【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 h  D: V' N1 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. P* N: F! N) D( |% l7 p% WWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# Q# F2 A  f1 ?% T* ^! Y7 ]With the moon kissing it every night
+ ]8 `5 N! d/ E- _% ]1 {5 j+ OSeeing the sky content with its love
! D5 y, I9 B. }4 cIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 A: O0 q+ x/ I5 x0 e; eYou needn’t fear anything
7 Z+ b4 b2 z1 G0 |/ Q0 @- eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
7 s" c( |; L# f, W& V- [) T$ hEvery other word you utter is love
7 r2 ~4 x) Q5 d" [3 ZI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) ~4 h0 H( B, ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( @& w  x$ W6 [6 p7 }I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; V+ i7 @/ \( L2 B3 r6 rI’m still filled with fear
6 J9 F* u/ y1 v! r# V; o* UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 t% N& ?2 W& ?; I+ e# `I regret not dying
% E% X: E6 H1 g8 \2 M" r! ?0 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  ?& u+ B4 x; M5 p& {: B8 j. gWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, c0 Y  d  C8 e$ URambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
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<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 R+ ?( G3 _& S8 W2 I) U( o<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 |) J/ O! g1 M  Y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ g# A1 c1 c3 t% R% B; ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( r: l/ A! S1 s( T* l, T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) x8 L3 @( w$ H/ T, j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
9 g  M0 g! s4 z0 L. |# W) i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 N0 F$ G% t6 h1 G% k. S- K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( Z3 }4 p- d/ R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) a, g2 R2 m' ]# M# U1 o4 l<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! o- P- [# A, Z$ i( F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 M+ n3 _3 ?+ S% C! `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ K- n. q% {  v6 B/ S4 L6 S( X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* @0 f$ r6 e4 t  ~7 e+ `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 B, R* G- ^7 t0 Q/ X* N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  a% x4 Z3 [4 [; n* n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
# t5 f8 H- Q  A0 {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 P, a( }7 ]# ]' p1 D* @* @, f<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) d# w' r) `' q3 O( q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! \9 O7 C6 y- y1 m2 F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 E# D1 ~  K9 w9 v, _<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' m7 {, y5 G1 O) e<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* O2 D0 V! v8 F6 V0 E. ?$ @0 ?6 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 u$ o7 G- i9 G( R2 n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* i& _* h0 L# e+ q. I  C2 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: u$ \" `  a0 L" w  o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' u- f6 j  P' f: \& H/ s- E7 _7 O<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  b  u+ I' o4 S% y6 I<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

1 X: r  g6 ?5 b) k; ?6 T; V+ W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>