【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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9 w* P0 N8 V+ y, Q( }: U" D2 \歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' A, B" d* R6 @" K$ iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 G3 W6 B1 M2 v) N/ f7 l) vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 v3 Q, C9 q; E& I# dSeeing the sky content with its love
8 i: \$ J; y, e: z. G. q: w0 CIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! m) k# d' ]4 K  D* p: XYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
0 e# A2 G/ h& V5 X" mNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  M0 D) b& n8 OI want so much to see inside your heart
/ a  H% a6 ^3 P5 SI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 p( F. B7 H) `0 v6 @I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; b9 E- I6 i# x; N9 q7 OI regret not dying
( d6 S' E6 f2 i+ b8 a7 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 Z3 y) ~& N! h( |! B( ^! Q& v4 Q' f3 ZWith such a tongue as yours,
7 d0 V; E6 g# O. q4 L* xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
9 s. }  D+ T! PRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 F8 c; d8 e5 l% S/ V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
! Y5 V8 L$ L7 G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* d; F' X" f( `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 S+ v! t) w5 h; ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; f0 E* [* D+ p& X* G5 J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. {1 k5 U7 L+ h7 r0 X$ D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 R: `2 ?/ s. ^" M1 `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  J" G2 Z! y* F$ G' |: H: Q' N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: v# _1 N! _2 f, t" }<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
: z$ z$ A% R' e  K: l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: a) r' S- c/ X8 g9 M5 e+ [<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; R; P- Q6 ^1 h: Z9 ]<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- @: a+ [3 i, t6 z<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; ^/ }* n( P1 C8 G: p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 x& B  }5 S% S( Y) _3 o" g<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 a9 y' L9 a7 \. K) ^. v<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 k9 L8 p- G* H0 p! c4 x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 R' v5 [3 F! u! q9 |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>