【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
4 r* B3 U# M" b& R* \* X! VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. P. m* B7 g# |# ~/ `/ h  UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 |( O2 d/ {' z- o- eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 Q8 C/ U- ?. RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' g1 e$ y% R0 Q: P1 z& U) VYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- A+ Q7 Y  ]) y5 lI really want to know just how much you love me
9 N# r  N( _- ?6 V2 H+ e! C( n9 j2 ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
5 o7 X6 T- v' W; G$ c" PCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
" Y  Z3 h' m! d9 m2 m! J+ ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 e% F8 M, S  G% N" jWith such a tongue as yours,
( P" Z" K) E* dYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 I: S$ m' d( z/ V1 }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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3 d0 Q! l+ j& g+ T<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. e2 C+ @  n# U+ L6 |0 y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 e3 b2 m6 W3 p$ S) n6 ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) Y& ]" {1 X8 _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 |- h; V, ?! _" P( M7 L7 u<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- G- `5 R7 F/ h! \( n% _5 W0 |) A2 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 l5 j7 O8 ^6 o# Z4 c/ ~! W% w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ ?; }1 T! X* I8 x% N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
" A2 w  s$ C3 X+ c, O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
( L! V0 ~) ^0 v7 O' T% m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 t" M- w) n4 p3 U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 {( ^1 o9 S/ Z, i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' j1 {7 W( N9 o: D2 l; t$ h+ I<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. y( O- H8 U7 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, t5 M: O2 q4 r0 W9 c<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ i. r& {! W' J% K4 c1 C<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' W8 f; |$ `) W+ w<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 Y1 e3 E: ^( K+ P# \& i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 V2 }! I3 n2 I$ K<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! K; |$ s1 V. W4 |<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ R4 _- M, p  {5 G8 b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( H* p4 e1 E) R$ N, A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ w% j. u- E8 m& P6 K4 e5 s3 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 X7 Y: H2 C" U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
# \3 v' }9 O0 P4 y! J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: F* a8 }6 J# j8 M  H1 a) u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* F7 i( e2 b1 x我请你剖开它
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) Q8 r8 E8 Q! ?# U; X4 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>