【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 Y1 i5 J$ C2 AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 r0 o- u5 m$ v- W% lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, N5 S* p2 {( p8 l' S. _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 }, `2 Y. y- m6 h# MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) G' L" I% o# R2 dI love you I love you with all my heart
$ J9 n5 O2 Z" M# I* s, [Nothing can compare to my love
9 M( |8 w% z! D8 T9 ^Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. z4 H* o0 P, k0 Y$ D* uThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& X5 ]1 w# m" e  l5 {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ t3 K5 M* K' b, {* f( NI regret not dying
! S* y) X. q% b, {0 ]6 \I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 J2 E$ N* m# d1 ]7 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" P: l4 N. I/ {4 n/ R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" T; o0 h  D8 `/ a' N: r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' ]6 c0 z6 ?; K0 A. W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ Y" ?7 V% ~! U<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" U$ y0 I* E" D+ ]<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) H. l! a2 T; x6 Q$ M8 a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* ~: j, F% c9 J' q; \  P, t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ V2 Q2 I, X% F8 K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 Q6 |0 ]7 I4 E0 C/ j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" S2 M0 Q8 f0 L$ N+ g/ j# X<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ k' h/ Y: R7 J& X<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' b" j2 @, k" e2 L( a7 g" Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ W6 w( T8 I# c3 a1 O- E$ z<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
* r) ]1 @/ q% s2 e$ }<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 Y% G0 ?% q$ a  H, m2 l$ n/ \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) E  E4 P+ B' P9 R' O& k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: W4 R8 x" d& c5 O  s<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>