【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  `' r/ g; H  |- c  p: WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. c8 J  g7 \& G- z( A# O4 VMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 D$ }; [1 f2 ~( bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: n) [* y! b  P6 m& ]+ R& aThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 _9 O' r1 X/ x) p- RIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& Y  R; B$ t- l4 CYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 m3 ?" h" S: z" k6 d; ^" y6 SEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: z  ~0 R% J! v; S& o- @, A5 bNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 N3 L* ~% m7 V4 ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* L8 v# I' n8 E. F; OI’m still filled with fear
) h, H" F+ |3 v  b2 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
2 ]& e$ Q7 T6 V( x( HI regret not dying
- i8 H  u8 x0 t8 Z; x/ f9 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' k+ J/ g1 b1 ~, @( Z; XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( h  q. C0 k) j# j4 AIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 G6 L/ A: `* \" ^6 m% `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# R5 t2 M# W0 l- }5 p0 Z/ f' E1 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; I  @/ p3 }4 ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
8 C; b: L/ v+ `/ Q7 C+ B3 |<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. n% R8 m0 {* [( _6 H) g6 ~* D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
* K/ z7 g7 m. J<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ [( Z  t" n. z  C, Z<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& C! F. q* o2 w- O<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& f7 s8 p& e0 J+ O; l<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% F$ Z) E! r9 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; J# S4 R! }' p  u" {<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% z  T' k/ x  ~+ t* ]2 `' ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( \5 s& u0 j; r9 |" q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
! f4 {8 V* z$ s5 q+ o( M+ [, \" l<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
, R# p1 l: z2 i5 O1 ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: z  l$ |! M$ b% d5 |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 l' s5 \2 U1 X7 h- t4 B. r9 G<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 @/ s6 p- T& \5 g+ V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 v5 z7 y+ M' r8 y* P<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 l5 Q6 O" s- m  M( d* R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 t- T: Z, F- S* @  F3 ?% V<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' c9 {& `2 W5 Y/ N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ E8 C$ |3 f0 U$ r0 _/ n* o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; k8 J' w# n9 I. `, s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 I- r% W! A6 {# R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ z$ r% D) h7 ~- B) i2 ]' U+ c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

) ^7 D& j0 W7 N0 D我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; H' A9 A2 q6 d6 T9 i<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>