【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- [. ~/ H) j( K4 ?; \* aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: M5 x% h* D- x) b0 {; V; b2 UThe sky is happy down to its soul
) o3 M+ i( k7 a1 V; h2 MWith the moon kissing it every night
- E. q  m, s) N5 oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
6 x" W3 K6 Y, S. D$ Q: HYou needn’t fear anything
* O5 K% f/ q# m( b1 l2 K4 Q3 x3 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; l: V: a+ [! @9 y. _7 J1 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' p1 p' r0 ?- ~+ j/ Y& n$ X" K7 @# `I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 c3 [1 u+ a$ u! n  {6 v. L% d% ~4 pI regret not dying
& }9 W( z* P% g" b, hI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- r  j% g6 k" m) D; W$ b0 n8 R% SWith such a tongue as yours,
$ `. Y; ^, j: a0 ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% v! ?! I: f/ V! S8 v$ K) ]+ ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 ]) K; a3 C( i% V$ g+ W: LRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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, y& `( _; _& _( L/ D* {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ G& l) I. H. w# o4 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
& M! Y/ S6 ~) j$ @7 m' V<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 D( m) F2 Q6 s; f2 A2 ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 y- s5 G0 v) s& b; R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' K& K9 b2 x, D! g9 p# r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 _& j4 m: V3 D( l<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 O. h4 n+ q# r4 `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 ^6 K5 H& F* D8 V<P>你无需担心</P>
* u8 m) N8 ?% s  j<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 T+ Z$ `9 F% b0 W1 B<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" j# x6 Y2 f4 y7 r# w<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, R! i  J1 K& B- A7 ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 ?6 D, H; c- U% Y4 W; s6 C' r' U* ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 V2 E. I; r- v2 v) ~5 x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# A$ w& N) H' _' k# {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, M7 N7 W! }1 P* \0 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
, d% x* t8 R/ `7 Z$ I: U. k8 n' B<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% ~+ u7 n# O3 A& K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( J9 X! e- L5 p8 n( T! R: M6 p<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 M9 o) F* I3 `# S<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- w: _+ ?/ {7 j; ~+ X% w' L2 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. m0 k  r$ v7 \+ z2 j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, N. N. O) q# s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# I- ~/ L7 c0 X' R& }  ~3 @<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" m9 r1 P$ V# [" _5 A% O. N, O<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 Q) S1 @9 ^. h* R# D, y3 M<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% r1 c" u7 K) @0 e. h) A<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 e# F9 Q; f' C  g/ m* u. W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>