【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( d1 l7 K8 q" J+ v  ]歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* |; o. |& O& s; \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# h" S& I6 Z$ h* S. cSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- Q) r) y7 \. m( eYou needn’t fear anything
7 z; k& }. P* i$ j# O9 L5 j9 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- S; o/ N4 c" K$ O2 ~# REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
, @* O; s* I4 D6 V" _, jNothing can compare to my love
  G' ?* o) l0 M$ t/ D* SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) ~9 }! N7 {; ]1 ?6 `) K3 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 {0 U7 l! c! w' c7 c6 ]' M4 TI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: }% V( H; ~: {, Q. YI’m still filled with fear
6 ]& C% l" C# |2 M* L3 H6 {% WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! N. ^9 J1 @6 cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
8 }6 C8 N% N  [5 A& x, V  QWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; }  g, y3 H) W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) G5 c! C" K! H4 U<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% ]# n  E, A& g<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* `% A. u# q# ^- Q. o" H4 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
0 B/ N; F0 w4 v  J2 O<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% }7 ~3 m- a; U% a# J; D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 S. Q* o/ P- H0 ?$ F+ E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 F1 A3 c. v* b, _$ q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 a  L2 V6 ^, Z  G% d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
" v+ k0 e5 F, X# ]6 u<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ w# c9 ~6 D" S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: a" J( ]2 U; w- j, l" N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 A3 G% E: h7 A1 K4 I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# ?7 \' ^3 a% I2 X6 I9 {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. F/ R4 R9 v; K+ p0 M' y2 c; q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
6 Q  N& |( W" R2 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; I2 J, w6 b% E# c0 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  T: s0 L4 A, X4 m* p7 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 y8 Z! H5 X( |0 j& j<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; k4 q4 p7 q) c! ^5 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. R( }1 T& m4 B- J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 s  G0 M5 S0 D9 C3 B! @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( j8 ^: W" D1 a/ |7 c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 ~  X$ Y0 m. b" a7 o& f<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 W: m/ A2 Y3 x& \* ~; T0 F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 d  q' x3 m2 ]- k8 b3 S5 o  i. ^" E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 ?4 \7 b2 _: v* ?7 r8 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 U% J6 y( J$ k, w* w; b; ], j<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 l1 x- X9 W! b* w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& |7 o; o  _$ `) \, d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
, v* A  p2 T7 x! X0 g9 `* T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* P1 f( ~6 [6 F8 U8 w6 O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- i5 G: q1 |0 r" k, o; M# o<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 q, p% l7 k! o; m# g# U我请你剖开它
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- N) X8 P) X6 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>