【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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# a# u  b& l" }% R歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 @3 }% G9 p4 ?/ pWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 k5 \0 k' {" [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 s: B3 G; w7 ^- k; g/ WWith the moon kissing it every night
" J' e$ q# c+ v5 x, wSeeing the sky content with its love
2 M3 n# P( B, t8 T2 x1 eIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- T+ Z$ u" d7 {! ~# G$ U7 UYou needn’t fear anything
* Y) S8 |, B# b7 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 J# y0 z/ ^! D; b/ ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( k& c& p4 o. b) Y3 c8 E$ LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
/ {4 F' ?, r4 y& v6 l% o+ yI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ g3 Q# z! @' lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: v- o( t: B% B1 @I regret not dying
6 ]0 I3 }) D7 ]; OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 [5 t7 N8 C# o/ U0 l" sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( h2 f7 o! _. i$ T8 t) SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& B: l' x9 j, }' L- K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ M: F( e  a9 U  Q* K" `; L, O. I0 i& A<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  \) d& M, Z" u" O* N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 e' |4 q+ g1 O) P! s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# N* m4 l2 C) S7 T5 ^<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ A- L  }- g  I, }8 y6 }- ^3 r4 R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
5 E, A6 F7 A, @2 g& N& S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
' M) Z/ E  X3 u% D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ T# n/ _, k6 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. R4 g# j2 ?  I' O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 y7 c; g8 K8 H0 M# Y  C1 f7 {9 c) _1 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* q/ k$ H  a! X4 e! b; |8 i1 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ ]5 @' ]3 W4 C/ U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 S8 B; ]+ G2 X. n4 r$ I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ L0 Q$ r" E/ |<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 p' L" l9 x/ J- T$ q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  b  `4 z8 @: v9 D2 h. P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" N1 R" y$ K1 P- [" a. W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; j5 ?  e$ h1 }1 n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# U- T0 P! C- U8 q- J; a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- [+ h( Y# W" A& k4 t8 O% D" p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ A6 N+ Z$ F5 Z8 m8 x# m" m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; W! s9 j* ^( \: a, C4 F1 o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( f, j$ t$ U' I9 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; O/ O5 B" U. n4 Y2 s. U9 B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% F4 v" S+ g7 j# ?& W2 f9 Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& [% v7 p7 a# z" d' |& _+ R" U$ ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  N/ k7 y. v; Y2 K# ?) C) g1 @4 _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, Y  d0 d% m, d<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 U, M6 _% B4 s2 K1 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. Y5 n5 s& e5 H& t$ ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
+ Y9 Y- V9 \2 r1 l2 f; f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, [; k2 C* i7 F! e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! ~3 m" |( J  |8 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: d) d9 T4 [( k' S  N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 E  ?0 [  L3 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>