【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
2 e0 k9 h; _3 A! I1 x0 O. O& `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
" X6 k' J# u+ H5 f, u8 n9 ~( V! pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 Z1 z7 f8 {/ z$ s. hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 x: B. p6 O% D8 l2 GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 e$ c; m( A" b- w& Z7 ~% MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" o/ p. p7 S: K( q& Q% s1 P. D( ~* GEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ H% B! C$ R3 ^I want to confess that I love you,
, ?! D/ F& u+ p0 ]- lBut I never did
8 G- `, |. y8 \' y; HOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ `  d5 w) t2 N8 k8 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' y4 ~3 o) s5 m  ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 P* w+ E% j, A/ i. \7 Z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. S' }/ C* J! k( m" k7 w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 k( T, y3 Z3 p8 B: b$ V4 Y$ d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, L0 S0 \; L6 ?! g7 Y4 H! X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% v2 ]8 \5 P8 W; {9 y2 C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  A' i+ G& c! W* r& `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ b( ^3 K: |3 q! @& m: {1 [3 v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
+ u) H! d7 u2 z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 u9 r4 |* O9 N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- W+ j- x; t5 M/ Y$ Z8 {, C<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
# z% W. b1 F' L, e; t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 C5 ~! P) D' t( ]: z' U( B7 ^: M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
8 I8 c! i) f  @3 u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; a+ g; B( V2 r5 Y6 W" j<P>但我不会</P>
6 `+ l1 U/ b7 F  |' S4 T<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 ^; ]" w; \* v$ s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ _- k. P- @$ g! ^; [+ X# A3 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  \4 L9 f6 Z5 Z4 L7 }: x# K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& v: O( u0 K( E0 T* o2 b2 D# R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 V" b& g2 O. n) _9 P<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& P2 P. Q) C7 S# A<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 [7 C* ]( b% S& p! H% a<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. e$ B2 h4 l) j8 O4 l% o9 {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 r) J: G+ C, @4 g8 w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 {0 {* v8 y5 g; I) }7 T5 y<P>But I never did </P>
1 d) n- h6 `, x<P>但我不会 </P>
1 O0 W1 [# @$ c- w% ?<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 {* z& ?% U0 R/ K5 v# P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
" L0 `% ^3 ~( Y+ d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# m) E" B/ _# ^  i! ~5 d<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" D. ?5 v% c: w; I/ y" R: p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* ~6 L  Z" t4 g* F8 K" N6 L! N" {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: w' R: X- o8 I1 u! [$ o5 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: v7 S6 ~$ Z$ L+ Q$ L" V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' X6 O  y- r- p  j2 ]# A9 J( Q& C8 ~! ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" B  C1 U" G: Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; D# \( g: N- ]& C<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* @' f& I1 T# Z2 Q2 ?) [; L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, `, a( {; s% U. e" Z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% A: n% M( }) K" \* y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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</P>
<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>