【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 J, ^4 R3 m" I6 k歌词我附在后面。
8 p) w9 \8 ?  Q: y6 |The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 H2 I# {' u" b, kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 m2 T3 g. P8 Z0 N0 hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 H4 m  ~6 z- d4 L& b3 tYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 O, |; s% G9 |7 M7 u9 b( DEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 N1 h4 @( N9 l. e% K- uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
- ]" i9 k4 S( cThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# N" f4 I! w0 b: _% [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
+ Q3 g1 {2 K7 l+ Y( f1 XI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& A* t! _5 m  R- M3 x9 h3 H' @With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  D1 {" Y. A: _( _; I- Z+ dIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  ~3 N# ]0 I- Y; \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: U( q# V" `6 z% y  c6 N9 @<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 N( A* d- h9 B5 Q7 A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
0 w4 S/ Z7 ?0 J& [; t<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( I" l: L2 ~: P$ @<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 q. D4 \% z" O# e) @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
& r4 m: B0 [8 F5 E8 E- t- M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- f" y/ r. U$ W6 k5 N. D<P>你无需担心</P>
/ g5 K. Q9 W/ y4 e+ u* q  B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& I5 }! h) G- Z% |% v) b<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 `. ]( c! u4 ]( }; X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* ^+ i0 k. n- C# i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  E/ j+ T% }, y& U, W/ e<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. T3 t0 A, P; {/ E& g" O8 O8 M4 M/ O<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; Q+ b6 s# C' o& l1 n. X! c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ D) a$ z- s' u, z/ p0 M/ T( P4 |4 u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ H5 ]8 X  K' G* Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  M5 j: ^# f3 l1 a3 B1 i6 L: G<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' ~7 F( o$ L# s  W2 Y1 C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 L8 k* W; a% x0 ~2 b<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 Y4 K' q$ }7 F0 M5 c0 U- E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  \# {1 \9 \& i4 z4 C% ]9 K<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# e5 W3 n, _) D3 ~5 ^7 J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  s3 l% U: X7 T6 P; v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. P' l! [# |- e7 K; }4 |! Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. u8 i  N- n6 V6 l! d5 p2 \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ?; s; K, o! U* q0 {: e! n<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>