【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 I6 f" a4 F. w' yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
9 E) t5 d; S! wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 {7 I. \- K/ K  TThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
! f1 L3 |+ \: `8 h% sSeeing the sky content with its love
# P2 R1 a# q3 p0 T. G8 Z9 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ s* o1 K: t' M6 u: E4 P* e1 RYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# ?& Q5 n  V, v1 I$ z( xEvery other word you utter is love
' \: y% a" N2 V- HI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
7 Q; N1 |% R* `1 i, sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) A5 q) d8 b: b( c0 L) w+ sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( I' |4 X' t" B. f" I1 [1 O- JI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
) M0 }  Z( G% X: l. H) ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, ?+ ?/ D& K6 y- D  A, }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 u0 ?7 H' s' H' [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' u2 U7 d! \  H" i<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; B) }' b! A- u, q6 o" L6 V$ ^  U<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ N- @1 s  q( ]- ~! y2 j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. q- @% Z4 _0 N1 q  ]% x6 \. J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" d! h4 E7 f1 @2 D; ~/ g; ]<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- t  v5 \) u; ?0 F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 Z8 ?5 h4 _8 c# h9 j0 I9 ]<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ H9 u; \, }1 [4 I+ q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 O- B8 k1 H0 s. F' S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* ]' k, [* Y: E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 T6 D3 n6 ~) T+ W9 L" \<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* U; {0 _! T! l, B; b5 B9 R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' w) |4 X- D4 h6 W: t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, ^, G9 x! |5 L- P. B; {2 E<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 g% {1 _- M& w8 z  v<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& ]* g1 r- a8 Q( T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 _0 T6 Z6 G- X# N1 o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
% a6 n' K+ }- V: s" Y: D<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: p2 _4 d* b: k- n% X$ _% r6 E- C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ @" w1 _# [% |% q. ?4 K8 ]<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' q2 t4 B1 E8 y/ V% Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 o$ ?& _; I4 V" V; ^! c6 j<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ D7 T. |7 Q; r  K7 Z, s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: M) Y5 w& A" E/ x$ N2 s. Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 Y4 e8 k  o1 s) f) \1 x) k<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

9 E1 S" e8 A8 g4 O1 ^我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>