【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 Q6 F" y+ a, c6 e0 m$ oMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ L0 z8 N1 s7 K1 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 g9 k& p- H+ JWith the moon kissing it every night
$ m) [+ n+ V! p0 A) b! }+ GSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 l6 o9 @5 u2 d2 [# u' kEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# N! j: L: [* F$ R+ r! u. h6 XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 z+ w! C3 U& p$ IThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
- I2 s& ]) y) \& Y7 t6 z( r) ]9 KI want so much to see inside your heart
* g! b# E" ~# X* XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# {9 ?+ G/ n9 q; \* b# _2 ~7 BI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
7 q9 ?# `! @4 ?. D6 VWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 c6 s& G; {1 H3 H0 f! K* I; D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( w2 ?# G( O: E) {* M1 x8 l<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  a* {! i. c" _<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
7 r+ d, r6 s# n$ I3 m) Q0 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: E# k/ W9 F# A- ?9 p4 Z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% H3 d* k2 d: z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 }& D/ @$ g4 L1 h( b7 ~/ w* T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& m- `) N8 `4 J<P>你无需担心</P>
$ h1 H: t9 F# x/ s2 A<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 g' b$ Q/ E5 B6 p/ w. q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, i. L6 n- [- Z$ {/ {<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  o' f; ~& P8 M$ r<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, I2 a" J, T7 i- z! v, L. p, X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* \" z, `  ~' {- E2 Y3 I<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ r- V9 x- w. @# C+ J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 {" Q0 j/ _) l) K8 _<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  j: U. N+ ]' c  O- F8 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% x9 [" p" ~( O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- _) v, h1 w+ `' b" _! U0 ]0 |7 U<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: H  ]' e0 V3 o. K. h<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 w1 [* L" l# a3 V' K) p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; \4 J1 j0 O6 g: v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ P0 p" w7 N% ]3 _, n; l<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: H. s5 q8 ^( }+ q7 n% V8 a3 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# @* u( G& ]1 M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 b4 Y: l' `* i, q9 R2 K<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' b( u% b3 |" @& q4 c<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, r+ M9 V4 g; q: n我请你剖开它

+ d4 z' V) x$ M 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>