【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* u1 {9 p& h8 w* P' t: u歌词我附在后面。
2 \& `8 Y( Y( n8 P: jThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. K- T4 t' G6 d: T6 ]1 S1 AThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 I# y$ q# S' s2 j) j7 eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
/ a! t3 s  C5 C. q8 N/ g1 I6 ]I really want to know just how much you love me
3 Y% H% n5 i! V2 k; \/ j) gI love you I love you with all my heart
+ n$ W; L1 K( dNothing can compare to my love
2 U! x3 F5 L* `6 q2 Z( O( W( L/ ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" T% C. A/ N2 J5 eThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 ^+ g1 M' O% V( V2 PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; g* V1 f3 O0 i( u- W) @$ fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

! Z  z/ t' S8 j8 z1 Y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 S7 M( f# Y8 o4 [$ c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( s, B: F2 Z% U2 r<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 ~5 H( Y, a8 R! m. B" ^% J7 N- Y& J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 J& e' z  Y0 `; _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 q9 {. T0 R: f! `( ?  {) A0 C<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! C# d) K6 U, k4 K  h# B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ t" j" S) t0 d+ b( i! M& Z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* a$ Q9 q# e# a$ Z( a& R<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 l9 V1 N9 U9 M# |! l# I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 d+ B. J) n" @3 T- x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 p" R6 n* Q# ]: S+ o<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
7 b, Z$ h! m  H4 ~- _; K) d<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' J" P" Y7 s; ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 O0 B6 d0 R; P) w0 |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( ]5 x% N7 l% ~9 s  H& ~; g% P/ w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
+ H  a9 n5 n2 `9 y5 u. M2 r/ q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 m' C. j, Y( o# x<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
' n. b3 [+ x( N8 N<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ z3 g- {% E: c9 C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' c& m) p* Q8 q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  O3 T3 n$ C2 |" A/ c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' T0 i% u+ I" P5 ~6 ~% _1 v9 P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- p$ q/ e' Z/ H" S3 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: T+ v( |3 i" U# K2 `8 w1 J+ c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: T3 N- ^$ V5 g" x: ~, {% G: s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 l/ h1 M/ V& F) a) L1 r<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ C  `2 p  f) H4 ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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8 @/ ]+ t: F  G, I8 f) T) I- {; i我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 W+ b' |4 s0 X7 }5 r5 \<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>