【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
# a1 J; U0 Q6 {7 G* aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
( I7 y2 W) X% G  P. vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' R4 G- u+ E# tThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* @3 _% N; J+ m1 U: Q' s3 W! G2 gIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
, [( f& j3 N* ~& z: B4 `0 F! MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 w( M. G! ]7 B& Q9 h5 a+ V! T  hI really want to know just how much you love me
% j' w/ v# J. _I love you I love you with all my heart
9 l: u. }+ s3 T" d# DNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: W& v1 `! S, I. }/ A: NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 x2 ]+ `& I" k% Q$ I* F" jI want so much to see inside your heart
. W0 j  i' L1 N/ d& }+ o4 ~# F! qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 V8 M: W- R- M5 ?# ~  KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( U- G% K0 g" u! F3 BI regret not dying
8 z6 [( y# o: }9 U: U: H/ E6 KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& ?- v* L% s9 _. J) IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 B- `# C" @3 O/ ?& hIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 v8 b$ v( _% l, P, e5 P  NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 T" ^" I1 ]# Y8 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ i$ v& j- K: z& o/ x<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" A. E, |" r/ e1 p$ Z2 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; {" g: z/ F, L: P5 X! b4 {2 o% e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 R( I7 m9 w+ i& Z9 a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 I. Q4 [1 Y' [- Q3 o; [- |6 ~  _. L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  ^. V$ @4 m  i7 X* |8 C; ?<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ Z, ]( D8 y0 b! C0 w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, @. g/ Q. h) y' w+ b$ a3 t" l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ P: M1 ]" k) D0 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 {- M% [9 \! X<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: }8 A, k2 Q' x" y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ N, E# H0 D! X6 D! I<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 p1 W9 a0 [7 R$ ^1 q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" \# X% x) w  _( T$ d<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) X) _% \) N% ?# M% M2 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( @, M. C6 F3 T, l8 g" q, @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 r$ {% a0 f# R1 X$ z8 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 N4 }  F$ \# V1 m: b6 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 `- ^# F$ D! V( O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: Y- B( _1 u1 \8 V3 _- t3 q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- [. _: w3 j6 E: I7 Y( M5 m<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 g' O# E; M( t- x0 u2 X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& D  T; U. N1 ]( U" S0 @- [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 e  a$ Z0 t. P" d2 ^! S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ D3 b  L& ~8 c$ a. P0 H$ u/ T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 L# Q  w+ o9 k9 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ F8 f9 T. r0 [3 i$ |. Q+ ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# [. M' x9 S! P: U' D$ X<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 N4 r7 f& v$ i9 L! N<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>