【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
6 W0 r" m' t! k; w* v5 [4 z% NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ X8 L; L3 E9 q  x7 V* BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 c3 u  x, V9 C4 OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 x! y, C- F3 D! V$ PThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ }. {0 X6 r8 AWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* K# H3 q2 s8 x0 h. S/ L4 B3 T6 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 I: I) J" G6 Z+ K7 [3 UYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, [$ w4 A. O- L+ ^) J; \Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 e* H& c+ @' f  _( Y" ANothing can compare to my love
( b" O4 X4 d8 N, g7 I! RCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, ^! [  Y% Q. ~' C, KI want so much to see inside your heart
4 Q+ z6 k( K( wI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  }* H2 R9 `7 y( C( G6 ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 s: z; [2 H4 D; D/ w9 _; o# P; lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
( E% \8 x7 V4 dRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 F- E, `* u9 S$ r/ S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ i9 ^2 B7 Z! f* L# r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' f5 U; s5 y) |' r/ b/ a$ B+ M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ l8 D7 X1 P& }7 m0 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. ~$ h  _' R+ I+ r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' M2 F' s& ]( q5 P2 C6 c6 Q* m6 b! Z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. q/ k0 _( _9 z$ i! _1 l9 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 k+ o& w' |- `; x2 H8 ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 T  F- k9 g; g. x+ H<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ @" J  b! N2 P1 \$ k8 A$ V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ v: Z% k! |4 M9 i8 u' N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 `- q' D6 c- H5 P$ a3 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 l; O: d% W5 S, z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 p' {1 A9 h+ M, x5 t7 ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- F4 K9 @1 e+ x7 I! V: |) e; e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ ?( Z4 F' a+ U  q; O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 H& {9 ^/ A2 J# Q# {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" e) g4 {  K* d9 l: D<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 A* E' I; _" a  |$ v& Q2 y7 t5 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; Y: I# o9 g# D, F9 ^<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ y6 _2 {1 m& B+ W" }1 V6 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 l* ?/ d3 H& @, d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 n/ `3 x5 x9 R6 o. B0 r$ a  g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# j% R8 y  `* G) l( U$ Z, Y( l8 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 B) Q* Y$ A7 |3 x! v, C, ~: q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ H5 h) o7 z$ {/ f( d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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8 r3 O  X# R$ Z6 D4 ? 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- t# x* L0 R. X: b0 |1 T. z8 i3 v; i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>