【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" a2 o- W% X! Z" W! T4 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: h7 R0 T: k& {4 u+ ?, {" R+ }2 @  _The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# ~4 N$ Z7 P1 M: f$ mSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% A* a+ l) _8 f3 Q$ c( k3 m5 g4 sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( k5 _# C, [" Z, \. S" yEvery other word you utter is love
0 O. z, c( x5 II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
8 d4 ~; d) a7 j+ Y( _7 M5 JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 U& z! d$ |. Y7 G- jI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 l& m/ {  b  n! b- z8 }" M; qI regret not dying
6 D4 J9 \4 |, f: b3 O& gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 ?2 u" |1 f; V  sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 h6 W4 E& t) U3 M- S+ c<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; s/ @2 i. p( @3 e- Z+ F1 x3 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 v" Q! }6 A# S% f9 P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- Q6 e. Q/ ?: d, F- c# z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* E( a* ?8 o( \0 W<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 M: [( s  c. t3 o, _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 F# N/ q5 M& O1 b7 k! F; O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% l, v0 [+ h4 \  W# X" ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 D6 s) c! e/ @2 C- F<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! P) U" H/ D9 ~( K4 {1 Z) y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" G& X7 x6 l8 q7 x3 q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) A( Z0 X7 M) }# w: k) v6 B<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 f- V1 {. r4 [& ]' Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 i/ X6 i1 F  C' b$ O) _: y; `" V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) n+ ^1 Y7 `8 w* ^' W& H<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 r! F( r* r' z! G) \5 Z( R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ p; P' K# |) R/ ~0 H& o2 h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# c: ^9 r  I0 B6 h<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, J# N4 y% ^$ N<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 M) O- V8 K$ w<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( X9 ?7 M. P( r: D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 E% a+ O6 A! Y6 @4 K& E, o<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. K4 `5 K3 s4 d, T! b& ~7 o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 T) s7 h1 w& G+ {9 X& s<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; ]1 R2 _7 \0 r% M% \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 f1 A2 P+ l) V# O8 V! N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, |: r7 T' D" R# i. G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' N/ c/ M$ X7 w3 u2 Y<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  C1 K$ L5 r0 V( i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 ?" B6 ^2 D; g; m7 G' M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ Z) ]; _& S, a* u6 f9 f4 j* I0 [<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 E6 J. z# B# a' w. I( r我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>