【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; C8 H9 o- Y( YThe sky is happy down to its soul
: l8 j7 G  l# S7 @' LWith the moon kissing it every night
: R0 c7 B/ |& A, PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& K' [3 r: Z+ |You needn’t fear anything
' C* X) @% K! J  A9 y9 {0 W! rMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! V5 r5 k) R6 }% c+ REvery other word you utter is love
$ `. M9 ?8 ~: P% Q1 [/ J- AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! d/ E; R& q! g, LNothing can compare to my love
' ]8 b* R$ D0 uCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 D; d$ f  F4 UI want so much to see inside your heart
- {( G$ m: x6 q& m, \! FI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 \, i) Q1 o, D6 x5 Q, _* QI’m still filled with fear
( k) m" |% S' X, H: FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! d( G" t- h: S3 K& b% P4 n% UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
2 |0 z1 F* V/ Z" u6 s2 @' ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 K1 e, @' x* U/ e: O" y6 V( g+ ?<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 d. H$ z- _, y: ~9 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
% k4 H) l' o  _% Z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ @3 c1 m& p6 i% d3 V# j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 t- I$ L) n# P6 P3 a! @, {( O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, U9 p1 o4 M/ N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ _$ H$ Q/ b. T. k& L<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
8 h" \. Q0 ^8 r5 Q7 y1 C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! @/ A2 A0 Q% [3 j. c. o<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& g& O( B1 b2 n/ C<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: }/ D% @( u# s* n3 t! z( ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 _2 x/ a& ]( a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; S, V9 O0 c/ j& W, I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- O3 t0 T( G8 i$ k. D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 P# v* J6 l( V( {, r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
1 D) m; q$ J9 y9 I- }2 \. s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 T3 w* M; M  b9 \+ t1 y5 I<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 G8 `! p( A7 F. o! x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 z; D( w% ^/ s" [8 W' q, S$ B<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# W$ s7 h4 Z( }) c. \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 z1 i5 c& X2 y* g<P>I regret not dying</P>
) v; V! Y: E- p" j% r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ E1 K3 W" G, `3 j; b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 G" \2 P+ `$ l% R! i- K3 A" R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* e9 P, ^+ l% H, \. M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
0 t3 O5 U% ~: ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" k6 w$ Z" ]; Z/ P4 L6 D3 B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. _* x* S! R6 ~: Q. t, d: Y我请你剖开它
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8 }. n6 k% [% R1 n  L' K* D' d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 H$ ?( b/ v7 g& D  {<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>