【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 G, j; a9 m4 m歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! {2 S8 m3 C* N- I( JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 u' b/ x, [0 r$ p7 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ d: ]0 ?( R+ MThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# e  d$ x1 `/ u5 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
9 ]$ h, k* _. K" u$ xWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& {' E1 y5 }+ c! L0 \2 PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 F; }9 A8 u7 z" ^6 REvery other word you utter is love
6 m+ d7 X4 d/ J. a4 G/ xI really want to know just how much you love me
7 A! m6 @7 C8 c8 O: `! B! AI love you I love you with all my heart
$ s) \: S+ w/ q6 l2 S7 f6 Y- m4 [- ENothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 @5 `7 I0 M8 FI want so much to see inside your heart
0 s( E; D) ]8 I. t" K( z% n4 j9 S0 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ P' U" b3 o$ j, KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* C3 q# {* B" L# Z1 QI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( p7 c  o  N  V: a+ Y) q4 x! M7 }2 B<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& p: q2 S: C  j; K, \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 f( }$ i" x0 K0 c<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: o7 e  C: H7 A# A3 N( P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) }+ }7 T0 Y& l0 h4 q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' j7 j( f5 E3 v7 A; M* _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) j! J( f, B& T) L# m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 Z& Q  B5 n3 x6 K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
4 h! d9 k& s8 f; L8 j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, j* j. H6 A4 n; a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 V& I+ Y9 i) }1 r, d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 Z& k& Q, i, o! f. f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, b6 L/ s% R- K9 {/ l. w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! ^. W+ p: q& C' M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 \3 y0 Y( f% o( B4 h8 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! E7 Z; _% x  _( l1 `6 K# H; g: X<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 M0 ^% ?3 Q4 v: `, O$ i/ ^. W<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- E) x- p6 Y# X/ i1 F<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  D, g- e$ v3 J" _4 C" y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 g, B! ~. {# t' H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. `( w( {8 M. W. B2 W+ E* J: K/ ~  J<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: r% O- d9 I) i) f# j<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- w7 e/ c' e( e" b4 _& ]. z0 p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, v  Y) A: u* n' D" ]" E<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ J! n& F2 A$ C* u) b4 C" p<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! H" Q  Q9 a: o6 W- a<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ v8 b8 m5 r5 x5 i<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% {) J+ x& x! `3 b) M( N$ F<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& m. g9 X# I% S<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 z9 v, U/ a' ?0 f& k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; V) U9 }" X" P' h* Q6 f$ F<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
0 ]7 n1 q8 g( Z4 ~+ o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 w2 m- n% {& N* [8 ?  s6 W8 l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 G" z/ y& c) A6 k3 I<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 K2 j) ^7 W; r3 ?<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* `. d' ?" {# Q, ?& g/ p  U( f<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 ?8 i* g1 h  [* f, }5 C! y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 L1 G3 _) H0 A' q1 A/ f' u<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
9 I2 _! U3 |4 ?, d! ?+ e$ C3 |<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>