【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  J0 i/ h" B- B+ x" VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
& ^, Q0 S/ [( ~9 v4 b/ kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
3 d0 \1 R! _" ]) G: vWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% a1 D) q2 N- c+ pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 C1 x3 G. l  ?2 c/ e" q& `* uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' _8 ]4 p8 Z# H4 I, mSeeing the sky content with its love
& ~! `5 Y$ V7 m1 Y: ^) zIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 L  ?4 ?5 w& R7 `* h2 |You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 l) N2 B4 o) f+ |- F1 SEvery other word you utter is love
% e& t0 g  M8 z7 xI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( R+ S3 {& C3 e4 C& wYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
1 a) b: @0 X( I# u+ }& ^# HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 P8 M$ S" n, u7 v4 H' T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) E2 g! z& L# f$ |' L2 y) ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# j9 d# a2 d/ [! ]/ ^( f5 V. u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
( _4 B: L+ F3 N7 ~; U& `2 B  L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 c3 X' U) }& u  z* e: v+ r7 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# Z) f6 c7 g) k7 f' P' z" ]* c<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 E9 b/ ]& \6 H. o6 T: \; D5 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 p3 l) U$ R. t3 \/ y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) H" ], R' U# o5 }: I) G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ a6 S2 a2 b) Z! p3 H# l- V& U<P>你无需担心</P>
! g# t9 Z: j5 s5 v8 U6 T; K<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 H4 h8 O5 c2 R% F<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' ~5 A* u. l  w5 Z( |6 e<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 o  k9 H9 D9 T8 J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
- e- c% n* Z* H0 f$ y$ f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 S5 t# p  \8 g: W: A9 V4 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ N9 u( S% T. E) I8 W<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, ~+ W' _( T5 w7 |" b- I$ ?6 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ `1 ?& q1 Q3 W' d+ l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% Y% F& x% C2 I, ~<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' E4 D" g0 ?! t, L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
/ c' A; o# ~6 t9 V" Z# B: W<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  q, m6 O8 ^/ |8 J+ V5 p* _5 J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 L2 w) A+ u/ |# X' h; S我请你剖开它
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  [2 ]- z/ C$ t- }; J9 A( M0 J! f 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>