【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
! c: q/ z$ T* |: ]! DThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
2 s& P" p9 T: ]" `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, D4 B+ v! e+ j+ L" Z* q$ _( i4 V1 ^9 RMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* l. S7 A! |# M! N2 s2 pI really want to know just how much you love me
1 g3 L& D( U% o5 }! mI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. a+ B+ a* e  D$ SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! O3 S1 j# z# S/ \6 aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 H/ z8 g( F+ C- G! g: x- x* gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, e3 [  {% q; m4 fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
) ], c: M: b; UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 z  F1 o& J/ I* Y" D7 X1 PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; H* M1 s2 o5 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: _9 I! Z. b; x( s& T- p' P" _0 ~<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" @" n. d* w/ {% j<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% H" D' d8 K7 J6 a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 {8 t9 x+ w% Z) E, B, c6 m<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  E. V& |$ t$ B- n. f& ^0 m; t2 k5 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 L6 `' n. j) F; W8 d<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 }3 m6 L+ ^( ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 ~; s1 L) D6 E+ g* _+ ^# Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 `( i2 s0 @% w) {<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# e/ w+ v2 ~) P* l<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 t' K* o3 C- y: j<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ e# V+ t0 y; L5 m" O+ S6 P<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! w; k8 m; o8 j* A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- X. y) F6 u6 r: {2 }8 W, D# Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 d- `" g; o9 a. {2 d4 C4 }; u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ x1 f! k5 I, Z5 M* Z  c<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 L1 M% h0 K& _/ w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 E7 S- s, H! [( e4 E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
* W. }# t* y' r' Y" ~, d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 j- m0 o+ b+ W5 k$ s+ H" r# }<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 l: o3 a- K4 K5 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 R9 `8 Y" k; k  @/ }" P( _; T<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& @1 c, S4 o9 ^2 O- w* O- U4 y- L  }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* W4 M+ r# Q  b8 ?2 f$ ^我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>