【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
% R8 n  `) @* c3 O7 X! ~2 W% nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. N! Q2 f- V' A! }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! |. y2 L" t9 f) D' @: s0 EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 }8 p2 \1 h5 \With the moon kissing it every night
- |0 ?* y9 {; s- H( G7 Z9 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 Y" @' x2 t9 X3 OI really want to know just how much you love me
" y( J4 D2 t' ~) @/ K' }  [I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, \! @* _! a! h( x3 b6 |- t, xCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 L& [: _4 h6 \2 AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 a+ J; s" {( [/ v( m* pYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
- p/ ]/ ^) f' k  Q6 w$ u9 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) m0 Z# j$ }2 Z7 L% Q, r! h1 k+ TYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* a9 r( [% s( M0 @/ \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! i( b# p! @' X$ h8 i6 T( ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 l+ a+ {. i+ F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  l( @( V& M5 f- B" R9 x0 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- W! O3 N: `3 @& t<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. U! J( F  M2 ^7 ]% f& W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! @) S+ s" W7 }<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  N/ ~. E5 B- S5 T<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. A3 [- y. q9 N. l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 ]+ s4 |) }( b9 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  _# _+ n' H( j! [) p' _" K; f: |<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! m" v% C4 H) h5 }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" U) |7 T  w2 t( H, ^/ O9 L<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; _7 m! k$ T/ {3 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 l7 ]7 O; a1 j2 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 a4 H: H& L# a! h. S; y<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 `8 p; l( s& E  S; o5 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- u7 y& D$ c8 N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 {. }$ p3 a. Q7 y<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& X  W, y% Q& B/ B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) K  |4 _+ j# k<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 z& z/ P( j/ X0 M; d<P>I regret not dying</P>
. b0 d2 q2 v& H2 k) N/ D1 O<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 e, t' @. E) r) {0 r* E+ Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; ^6 Q. w4 F+ P$ ]3 V0 H<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& c( o: R0 v" v/ W6 l% Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 t, {% g: u, @: G+ @5 |- u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 w, W' e2 T) w9 ^5 p3 Z; m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 b( f, I% N  L2 c. Y4 D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# @7 z+ ^" V+ Q: r) V: r我请你剖开它
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6 T/ j0 ~/ e1 S7 `/ `6 x% v* y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>