【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 U- n3 C3 J: X/ \/ NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% ^9 S' Y% k+ T% I/ ~" |5 g; M$ KThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! C* c7 G4 z6 f2 SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
4 K( s) l' X7 e) H1 uSeeing the sky content with its love
: `. X( t6 ^- u/ SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 X; y9 d! N8 I4 t& V1 _6 pYou needn’t fear anything
9 ~8 S( F5 T1 _+ DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ G3 {2 N1 C* `I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
2 o: R$ J" L) h7 }- HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: u; U: |  ?9 q* R' O5 N* pThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 K& K- a2 d6 aI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; A' L" E6 S% C% j3 d: O2 n; CI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' V: e( K( H- p( wI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
8 w1 w" E& k  h* N6 i6 i) AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 [7 G0 s$ C$ U% [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# S& O! Z! H" _: ^$ u& XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ z/ w  ~: g8 t1 c; O4 C0 _# b+ @: n$ G<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 @5 |2 L/ u  c% l; _9 U3 C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 b, E4 a* y1 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" O) W) b; L- _& X<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* X2 J6 n9 P0 w' f1 P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 m2 V2 q! V3 z2 c; {<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) B' o% S) b7 H/ H7 U7 |! v1 a" ?! `; ~<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; X8 F# n8 q. |& a" r, A<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) I, K* _) K, _& x* [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 a7 n- n) R- r* H' [- P* ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. a; }% A7 w; A" I" I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 b3 ~3 d/ Z  E1 `: J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! S1 s1 `0 z) F$ H# y<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
) l2 \- f/ Q; G/ ]; v# s* a2 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% O, x3 \( H) I, p$ A. g<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 d7 S& ]2 D, U9 a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ ]; Z+ t+ U) s( Q) H% ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! d! h5 @6 B" d: o- s" O" e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, o2 n+ q. H$ e9 N. [) V) A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
4 x# S& }& a  [6 a* w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* X' u# c) C" M! r' v<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ D5 r+ l( [$ J( O% O; `0 S<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ {8 Q, S+ }7 y<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 Y( ^7 a: ]. Y9 Q0 H<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 h- W' {, j# J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( k! d, k8 K. D" Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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' R8 }4 T# {% ^% B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  b4 _- I8 @- h2 P# a9 z0 A<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>