【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
7 v4 Y# r7 \8 p+ O2 lThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! m- M, }0 d" e% `2 P* yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 Z# m" G# e: DThe sky is happy down to its soul
2 q4 d9 ~2 A# B7 ?. jWith the moon kissing it every night
/ F# d1 M* `% r& S! ^Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. ?' I1 U* p7 {  |& ~3 ?8 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' p$ e# C  \" ]Every other word you utter is love
2 x( F% i9 h: u: O+ m$ ?' c, j0 TI really want to know just how much you love me
  e. h5 ^8 x. e9 @7 w' Z( TI love you I love you with all my heart
7 q/ b0 m% [7 p- u% ^Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 e2 D: C& a  r" d( FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. u3 j& y4 ^% J% e4 g# tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* N# T' r8 S1 }, mI regret not dying
! J8 k5 c1 f/ e; h) b( {! ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
5 y2 m; r: D0 e' t" V- u5 r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
) o& P) X/ C7 E5 k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! X/ G' y; L/ y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 Z4 ~# ?. L: a2 P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 p3 ^3 @* g+ G( S7 z<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) O0 e! j% a  @1 J( a2 k0 ?4 F* K  ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, X' w( v9 w2 Z0 s. c) S, f<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ v4 d5 }, y6 v0 p; b/ Z  ^7 |<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
( s8 J; c! q7 x3 l<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% f6 k. ~; P3 E$ o+ t+ p<P>你无需担心</P>
$ {" C% U, H) L( q7 n0 t9 G<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 ?. y* F1 t' u. N<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 a& `9 ^2 Q5 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ w. [: m! |" v" ]! T) G: B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& T& F$ P1 Q" E# s- O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( `+ V# Z' A7 a. u. q8 D  A) l, e" m* k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  ]; J3 X* d: D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 ]/ B3 ^* Z+ n) F/ K<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ V! `6 A+ f! ]. R) B<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 P4 @4 W/ C6 D# G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 N: a( A) g9 \: r6 ?* q/ d4 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) g. E5 B1 j& w3 m7 H+ z6 [1 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! S8 Q: e# ?% T% S, ~: ]/ U) L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 e; p+ E3 \( b' r' A0 z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 a' p' j0 K2 u* v3 ]7 M* v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 x% f. J  ]6 ]<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( X$ U+ ^5 i" U/ R6 K7 F<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ P6 I( ?2 N, g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  Q: S5 n: z. L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 X. V9 y( q" W& I" ?/ `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' w' j% f! M  C2 I+ _" c8 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: b, F' M! |$ ~* g0 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: M4 b' c/ C/ \: k& U+ m# {- {! D9 y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>