【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 n; O) x4 a' s1 A, D/ rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
* D1 S1 S- y& {! r/ J: l! wWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, K" j! w6 O1 t* a) @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* p% N$ O6 b; [- C8 M3 A! qThe sky is happy down to its soul
! f2 Z  `3 Q7 A1 kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
% V! f2 O% {& P  m8 e$ P1 W. PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 b; `. w+ z8 ^8 d4 [/ K( Z6 `You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* {3 J6 {1 |0 w( [Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 b& P( M4 N0 A% w( p( ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 y; n( o4 ^6 c. g9 [; E( ZI’m still filled with fear
: A3 ?8 I6 Y6 _: _/ k2 MYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* w/ r8 T0 h3 o) CI regret not dying
/ ~( S; R2 ^3 O1 C2 HI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 q- V4 u/ B! u& \2 nWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ d  L# o6 n  v+ y: O4 UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. [1 J8 v* _. v) d<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) ~4 t  Q4 x( k$ t1 c/ S<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 _5 Q8 f# U' m+ [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* W& K; b: z3 @( x" r- B; n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 F9 L* r0 L5 {% a" L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& H6 m, G  B/ N) u0 e) x) B  d8 O' k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( ?/ N% u, H! X  d% y) i8 A" ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! o3 m* w/ c: K: d, J" h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ K3 J, B# R, m4 M. {7 \# L<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 D; f" ?1 R! d  j1 ^& M7 B- b! C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
/ N6 P2 o8 D, t6 v; Y. O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 h- S% c+ b. ]& h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) B/ ^8 E6 _6 h& Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 z' k& K& O4 ]. O, V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 f/ @1 g! B& R) N; C2 H<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! D8 [8 e- y8 O' k4 J( M) i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: k) i4 c; N' G2 H, v3 \+ |<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 d, y; Y" r6 Z$ d6 ^5 _<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# E1 P  v0 N& K; i/ S- L<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- W5 I9 H: G; [* R<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# k: e6 d' \+ o<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; i5 r, d* Q( ]0 Z; C<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% ^: `1 }$ \3 u( j; [- P, H/ c<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: |; r1 A5 Y$ l5 u<P>I regret not dying</P>
- K( R0 z3 t" S; v0 z  P<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! V5 H' ?" t! j* P6 j3 \5 ~) W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) L1 h$ d. M! Y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
5 y3 q9 ^) M  p; ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ C7 H* T0 k7 Y2 ~: e1 @<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& ]" Z% ^' ]5 j0 y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
+ e# y6 R8 N) H+ \2 Z% i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. x/ ^* b# M4 S. Z- d4 z! J<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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, V+ C! S5 c% X 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>