【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ q) N% |* j2 j2 W% F, Z我另将歌词附在此。
) K* B6 W  M0 JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% q% j: z) ?5 \8 \" j. ?9 jFrom the first moment we met,
" s) Z7 O' w) G8 e. ]I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, |" ~' m" p& U& v" e9 b  ]: iI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- s) n. g  Y& `) wI want to confess that I love you,
- U$ G- t. T/ T: b7 ~& O6 C; N0 NBut I never did
/ J2 x2 R" W' jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! d* ^0 {* ^) L8 r3 P, g& [# TIf today isn’t too late,
2 Q. b0 I+ b+ hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 i. Q# t# X& f; S/ h; @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. B8 M+ `3 ~- I  e$ z- sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. |9 g" w, S" t0 B( L! G4 J, V9 lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 }  v( U4 k: `  S3 J# k( b. HIf today isn’t too late,
+ G9 S7 _7 S; \7 t! j" H1 T9 c8 e7 |I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 x7 R5 a2 b/ L3 ^, H5 ]Entrust my love within your heart
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1 j- @# e' S! o6 o) C3 s: u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 w' T. T# h1 [7 y9 }( O" J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 Q5 M) @; V% s. S& E9 ?) T, B0 O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  O+ p/ O5 ?! {2 N5 ~<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 B& ~- o0 z5 I' |! m6 M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* D& m$ P# V4 n# B1 G, c7 w" `  [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, @  `, H7 v, w' r$ H$ ?% d% o( \' S<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ H6 F1 N$ K8 C5 {/ X: N6 U5 R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( N  H( ?  u+ Y' Z) X& i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 Z4 H" z/ Z7 T8 e1 q- B) Y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, E% K: f+ S6 f2 T; n3 O/ v+ M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 i$ r2 L3 T, @2 r! _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, W/ v: T: `# g$ W; O1 h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* ^4 L+ Y, B% d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( S: [) h0 U6 L: {2 _+ l0 b: `  G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% o' U4 z: T  z) p/ Q0 D  U% y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 e8 k& D2 o% V7 b! D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 b8 Q2 q' p0 b+ C2 j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! f2 H, W, N: C! [<P>But I never did </P>
, I) M  i2 m0 ^& _7 N5 |' Z<P>但我不会 </P>
2 A1 u% n! X, ~: ]. N<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! M/ A3 v! ]  V$ e- \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 [$ e& z. l3 c. U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& z9 h* C/ a2 e  y' m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 L( a& t7 f% \  ]/ \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ G1 f3 `) o+ R5 D- ^" i7 A' {4 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ V) }6 k+ Z9 m7 j+ K1 E" G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. y" v% M: O! ]! X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. b+ a2 Y9 [  g<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 I3 i- x6 V- h! Q0 S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ p1 c5 ^+ q- q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>