【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
8 N# k% Q' K3 a- Q6 D3 Z$ oThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% M6 m7 n" R6 z# ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- Y# s! i! I  {; JThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 F4 I- ]( \1 j4 o5 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 E9 ]- {# d5 m$ M5 yWith the moon kissing it every night
& \/ y2 F; U& X. M. Z9 E2 USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
3 S; e$ g5 I) e: e7 _. n/ G' }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 i, J0 i  s- t: [* y( ?# t$ A5 n! ~- pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
# N. v& q4 a# d4 G: UI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& O# Y: {" X# W9 ~' s$ b0 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
! n6 R* e2 U5 O2 k  tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 I- _, V! J+ h; P8 lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
, J5 w0 p. {: F+ WIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 X. Q* E, ^& P4 Z  {6 zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

/ I" ]- V5 t' R<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# {/ N* [4 i0 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" P/ A. N% o- p1 B- `2 E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! ?: c7 d7 _4 w- q! S- w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& n! Q9 @- C$ n1 x  X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( B# a) x: }% I' S2 q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 ?: F0 u! ?1 J. t8 l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- S# v& E; K) X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 R8 c0 o& p5 y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. e- X. C; n4 x3 w9 l0 _3 ~# v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 n2 `0 A5 {# U/ T1 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% d% t) w9 y- l, }% Q/ t4 e, x( h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 {, E. K5 X  r" U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 m+ y) B& W4 o9 ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 s$ s; P! X) G- I0 S; q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( Q+ P+ E  M9 E, l; M6 \# q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( q, u7 U" o0 H+ z0 K7 s0 N' o+ u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" n  ]0 m$ B1 }2 a) L- ~  C<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 ?# t8 Q3 r- @5 Z/ b2 Z' H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  u) X$ ^$ z8 @7 J# Y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! ~7 m# R, w  a: L# U: q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' ]5 f+ u1 r- s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ q6 E0 [; ^$ o7 c0 @<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 E1 \* z5 \  b) ?. B4 ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 k  p* W7 @& \7 S+ q<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 Q- y, f0 N  V6 e. I0 ]. p' }<P>I regret not dying</P>
: m/ \! ]4 Q# Y: C0 b. O& p% J<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' ?; a6 x; H& D0 w1 K1 h+ F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! o7 s. @/ n8 B3 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! Z- E6 ~! L- ]% k5 ^" k; ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: @3 F* V6 v0 R: F; `; N% [% _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 r9 F9 }! T& C, d2 W$ F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 h; n  _' c' u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: b! A% z4 [, i* w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 p' i  ?- x! y' @我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>