【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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$ y+ d2 B6 {: q& L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 V! u" R" q, t( s9 ?# |8 F2 j4 F) ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
% e/ p+ i+ ~1 _+ g& f2 [: KWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- j1 [7 L, S6 p4 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  {, Z$ x6 H8 n4 x( mYou needn’t fear anything
* Z" i! i' ~( |/ y) ~% tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 I9 Q* Y  g2 f9 x0 C$ @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
/ y& ?( Y( A: N  M: @* W7 tI love you I love you with all my heart
4 _8 F4 x8 {( y: Q2 |Nothing can compare to my love
; ]* |: S8 _' Z7 |. \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
: T4 }. o  K. q5 {* R) Z9 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  m6 }# Y' i% I9 t2 P/ Y- t% Y- BI regret not dying
, c0 T; Z3 y5 ^  `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 @8 C# g7 [4 u+ v& S, [With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, W: t3 J% b+ @0 H% Q6 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 s/ H7 u0 l/ C, ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 _, G+ L0 c8 e0 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; D. t* u( L$ Q2 L% [% A/ R0 x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; @- G7 w. H* S5 F8 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
! z/ L4 ^: m- K8 Y- [' e<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. X( a  e# K' ?! D( H* v4 w/ m<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, Z6 g. w0 k( @2 g. }' ~* n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- Y* x4 h3 |4 a, O3 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- Y( N+ F4 u% l6 j+ N$ ~# c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 ~! w0 T( X) `0 x, G<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 {+ r0 U: j3 h$ S* O6 N<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
4 B8 `4 p4 l6 ?$ N<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
% D' I# |, K0 }$ O( O* v<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; v5 z& j: P2 f0 o$ U8 T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" N0 c" q! \- S+ N' a. g<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 \2 R- s! N5 n6 `* K1 p6 I: [% s<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; C( G" t5 @1 U0 d; }' f+ f# ^  R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
, z" G( F3 e2 k  S3 D1 U0 o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
$ N3 h7 D2 d6 ?0 y( J$ g<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ f! Y7 x) B5 D% E3 P! Y( o<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- _; ^% `0 x2 I# ^& x$ Z7 s" v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: U- w6 B) J  H* L' T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
) L( s: F3 Z- W1 g5 }; }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 y! m. h( [2 j0 s4 @4 j* [* E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 U, s: m# M- k5 g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" `9 Z  J0 ~$ S* j' j4 y8 n# v9 v<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 t0 M! X* M2 l$ Q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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4 t, T" z0 Y% S, P7 n9 U9 c" S5 n我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>