【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" V, j; i; {+ c) u+ Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* o$ j; q2 F; i  @& P7 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ n% s7 i& u4 O( L. fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& }% r" ]0 ~/ g: D5 K2 o0 v, AWith the moon kissing it every night
- _  r: F/ l& m( MSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 W7 K% g3 `, R1 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 T% Z& T& x3 D3 Y9 H1 }+ tI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 G# v+ C' _% n$ OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 E  n; J) d7 U& O/ p( C2 D6 Z3 a; R& tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; a' T  @; |. SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 l3 D( I9 Q* F9 O9 ?/ ?2 y" j- PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 j5 i0 X! q, V3 l  e' LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. s0 P$ v" V! q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# Y+ f  H  k. r% ^6 h- W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 B% |8 u/ D0 b1 R8 a. ~  _4 _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& C& Z1 D& J: V9 y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! G. t$ ~6 m- B' Z, T1 Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 e+ b- q7 X3 Z. h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
" Z& }( u; p5 C: g<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 e. @  r7 C. [7 [. v/ S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! ~! {  r$ |: H- z% B8 t$ W* @0 F<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, X7 R3 ?1 y* V! d) D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: t+ K. Q1 x( f; h# l/ j) O<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. @1 {" a% g% _4 m' v! u+ k4 E! W2 N4 s, {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, U; Y& R  G6 n; f+ Z) g* u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- _1 Y6 {1 n3 n. L" R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( G! j+ O1 J7 `+ k& n. a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# O; L2 `9 {+ Y7 |. `' }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 ^% P3 x! \" I) J$ d: J<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 d4 F; n6 c3 E' a" {) q! r5 l# I; `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" w2 ], s& C" r9 G& S* ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) A4 P! `' a& `<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: Q/ v8 h' o3 ^/ t+ K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 |1 k7 N& q- W4 c4 g5 i- U: ?<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" N+ c# y3 B- l& `% T  Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( R! w# A: _6 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 g$ N  f; A2 Y2 F, s+ d4 v. E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
6 f6 K& U/ K# c" d' ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: y" @4 k, Z- }8 i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 ]6 E& m8 v: R+ a, \0 \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 E4 [5 }0 m- p0 U0 f# |6 W<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  l3 Z5 \; `1 _5 H<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

/ B) t$ q; i9 G0 ^( E# e# ?我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 O1 d) ?5 u% S! B<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>