【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
' k0 I# N/ o9 c: i: LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& f- l) H1 Y3 n7 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; T1 i8 p0 K5 M( t# `The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 k) |' a/ @9 Y+ e* lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! G/ ?# G4 f+ m. z7 bYou needn’t fear anything
; c, z) ?. V/ l4 B. y7 ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ h0 o2 v' u/ J& hI really want to know just how much you love me
3 z" c' r; }" [7 \: WI love you I love you with all my heart
# Y# k. M; h0 M' O5 b4 e/ S  N$ p- WNothing can compare to my love
( p7 `+ d2 U- j9 B/ ECan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ o9 d8 U& _* P: CI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 x/ x5 b% i3 G) C% L4 Q% rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" W; O. V; i: H% L2 DI regret not dying
; o0 G5 c0 F9 {2 vI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: l6 U" z: |" n( O1 P& UWith such a tongue as yours,
8 r# W/ f: _0 L9 H5 K0 U/ rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  p- B0 E' F9 u! D<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 Q% P3 n1 [7 j* H<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" t! z" f  x1 K# e, [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) Y. e( _4 o8 o# M4 G2 U+ h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" ?: R- `8 O1 o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# I7 ]/ ]* [) @# X4 V<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ t2 W: p0 y+ C, V1 k0 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; I- w; j# o9 x: z% m$ l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! R/ F) P/ i5 ?9 O<P>你无需担心</P>
" I0 N4 {+ n! o; F0 O+ S7 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 M) C5 e, F8 h! ?, ?0 q: {$ }* b. ^<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 Y- Y* w! m2 x: a% V3 B) m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& D! z5 c# v% p- ^" g6 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* z: v9 h( d6 p0 f) C+ _/ Q+ z8 M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ G. |8 P, {0 w7 g5 p2 E<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  W- _5 F0 k# R9 }# G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) ]* Z) k3 ]+ i) p+ k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" J" o6 p2 G. |3 `2 F" ~- ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 G) r$ k5 x, \3 i, n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; S1 j- C5 i7 q, V  A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
! K& c2 U# }& b' v: B) |; _) d" ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
( K$ [; A' }8 ?) r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 }+ h. `8 s1 B; l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 W4 A, u7 E+ a: f# H7 Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 [; A, s( D9 {; o3 J" f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ e/ K. y  S, x# q- K2 Y, i<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' F8 \1 P4 }- ?- f, d; t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 q. ]$ Z% f. ^) n' x/ H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>