【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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. \7 f! K3 y3 |/ i; R2 z- b我另将歌词附在此。
9 E7 _5 M% j% `: mThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 a* N) ^  r! q7 |From the first moment we met,
- `) f6 Z  I& s* k2 }3 g& @I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* c, z4 n- Q2 dI would probably know how you feel
& n: S( x9 x+ L2 iLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 B" N% s  D4 q' |( i% n7 J: UIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; K6 p3 |' I1 t7 j  nEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: D) [& m2 K) }2 t  QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; z9 g# k8 _6 b: B6 C& CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ I3 k% ^0 I7 F* X6 G( j: UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  X5 e- m: t+ N. S& BEntrust my love within your heart
+ J* x4 T4 O1 g- i9 P& bCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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* X% W7 S( G- T4 C: l  B9 A8 y. W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

& C' S+ m+ w4 F# Y/ S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 U# }& j7 S% @8 Y* H2 j) Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ z/ ~7 Z. a' y# f3 U<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 {! x' g5 @7 J<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! \0 i2 Z2 S  O! ?/ o<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 J2 z9 {2 S3 X/ q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# Q: O9 S# ^" a: w* x  {! J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  r( J) T5 W4 Z: a5 z( M/ I' u6 F( ?. h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% f4 L! t( `8 p) [, j9 x2 k<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- c* K- ~5 H: e1 T) A<P>但我不会</P>
8 e! c  C" l. J5 B  W# o<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 K, i3 @1 Z+ |, c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 C+ l& \9 ~' ~, J  I  Z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: X2 C0 w1 Y1 D' ~1 O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( c1 U8 X8 ?+ I/ i) [  J$ {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; s7 P& n, h, ?' z6 z% u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' `( V/ \2 _  R8 g$ K% C0 w4 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( O" ?7 F" G9 x6 ?' Q" M8 c2 _  N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 P% b' S$ {2 O" d/ {* h) U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! ^, Y/ m# k4 I+ G: x& T$ ^% F. n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' U# L# Z4 D1 L& r  I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# i) _9 R) V* k- r! [1 A! f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; N" i. k/ ~& d6 ]- c3 X, l<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% J! w8 U% k5 c3 a: a+ C) J<P>但我不会 </P>
8 }( ^& z# G0 Z' l8 v<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
: a! u- v- g8 k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 G/ C, l5 E% ]- J6 \( R$ m% ~9 }3 q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( s! Y& X: |" k7 A9 O  O<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. D$ A& A, E7 B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
' D2 R( T- Y5 S5 E# [" X2 k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) `! D; h0 e% C& Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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3 j% u5 J8 z9 P: m. d8 A  _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 `8 }+ _. P6 S! @  p, U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>