【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 r; |1 t8 C( Z/ u) p歌词我附在后面。
8 f/ t- ?% K* W" h' t* UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
! f. ]# p% b: L9 Y' X7 _When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 Q" b7 T2 b4 [3 CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- D6 P: s2 M5 i5 U4 [The sky is happy down to its soul
+ W# ]# ~; m4 g2 @+ u& j0 LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 ~( o! G. m- J" RYou needn’t fear anything
2 X, E- o. G) |' Q1 B1 [9 ?" {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. U* ?- b9 z$ I/ cEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- V6 S% c. B# e( c4 oI love you I love you with all my heart
) [: `7 {4 _, z7 ~) ENothing can compare to my love
* q0 ~5 {6 a  zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ m0 @& {, X  `5 BThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ C/ H: D) z; y' b- [. KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  W: l. |4 {0 l3 II’m still filled with fear
. [! n7 U9 Z3 @( n9 s, `& I0 YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 @) n; [" |; O0 K9 SI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. H0 V! T; L: D3 l8 eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
8 t8 W- Z+ R7 E2 M& H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 z' {: O0 P% |6 E! d' _! G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 M; M; G& W/ d% s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  `8 I$ p2 M! {0 G1 U$ C1 u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% @% F) X* y$ ^2 K<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" k1 |$ Q' s; Z/ A7 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( K/ z- g6 ^6 a5 F<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 I# X* k1 z  ~4 G" D2 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 D) @; i7 v4 G& a# @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# M6 E8 G% }9 P* P1 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' x5 w8 S5 A! |<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
% X' Z. E# b7 J5 d<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 \, Z( N* _3 l8 s1 N/ T<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
7 ]/ c( B2 _/ l7 o) L9 v. k9 U/ i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 h3 h7 [, e! e6 `8 }+ N$ V& a* W<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
+ W8 `/ a' _/ E% r$ g  u" u<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
( E1 o9 u6 j7 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ V$ q0 A( w8 h" _* }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- x$ D+ ^& H3 z2 {  P- b<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% b% S5 d! z& E# r2 I! u8 u# |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( Q7 [. `" n) }# _0 E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* W& r0 C, Z& d. m, |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. E* Z' ^7 D: F* ?- L, `<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 n& M3 k8 F& Q3 W6 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; s/ p# i' L. }" A9 f+ u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
! m' K: X9 a5 p+ W<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ z8 i, d6 M" F( z4 p<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 h& ~  P3 B2 V/ ^3 P' P9 _" ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 A2 j. C, o! i1 F5 B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
3 t& C% s. A0 R$ x  Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 c$ w5 b/ r' j% N我请你剖开它
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2 P+ _% ~' O9 o. V- ^- { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>