【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& P& e/ H8 C4 ~* w1 [The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
, t7 a2 O) M5 q" m; E0 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& `9 J3 @" X& F- E; T" rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: K* V6 i4 Y# Y7 F6 X( \3 x' OSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! _. V. E6 j/ k; e( d, L$ z/ IEvery other word you utter is love
6 z6 l3 r6 M2 a+ TI really want to know just how much you love me
' P, V  I9 }2 t5 e3 @I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 m6 k9 K5 T8 E! }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ `2 `8 }4 K' y0 \' K2 qI want so much to see inside your heart
1 ]3 N  r; E8 v* }$ i  U. kI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
& E* ^$ ?) Z7 Z( }! h( LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! i+ s, Z/ E, iWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ z; R7 [, H( H) Z7 x6 @8 @8 z% PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& ]3 h1 y! w; N/ Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
" O5 }1 m- _: }6 \8 f! `2 B# _4 K<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; Y" f0 H' F! E) x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 s" L& G$ \& E) p% t8 ?<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 X% s( E6 c& e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ n7 q9 s) Q. x<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! S# o$ ~4 L& S9 b4 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% H  g4 q3 g0 k  d" Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
- ]( {- ~3 W1 |0 o* k) F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 G% n! g2 N) p& \* R& K<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! [: B& D. v7 J! x+ y- q4 }% \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( ~+ H% V, o7 G  i# Y  s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
) m+ I" B" K. i# ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% T+ q+ L# S. |( ~1 `<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) z0 \! ^: N& g( B5 e<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 A) n/ E. [8 @* g" Y1 P<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
0 F6 t& C6 L) I( k  Y" _) H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 t  s% F- K' W3 m' `% \<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, a4 W1 n' T0 P! j4 a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" _$ E+ S  w5 u6 O6 Z. V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( n6 W( a) E: A& Y9 k* C& P" Z<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 u( Y6 i6 P+ {3 y" u. p/ U1 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

& g6 D! [( L: f: c# ^我请你剖开它

# x) A4 t: N! k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 n5 \0 j( V/ u& q( h3 H<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>