【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
2 n+ d" k6 s# b: n! g0 MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- L+ X- X, d; U/ XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& h8 A* s, m* D' N; XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) @8 [4 W! |9 PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 g7 a( k( n+ e0 N% QI really want to know just how much you love me
( ?- S7 Q. c0 A( S1 f% e$ FI love you I love you with all my heart
. V" d: C$ }  r- UNothing can compare to my love
/ S; w* K/ K+ u; Q# Z9 G8 f& f# nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 S5 u- L, K: @0 l% _" Q7 w. oThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! ]$ \' \4 K8 n8 k7 ?2 iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* r+ d; `! R/ D" w# H/ }1 U/ D& k1 G' CI’m still filled with fear
0 w7 I0 ^5 T% i8 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 U& e) z. N' K! _+ R% n% M% FI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 o- u# [! Z3 \" T- `- m1 ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
! T! ]& _: r5 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! v' x0 B' [1 S5 `) J0 u3 L1 a1 j9 x<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
1 J$ T* t/ k' V- u<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- U% D) P- |" Z+ y; o' e7 o" n" q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 T3 h2 r& Y) X. `1 h3 o6 j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ K( l3 R* K9 i4 a: T; ^& t<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 b3 e& e5 d5 |0 L$ j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 B0 B9 @9 @* V% t. ?! s2 c  z$ x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 g3 R/ C$ k' z$ B2 ~( R<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ H6 A/ {% Y: a$ ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 z& R+ P: W0 O# `; `: m3 k3 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 c2 {% O) {( j! g/ V. i1 @& P<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- F2 a" I1 e3 z" X: {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 x! C- G) s5 }' o6 G2 j6 U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. R) u( }# k. w$ c, J* c<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. c; T5 F7 h3 n- z+ G( B8 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% l$ e# p: d+ g- @8 @<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ h6 s% m) U- n4 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 W% D2 s; C4 t% O1 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% Q1 K3 c0 u5 A3 c9 B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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7 A$ T( j1 n& t3 A# W2 U3 u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" _4 K3 Q& n6 f) x<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>