【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 \: Z! R6 T) S0 eThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) @2 }7 U0 B! E0 rThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 g# _( j8 D$ JSeeing the sky content with its love
, D6 h) e5 @. f( t& w5 IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
/ J, b. m' T* rEvery other word you utter is love
5 v- i) Q: E* }8 @7 v$ D; T; y; f: QI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* c, ?, u, I+ t/ _6 Q. p* E  xI want so much to see inside your heart
4 t7 c; x5 p' l6 E- z3 G) JI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  S% J& F: o2 GI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. ^6 S2 ^, N7 v7 [1 ]8 p! C( AWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# j, ?6 t  [" e, {% w& N( b2 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; v3 O; ?5 s; h  E. SRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 J( G' W3 C) }+ Z, z<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) M0 A6 n/ w" W  f& y( C, w* I<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 Z/ m7 T& {3 K- Z% m<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; G/ ~( o, ]7 ~% v9 d<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' k1 j9 x( }1 c3 v2 N<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  N! a8 ~& X4 t7 D<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& g: p* K; D6 f8 S+ u9 a4 z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 F$ ~. |7 z1 P* X0 U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
9 V3 D$ i( k# N7 U: m<P>你无需担心</P>
+ V9 o) r( [. @0 Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# ~8 E# b' N4 U& [, @: h0 @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; @7 b5 D  s. k6 j3 F' w9 r2 D# v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; u# C. u% `+ H9 ^7 H( W( e. g<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. d% S8 y  i! o3 }% ^" q<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
! i. {7 R% g0 S# V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 B& }+ f2 J" x, W7 `: c9 K( H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 O- f+ P4 I. r$ G1 t0 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 Z# \* c* l3 `9 L, y& r<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 O: {3 S0 ]+ t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 ^, X1 X0 G# c, @! j; Y' D  v) T<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% y- R3 x& q0 z  \8 ?: t; [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% c& j  r9 K" G6 N, c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# _: p/ O6 E) F4 B& M2 T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 q. p* h- m3 Z" p- K) H<P>I regret not dying</P>
: F, Y0 C: O6 C<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  i" K" J' V* I' `+ K& C& ^$ X& `<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ r: J) h) ^- F1 b$ g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; S; b7 m  K  J6 G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" E$ _% N! R: g' d. j' D: [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: ?# J8 u2 F3 b8 w- o" _5 v6 U<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 q6 F: B, J5 Y/ D9 `2 Q( X* J我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>