【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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0 L' {  w. f& B  D歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% [4 S9 Z. i1 q$ a3 g1 S- w$ fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# M8 l& C  G8 qWith the moon kissing it every night
' [& z8 u1 S1 v; hSeeing the sky content with its love
% y, ^2 b5 C2 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* I1 \. t3 K! b+ w0 TYou needn’t fear anything
) m/ G8 c1 S3 F4 xMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 t1 O# l+ _9 }* P9 y; gI love you I love you with all my heart
* ]) ]2 u" R3 f8 y! y6 ^+ YNothing can compare to my love
, W1 B5 x- {* tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# A: R6 \- G; e! _9 M! lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* M7 w* K+ o- `  lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ T( s' l# ?4 B3 l9 _6 T8 ?Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ q: O4 ~, C  V" |6 k0 g3 }Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. ~& a- C8 [5 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# i0 E* p5 \  r/ j& B3 n<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  j5 Y5 W- h; O. }<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 K/ i$ l$ ]1 @' c' A<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 ~7 @9 n- ^1 d+ n9 v<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 r: X* ?2 |4 T5 K9 c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 Q$ g, ^& V5 J( e<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, f0 u3 Z$ ]! [# z<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 s& ~; |, o7 a" F6 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& r" @; `2 A- S/ G: D2 X' y* n( x# P4 m" L<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
: T$ \. x; b' h- m2 G( I<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' p5 k. o7 F! U5 I# H& |& `<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: ^! ^( W* |5 U' F; R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' o, ]6 e& x6 U( a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
. b. y$ R6 [. y  ]" v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% d1 \# t& W! |; I" C$ m* N# ?<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ X( S/ d' {+ l  z" }<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& u; P* f/ I: R  O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
# t. [6 E: K' @1 }2 |0 N4 K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 w0 i4 B; `! U9 k- [' L  r<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
# [1 ?2 H* y, n6 V9 t) ]4 [1 u% e2 j6 ~<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 O/ W$ C& d; K/ v& P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! Q; V& `9 \! Y: E) x<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  O. i1 _" P) k0 Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
, K/ b# ^$ I/ b6 G! J% ~6 v<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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3 d3 F+ N" C3 c3 ]: }; n 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 u  l0 p0 \1 C. O7 M2 x3 z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>