【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ A$ B/ Q4 ?" ~When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  p' }( k$ d: o& B4 Y# m/ C; J; xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# K4 \, e; `! ^5 n. @: G8 DSeeing the sky content with its love
0 a% k3 n- i8 [9 m  s2 Y8 ?! QIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  i" t" K6 l! [; U. c- r& a& Q' k5 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 M* [6 v8 t! o4 F4 cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" q8 J4 r' |- d" V) YI love you I love you with all my heart
! V. W7 }! f1 }( P9 ~" M2 [" VNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' P  A9 a& I( j* Q5 {! m0 {. xThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' z, M( n+ H# H  N7 s0 [I want so much to see inside your heart
' o; u& x9 @; F/ R1 e! y0 U( JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 O. r0 W' n9 PI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. v8 k/ K- |- L3 D<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& n1 ]4 m8 W+ J  Z5 a: A7 g  E+ Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 r& {/ Q& m2 v<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 _3 Q5 V7 i& }1 R, N: B3 v, u, h<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
$ V1 m$ t% r) u6 F<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 \$ J7 j& K- o  z  p<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
9 ~' O  `9 E6 Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  S: v9 f8 E! W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 Y$ w% j; [: x. E! q( Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ m7 H4 L2 T- p, S<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) O' v  E5 L3 U( s<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 B% M) G* m( Y+ @/ z4 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 k) \! a* y: h5 M1 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  I% l% ?0 v( H7 ~5 i6 B& m5 N<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% m  Z) [* X2 q" z7 @. D- b<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, e& j$ h3 L- x* w7 j6 x/ K8 X<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! Z! d; {( Z6 p<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; {0 _* z1 D. U<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, e& P- l3 w- C: E6 ~( O6 X3 e, M0 B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( _) h4 H) N9 L* s. B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! R0 s; z* t! g( G# _) Y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) |) }" _1 i% G( W<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 x4 s7 N3 H1 F# |: Y, N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ `1 H7 j7 P6 n9 v& s& v9 z1 b<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
7 v% b, B- V0 e( l5 M1 U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( r) W- Y& J# V( }; ?6 Q: D<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 ]& t' _4 |" \5 a* i6 \$ [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 x! O2 O1 n( b2 L4 d<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: a* b9 h& Z& N3 c5 F<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>