【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! k! j& n1 n/ j  n1 OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. j/ i2 m4 N: [/ J: BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# o9 z: t* ]. F. v5 |! xEvery other word you utter is love
: Z2 G0 P* F+ _! t0 q/ CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ {& B# @  [: \( V% h) l& BI want so much to see inside your heart
, D0 V  f; Q9 P* j- h; WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( w& v! ]( g7 b" {2 [; I$ g7 hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 w- E0 @" L0 H! c* x1 e3 V5 T' QI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- B5 ^( ~* [. I% @With such a tongue as yours,
( O( v4 |+ D/ G9 o, qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 x6 {  V) b' d' N. a+ E3 ]( JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 F/ N2 M7 q7 Q$ e# J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' `$ r( B1 |/ N3 a9 ]7 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 i: r4 G, A& ^5 ?. ^7 {<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& ]) u* j% \: x* A8 B3 X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' t$ W/ K6 i. h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 [6 C3 x9 N' ]9 A$ J5 n" g  [<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; @% B2 u: H5 }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 E/ f5 h; g% G# N3 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) D% S" @% z  Z* i$ Y<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- e, \. p2 I+ d8 |1 M7 G; k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* \. z& X- T5 l" Z' D, Q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( x9 N% b( ]9 k: i5 k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 p( b! @+ d/ ]1 A9 f) [, ?<P>你无需担心</P>
& ~* s" j4 Q; F% Z' E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- h  n' K; c7 a% U! r- I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# z( T% @9 k1 N0 O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 J& k7 W: D. T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, h4 A+ U9 Q4 B7 \<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ _* S; C3 I0 Y1 l$ @* ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( @7 E. i. z3 J. R$ s8 h4 e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
9 U. U  R4 K$ x1 [& `3 \! {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 x/ Z% a4 h( h4 v- l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ }, }: ?0 W2 P+ `1 D4 [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 L! C& p% t9 N! Q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
  A  `, l7 g* |# E- \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 D/ y" D. B" y' m+ }5 O<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' H' b+ G  G7 L' T4 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, C/ y) P# R5 f<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ U7 Z. W* `( d" r& g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: ?8 \! F5 \& Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# r9 ^0 O- X9 r5 H- g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 {" U- i% F- B3 D6 F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ?3 M! Y1 Z# ^5 g, r<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>