【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) m! o: V0 t/ E% MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
  K6 E' t; j* rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 [" V! u7 Q( @" ~2 q- o' r) xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: J' q8 i3 @& Y% O+ BWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 V# M1 b& Q9 J2 n' F* T0 c2 sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  [0 M0 ?' D- P' vYou needn’t fear anything
3 m5 z: C; p# sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 ~' U. M3 ^, c( R1 |3 h# mEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, \+ E; {' p8 t; ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ G" l# ^) [4 {" j( W; NI want so much to see inside your heart
: \) ^; R% l( v  }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& ^, c8 J: p( S: n  k2 G+ E& tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
) G7 ?( \6 w. a' Y. l( u$ o$ sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& ^7 C* ^8 a' ~6 q' D; A& [7 _* [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ u5 W7 o* Z2 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" @4 p: s. J$ T<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: X  C% I/ e: J1 q- g) h7 @: j6 v+ n6 X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: p) ?, k! ?, ]& W, Y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' {  d7 N! v3 O0 @- U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 i+ R& p: i6 M  S: L* |9 _$ i. {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 e+ s( r+ ^' m1 |# n# q; [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
& a* A. m3 p$ Z% `; v) X. f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% V9 Y+ \% B# m7 j: X$ i, S3 C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  k. M! g% F7 l6 P! s8 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- m) e; N7 Y. t: ?& m- D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 h; ^7 G: K( i<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* u( e( w4 G6 v6 o! \8 G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( @4 I& T- N$ |5 I8 B/ g' x) \* s<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 `( u  N' s5 A+ e# f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. p$ a* b: v& M* y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 F. b7 h3 j6 b8 s; e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ o6 t/ T! x7 R1 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 X% ~! Y7 m, w. {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
2 r7 [" m. i2 N/ h<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. I! i8 W, F% d9 ~  e<P>I regret not dying</P>
! e: R2 G, e. R% ]; b+ T5 }( O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: L1 G2 r% @! f+ n: M<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 _1 l& n) n. b+ A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# \0 ]) v& ~: T' f! A. I, u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 X) c$ }+ U& g( ^+ V  `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& `  z! q& ~- ?* c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 m& a$ I! ]: z% f3 x2 P1 a3 y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& Y6 X4 |0 a7 K: I3 Y: F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 a1 c$ b& Y  [! r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: i7 T! n, i, V" h  I6 s9 {' F1 V<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 f, V+ v! K! y# d<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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" M( c5 D. b5 H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>