【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 U8 l( [! d: H2 Z0 ?3 C! @) ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 A2 `; n% n3 h; X8 d4 S. RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 f) P$ H+ F% ^4 lThe sky is happy down to its soul
, Z- Q4 t9 {7 r& ?, u! EWith the moon kissing it every night
" I2 o7 z: i; {/ T2 \! BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' x8 p# f, e4 x1 dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ c* m& F4 @# u. C3 |' B! ]4 wI really want to know just how much you love me
9 k3 Z( z' s" j4 o! RI love you I love you with all my heart
# b; p( u' Y9 d- G6 H( w3 rNothing can compare to my love
) T5 N* l' w  e6 L/ |$ c% zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  N" p' l2 W+ S. u7 T) E; `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ D5 q' R, ^' i' V5 Z' XI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ r  S* D. x- R4 g% iI regret not dying
( A% p8 y& c% k' z: [+ O6 T# @I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& e1 r  ^2 t6 O2 B. ~/ s' FWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, C" R: v1 I) oIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) B# {8 S" V- ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 m: C& W6 l- k& U8 a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 H7 n, u+ A$ B' c. r<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 q. ^6 B9 k" o0 P3 I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! O  Q+ v" F# q6 o. {  s% a+ ~% }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 a' @. r: B" z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
/ K8 [, s- N  X# a8 L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: b1 J; W/ Y# {9 U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 M6 h5 G1 C4 {0 d' Q% N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- k7 G( Y3 m5 X1 |* ?<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! c  O8 ]. Z  ?5 s- T) N2 |4 Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 s1 s8 ^$ g+ f& J<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. w) z: H4 u, X* S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 z' A9 L6 `) G! R$ j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. S2 J0 `# Z9 c6 m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 w5 J6 Q4 I" Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
  b. ?: A# C5 e" [: _7 k/ @; n! w2 J/ F: v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 i; l: m3 A1 H3 _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
" c( W) i3 p: Y# \8 l% b3 ?<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 y7 V: ^, }* r( ?3 X<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. ^& Y4 S3 Q9 O) U) Z+ |<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
8 e8 f5 Q" y+ _: }! P! V<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 m+ e1 V# v: Z( B0 ~2 m3 t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
: R; a4 T, M# P( {% Y; e) A<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! g2 \! t- K8 Q4 N( }9 N% A<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ X" Y* Y' ~2 h' k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 g# B$ U! p; H2 \; e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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, ?2 v1 p8 l" N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; {5 ?, X+ H: ^* ?0 \% f- m" \% o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>