【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. _8 f& c# }9 M$ E/ zThe moonlight is shining brightly,
) e+ C9 l. B8 J5 S) j0 GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 F" ^0 C; E) y! G9 JWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& m- [$ T& c) _, `- ^' ~0 H2 LThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ ^6 \/ i9 p8 N- k8 u. BSeeing the sky content with its love
* p, p7 `( Q1 e5 S/ V- dIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
2 W3 H8 Z, N! v. JYou needn’t fear anything
4 L) b" D: ]. n- b. eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
) b; ~6 y5 |0 V( r4 _; _: RI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 J# ~( y5 o" |% @9 OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 ?7 i& [. _# c4 G: w5 EI regret not dying
: N! E0 }8 d  S9 }$ s6 @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! @9 V) e7 ~. g3 n8 \; K# QYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- k, a# x" Z) X' O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 r4 Q3 C+ r9 L0 V1 o5 R<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
: d9 ]- N, b, J; c3 |<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; M3 [% X" c" b4 ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
5 r6 s  t. e  y, ~<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 Z9 ], w' y2 ?<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! `8 J5 j' ~: d0 u& e; X5 P<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, i+ h5 \  ]2 k3 Y7 n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ]  u0 \8 x2 \6 B' W1 @2 z* L<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 V( v8 p* h3 m( m% r3 k$ P<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' M$ Q$ Q# p$ e" x9 |. l+ d5 b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ]6 T' p% t: m! H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, P  g  s5 }$ W$ Q+ J* x2 L0 E8 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 K5 n, e3 k& B5 \3 y  }8 l<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 Q4 P+ W+ a& s9 o3 X: w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
) @% V8 w! k' K# `. E<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  x; b. H. ]+ E8 D  T6 s" A) P. h5 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 p: c2 g; R; @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 c6 V0 S5 i  n+ @<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ S, n6 |# A$ m5 R<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
6 }" b, J& L0 T! _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 h/ p' [& O- W8 G% U& D<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 p1 J, E8 Q6 W/ W0 s. V$ g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ B/ t) i6 k  C  Y- W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
1 q" l( h; S. ~* x7 u: C* b' h4 U% A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( h% |$ X; z( O- U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# F2 \$ z  |- P4 R  D' Q0 j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>