【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ e6 k, u) @0 SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
( Z) i5 T1 S. T2 n0 i9 {& g0 s* R2 jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 i+ c9 G# M- ]7 I2 B& j) cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! j9 H; k1 U9 k9 P8 @The sky is happy down to its soul
, g' ?1 K4 O/ f- F# N: B# x# CWith the moon kissing it every night
' ^/ _: X# H; ZSeeing the sky content with its love
0 R0 Y" v. ~* ?- e, {) p: tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 Q6 Y5 E: Y% Q, LEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 g) {. z$ i$ w* R9 OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
; v. ~( \' m* tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ D# a& r: w: I7 h5 II’m still filled with fear
, _, o. I& u$ G& v7 v. B: ]- OYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; N% O2 C; e+ u( ]) ?; ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ B# u  o. q# m4 Q) XWith such a tongue as yours,
# U+ u1 o; b2 Q, D! IYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 K8 B% `' K) A! [/ g6 d<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* S# y! g9 _# }: {: X5 K/ C0 ?<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 B4 X5 s3 b1 L4 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' Y3 L- l0 k/ c9 l: C- ~( |% e7 R& E<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 ?6 b5 Y1 v+ c<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# |& w4 I7 c0 ^" E<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' [7 x! t; b8 K- u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! k9 u: |: s5 J* k( p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; y% N, Y' d& j* m$ t" C<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 W% V: K4 k- V& i9 n8 ?/ j8 A/ ?0 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 ?( f2 X/ t( t7 I0 n2 ~3 h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% L, g# `: O" S6 r) |<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 `8 ^, F2 i: S7 O8 Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; g* r9 H) j4 i- A8 G) w, j5 o4 f! B- }<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* H' h7 H6 j( P, |# [) Q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% y; L. @  M# X4 s4 \* n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, l7 q* d/ O5 K% Z( L  j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* R  k% u1 C0 l- v8 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% i1 W, m3 z9 j2 U$ [+ C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: Z- `5 Y/ @( x0 G9 l" v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, E, i& T& h9 |$ y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 @& V8 d7 T; I1 v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
3 l4 Y3 A/ v  U6 Y5 D2 b$ q5 @<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 ?+ u8 o5 d) b0 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 v4 S2 R; b" |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 e* q) W5 V' ^5 M% D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 x" l8 S! `) T2 s<P>I regret not dying</P>
- F& ~# D4 ~6 i8 B<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 B) f; I, a6 @/ m, q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! r4 r' _6 k8 M5 n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 M. [2 u( X: A) \% c  ?, I+ X/ x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' z7 h" ]$ X2 j1 a( S+ Q* v& g5 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 j  U. W& `$ ^/ ^2 Z8 M! R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>