【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  r4 A" y, L% Z/ ?The sky is happy down to its soul
$ c1 P: v# i$ V2 vWith the moon kissing it every night
* j; X1 w" c0 H+ D( A4 m  YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& L+ e& N* @+ L8 ?- ]- ZYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) i1 m, M1 s+ L7 S/ U9 NEvery other word you utter is love
6 }% Q! ]: L6 i: W1 f, gI really want to know just how much you love me
3 O  o- a0 F' G6 _# p4 i, gI love you I love you with all my heart
1 [4 i% P4 n/ V* t0 h; z0 ZNothing can compare to my love
5 \8 N2 |3 K* r2 \! `8 V; [, S" aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# H( \5 t: S- MI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 \* T! ~3 o. L! iWith such a tongue as yours,
0 ~: S) R3 l5 c8 q; \8 l0 Q6 i' tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: l8 j2 |# t+ C, GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- }- C9 q0 s" `. b. j; o7 s, ]<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 J9 H* l& i: w<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 l2 t/ |8 F- J+ I& ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* s8 k) M( G6 n% }" }) e<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. Y1 ]. R8 Z4 M' M, P9 x3 \1 X<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* g/ h/ [0 Z; [8 [# ]! i# ?8 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 @& M% R0 ^' [/ V% B, f2 W# r<P>你无需担心</P>
( W- k* _; O+ V* B<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& S9 f* n! }4 l- e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# k! j1 Y1 x1 p/ ?1 v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
8 y8 l4 X. Z2 K4 f8 u2 X0 j; r7 B8 H<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. j+ V( Z5 _% g, c& Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ G& N8 i! g' i# V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- W8 K# ^/ J; _& c- C<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# ^5 c# d9 @2 [; [# D# e2 a: G0 ?<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. S$ b0 {4 Z5 I( t% `# H6 m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ S2 ?, \1 I9 p. u0 x& v<P>I regret not dying</P>
, d! H0 Y7 Y" o8 W- T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. S: g* Q( m1 R4 i$ p7 N% T<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 X2 l: ]8 i' `<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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2 w! R* F6 q0 N, V. Y我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# m3 c  M. V# R1 W7 s" [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>