【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ A: p7 h3 ~4 d5 h& f; BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 R. `* D* H4 g9 F2 c/ LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
# A2 z: {: V/ G5 _9 J: CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) P" a$ W/ V  \7 }The sky is happy down to its soul
% @9 Y, I) M5 ^6 I8 c* c8 B/ |With the moon kissing it every night
/ h7 Q$ C7 R9 zSeeing the sky content with its love
) x* V8 z/ K& G$ s9 qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ {  x0 u" P8 I9 z$ q. y2 W' jI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 ]* x7 @$ ?7 |9 X7 l6 HNothing can compare to my love
7 T, q. h  ?) o9 t) D5 b) u  nCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 S5 x+ E  y/ T( x0 c# JThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
5 `5 h# a6 I. [# X: VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. Z2 }4 e) c4 j& n2 {) O- {Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
6 S3 D) {& c0 q: m  VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
' V$ X* F" ^* h9 z  f* X9 IIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. V, m' S0 R! G3 U<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( ~9 s4 P& h& |6 w  h<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 ^& W: _6 i3 f2 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! w- h8 [8 ?/ ~1 E1 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% F) V# O# A1 k0 O0 M  w. P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& M9 i. |) B: _$ ?# {1 i<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) k6 j3 ?5 L$ `1 I0 F, B) _; o/ G* Q<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 z+ y2 Y8 `9 |3 I4 ^# B  G<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
, q- p" `! P+ R6 }1 I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! s; q1 r8 T& i! Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. E8 w1 m8 b& S$ c+ P4 J<P>你无需担心</P>
6 Y" @* w4 r0 ?) l) E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
8 M/ P  w: K3 _  k1 I! f6 w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ Y1 `3 M* D5 A; q) D; a<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* j$ X2 ]" N5 w/ I. C. p<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) Q$ M1 {; r' h5 G* [0 m<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! d1 y4 y. o; Q9 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- Z  P' h/ ]2 {: t  f  m0 S2 o# h<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# d3 |! T3 W+ s1 m0 ~& h6 J" t<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 K0 m% F4 W# j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# J  `; _. a; i% ~, c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
4 E: o# m% n& u% \5 o! p7 z<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: E+ Z& u3 Y: h6 w% M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" C/ ?# D+ q+ P8 m8 j7 o  e8 ~<P>I regret not dying</P>
* S7 S7 f- ~' N* _# D<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* g% Y( G3 ^; B4 L- x8 G- e; v<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 V! ^- m& m9 P' _, E' B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
- Q# L8 d5 N+ ?" r4 M6 P7 f! u6 ?' ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 a+ N/ s4 y1 a) x2 ]* o  @. @<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ z4 y( x/ v5 M% e: @( ]( t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 X) d: I3 E& U) P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
( I, y# N) s! `: w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  r1 o1 d  J' }1 W: y$ C/ V+ N5 U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>