【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
( H8 G9 h( C+ p$ }# h4 c  NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# [7 ~8 y/ X4 i, aThe sky is happy down to its soul
) Z9 X% {' `% E- _- `With the moon kissing it every night
6 r) @! a9 B2 t4 [( [Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 u) f+ X; \) u( B4 ]Nothing can compare to my love
. l* R* q# I- V1 l: K& c/ I8 LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  {9 m) M4 ^, F; z7 d$ x' O2 sI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
- G; _. z+ c: E" N8 ?  QI’m still filled with fear
* W5 r. B8 ]3 _9 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
3 s! q( D  _1 Z( O  LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
( k) G& p2 {  F/ r# B; qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 M% @' t/ u$ ?, z" |  @) e. u% V<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( c6 v3 `) P: i" }! F) T<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% |! r3 m& v; |3 h7 e+ n) i/ B<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& ]! }* b$ t5 p7 G& v0 F<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) t! \7 ^( ^; z) M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- T& c3 H/ K' @: T6 Z* h<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* W* i& j' p, b' V) E- `3 G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; V1 o4 o  M% M! d. V. e: E<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ y# _0 n' w* N) g  v<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 }- ~3 b# @4 |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
+ D7 `. T4 d1 x& R4 _<P>你无需担心</P>
+ n$ b) {6 A9 ^, \+ |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 n# T" f/ D$ Z/ ^- u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( e2 r; y9 m  b# G1 z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 |  c% R, C# {# p- d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 I- G+ r7 o/ x# w: O  X, @<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; l: L1 U( ?' q, T<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ C# j& u0 }& b1 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 \' C! D3 u6 B0 ~1 N* a  K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 G7 e* a% `' N# L1 p5 W) n0 V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& ?: Y  U/ n) k4 x3 `3 A1 e3 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  S7 J! s, o) k- g  c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ S/ r5 h+ \- ^' O, f<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) L+ X9 ^/ t2 Q3 ]9 ^$ e$ V6 _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
: C' U9 v8 |* O; f0 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, b" g& }0 ?# U2 x  A8 {<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# e4 ]2 _9 |1 Q- b  Y+ o0 S1 Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# H& u* C4 C2 I<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>