 f9 z5 P( t: K1 N5 V4 O8 y) ?4 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" M1 M3 P& y8 W" R! R) q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 m; A9 G) K9 `$ i0 V& g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ h# y7 q  O" C/ b% G% f<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- Y1 H# r+ `1 c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, q8 C. z% i9 G# i0 s  r<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 q0 C! l* z+ A. t0 f( T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 \3 l1 T0 c& [5 T4 H% m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 b7 z$ A; a" W7 ~0 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" J2 n6 k4 w* P4 `1 ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 n" z; _  S: H! R" Y我请你剖开它

+ }& ^( ~& B% K; } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>