【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
5 U6 s& ?* k  V; {) T5 E  k# t* e3 z2 LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; S7 a- s! o7 `: v( UI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 _- [: K' f2 w$ mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ y/ T. m, ^8 T+ S/ JI would probably know how you feel
! i. e& j! C& W$ ~Love… just the word love
, j% b/ N# `; E& m. jWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 V) P4 w+ _% ]/ tI want to confess that I love you,
' L! s0 t( w& c! Z+ m5 ]% w2 YBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# S+ B% k1 Q, \1 uIf today isn’t too late,
) A1 e) x1 `; e4 NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ F7 b5 q8 f9 Q; l, C6 q+ C6 ?$ k+ cCan I entrust it to you?
( }) K# o* _) t3 l4 P! iEntrust my love within your heart
3 [0 z% \% d5 L# v0 D0 q: [5 |- P* J* jLove… just the word love
, x1 \$ ]5 ?. X1 Z$ [) @; rWhy is it so difficult to express?
# {; \& i( w2 |I want to confess that I love you,
; u" @# j0 y" i1 m2 o. l4 H# oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 `, c, |' v& i/ E( T) X1 u9 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% q' J6 {  i/ @" qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 X6 k+ d+ a0 M9 H: HCan I entrust it to you?
  f. b4 Q% u9 Z/ K$ S  P: NEntrust my love within your heart
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# b. @  x& Y: d( ]5 {+ _" e( N. \[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# D& X# r$ S3 _  j' W& k! d( B' Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 q5 |! r& q% T% v) _+ @6 G0 p/ ?" {' ]* C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' ^% Y5 R3 I4 l. i! @5 e<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
4 W- k3 Q! U( U; {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 D$ N, g- p0 @  L# D( U# g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- `- b5 v0 R$ o0 `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ u: l  `( J/ i" ~) X$ h<P>但我不会</P>
) e5 x8 R% u: [- W4 \! J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' m& p! z6 p4 o0 l' R$ c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
  Y; k! a) p- Z7 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 Q) a7 R3 ]2 I1 E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 L' J0 d8 h3 D8 u8 u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ P* f( G7 B* }, _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, u( a9 h' h  {7 u7 H8 _  u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! M  U4 j$ \* f3 z' y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ U/ M, d! Y0 _- O' e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 |9 s) r5 [. x# e7 ^0 W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 h" o6 l0 G( s  l<P>But I never did </P>
) @; |) U* `6 D8 \; }! G<P>但我不会 </P>
4 l' T8 h# N" p% v% G( S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ v/ ]; C, Q) {( m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) x) l+ [3 N) U; W' ^+ ?) `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  b# s' H$ z5 M' V4 o  f: @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  |. C6 Q' a6 }% }; W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- E5 S9 P* }8 O4 u- R8 s1 N3 m- \1 J" D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 W1 n5 x: L2 @" W+ r. F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ Z% Y/ u- ?, J; M0 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 u2 i' R  S: \; k; E2 L. }: p7 m. O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>