【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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  Q0 l6 d: r- Z3 n- e' L2 O歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 c4 m' P1 f* BMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 a6 W1 m9 V# E7 }3 ?. G  iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, H* G6 d) t8 ^: I2 |5 z8 d. }0 NWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 W" q/ I$ ]$ v4 F$ m% P4 ^It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
. ?* C9 g% g$ e+ dI love you I love you with all my heart
6 I; c9 x. r+ H, g5 v1 [; T( kNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* B$ g. o6 X6 ]# d% H; LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 V" {8 ~$ m3 X% U* II’m still filled with fear
' Z! k8 v! ~0 H" A" ?) }Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  Z" R9 v3 s% q0 _! n) y& G3 dWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 A! |* K8 B) P$ c& ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- ^4 g' G8 R/ B4 m- U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 {1 U+ W$ F- i1 b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 A5 t5 V5 O+ Y& K* c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ I+ @4 L3 {. K' E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" a/ I  H2 K, Y$ d7 \9 D* F# [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. _& B1 |) M; m3 l; u! y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( O5 P1 e0 M/ Y% o<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) [) S" ~; q+ F: ^; u* A- A1 q: k3 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, N# s% x+ D; c% C0 G<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 T1 p( i$ h+ q& _# s0 a: K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% a9 ~+ a' L6 H7 z8 q* D: o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 _* ?% C, j8 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ D4 b" ^, k% C% N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 O* D: k0 h6 p/ U5 ^) J<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- @" N! x. d+ N4 d- ~# S5 Q% N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, ^; n% I- A' d" ]. s4 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" [! `: }* z' e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- @( H# A+ Y. D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. s/ U7 x' O- h& C" x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 U8 J% U& a& q. e; A! v+ J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>