【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 c6 G8 W- L. b" FMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
, m9 i6 r$ s3 v: X* O9 XThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- c( J+ r2 |) |0 ~$ n# F4 F* u$ gThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 D% Y* }/ M/ h" W& L2 q1 V. uWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 i0 I9 T% |0 \8 aIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 j  F% P+ W% h4 f% h/ gYou needn’t fear anything
- h6 t2 _+ h2 x* i( xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 [2 C2 r. d8 n+ |& JI love you I love you with all my heart
( I8 W2 W7 \' }6 x! V- M2 PNothing can compare to my love
7 M; l- Q) J+ f# ]4 aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 x2 _" Y0 N0 s) \7 ]7 ]( l9 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 D3 H+ q/ H0 gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 N" D; m2 I* I% D. B6 zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; k% a0 a" R, s& l+ l" _$ bRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. D) @1 b. F- W$ s0 E2 j6 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 K8 S% Y$ _4 q/ m& ~; s3 e<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! |# U) W9 w$ H. E% {5 T* W$ m! k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' i( f3 P3 {. _+ n- m( L6 z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 g- _. T/ H/ o# p$ H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 T' N2 X1 v  ]5 q, L) |4 q3 I" V; b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 A: `3 R3 W6 ~$ Y/ n" F2 B( x2 j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 K& l8 [- ?. b, P) w<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" T1 {) [; o) ?- C<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* r; Q: n% g. p" X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 K  D) u3 G. C8 J) t4 p7 b0 o<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- S* f! x( b% c0 U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& \: u, }: F- Q& D. H: U7 t" H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 }& B( C/ F5 d/ t9 @2 d8 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ s3 e, D; ]: Z8 W; m- g6 N/ k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ Q. m: L! ?/ t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- {  @7 z0 E9 j, \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% Y- o* e" B2 n" Y6 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 E# ]  w# \/ _5 H<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: J: O6 K: n# g$ s) h$ j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
  ~  a& F+ g0 \& l7 f& Y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- y5 d  K) `/ \/ O8 G: j$ S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 G8 X9 S  S7 H/ M" U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 w# f, y1 d* ~+ Q  F9 N<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( Q$ O, `. w1 e8 \( j0 {<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
6 M9 K5 L' _# i8 f0 ~  z* A' L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 n; }/ c8 z$ I4 t# A% ]! _<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
6 c  }9 k. M4 `" \. u9 `4 I) B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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% e9 R2 R( H  O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>