【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 \  J# R/ H0 `+ NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 t' _3 [2 v& P4 N  |  hThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 P# y& g7 i" m8 F) v: jIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# J3 _. m1 |2 o) c$ b, O: M6 a6 s' MYou needn’t fear anything
. R& C" V; W& g: kMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* ~, K, x) h" ]* ^& h  D8 ^- HEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ ^- Q& N. o9 w! r( l' u) ?! a" PThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 p: D! Y4 i) M6 MI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) s* {# C9 ]9 JI’m still filled with fear
4 C! [$ }+ C  g. G. t5 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
5 H& A9 ?  j* q: gI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 H- f* M9 N% T( k: WWith such a tongue as yours,
# S6 @8 ?$ ^* MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 L: W" k1 l( f) G& T, pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- L2 o: h2 k( {" cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

* f7 X; k! E9 ?4 k) c) G/ }8 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 v/ K$ x. H3 l& n2 O<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" U  a" c6 s# D2 {' h6 C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 V& Z, d5 W. X" W: s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& L% i5 A) I; G. q) V; V" v<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 D# g" {' E+ q- J<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* G, Q0 |- Q2 O1 o/ ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 R$ G0 `5 Z8 \  }4 x5 r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, R' p5 V! s; T8 c+ u, R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ L- [: F2 y8 c<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  s* F  c. F' ]% W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 R$ X7 b' _5 f) N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  i5 Z2 w4 d* G* O<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
' D! o7 k( U( w- I( g+ l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
" Z; C+ p  c8 |  J8 Y# Y) x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 g# r) Z! y8 c% ^& m3 b2 M; R3 f: M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
; i! B0 L5 J9 l+ |$ n<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: V! S" h6 @6 [. l+ Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) i0 W1 R  [  k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: J$ A" V  u. l& f2 }! w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( N  F! j5 x5 x+ {. ~. h- ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" U1 O. T# |0 p! }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 j7 x) Q% A  r3 H0 l! [* Z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ C& t9 V) J* K% R2 e+ l<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 ^4 J& Z% M' k" k9 V7 H' q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  T3 |' N% \$ R5 }& d1 L8 Q% z0 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 [/ a7 q& x8 N9 `  y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
, C3 D. t3 z6 w<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 a  M3 n4 F0 K, G& Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% P9 y; B. n+ n! t<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
" ]$ _# R: T& k6 `* Y- B( |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
  i8 l, [! U$ o$ A8 w6 d" u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 X( M- a: H7 r/ J1 K  G9 z6 V<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& U1 R  r3 U' r* U1 F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* {8 i5 c8 E. |1 V! _我请你剖开它

  G% [5 q+ r% I+ J3 Z& T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 ]9 ^5 g. ]! C/ d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>