【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# {# l( K3 P5 A+ y. oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ O$ z3 ~. }+ }+ n$ ^: Y0 Y/ w  T# yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 \: ~9 ?0 v5 v0 r6 mWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# H7 v! y! Q% a, Z/ z9 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
) G8 ^# x1 R/ Y$ e# K; ]With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
4 Y5 H8 h' D0 C' z4 z$ R6 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
" U, R& `  V% p: H/ ~My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" P- v$ y* i7 j& q6 W7 H6 s0 S8 cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" I0 T! c: F+ [* `I regret not dying
7 Z! ?& G& z$ G( N" T* N3 oI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  A5 w7 |) C# A7 D# F( OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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- E' t" o7 y" M; p4 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ \4 `/ M0 y9 x0 F( v+ T5 t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  K+ E7 p& E& P: R2 g9 p# u/ @$ r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, Y6 {$ F1 e1 l8 l( k9 H3 Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 ~) G. D( e# s& }$ s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 t1 Y- c: F  X. c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
) z* |. S0 D4 A: p1 |/ v0 b<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 ?0 @$ x, e) w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* r; W" G) g, `7 j' }* D<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 j# ]3 b* r& K' X' g9 V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, R9 J* h7 H& e" j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 ]" Z' m3 m$ s8 p) @5 W9 {# R. g0 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- D, f1 x' b+ Q% A+ t; S/ r) [<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* D* \# v* f1 \# {! n2 f2 f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 W$ j8 `1 f1 w& y6 G# `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' E4 l/ s4 I' i$ ~0 }0 w! m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, O9 P" I2 K, F- I2 k7 e& O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ P, @4 s2 q  k1 d7 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ M$ o+ I) q+ \9 g, ]5 E" F& Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% O$ H% S$ |3 r% x6 \1 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 H! w8 p8 L) Y% W$ D: I! v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 F# u) I  u4 S+ m9 t8 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 \8 u8 j. V- W; O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% ]9 t9 z; l' ^6 ~4 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& X: a' c  K9 ^3 N  W5 K" b$ e3 z* a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 Y4 f6 {  e: v. {0 r<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>