【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ X9 W$ _( O6 `' B4 d) B! C* kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, m9 S, f' |# Z5 H0 B( VThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
# W* ]$ S2 ^3 u% Z7 k( yIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( z, X$ r% A5 R/ ?You needn’t fear anything
! i* U, a0 d/ ]* Y5 tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) A, u7 ]0 R8 A5 W  T4 _Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ s) V: s' h4 d, M, |# A+ A, d4 X( @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: h# Z& R  K5 |# P  [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ Z- q! `( z# l& z. P0 S7 fI want so much to see inside your heart
" n4 d+ U( v% O/ L8 T5 BI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# W8 v2 V% R4 H- Y0 L' hYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 Y& t% N0 o' X6 u4 ?& E- k) b4 @I regret not dying
: o+ c0 X* ^: Q! [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
4 j' W3 C: T* ~2 i7 }. uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 t8 v' J: r5 r2 T7 j, uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  o- m6 U9 X/ k4 t" s4 P% |6 d, ~<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 R) j4 l7 m; a: F0 k7 K3 M<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* ?3 H8 l" f6 h; a. G! V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ u5 F! k* I; o; Q7 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ B$ c" I4 X/ Z" Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 i/ {+ {# s; e3 d( ^# R2 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 S# i; q2 p' Q! l4 G5 {/ [<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ X  k5 E" q1 x1 ~' d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ u6 g: X2 T0 X% S# u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 _) R$ b1 G: R* ]7 Z4 u/ A<P>你无需担心</P>
8 O* \( q* }5 ~; u0 a: b( E$ J" o<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 E8 S% ~' K4 ~" Q3 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& o, O/ w: g" E( _& O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 E5 ]9 Z- U. c4 {  e<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. G/ c2 W* O' ~/ L( H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. A& @# ?; c5 O, c; v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. R, \2 q2 r3 Y# v3 P* ^. l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% x9 B) Z& ?% W6 M) T' P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 B) R4 z# J& j, Y! L2 z/ d<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 j$ _  x1 [2 W6 L2 C. D; E8 t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' j, k( |5 @8 w; I0 N8 ?( ~6 i<P>I regret not dying</P>
" E4 k; z) _" ?. i5 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 V: b( f% ^0 m# I+ y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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4 Q) L# e- E2 x/ K8 H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 r$ p( L$ H: u# X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>