【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( n' y& r+ K2 L3 w$ A) VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' s7 A/ [0 c! n% i+ P& ~6 @7 f- }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 T- k$ A1 a$ yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  x9 e4 v9 V6 s8 T) d; n! b, \The sky is happy down to its soul
+ S, M" d7 i5 fWith the moon kissing it every night
& Y/ j& {3 |+ \" y! S  @% `Seeing the sky content with its love
% k5 m" T/ A' OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ c6 T9 C: l% v- G* DEvery other word you utter is love
' |/ _+ c. D; u5 n# S, wI really want to know just how much you love me
0 _, C5 W4 e+ n# f$ qI love you I love you with all my heart
8 c/ `" n' X* t7 ?, tNothing can compare to my love
% }! [  u& ^3 g6 o* ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 s9 j5 V# S7 v, F2 D7 V3 tI want so much to see inside your heart
, F8 s1 ^) M: C% G2 \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 a( y& H; J9 s% x# D- XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: ]( X( ^- ~% y7 o. }, T8 q$ yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# ?3 ]& G1 G# w$ ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# q$ P4 a# y3 n. l' H/ d- {<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& Q% x" U2 G& ?4 U3 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% r! \: M& I  S. k, i( X; o2 U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 t8 b6 k) E( h6 l, k. }: y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; \9 U- E4 m9 k* }& i# W( |<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' K9 s  i0 G$ {1 o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 a  B2 W; D, C9 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 [0 j' V$ ?9 A+ N0 K" d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 N" [& v1 X% V9 c( D, ?4 R1 P<P>你无需担心</P>
8 a" g3 o' i, q9 ^# X<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 \+ }9 H3 X( ^" O4 J. a8 h+ {<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  K" y, C* F. W' T( i" d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
9 ^+ K' e( K1 A7 [5 q0 K<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( C' l* p) Q% Q! ^9 i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 R# }* c8 D2 Q1 ?. w1 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ F$ ]% |3 |8 f6 A+ o, p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& l* L: {2 S2 b* ?: F% `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 K) N+ S- g  `. Y0 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; N) R2 u% y( |4 ]+ ]; w<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 Y( A6 X2 J( B, v7 z# _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% d1 N* c5 @% W4 R' B( b<P>I regret not dying</P>
1 a5 _2 ~" }: i! Y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 C. X7 f+ T. U0 V* D7 l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 _; K+ p5 J5 k; P<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. B% w/ L& ?3 m- p: ~% D<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* x( }1 y$ w5 S' k6 V# `6 S& i<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: M; V* |7 C$ t9 }% z# \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
* t& K4 k! G' f; |' W) }0 ~: l: \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 W# D+ J! H7 v( Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>