【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 m* Z% ~( c8 T1 o& c- _歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
, V3 D8 w% v6 U% r: wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# b5 A* R8 x  l7 e1 j+ T3 ^7 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" `# f3 C( B& Q4 aWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: B: G. c/ l& J; p( O( |/ g( H2 hYou needn’t fear anything
( j! c  L/ T. G3 T* HMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 ^. L0 {4 U$ `  [Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) h( v0 U8 n: w$ Q7 zI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, ^" M. G4 H2 V. p' p5 t% ]I want so much to see inside your heart
* _7 d# D; T5 X& |I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 ~- C4 _, G5 t8 C3 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  q9 {; s# x# T! r/ [With such a tongue as yours,
9 K5 D+ G! P' k' V) u! }. F9 _Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) k, ^5 Q8 |; t; H' P2 iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 G% |: e% H6 S<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% n( B' w/ u1 h8 r9 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. V! e; ^: R2 r5 ?# T5 _& V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  ~. O) U. z3 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ f4 q$ z* o5 d& z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 e0 ?2 s0 o$ G4 E3 Z' D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* o) {$ l, j9 u+ i. B# \4 K$ H* F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# c8 \9 G! c( }; y* D+ N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, A. J8 z3 A8 }6 g* f0 F<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 e8 j% Q( {0 p* t8 \) q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) s6 m, _' _/ p7 ^- x) F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: t# J1 B* g* w6 l* p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, @9 z) M4 n2 ?  k; h4 v$ V$ w4 E/ b0 P/ d<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ I, P( g. z3 h- R* M+ `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# p1 s3 b6 q3 H0 p6 q. q# m# P<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 W" O8 \% n2 d" k<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 l2 M* _; f6 f2 @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 C' m+ d, [4 v$ p5 [<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ r9 ]4 O& F0 I# K. i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' W7 N' m& K3 @8 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% R: {5 ^9 y; ~' c, f& @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 i; N" B& M% h) P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 d% ~, Q. o7 l- m# @1 O1 [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* `$ H- T+ \  u3 T( b2 c7 k<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 o0 x0 T+ D  T& b/ p) |' ~2 @! g& K4 U3 w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; @+ B1 @- S4 o; E8 _& P7 ^& s& y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" ]' k; z( o# m8 X6 c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 B, C2 [" H) K<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ Z8 ~  l. R4 ~2 X7 `( z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% i) E4 @2 w- b" A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ V; q3 n6 |, ^* K. p" r<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 G' |" r5 `, q# x' y4 C<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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% \) u. G; I3 V( X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>