【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
: O" c, _* _) ^7 l# a( DWith the moon kissing it every night
/ [- k3 ^7 o2 rSeeing the sky content with its love
6 Q$ M( u) r' t& K: ?3 i" s7 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" Z2 U6 u  X$ y& W* h  y, F: p- tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: I; Z" u) ?( |) z0 d( DI really want to know just how much you love me
8 _. b. z0 s7 N/ II love you I love you with all my heart
. Q3 g4 s( n  B1 x' t( }4 ONothing can compare to my love
* {( y. L$ o+ [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; ]+ @! v1 \0 m5 z2 h. TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  x2 I+ t) ?+ S) E( qI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, q7 n2 C# t6 `4 s# jYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 y+ C* X# D' C; h) J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 N1 h* n+ a$ m2 y$ r/ O4 W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( l* ^0 V' d, l3 E<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, U! D  r! @% @/ j<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 d. X! p4 i6 g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; i1 U; c" O: S4 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  Z6 j' n* T& i& B<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ e$ w) [2 x! I" i<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) u$ d$ O( n( R5 D& \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ w2 b2 z' h" z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; i: T! _+ X" I& u/ P. U) y<P>你无需担心</P>
" K2 s1 i# Z1 v* ]0 p, O: O7 v& i<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. _) f1 N+ t5 T) W% c* p<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' C1 i0 B. H! f3 d# v- a: p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& Q& C# w0 C+ I( I2 r" b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 X1 o! F% s4 m<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 o0 U  O4 |# q3 [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; u; W7 \* p  _& f+ T2 e<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# g# V6 ]! F: ?. ?! B2 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 y( Y5 {6 E0 s* X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& g- T1 Z/ v2 `$ A. {2 O! g5 W<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( y! R) n" [2 G* s7 l5 d3 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  K; \: d. b# k$ [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 ~4 u1 P/ ]# P6 ^<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  `& T- Y9 W0 l' H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, m9 C+ i  W. V$ k8 i; [<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! V3 f6 w+ u6 X) ?3 k  g% A- ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ _; w* e: n. ?" I1 Q. ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# N/ \# B, k% J- f8 C<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  l) G4 J. J$ J9 T, @' v. Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ ]. w% B4 H8 [8 N; `5 n6 t<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  Y  X$ p/ \! X  D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; w+ L# j( r% h) A& M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>