【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# r" U3 L% [  b) }; N* l/ lWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' y+ m; V  @3 k9 Y- y. qThe sky is happy down to its soul
' o1 W( U4 o1 j& f+ K' NWith the moon kissing it every night
$ u) e& \6 W! \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
2 A/ Z. c& o4 REvery other word you utter is love
) ]  ~0 V; l; h9 v1 o  e. eI really want to know just how much you love me
+ X9 P( G. Q7 OI love you I love you with all my heart
. n; G& R. H. ^5 Z2 ENothing can compare to my love
/ B9 U9 [; t5 N. h6 `8 X( \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 g- r; O9 t; J3 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ H- J6 k( Y. s7 eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 W& |; N7 |* [I regret not dying
, k( A! L( M/ Q2 j1 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
0 ^0 }( i; f$ x8 ?8 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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0 S) D3 J" n2 [+ |<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( v/ y; s4 G* M/ H+ O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: @( w# f' x! @4 l% ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 U; }" X; J! H2 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- t0 W; u/ W: m9 M0 A6 H, u<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; O. D8 R1 o- Q5 D<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& @- j. R  `' k4 e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
: ]/ G" L" Z4 q+ v8 T( C+ ~8 V<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
: k8 X# U* F& [/ j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 a; X% Q+ }* p& l5 ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 J( Y! M9 ^# C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ ?1 _! n( u+ @/ a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ i( w9 I' W9 V6 s3 b1 j& |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% K+ N4 O: E# L; O% a<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 R% U( U2 c% J: s3 i<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& O5 k6 S/ F. y. _0 N9 T1 O5 K7 D) n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% r2 q. i5 ?6 H+ `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; I0 a9 G" i; d6 G# h( n$ u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  r9 z) e1 G1 p) [2 E$ S2 }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 n0 a% T" d$ g' |& q9 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 w' I. a1 O; ]$ ]) q+ v. I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  T, S7 ~3 D" Q9 h- l. L, F1 c. k- m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 Y, j. [2 V; O0 G" ~/ @% l: l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
0 }5 u5 {: U+ S) P6 |9 Q6 U<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 p0 E% |5 q6 B3 E% F* t. T<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 e0 e: f- h, [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" s/ Y; t4 M8 A0 N% @3 e<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- z9 X, Q/ A, D: y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 q/ ]7 I- G9 p% ?! J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% `. j& A  r5 g2 X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% T4 _2 l( W2 e: J<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 b2 T/ b0 u( I) T* ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& b9 {- n& Z( s- G6 d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 H/ z2 L/ k. m7 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 r( a1 _# r4 v2 b: m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 E; b  h) X3 y2 z  m& J) R+ c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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  V8 U  D" l, ]1 L- m5 z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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