【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
6 D; U' F% \, j$ `The moonlight is shining brightly,
) S; ?( j% G" E7 WMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; A! N* K5 Z2 d& _1 I$ I; xThe sky is happy down to its soul
1 d, M. z4 ~( ], K/ u! I) m8 Q/ s  xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! Z. ~8 y# Y; jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ Z6 g$ V, v( C. T! ]- ^Every other word you utter is love
# z/ ]; g& c" I, B$ y9 @9 L2 A% ~I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 ?% A, j1 b# y! n9 z' B' n( vNothing can compare to my love
2 u' u+ [( ^# [5 f% PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& ^2 i8 D6 R' b2 ~8 m. _: o& ]I’m still filled with fear
6 Z7 w. W0 Z6 g( vYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 D' |4 {3 W: S& m, ]8 P% L/ iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% @7 a  K. {6 M5 m$ n: fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 H' O9 U5 s  e9 g4 ^% OIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 R4 J6 G; s6 y! o1 [Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 y3 F; T( E( u# Q; |+ h+ q0 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# R% C, [3 p  A; ]. l  |" k( |<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 `: V0 U- u  r0 v& k7 |& B<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" C% w3 W: r3 J7 G7 s. f: I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& g  o: @  b$ \1 D- \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 ~4 L+ r8 K7 T" r5 Y+ E' m: i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 r+ Z9 F' s* Z; A8 }: N! {<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 U8 `9 Z! k9 A5 N<P>你无需担心</P>
: c% x" l4 \$ j' b& M3 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& [; f2 W: p+ c0 G! y( i  i7 b0 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! B. z+ M) \! E- R% A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ?4 O' l2 @" q4 j7 \/ F<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" d1 Q. @+ q# `' U. t# e3 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 M* F; M3 a6 W# |. B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 }$ U3 E* S( y( v) S<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  f0 r/ i1 C2 W7 B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- v8 _7 Q3 Q) n- }1 c( w<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 `4 j8 _4 Q1 q% s% [) G) G- S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, J* M9 `2 Q/ \  G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* g8 _# w4 P, ?  e1 g2 V+ E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ ~# S7 D7 p4 N% w1 H" g<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 g* w/ q2 n5 E& ^/ ^& {: Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 |& E2 \; x- w9 \; `5 {$ P<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 U: X- a+ p* P# @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 ]* F8 J; u/ T. L& [4 L# P1 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 h7 L6 y0 T6 p3 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; b( R; ?2 z# _; K) t: l$ r$ \我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, B8 H/ F  k8 |; M$ Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>