【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: c/ `# h, @* c. L8 I) c歌词我附在后面。
  C' k" ]! `: L& S( U4 M' AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* a' G' Z- `1 K1 i/ M# D( T+ TMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, k* k+ ~1 V& k& S3 SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- R2 x3 f" e. PThe sky is happy down to its soul
( p/ e& \4 r( f/ L7 D. ^. _' HWith the moon kissing it every night
+ X: a7 g9 g1 v1 A/ K* l  ?Seeing the sky content with its love
) A9 D4 h# [; t# bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 j  n6 n4 P/ ^5 L" y: BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 W; m4 L6 t9 O6 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, Y. Q+ q: k5 n4 c* k5 O- W2 ~Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 ~  E) ^+ _" Z* E4 a( S' iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, r4 s+ u8 `# {# aI want so much to see inside your heart
8 P+ M3 p( d! A8 i5 `' g- MI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 k# C+ D: x8 vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 p+ g$ t4 Z7 ^- a9 bI regret not dying
" ^7 Z. O) P. S% m3 J5 z  P' C  A  JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, C: y* s5 ^% S/ d0 b% R3 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
* q4 D$ g; q( S* F: q* Z! ?$ oYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. {8 l) B4 X2 d  y  z) b( P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% m" Q# M( h9 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
. y' [6 X) \) J: @8 E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; c) U: q0 [8 l2 Q; t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 O1 V/ Y1 [3 R* f; L# f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, _4 s8 U% t& Y% d. u& B' z4 L<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- G% X& n: x/ e+ m9 _# D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
( ]/ a- F0 I' T3 m) R<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! P# z+ l) l: j  b1 t4 c( Y" c; l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ U0 d/ o5 I5 ]" s3 v" d: r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 a4 F9 `2 U, R: l5 [<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! w/ `% `1 ]! v2 H2 n; L6 Z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' n! f5 G' j6 n" D9 Z- X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
$ e9 r# J3 ^( S* t2 `<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ {1 I+ T) B2 B# S4 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 d3 u2 q; J. A9 _0 ]2 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, A0 W* T* h( d$ `2 P% h6 y7 X) V<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
$ {9 a( ^4 ^5 \8 j! E  Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: Q0 n" F7 E5 z8 i1 `5 ?<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; p- D1 w- K5 ^! E. f<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: I$ X( z; T& ]- g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: W) n/ t9 E/ g. ?6 x5 g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* H# F- E3 }# E9 \% F/ P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>