【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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7 W$ R6 w6 {4 y; X6 b/ K3 N, a* E歌词我附在后面。
5 p* w( C. G) a; f  HThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 o4 ^; p% N& o9 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
, P' K+ `7 Q' E& |$ ?4 L$ Q8 uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
3 C2 V5 k* }* W) x: F( OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! t9 r! i9 n: f! \3 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% z4 w* J1 j' ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
( s& L6 t2 R$ `" H' @6 R3 a7 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  A. X$ n0 j' T7 ?+ F4 h; LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. F/ }* ]3 S  @1 i8 O7 M- eI regret not dying
* ]% @; }4 |/ d; J/ eI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( p8 z7 i* o! BIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 g- z1 _0 f# V6 I1 ~' n+ [  c% {Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 S( t' v" Z6 [% ^! X, \2 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( B1 w# {+ ^2 D6 O1 G4 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; K9 s. ?) b& D3 r5 ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 B8 b0 c2 s7 {! k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 i9 h3 R8 v0 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  H4 x+ b  b' H+ I+ Q- n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- A( V' P$ a$ J: L) H$ |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, V" \3 Z6 G* \0 ~3 o<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
9 v2 X( M1 ^+ K, |* J! G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 p8 b, y) I4 _/ x0 L( V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- T- c: `4 ^- e1 x<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 d+ r0 `  y- I/ o; m2 d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ T0 F8 ]3 z! t<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" [" f; l  z8 c& h" g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; Y, Z1 ?4 H, I9 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! |9 y& A) |, T! k. R4 ?) }1 u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" h0 N4 `/ }6 h9 ~4 q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& }; `7 K4 b6 Z" ~3 ~- f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 B# \" K1 Z% ]5 q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ ]+ \" K2 d8 q: t; n7 b5 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 M9 b0 X, ^( I+ g' v' h: Q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 Y& f0 \5 J# w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' r: a. j# K& T" Q, A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, {7 c. f8 @$ c/ k3 q& i9 u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 z1 a$ v  z# f  s1 x% }# ~<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ l( M* ^: M  r3 `! K<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 g' _9 X& V3 f' I% x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 e, p" J1 \  O( |+ l; F9 n6 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 b/ W- V: l- Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 Z' g) o; h3 h我请你剖开它
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5 i/ U! F* \: `# X1 m2 g9 n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>