【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
; \( @* p6 [6 @! S  j$ ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ X$ ^& [/ m% ~8 h0 I7 YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 y" C' f6 T# M2 P; ?1 U( CThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: S- l" R, f! N9 \4 _Seeing the sky content with its love
. {+ B/ A" r) Q: U8 @It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; \: D8 l$ w3 ^$ C. F8 r3 BYou needn’t fear anything
9 _$ f& u+ s! P- @0 l; q; _! kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* c) a9 h& g$ d: h) [0 K( gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" i" M, v$ z. P  ]; k. yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ i- f& [; N" e8 D; ?I’m still filled with fear
% n0 ~. g; r7 ]8 N5 s$ CYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, K$ a( z7 N' ]7 d) ^4 V4 g  ]  WWith such a tongue as yours,
6 }& L: W% S. W. |$ RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
! R/ O4 }7 P& x5 F9 r: ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
0 u5 ?  k- R, q/ q. D! B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& G5 |6 W2 `& W6 K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! ^0 h& ~- f1 V7 \<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" ?( E  G7 s8 g! }0 n2 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: A( i+ k4 |: W- b/ h! I) {) I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, z3 x4 l' I+ L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; o; f0 A# ^# [7 ~# {5 |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 F' g; e) t! F( D9 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 C/ r' J! M  T9 h7 i9 |<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 H3 }; K; i. H. @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' H7 s3 j0 x: d<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 Y1 p$ A4 s; x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 ?* V& N# Q& |- M. T! j- u<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& X0 H  B0 J) ]2 U. L* G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 _2 h9 }4 o+ ?' y% R2 \  E+ Z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ t. Y& u/ S  {/ v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, ^' Y" M& U' g  t- @/ g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& ]8 G# G, t* b, |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 j( }. p# k4 E7 Q: o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' z9 S7 t8 L$ C  }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 p9 A: P- G8 e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& V! d) y$ ^$ {3 w! t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; G8 o9 k( r* K& T2 q. {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# U* n& U) I) l2 V/ f3 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 X$ Z% k0 h2 G9 V: _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 q& v* S- [4 H3 I8 h<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 J! d+ p" P. m5 m0 r3 |' p+ j3 r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 t/ C5 S, `: c! L! j1 I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ O2 a8 \/ t! G4 B: E" `' b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( [* e& j' J. U5 o% y7 v3 X<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" n7 C% C0 o/ U<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
1 w0 Q0 V: H  n( K4 c. `7 [<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 @0 C; P& b- r3 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ u% P9 @' M: K$ v) Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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! p1 a8 r% j. W( S% f$ [$ g4 K 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>