【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ x6 Y/ Y+ l8 Q6 v0 D( R7 o歌词我附在后面。
' n7 N; v% {. [- X; nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 v5 }& E5 t3 ^9 D, L+ a$ t  A" W' zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 [: }$ e9 N3 W. f& O2 a3 }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
5 {% Q$ d  Z& F1 oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) f: y! S. B9 \Every other word you utter is love
* y6 q* b' N( s3 B4 [3 ^4 x/ MI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ ^7 t  ~. M& p& U( lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
( m! J5 y: r# i% `  U! H: I9 PI’m still filled with fear
/ V* l- u% X9 C; C" ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
' [5 d* ]5 C5 V8 B# ZWith such a tongue as yours,
9 B1 b0 @8 R. M% NYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

: u% `9 R# \# E+ I1 w, B) I7 V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% z' ?7 n8 z* h( F8 v* J+ r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 n  d8 f, k( C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 M: u- L& d3 t5 r<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. _* G" o3 G$ W* E<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' h. J3 S( q/ }) L. L" ^. c3 {/ M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& Q0 ?1 e: ^2 i* V<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 r  v0 z) N# h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: Q# K' Z# N4 C$ Q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ g- F& s8 @& Q+ o8 r1 E4 r8 h<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& A% |; {: N8 T4 u6 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 g  i- ~/ }2 ~9 k! t4 p8 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
/ F$ B  P8 Y) w5 _! ~<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
/ J: d! N0 a9 V! L<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# o2 N0 l3 y' t& n<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! ?8 ~7 r  N/ {7 s1 V. P<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 @7 Z. w* Q2 n: o  D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% r* }5 ?: p7 q5 U8 I<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% d- }: }. a1 T( ?7 \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" V/ N" A* n" h" B: q* I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) w  q& D0 K/ a# g4 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 }! y0 Y: P0 ]5 u* [) `<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
9 w. S2 U7 L1 B# h( R- E. o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* r( ^6 u5 n! R) L/ z<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' N# a, P; I; F" e8 N<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. m1 S3 E% ]% J, g# U& X2 L) G/ h<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; u0 d+ `. F- B) R9 w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>