【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, z1 r/ ?; O! @0 C2 ~. |歌词我附在后面。
. h7 e8 L$ C/ s0 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 g4 e) g0 M3 j6 J# y* k3 ]9 G9 H& gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- G% L+ `# U* d& w( _; ^2 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
' i9 g. A: k0 Q6 B  vI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 A5 k) T" V1 E) T* }4 C* tI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ {2 ?5 e) d8 F$ E* z1 c; z8 a4 R% gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 P; E' Q  f6 k; @: k* \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 a8 e" T: w7 O, uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) p' R  u9 @6 P( @8 |<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
$ r: ^2 G7 j. ~" s  P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 n4 Q) I5 \4 w3 Y9 A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ S) M) \. S. u$ F0 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# O' E) I1 p- Z8 [: Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 F5 D4 d2 S+ c& H0 x% m6 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 Q, W6 P, M; s) Z' F9 @( B6 w<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 o" ^; L% W0 j9 u# {& D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* Q' d% c; _# n$ o3 {$ @<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' [" C" ~- a0 I! V) D# l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 |% H; O: x! v" H' k( J<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ x# q( O' i, x& ^* ]0 P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 i  M$ m9 H( C; ]; H2 f/ N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. u' c) M0 o7 P! E3 Q) x<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# p9 O2 v3 \, ~( D1 k$ {3 d<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 M! y8 j( l& W2 I% f' u" S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. x! D7 n8 a  L( A/ Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 h# C- E. ~* [9 [6 G<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- z+ i% O- R) j$ m9 w9 m; L/ U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ r* v3 n- L0 x) x6 `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
" e* `2 l0 c* C- l% e4 T<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ _/ H' k9 R3 @* B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" W  Q" W5 s" W. D, U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
; @! Z) w- L: @9 s( ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 Q" d' _" U- ]6 W& y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 p! X8 F$ Y6 t" c9 s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( f# T$ }- Q$ y" r, D4 I9 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, x8 [: c0 p0 t; |' B( G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 C6 U( g3 c8 P9 b1 a: b: r+ H( j* {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 h/ j' f# R) c- Z6 t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# k, ~# J* H% b$ I; I- F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
4 {  E7 f4 q! Z7 T  \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>