【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 Y/ d3 E+ u/ w5 S5 h3 Q  C5 z歌词我附在后面。
8 f7 x& Z* J* a& ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
* G8 a3 k' s8 f3 J, g/ eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; v+ B' J7 L: \0 eThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ [2 o- ~* U' ?6 R( M. H( O: iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) {$ X6 [/ t* \7 oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ a7 H( m. U9 ?Nothing can compare to my love
- P" n" g$ v: XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' S$ v8 o+ L0 \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' f+ {$ d1 `: w% M8 J+ z! x( AI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 j6 v& Q! M2 [I’m still filled with fear
' g+ L' G, P) ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, C5 }* R/ J5 _9 i* BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 P) Q+ @% p0 \8 cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ ^# ^* t6 i3 I' _6 p4 _Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 T3 @( r& ~  b! v) u5 \8 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. a* ?7 u$ A) f+ C" Q1 _8 e5 e! q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
+ u4 z! j4 x( W- Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; b+ F' L" `# y& C- V0 a) V" K- i5 M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) ^  E1 `7 j( a, N6 h2 L2 z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 G* M( }+ [) V( ]& ?<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; W8 F! _" z$ \* i<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
1 t) e3 g3 y8 n5 @2 x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ F$ G( {; i3 `- j; L6 \& S3 w7 b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# ^7 N1 a. _/ I<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  Y% K( T1 v* Z+ {: v0 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ h1 o" ]# T5 z3 {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 W5 @: n9 c8 A/ q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( Z  `+ q# k# L) y* d9 c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ w4 K$ ?8 q, u& s* |" d" `<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 ^+ Q- |2 ^5 U0 b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! d3 U; J1 h/ z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% l  ^  F6 {4 n, s% O& d' |# ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& k- P! r* K4 G" F<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& |  _3 g8 ~" G' B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
, t; r8 O, Q! ?) z/ f9 H- U1 c7 t' j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
3 @! n9 ?0 x1 J<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- D- ]& N# E) [3 A4 O( k<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) h# W! ?: y1 Y0 o& ?2 S! ?2 N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ P* o% O2 p8 l5 J) V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
$ I$ w+ b4 u- a6 Q, U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
5 o% y& a4 {+ M<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  [/ c' Y! ?( I) f4 C0 a! y; e' I- q我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  N$ {, {6 S- \2 U' J8 G<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>