【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" S+ `' N+ @' zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
! P3 @- k8 Z$ FWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, b, x) `; n' r: t# c8 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ B0 T/ a# l+ @, `1 A0 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
$ C5 f2 ~5 W  _5 F3 B( ~$ KI really want to know just how much you love me
2 c" ]; F& @/ G( r  c. y& D% KI love you I love you with all my heart
8 k8 W- s; x' t+ J$ ]! Q1 eNothing can compare to my love
* Q! x8 ]* F( J" \0 sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' N0 ^, s; b- RThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, _- I0 e. ]8 @+ X& dI want so much to see inside your heart
5 k* ?$ {" b% AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 T6 T% E" |$ U5 s6 KI’m still filled with fear
: I  i, F9 [- D2 C2 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 A9 A6 n0 D0 V) U6 \+ ?2 R3 ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 F3 O( m' n/ ^' J1 kWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' ^1 w, ]) u) x8 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; P: L, K" E$ Y! u3 t" V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( U- }4 ^% j4 [0 T7 k3 o1 ^<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ n3 V2 }# Z& L0 P: _' t" v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
# G8 D) W# B1 o) [" s* ?& E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
/ s: G3 u" a0 e, _; e; ~<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% U, `$ @) F7 h$ i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" W9 ^& @& L; T: h<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
! m) w% J% y- p. |- i0 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 s5 S1 f) T( e, T; j$ B9 `) a6 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 N9 Z$ ^9 w! e/ h$ r. D3 C<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' u" W5 k5 X/ N1 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  ~. n4 Y! p7 _8 b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! u$ @% K2 g5 t" n1 S$ B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% v& f& X: ^: Z6 S2 |" b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 N3 r6 C& \+ k% h# _<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 B, Q2 D9 X6 E& b6 o<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( B, a) _$ \0 m! P1 X  `* m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 R  s9 U) K7 j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& k+ p8 B5 d5 {4 S; e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" x0 A/ s1 z4 y& L9 Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  N% |  L& T, Y0 g4 c+ g6 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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3 o, n6 u) K/ h2 J6 e9 W" _# f9 X4 b 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>