【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# w8 v. R2 Y) o+ ?% t歌词我附在后面。
( q$ v) H( _( W8 \The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 q( e' ]. L7 L! bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ D. q3 w, [3 d3 B( @9 cWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% |% r8 N% w( O$ X6 e! o: d6 u4 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! {2 @: H7 T* t0 N4 n% nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, g  l/ ?; k+ m. kIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
) X/ |' k8 ?% G2 mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; R  U2 J: M. k! \1 M9 D" bNothing can compare to my love
. X3 T8 U! k2 i2 B; [# cCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ c! f3 m. I1 y2 C( q- i% UI want so much to see inside your heart
- q' \, K# S; h+ E: {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 b- k% ?- j9 S7 H( z4 U, s6 X% MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 j( J! Q0 ?: J' v4 w6 u8 \( ZI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 g" R3 J! R4 I, }% xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 p1 G% @* }2 w* l4 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, g( n8 E7 A$ {; K0 F* L/ j" V4 P<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" G3 U! @$ j; S! W4 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 ]0 m; J; [1 D: y& G) T" p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ {" @# A5 f( g5 [+ _3 ~  I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
! ~! W; S, \2 n" p4 @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 q1 f; N' O0 k: ^<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ a% y* v, F4 t: ^% R8 {$ _1 \/ X<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 K# p' C! Z- f* O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
# `8 a/ {; v1 a7 N. \<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  d. `. r" I* F  z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& W! q9 n: J. x% J. q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) z0 N- |3 R3 X( _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' P  b6 S! }6 x7 u0 Q7 i6 J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ^' p. q8 g+ S  v<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' ]; P: W7 q" Z# b* _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 ?7 T+ D, U- u) @<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! O! A! n- D- [3 V- S8 T, p2 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
+ \0 ~+ \" h) a7 V  O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 d7 \( w0 K; Z1 a. H. u; d7 S<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; j- U9 `. x" h0 Q8 c1 Z: g/ K<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* q4 a/ K1 S' G1 w" W3 f. f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 |3 e" P5 L- x6 z, c4 j7 E# x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  r% N7 \! {2 G7 R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 x6 b0 f7 h  H% |' @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ N9 C! b- d+ g6 k! B. j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 J% }7 [: y2 A" X<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. l/ q! E6 {$ s$ I+ M9 z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 ^" b9 `. f0 y; s8 m! v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ T* m* U+ W( W4 W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. L4 m. Z1 h7 K  _<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>