【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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+ h* N) b* _. D我另将歌词附在此。
0 p7 G; }! f& S% ~. h7 kThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 h* V- X4 d' u$ ?+ O/ \, rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
( Y  s7 _5 l) ]6 I5 fI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
$ O; J, M, ^  J7 W. B  ?9 B5 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ i( n. W" K" |) A" r9 vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 r+ |$ F% v! V; G' L5 k6 WIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: G7 E- @8 W" R- v+ A9 C& ]Why is it so difficult to express?
- [( D' v: M3 }8 a2 E0 ~I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ T/ R7 k% c* z7 q1 ?If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 [! l7 c- }2 e. ]/ P, |  HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
( p9 r; Z$ R- }Entrust my love within your heart
/ b) |8 e7 W0 ^0 ~Can I entrust it to you?
7 C8 B: ]6 P' r, Y; c# c# EEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, R; f) P- `9 u. u5 F( g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% R; _: A/ u  l, V% {& {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. I0 c6 J- m  t8 k% t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ A1 ^6 w+ }& l( O. U& U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ W' j) |$ u8 G* i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
3 [2 o% s) h- h<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& F5 `2 @. {- A& w1 g; R) C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" M( H7 \, X2 \' t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  F* O% V5 G6 b* `) G  [<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
$ Q# Q- ]# a: E<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 c( T. [6 k7 o5 M2 a<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& p, [9 U8 m! e- }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. S! H# `5 Q. h3 [# x8 v7 N, f<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( V) A1 H% f  G4 n<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 }( p* {% S' V, u4 d8 T/ {9 a! y<P>但我不会</P>
, R" J( q/ ?5 u4 n9 W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- ~' X3 w* M! ~; O) o<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 M  R/ R3 ?# R7 p5 n7 K, F<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ n5 _4 t3 H$ S; {/ I3 R8 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' ^7 H- Q' p' u  Z/ p  _# D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- X+ J  G: h+ `  H5 S) v<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 J4 D. h5 Q$ O$ k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 F& k2 d" R7 ]6 f" J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 u5 X( Y4 d; I2 F( Q& e# |2 e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; B% [9 U1 y4 G9 B3 ?0 c<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* S# N8 {( ?: x  l0 y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  S1 u2 @+ c* t; B: B<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: ]; ~+ z& f' G) l: X7 l* M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
2 V( O9 W( s: ~5 _7 C' a/ ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. s- n$ O7 n: s/ ^8 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 @7 c3 G/ {; P/ f" ~: ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" s- Z6 l& L" v( `! R" s  T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" j$ g! M) I1 N1 E4 D9 G, B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 i! H" [( x3 q5 r5 m# M; Q. o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 t9 |- @& n  W6 s5 h  o& n" U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ @- @+ I1 a# Y* i' p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 y8 F2 S5 G* b2 T: b' D2 M7 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 c5 i) l( ~6 Z) r4 a9 n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ T7 m8 f+ ?9 _* \) }+ l& s: W3 x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
5 }6 P* R- `  S, P" Z) n! D8 ]
2 }* t/ ?$ j/ Y, r5 C) C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 L, k) a9 ]$ p" k1 O) ]: ^* V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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' m  O+ G7 D$ I8 L& F/ K5 m<P>

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" G3 i3 i7 K% x0 P/ _2 e! L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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