【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
  J8 c6 t0 i  S$ X/ s' vI already loved you with all my heart
; i  c( D8 Z) `! Q& l( Y7 NWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. Z  {# H. k  b' m2 }% _If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& s: U: b3 z7 n4 rLove… just the word love
& ?/ l$ P" N" UWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% \3 Q: b7 D* w1 i: r3 jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ R( o7 T9 Z; a4 _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" E& p3 k$ f- ?* K4 z" [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 t; ~: }0 I( r% r1 o0 }% M" kBut I never did
( V% V& a# c: m# xOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 N( q- q  Y7 o- A! i  \: rIf today isn’t too late,
% ?7 S/ \. M* D! t- KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ N5 k8 u: N# y/ ^' lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
  p2 x. {$ v, w) zEntrust my love within your heart

" }/ O7 U* {2 K' Q4 @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* o/ i7 J1 T' }3 ^8 J5 Z<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  U! T. ?/ }; x9 w0 F$ _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ I4 V) ]* N8 @4 {<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. _7 X* K7 f. b, u<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  T/ c; ?# l9 a' k2 F3 q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 [. d$ R% n! j<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 m9 c/ s0 B$ B5 m2 L+ ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 r2 Z0 R+ s5 s<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  |$ A* V* q3 M! ^; F; n  ]# L<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; e+ R, W- e4 M& D% h<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, I* N# k1 {- C$ E  P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. n$ N  i0 L  B# ~# T  Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. c! W( R3 t* w1 ]* d* h; _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 ?: F6 M' ]! ^3 Q+ {# d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 @' \6 {7 {, A, Y8 a3 o" m: X+ v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& r, e% d- l% S5 ]4 S6 w% O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
2 h. q% F, y) ~2 Z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" E% ]5 I$ N1 B2 I# B+ l- q) Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 n- B9 z& W9 g5 T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 D( P, i# H! {  @<P>But I never did </P>
4 A4 \6 d' l& L& R9 n<P>但我不会 </P>
/ u! l" |. O3 V5 l: ]1 {( _<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& i% U2 Q6 O% l7 d% A  ^/ @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 b6 n  D  v% O9 y7 K) r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 U. y: ^) b9 P* t5 |# o' H  C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( [: F5 T. F) x6 H# J7 k. T/ z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' }" B) t& Y& P/ W2 k9 s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, z8 ~* n% [6 e# ~  \9 H9 b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

' l5 Z3 ]/ u' v; U$ S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 V) V( u. @* `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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7 m) a6 u/ i- B: m% z9 f+ J<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>