【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 w( U" |$ @, m* M+ z7 U/ c* T# iMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
; C$ Z# u" ?5 G- gWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 N1 z! ^6 o4 q1 h7 z+ TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
& z# A  _3 q& x- N" S' A) \' ~I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, l, T- W- |9 B( LCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" r1 u6 \/ I" }3 L6 \, o2 II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% S! U  v7 h2 a6 S4 B! M3 {7 w! [I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
9 H$ f- {, m7 A; P$ lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) C, O+ c, `  c- t1 G. o, G<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 k4 E- K$ I$ k4 W4 s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" l* `& D/ ~4 I( b# `<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) c4 S% F; H" F1 d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# L# _' G# b* f2 g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ a* v) _) T8 u) P, A- S, z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 M8 y1 R# _2 H& ?" C# K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" r& V' o/ C. H: c) Y1 [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% A) k1 w) k( [4 d9 v2 }6 m9 n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 Q; V) }/ Z8 }<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 W3 n* U3 G5 K$ W( r<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  C* M  Y3 b+ V  A<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 k* ^; b% Z" ?# @, M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
+ a4 b& a: I  f  ~; T: e! M) n<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
# [: t( c) |/ n) ]; c, X# m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, d4 E4 L) g* X+ A. f5 }# h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 U+ ^  W0 U. k7 L. R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; N' {' R6 a+ r: Y6 K0 |6 K4 F6 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) K2 t/ o2 J5 d! N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! F9 s! j! Q& ?: L0 e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( y5 n' e# J4 s4 @" o3 w8 U/ s1 _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: k% b* {  O, d3 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 P/ Q/ W  Y# V, n+ Z$ q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ \$ \8 ^) I$ p4 s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' J8 @, U5 L' {# M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# {+ K# {2 N7 l- G! Q: G% h& E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 h3 E4 }/ x  a9 Q& t: A1 [9 i<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 e0 {; P0 B" Q: ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( j7 m1 F# _# K+ g1 t6 E( |8 F8 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. ?' C. R+ j+ M( f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; N  z" x% [. E) x; o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! c* l: E0 k) {5 @- e! g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ {5 |- ?( Y2 c* U8 j* U! B<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
: z' n" A. {; t8 I0 F<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ I5 H) }( T+ W<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>