【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
, P0 p0 C0 J% {The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 U1 H/ u5 w& Z  ~) P+ b* j% QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 [; ^% x$ e$ d3 |( Y& @0 HWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 Z; n5 i3 j9 X6 u/ n* eThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* w7 K$ p6 k. j* J0 ?The sky is happy down to its soul
0 _# z$ N3 n$ @/ M8 wWith the moon kissing it every night
. c% n3 e; A; K1 cSeeing the sky content with its love
6 ?* P6 s$ F7 q3 d8 D7 VIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
1 Q. v8 P: _2 R1 eYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. n6 h) Q/ W& W; ~. r0 o1 ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 L8 ^" k' a0 b* R. g4 cI love you I love you with all my heart
  I- N- l+ m  l- c# b9 G; `" o9 t' aNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' X4 O, K- F5 G: II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
3 R5 |8 n$ a  o5 e9 ~Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
5 z( y) x3 B2 L! bI regret not dying
0 D3 b9 B+ o9 {) K- H1 c, ?# WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# ^# y; ^, [1 B) i9 {: G7 n6 VWith such a tongue as yours,
7 [: [6 ^5 E/ e& L0 qYour speech can’t even keep up with it
8 F! X0 J' t# r1 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ H# d( y% Z' H! D) C<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& X+ k2 \0 H% u% _' {! T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: I1 T8 D$ h+ i: @0 `+ K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) q+ ^4 r4 z7 n$ ?- j! `<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ c: W# Y7 W* L<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. B6 W0 w: u9 w+ M" R1 k& P<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 A& [2 A9 r) T( f8 K1 K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- @, L2 Q7 P  H. O% Q<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: |# X+ N  t/ g% i2 `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: I" N  u/ G- v5 S% v. c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 |( ~8 e9 E. N/ D<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  y: n" v, \1 P/ [# Q9 z2 g8 n5 n  d<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ Q& [  C; \& {! g$ p: j/ F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) _, I& d" A9 X, d; S4 o6 [3 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' t1 Z2 D7 y5 r- w2 f<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# ?/ B2 w1 E$ C1 `+ S: V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. }6 z3 i$ {  H: d2 Z( T" G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  K+ b, S" @! q! i: B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# S" d. j2 [- S; v( B2 F<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% {* J9 x. K& D8 P; R$ ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ g, y! r) ?$ f, s0 _% H" ]. u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 S! O) X+ ^/ [/ z9 D: R) h9 {<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ }3 K2 f9 ?0 Q) \2 n- h( P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# e& F2 |9 W* \( Y4 L<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 R; g$ J$ y) F! T4 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ j% b2 B9 Y) t% e. p<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 {: t& F' h$ o9 T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 `6 \( B3 A) E5 f2 Q( u4 y( Q2 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
- g) x4 ~* V9 ]. p7 n0 w5 d<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# V% }( k# D! s3 d: O我请你剖开它
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( O6 U: v3 D$ p3 |4 ]; e- z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( \( N; q. V4 g1 p# J. H3 s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>