【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 p" C% |2 T4 U+ d( P' _, r歌词我附在后面。
3 X& v+ d- H2 u# G" T% A% kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# @8 H. q2 B: o" G$ Z5 SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
: M% o$ F- e8 D6 w2 @' `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* m: Q  l; i( |/ P( wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
. J& @3 }) \' u& l+ i- PSeeing the sky content with its love
4 Q* d# |- s) PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 \6 E3 C! o3 X+ j' S; EYou needn’t fear anything
. i1 G2 ?% x% u# d0 v. t! N: `9 BMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% s/ m* \' ]: j$ R- ~Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
/ `5 G3 F; Q1 T- W. C' _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% x0 A: F. H; Z( x% t9 OI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
4 F7 @% R, z( @' g2 o  y  q" |I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
* A0 e  K4 `; w0 N6 ?2 |$ tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" V; E, c# R: S# HWith such a tongue as yours,
8 i5 O* y) q# g: f, XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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; @, W- z) O) W, W" I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" i5 M5 _' T& d4 @9 U4 Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 Z+ R  Y5 v/ }; V<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
4 i/ ^3 }1 e) S, g$ s# c+ ]- ]<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. W( j1 E2 w: p* }  u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 V/ {9 M/ i3 ?  H* f<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. E# Q! R' {+ @) F* o$ b2 q) n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) X" o; \. g. s5 b' S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' c1 m$ ~7 B+ e5 I( a/ w! l/ q( k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ U  I( B) W) p5 J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 C  O! h6 s  E2 O* a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- L/ v4 b" l; Y% ^  @<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 I* D5 H, g9 e$ q9 `* |/ K# L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 o/ V* F0 Q3 c4 B" r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 `0 s! c% ]% p5 s8 E3 K<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& q1 A+ [- S  x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 B- K: V0 B/ D: O<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; o8 G3 z4 W) U' v+ Y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 D# @6 V0 j9 w, h+ [& V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 K( t! f5 s% p7 t! n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 v4 a) C9 |7 \9 u; S/ ^7 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& R! n- i( H( y. ~( n8 W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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; M  F8 A: z) O- D1 ]$ }# I: Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>