【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' Z" R  A9 ~* ^) C. @When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 d" t8 M' s& r# oThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 ]( G% B6 Z5 ]/ u3 J" _) qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- p+ ?; a' z- s+ T: a' E. J$ RYou needn’t fear anything
8 C  z. a9 l0 c) K& i6 t9 nMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 d% T: G3 c8 e" M: H7 G* CI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ k* o! R0 y3 B: a; [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 K3 o0 @2 W& U9 O: cI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. h& s8 m! b. ^& S' rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 o* O2 ]3 }8 g2 BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 s5 s8 p. W( w  r8 v/ W! d- \3 n8 |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 L: `% q- G5 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ?) S3 r1 e* H+ j. g8 n5 l<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ A( @  p7 H- R& W; r3 h<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ K8 n. Z  Q. E6 V5 H2 j, n<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# }* H. v$ I- ?% \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 h( z1 _" z5 f<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; J% D9 r. j' m2 T  E3 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& c5 Z: F" h; d1 `; z% G: p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 P' q# u2 H3 G/ J5 T# C<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
( a  c; b- U7 ]; W. `6 f<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 k# u6 q/ L+ _5 a' r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  J/ J; X) e8 {* L/ I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 O. Z/ r5 N: ]5 @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 t! \4 |/ I" ?% l" g/ K6 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! a4 H4 D: h* G( m$ x/ u6 j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, B. B6 j; U% W4 W8 y& i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 w1 i1 K+ ^: ?; E- j' g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
/ Y6 A. g  L5 m$ @/ }# I% T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  f& ]3 {8 W, Z: V. j: z3 i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! q$ B+ Q, q  G<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) d' T/ r5 h4 {; a<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ d% E$ M4 [6 N( S! ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 Y$ U9 ]; c/ e1 o, w$ s: ]<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>