【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ |7 B0 \7 \9 C( L( m9 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 }' D3 R1 L. F" d0 s$ _* FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
' X# V! J: I+ |2 `6 |! F4 X( f4 `) DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- |& F2 n: t  `6 S( k: PThe sky is happy down to its soul
& Y8 Y  ~& s0 i! M  n' R% z" O0 ?With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  K7 O$ _+ Q+ s& u3 Q- B0 d0 QYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; o' V* _  w) O# z+ O& BEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 S; m7 x2 A/ l( @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 _3 @- |- X! @( W8 S: f* mThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
8 k9 R6 H8 W: w9 B0 t! V+ jI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 Z3 \+ \) u' _I’m still filled with fear
' x  S( M( C( A& E" a9 gYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% I  x: t: _5 [0 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
7 O; h2 A- w2 W- rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
/ b6 k9 {5 f' v! D! R" m1 I9 M! M7 @If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 t$ e, i' D  x1 [" GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 [" d, U) X# E7 v5 ?% A<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* Q4 _6 s( N0 _5 W0 n  X  z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 i- j! g$ n$ A5 C) R* y3 j. i1 \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: X- n9 ~" j+ r# f- Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! _# O) ]0 m5 p! g<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ c' n+ K& S" M5 D5 U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# O; v, I, ~( C) G& l9 k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" l4 q. W+ j0 |: X! h<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ o* [( |* e1 j6 w  B<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  ^1 J9 V  r: ?7 o+ P: x( X. x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) k3 p$ |( h( u6 M2 N( t3 @<P>你无需担心</P>
2 J* Z) [! Q  b3 J4 t9 [* @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- h6 K4 Z: a8 E<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ G* y$ ~* {9 S1 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  D$ a  f/ \* a9 W7 N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ~. W  L! Y; W3 H. Y2 b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. g# e$ Y: j- s; h  C<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* {# o% T% w: y& e8 R9 U  H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" F* X! e. i4 i2 Y9 `% B, i<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
  \" k! N& H4 E) t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 s! J* l' Y5 x# V3 w3 q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) E; j0 \) k8 I9 ?+ T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! `- j4 K0 p# D5 o+ O9 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  Y5 O3 t; W  Q: A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& z$ s8 V0 |  x* Z* }4 p7 ?$ J! q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, ^. G4 U) G$ r, X我请你剖开它
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$ _2 X; f  s5 G# a4 I, j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 o- @; o' ^8 S; B" P) D6 L4 U. \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>