【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
) R$ T+ F; u0 y6 h* ?8 xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  O2 }+ @$ l+ W. F' tThe sky is happy down to its soul
! X8 j. K' u- u# eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 X% |$ l' f8 c( t0 UIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 R! e5 f" X6 Y  B4 ^+ vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ j; k1 l5 H3 C& xEvery other word you utter is love
7 e5 y* i5 ^2 W5 W/ a' e6 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# V0 s4 o( [- _2 m. ~, KThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) E$ f" k" l% fI want so much to see inside your heart
/ ^4 p: q5 ]9 E/ y+ n( B, I+ VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 p9 S" C" ]7 w% \  ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: K% A% Q0 B  W' zRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* {: n, K- }# f9 k: d1 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! o. I- A- T8 ?3 P: W7 ~. T$ u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: R6 H4 u3 g! U* H9 H<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 }1 W* C& @0 ?' K7 L3 ^<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
8 h! j6 `' v# Y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 ?3 f% M0 J- y  r4 X3 f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 `/ F; x7 ^9 s3 ]2 a<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ y# y3 k: p% }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) z5 }$ l$ O0 r3 u1 M<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 G# V! P7 L* `* c<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ F0 Q9 t& _7 G% ~2 z- L( N# v! i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. d- x" A) F& a1 C+ j. ~<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 z8 {3 Y4 y# n<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
0 \9 v- c" G- t3 G/ [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. M+ P' b/ R$ i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 R" ?' [5 {) {<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
. [5 m% t7 n6 J" ^6 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 Q# e0 b: u0 e<P>I regret not dying</P>
* X2 d% {) M6 J% s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! J4 {9 g$ D7 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 @7 C/ q$ z. M1 \, h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
# z1 N7 {5 d: O8 V( D<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 o7 h' i5 c: T( q0 t+ {' Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, V; H* h( \1 p$ i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 m  X& C$ w( `5 H! C7 F) w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

/ V: L% U' M5 |4 K/ u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>