【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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$ b& W8 D! y2 E. Q+ j1 `- aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" ^* T( t/ o7 W. C( AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% I- O+ Y/ S1 U2 o: }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! Z% l" L3 g1 N4 Y' HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# D  z) c5 Z. @- T7 j$ h2 II love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% H7 P% |4 a: `' E' f7 m3 |* rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, {7 h/ T( u, m0 c& VI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
! X. E( ^! O, x, ^/ R' T9 L+ l: FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; `1 K  n# b+ _/ `, A; e* r: tI regret not dying
5 V; m3 j8 A( m' y& H8 s! c8 JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. I% \8 e( n1 p5 {) k; oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) d6 i5 \  j+ S: t3 A8 g% M( a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( u# C4 t8 b6 m1 Q. F<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
/ A% W- u% _3 U; ~# h: v, I* S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. m% l2 @- X9 c% _; @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 @+ d7 y% n3 W* u( \0 w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* p2 U% i; c5 G$ {0 P7 v& `! C7 B<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 v% Y; v. i8 X- N9 U6 K8 R<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ U& y9 v- n/ B! Q0 U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 p7 R7 k" n* U: d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 ?% y$ A0 n$ q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
0 S" [$ }; p/ r, n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ D! Y3 m: s$ {6 w) Y3 |<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  Q* P9 \" F5 o/ }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 Z9 A0 v# T* J( a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 `5 y9 r+ A; s! V7 L<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* V0 u6 I. W# u- ?0 U( @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 {4 g' C5 K* {1 c/ l<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" E1 K9 |8 d. E6 C+ }1 F<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: z- J% }  q+ P  o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
2 s* S8 ?* v1 _& s1 t! ^2 ]  X7 k<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 S+ O- b  Q+ i4 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& i, a7 O! k% ?* Z! M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  X/ m; o2 C9 V4 Q  @5 }; ]" |9 w<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
; B! l0 u4 v% Z4 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>