【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 W3 E; m+ @+ I, XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ I- W: w/ t7 V( XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( b0 T; \7 Q9 s# g7 l0 f, x9 G: DThe sky is happy down to its soul
0 i0 u  S( s# h; eWith the moon kissing it every night
# N! K( F! U2 j/ e( O, O5 ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# ]5 [  U4 q+ J* m% K( p  IMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
5 g; [% W! }" \2 `I love you I love you with all my heart
' R3 P! n# z1 RNothing can compare to my love
* j% ]  T, ], `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- d" m, u' q& h9 z. OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 y( M1 U8 b- HI want so much to see inside your heart
0 @) d$ O2 W& Y& \+ YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& D/ s) X9 ~3 e7 q& EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 c3 z/ K- x, @# I/ I- sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* L  L( l1 ?& k$ }% ~$ ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 e/ r2 P. w* \1 k) XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, H# ^# Z2 a: v4 {( m- D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: g6 E6 f4 S- T: f# H/ ^8 y<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- G- v3 x0 w0 i, i, s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 C( s( I5 i; @0 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* I5 f! v0 p: ^' X8 a6 B5 a3 }<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 v. Z  b2 P! A+ {' m4 S( B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; C# r( c) `/ g6 W$ L& w% Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 R3 g4 x% ]' e/ H) b9 u  G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* `1 y9 R+ K1 |' I7 }<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 ^8 J$ h# s; P. [+ A9 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 N- B- X6 t2 k2 Q. x7 g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
9 S4 A+ j8 Y+ N* ^5 l+ k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# q: {; `" |0 D+ j* ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 q  Q  f/ x4 k: n: b) a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 k" A, G5 f' e! y8 q: z<P>你无需担心</P>
1 c3 `5 i8 P( Y* |: u* \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 i8 y/ S( w0 @/ T1 B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. T" V% `+ }8 S* |( s: G: L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( A0 o) ^8 V/ y# E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 |( g- T1 j+ ?, N+ g2 H# j) Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 |) h9 G: _( c  s4 w4 s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# v; p1 h( ?3 `" V+ ?) f8 ?  x$ q2 v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 H( n/ \/ G9 [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ z6 j* R3 a( B0 d" @% Q( s4 p# w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
8 B/ t( L( u- J( W& @, P6 {<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 f5 v4 i; R! e4 O/ b* m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 T; O8 }$ m7 z$ H9 k<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 Q- M) i- Y# h. ?* n4 ^% y7 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 h# ~! a1 A- a9 \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: {1 z3 L. u. b5 e<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 y7 H% B1 g) M9 s- S$ M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; A; m3 N/ S. ?: c6 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) B: J& R( e$ U+ o8 C<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 M! \- a( Z+ X! f6 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>