【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 A; E. N; }- p( d8 r歌词我附在后面。
5 m. g# F* I; _, T2 b( C/ ?0 nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ A# J- N: p1 j3 nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 c9 r) ~4 ^% ~& ^6 }9 FThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  \8 Z2 G1 O* x5 |It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% t4 @" `/ a1 [, K2 T. ]7 NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% I! A/ {- I% d' `- zEvery other word you utter is love
3 D; w! W' x' E/ Q3 R  m9 [I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
; {7 a( S6 G* b. Y4 Y& o  cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
7 b, D+ j& N- t% T. S9 G4 }! CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 G, v3 U1 d, c5 [1 GI regret not dying
, c" D" F) q5 D6 h9 k5 G* ?I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  p. X: Y) m- Q, [$ s1 |9 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
0 o7 N! U6 H/ P! o5 Q# PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 W1 E) x# v0 QRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: `, R+ v: E1 B0 }" f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( m+ a+ N* Z  I! t! A5 y& `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 h! q. v6 f. s. i3 Y: E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 _. M+ X9 U5 k* u! ~' v6 l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% G/ d/ L) T9 @<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 {' V, {& X3 B3 f: O( g( C8 D: x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 C0 b7 O2 m/ p' `+ I! D: @3 v/ K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 U) j4 W* D8 }" d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
4 K2 w7 q: D8 f$ K2 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. u; f: S. g1 j! Y  d6 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' E( n# L' m! A( E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 x$ C+ C  I: v) s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& Z0 [; I9 P$ V8 @4 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
) C) a0 j) x0 C2 ~. L( W" e, y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# D7 A3 m) c! K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 [! R/ N+ `& c: Q0 W" u, y" J<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 e- g" H! j) v% z( {  x- L<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 x2 \* H9 C- Y* V<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- S$ R4 h* ~( ]) F3 |7 m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

' o- J7 m  Z' g4 T3 m1 W我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ z$ }$ O1 ~! A- ^. w<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>