【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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/ j3 I) z9 w# D* Q- j* z) x歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
) {3 v+ V! E7 K' L8 y" N! }9 {Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 q7 }* D5 ~4 U7 s% u' p. d6 rWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! I2 s5 y8 j: v! N' s/ DThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
* D; b/ s; {" T( x2 g$ {: y7 N* ^6 K& zSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
4 [- v6 B$ H- ]2 n) D% c5 zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ m$ ]& c4 d5 N2 uEvery other word you utter is love
2 @7 V3 y+ r: \, P" \, m2 S. qI really want to know just how much you love me
1 z# Y, ?8 a3 K" @6 T; R  x& X3 {I love you I love you with all my heart
& J3 \: f, I/ B8 W4 KNothing can compare to my love
' m# f# G, E& F! u( \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# y+ o# Y! t% b+ K/ SI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; R7 [8 e; \& V- vI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& j9 e8 u& h+ l$ O+ ?1 iI regret not dying
6 S/ d+ N7 p8 q/ pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
( @1 X& g* O; c1 T5 PWith such a tongue as yours,
2 Y; E* u* M+ V$ z" @Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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7 V  S4 e  Q7 i6 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
2 S) k2 O3 }1 ~3 L2 f' j* Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* ^% D% Y$ }& d7 l+ |- C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
" Q6 r' m* |, ^: Z: L0 o5 @. w0 a<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ n4 N/ L8 t, S" r) K& o<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- n5 g4 r0 ~( g0 U* z, @; G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 N/ b. @$ o. ^) S+ D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, I  G. X, X1 d+ I/ T5 \<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ i# j. o* E: J: G<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 k7 G! ?2 e- i- ^& q5 p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 I- u6 x, j6 ?3 p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 }$ j( C/ t! \# `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 b8 N/ J) O$ v* @0 B' A<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 W: u$ ?& ^7 I' u  z' d8 I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ g0 Y0 N6 ?8 k7 ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 ?7 w+ v! ~- C4 B3 n  ^$ r<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# y- Z3 v4 H$ _  S; L3 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 H. L/ D; u7 \3 E) H' {2 t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( t% d& R% z8 E' F; U% v# b9 I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 h+ f+ c+ o* p+ y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ `2 u' H+ c  t5 A  h( x* x<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- I, t" d" _+ T$ k<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 j' A$ ?9 t: w2 n: T9 y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 N) M3 `, o  U$ M# f) m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 Y) K4 ?& S. }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! _& o1 Y- u5 b7 S! q0 W3 h<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 ]% b3 T' y! G4 ]  \. ~<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" G3 V4 X+ E9 `( L& |- ^<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  g4 e( R( K! ?5 s0 I4 f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

3 I8 S; W: G3 A3 K% ?$ ?: H 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>