【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
) P* e+ ~& N+ F9 s. XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
3 D, A3 \% N5 P" G7 S0 {3 R$ bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& z  I' e- D( P! f4 vThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- l2 |' j9 _4 c0 {9 o. `The sky is happy down to its soul
5 e: J+ R; p" i5 R; P0 PWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 |7 P) I2 Q0 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 N1 `! s  y6 `: w3 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! U  |9 h8 t" p& N. x' L  g. SEvery other word you utter is love
! {6 Z/ o& y# K8 o, l" g7 Z" {$ Z# SI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. o& W+ h& a' P  e# K( z8 u' Y2 DCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% Y+ O( |& }; ~% I9 K( lI want so much to see inside your heart
6 @- a9 G! ]2 y5 u' dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
5 U: a3 x, b  N) w8 ?; I, ^. f( LYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( s! e$ E0 B8 S7 B; b% c4 Z9 }With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: y. f) y9 s! U! B7 t% \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 y9 p" m1 }! h! T) _' z8 [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
6 ~0 z- F$ h: E9 x6 ^: _+ B<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: s; \! }6 U$ D$ r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" u2 K1 j! N3 W. m: [6 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. B2 n4 a6 ^8 R8 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ g; I: t- o3 ?! R; w; u. D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 ]( }4 R0 T3 d& p6 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% {! v3 P+ p4 m( v" `& ]! ]3 N<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 Y! T! g2 r: r# z$ a! C# M: J<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- W. j4 B8 @+ c. K; g# q4 _<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 s. j- _6 `; Y& ~! F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 J# ~8 M" }0 j8 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 A1 C  D6 N$ X: R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 Q) E, Y/ N" o% a9 h- m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ a( q& e+ Z& b* A6 G0 h: Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 ?- o1 f4 @9 d& ^$ B+ ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 m5 u9 d5 D0 B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) `, t, a0 n: G( }5 j$ X1 A7 t* P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. t1 j4 W  Y. X8 h3 w7 ]3 [3 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! B3 _- m6 \% _) V. v& E4 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ k' y7 [/ b+ V9 O& J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% m* f, x# e: c) ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 @6 I/ k9 f" G" [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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4 Z" \0 K# a8 g! E8 X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>