【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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; C4 k" A. Z( O歌词我附在后面。
8 d( N" x. I9 U8 ^The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 p+ [- Q% A. {4 X; W  AWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; j  ^4 i5 E4 uThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
( k* v, I8 l) E/ ^) Y$ i) D- dSeeing the sky content with its love
, I+ B  k$ ^5 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( R1 r% v: }7 a& NYou needn’t fear anything
; l& G7 p4 v! l3 e, O+ YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 f* W0 w/ u. n0 S) n: ]I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: q% O( A5 B# o' W) j! v" B& tNothing can compare to my love
$ o8 ?6 D, n) P) h& T$ F9 l& y8 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ?2 f  r8 N* m# p( p4 nThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* I/ B, K3 F" e2 _6 PI’m still filled with fear
) O, t+ O0 l' H) r1 d$ l+ |' T+ J# GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* p2 k- {' K  w$ y  x1 K7 JI regret not dying
# Z. v& g4 k3 \0 e3 Q- @7 f3 FI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, Q; w. ]) |7 J3 Q* C' V$ sIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 M- n9 G6 Q  K( N7 x8 KRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 A- r+ O# i1 B0 [- ~7 b: a  @8 f6 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- u$ g/ ?) E' d! \  V9 m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ L! e/ c3 n5 v% ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# }8 W' d# I0 v! G8 S' P<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ s1 t/ X! V. L! n! n# |; n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 R) h2 x- \1 t1 h  f<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# ?, g' D  p* n<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ A) O0 r+ @# \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 D' O9 Y1 J; j<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
, n: f4 Y7 `# W# \! E# S9 ?1 \  E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
: q5 X- k0 d, J, Q; q6 k6 P3 |7 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) Z8 I3 g6 n6 K2 u+ s) e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# V3 i( v7 n: V; O) L8 f* ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 U5 D2 v9 k1 Y" J# ?  B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( Q( f9 z% f" Y# _3 [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! P' ?/ ^# b- O0 h2 Q( H+ r# X: G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' D, C; Y) f0 u- G. v" H5 e' [& k<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. P8 r0 H2 `6 [5 J<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
* O& |, p' y  r( {3 {" b. O7 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 S! P% x% X' X* n3 L<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" b& P( J, K% B3 b' z" f<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 l! ?( m* c- b. |, ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* y$ r% K- ]8 n* y8 a7 [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ W& P" p. X) ^( m8 M6 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 L: [/ G& l$ {<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 M! k& J; j, Q  o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
" \; Z# L' H) X: E0 t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
4 g. @* h' D  z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 O2 c, [1 ?4 i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; |; m  X, i' E3 ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 L) u  v/ ^, U$ \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
4 G- c# F, W4 l/ [<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
6 F3 O$ Q% V3 d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 E& ?; P0 k1 S: R# p5 m# t' {<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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! V$ }: p( J7 g 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>