【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# Y* Y$ M4 w7 e) a: A' P( g) r$ E歌词我附在后面。
, \7 w- {) z) d. U* l# mThe moonlight is shining brightly,
" l6 V) R1 e: FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. v9 s0 N/ n+ h# ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 L0 T- I5 M" a9 GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 [6 `; E" |" J0 g9 TThe sky is happy down to its soul
' @& ?! x% e* p9 L/ a8 q. wWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) ^: Y* w. J, J6 ?6 Z9 X# nIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  j: M7 J2 p& a* r% E4 L7 nYou needn’t fear anything
6 L& N5 u1 m6 A9 FMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 P5 C0 l( b. K' y; n0 [Every other word you utter is love
1 S8 E1 o# g$ DI really want to know just how much you love me
! e: m% g" }% t6 uI love you I love you with all my heart
9 ~6 j  m7 n: A8 n6 ~; o# q: ANothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" T. _9 `& M, g* X+ A5 j7 k# D0 d! c+ LI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 i& Y+ U1 ]+ s' ^1 A1 UI’m still filled with fear
4 D3 P3 c( Y$ H9 n1 t  m! ]+ TYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 D7 {- ]2 g2 a5 kI regret not dying
6 P& l! S, T( ]. B+ H' CI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 w0 B8 w; L1 ^- a8 U6 N1 xRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* Q' P% S8 E7 H/ v* i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% ?$ _- P+ j$ G& N<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; V$ O6 n' V: ]; p, @& a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) f( t" c0 Q& I! j& F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) l( I; D6 Z  {# o. L4 b<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 G1 N, X' i6 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 `2 h& g- {  c! \2 t0 N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% t) H8 p/ v) g6 Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
* F& n8 R* n9 T$ U. _, W( w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& ^( J1 S2 g3 s# ~/ n8 B! Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 P+ k5 u/ c- ^6 n" k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 j  q& Q1 c( Z<P>你无需担心</P>
' V8 i& v7 V" e5 F4 \3 T; d6 B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  h# \& w, Y' V<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 i; j' s& x, G/ F5 W<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( O6 Y  `1 A) M& Z/ H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 s( a# ?) _0 T$ z0 {( s0 b" M<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- A8 I* r: S0 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  b8 p/ n1 `5 E& r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% K1 _0 g3 E2 b/ b+ l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# H0 p+ p0 H6 j" E0 Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
# f5 Z# ]: i; n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
% w' M: c2 t7 }$ B& p8 [' j/ Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ \0 f7 o# L7 e' b" d- N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" J8 I6 e0 s2 c# U$ V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! O' e* `+ W- Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  ^2 C  A5 v2 u* V3 b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
. `+ W# T  f* D9 r1 @' O% y. y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, y8 K. o) [, z& i! x" y$ @2 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>