【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
9 d; N8 C# Q0 \+ NThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; L# x+ C) O+ i( e3 Q2 d# kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 \* Q  B5 X$ E$ a& J: U: k! [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 r; g; ?7 T& t, \1 HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
( ~' b, Q( T; _1 fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  i7 p* b. P; v# F5 S8 g- cMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
9 B. }8 J$ q- j3 N5 ~. TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 C" q. T$ d. w! zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ ?% C( ~% t9 W( o) rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( u4 J% ?, r8 U! V' q  i/ M' kI regret not dying
! o; m9 r. Z7 `2 q+ f# tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 e' Z1 ~) u- J. X6 _8 I2 hWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; _+ G* g  D; M3 }If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

  _/ Y0 j$ Z& W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 E* b) I: b! Q# P<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 ~' A$ k  E$ F3 Q; p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, W5 g; Y8 k5 H, N+ a: Y<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& |2 }  |' U  s- r# X2 V* h$ a6 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, C& O. P  O, b0 M) ^" f% O+ I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 Q* l" |: Y8 _4 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 X9 K, Q7 |* n6 s0 i! e4 Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: z6 g/ M7 w3 V<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 @0 n  E9 u6 V# }0 _$ U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 [7 Z' {7 W4 }( G/ A$ H<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 y5 b. S7 R( w<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 D/ i9 O5 }, w- q: L<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" t- R$ ^. F! o# I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ e3 a1 k* J$ L+ M  D<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ f, ]2 N) D* b( {7 ^8 s! K: s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
" w1 e9 Y0 p; w1 @* t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 s: M0 T- E3 c2 @1 l/ W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
( |* n) W$ o- L4 h+ E4 k<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# r  P$ ^* d- R9 \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( ~/ B5 X3 a0 y7 `+ W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
# V/ P& g3 H1 u2 C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ `0 c- J" e) R4 W4 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
. U& {$ p& j; g' p* w1 Q<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' [+ u' Q$ g, V* ?# P) T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) X* o9 X3 b% v5 [  t- X) K- ]- \<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# C# p% V% O$ ~2 c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, e1 D2 B/ n3 ?7 A$ T7 c5 ~% L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 ~6 `1 S- H3 _. N8 @- L3 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 E) s  W; B: J我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>