【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ A6 s  R. L7 R: DThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 A' v4 u, p- o! {$ v, Y' X' H/ qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) q3 u$ [: f6 T8 D; i) c. @# x, fThe sky is happy down to its soul
* c+ l, Z8 }% T) |! _* o, IWith the moon kissing it every night
9 z! O5 g. S& @$ B  j  ASeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* T: B0 c- C' t; T2 \( P/ ~, P& vI really want to know just how much you love me
; g' f5 g, N( UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ t( L$ I# S# aI want so much to see inside your heart
( [! @- M6 J% @, ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 Q4 }) m) y8 f$ ~I’m still filled with fear
/ @1 y1 M' J  `2 O4 B3 kYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 K- `9 I( r# P% v+ f, i6 |' U/ BYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' Q. q) L2 g% `8 r1 c% wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: o: h: d1 N% S0 W+ {3 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% L: X$ }% n; ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; C) C; {" m% t- W* ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 S4 T# u- N  ]- U7 ~. y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% E+ m  C3 f$ G* A/ \- n9 |* T1 k# p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 y! m+ `2 q8 o0 N& k+ Q+ e1 I+ N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* }* M( i( D4 C. d+ j! c, E<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* K+ i& {  n4 c! g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ X  `2 Z) n: U  H) j0 P/ `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" P. w6 D* p8 S0 M6 j" l# [<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% `$ n1 o( R' Q! U0 w<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 t1 w; R1 J' e1 z2 M2 ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 b2 O$ s0 E: S, w5 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 e' O1 p/ M' P! P7 E; ?2 D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
2 l* k2 {! r- `9 B+ {- {# Z( V6 h<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  P; }6 D. m% Q* E, B* B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& X/ d, ~) p! W, H' w2 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ g5 M; O7 C, ?  x2 _7 i; @9 f<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
1 P. Q  e  D% U! G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 G; d# a7 y% C( C8 ^. J; U' k0 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 @/ Y) H! j4 Y7 r: ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 g6 b2 D* I$ |<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 y. `9 E- S+ U0 u3 d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>