【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ F& v3 ~1 ?: `5 s3 z我另将歌词附在此。
* I8 j& t, J- M3 X3 fThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* T' f$ W% \0 D1 `: ~; `From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' J, T/ b1 x1 E) A  `- H  t1 DLove… just the word love
7 K- R$ S9 d3 K1 D) v+ {5 b6 E- SWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 L3 b' ~% q  V% aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. C/ j% n, J; P! KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" e+ e& `0 t# w1 gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  l- Z0 a. X% Y" ZBut I never did
8 m' R( w( Z' z: t0 p1 `' e3 w+ qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 y) [- C# w# t9 ~& x1 KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 S$ @0 w, A0 H' B5 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# i& ?; f% h- ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  L% h. B1 C4 N4 V! oCan I entrust it to you?
1 p& P* ]/ T( l/ ]5 ~6 mEntrust my love within your heart
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4 t- c: y+ b& V& E% F/ ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' n  H4 \- }; A- N: v% s<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
# T! k% Z# P. B$ E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 F$ E2 r2 x( r# h$ Z% u1 [<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. h$ b, E6 n; Q4 A; A, V<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 [7 B$ b8 p9 j<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
% q$ `$ C1 Q' p$ j3 m! Q1 t. n<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 f7 \6 q/ i6 J; S$ i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
8 ?1 p  x- h" ^) L5 k5 [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 T9 v/ O% y1 a% a. E. t3 c+ c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ ]( r; t) q6 N4 y: p- J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ i* C1 q" f" z, _& W' u1 [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 I/ ]9 C0 y6 L# J* t( b4 i. C<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# \+ O) g% W" A# f7 W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
7 u5 k* F) F. ^5 f<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 w3 A# \( i+ J7 D: g( W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* M/ h( f9 ]/ @4 |" f; u# {$ F) x<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% Q6 h, C6 `* R$ o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 K$ ~. I: a+ @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  u& C' `/ K) S. v( h, a& L<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! ~/ _( u* P/ r7 j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& ^: S5 P) h# ~5 c, `' q- @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- c1 ?# z6 v% q0 J1 I% a<P>But I never did </P>
6 H0 E6 ]- {3 b7 \3 a+ l<P>但我不会 </P>
. I2 h* \+ E& P# \; `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: B: R) F; J4 m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ ~* z" p! B" z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  q) W4 v% k1 t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 ^. s; X  \4 j: z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 x( X/ w- @7 r$ C( ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. J6 j! @  ?+ f- j' q, Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 A6 C# {' W9 y! f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 h6 B" c3 U  a+ s9 R( U6 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! ~: f) M6 h( E9 c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 l, u, r; p  s" x! S# E' C 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 n% l; j8 q9 ]* n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: M8 e* t) c0 s4 [4 a9 r<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>