【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
* m  C+ ]& F9 `( i# [7 Q7 JThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 }# Q9 ]6 e: f: |; ?+ u1 D# MMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: R$ e( W1 V5 |; ~! Y4 X8 x/ fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ E; f# {+ Z; k0 o* ?4 o% B9 tWith the moon kissing it every night
1 j$ D: Q! Y9 r6 [$ Z5 jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
4 c% j( M5 V2 I" {8 k, ~( eYou needn’t fear anything
+ B4 n: k+ m9 K5 n8 k1 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
4 Q( S) ~" L) @+ tI love you I love you with all my heart
! `' Y, R% k; J' i: O6 r+ _Nothing can compare to my love
4 H* l7 Q- d  W0 eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! z3 C0 |, m- X$ g  R5 t6 N: E7 qI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! Z1 m5 [% i3 U+ v5 K+ m  cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ q. J# V% f, @! n5 K3 II regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
# G+ q$ x' r, V% o# ^5 O2 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
% S) H2 J  V5 ^8 b# V! ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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4 @$ n& j. k4 R9 M2 ?# _$ M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  M7 A2 @9 S" N; z: t5 r. o0 g<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 U/ q% l) S8 s0 G: o1 D" b( z' u3 h$ v<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 v: F8 `. C3 r/ ?$ @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 f6 g2 y. ?. a, X3 C; d0 ?) t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ q- {; y: q% d1 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 M3 Y+ t( w. \/ M* V' G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; q' e; Q) i* @7 Z! `9 J<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% o4 b6 V- N( V# s& ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
! ?: H  a; m# F9 y5 e: L0 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
! J' ^5 a6 u$ S: C, c, Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( }' G, M. f( `9 J* I+ H" S<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ J% |, w" u( v, N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, @4 x* ~# r, i: n- P( ]<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
/ ]( f$ x: R9 `9 ^$ C<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# q/ M# e2 Q2 P7 D( B+ V% V; D# n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 E' Z, y6 d3 r: H( {5 B<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) j, J0 _7 @4 |4 `1 R; x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# q# G- X; l, @- C* G<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* g" D. Q( `+ N+ X7 G0 P% Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' O) z# u0 ?2 z  z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 D! Q, f3 X) w5 ]. d$ s: u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
* M7 y) k7 c1 E* q. O" H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* ?. g% Q! }8 j/ f& n<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 S: h, x! c1 [- [3 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* d& A* \* q0 n5 }# J' q! b<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ a4 x& k- h  L1 f0 _" r, W, u5 N<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! x& z( W2 H) t0 O  c3 g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" G( J: g/ \3 a7 S! S1 x& x<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* d8 r7 B" S. K8 }2 Q+ G8 l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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- W' Q6 ]. Z% N1 G$ j4 a+ |& L8 J 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 r( M) e8 }( x0 \9 _4 P" c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>