【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" |7 ~6 ^6 Q- x1 V; w歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
' G+ Z& ?2 n9 A* t$ nWith the moon kissing it every night
! i% l' R3 b0 G( L" [: pSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- q8 J2 @* E# \3 m7 F2 t1 g( zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
) m  y* Y( n2 |$ tI really want to know just how much you love me
# [4 W( z  Q& W# E; o1 [8 m! jI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
" a* _8 v' M# _Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 h/ e" j3 h0 z! R! N* ~& F2 Y! kI want so much to see inside your heart
8 g; {+ X( W. I6 w+ |9 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 T& K9 j; U4 Z* `0 o+ }, M3 p: PI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
: p- y; |# X8 V2 ^8 _I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
# M9 U$ v! b/ e2 G. ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 S3 ?4 a3 O% p, |/ nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- M9 X- Z2 E! f. X. H5 ^<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ J: e6 C- c- w. T4 e1 Y- Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 q+ M8 P" J$ R2 `; O2 W* H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 q1 `6 n4 U/ ~. c% U" U$ M0 l<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ J- r3 ?% T0 {" W' x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; g! }9 h  k; {+ e7 o/ H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. Z: O1 ?9 S' [<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; P+ A( f, w4 y6 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' c: S6 y: l. w" N! h) M3 b<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 s8 L" O, g  `$ d0 A* G$ p" H: U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 y0 ], V( Q4 \0 @<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, Y7 `; m. K) k. e- g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) {6 u* S# i  I% @" S  _8 v9 `<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, s4 O& v3 Y2 o<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  `# d; l8 s. f# q  B2 R8 T/ j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 y$ F! H( w1 A: l  Y7 d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 t1 `" D: u* B: C( u3 ?5 }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 e1 E( A9 c- I% |0 P! x! i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 o1 V  g3 S9 o6 w* [! I" H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" R7 q8 |6 o3 c9 u7 q) |1 v<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
2 ~  Q; Q. }5 e+ C& ?/ J) \<P>I regret not dying</P>
9 w3 a% a% ^. f6 b/ h5 V7 ]<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
+ L5 J: m/ K& ], }/ F' ]<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' h% c. \& _3 ^: M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
; _. K7 N- F# X% D8 d& }8 _& E<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ ?% w) r; \  `$ L* B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
4 U! m6 V/ \% G/ ?4 \9 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 r9 _; m0 I* Y" v8 p" e# d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 s; N; C+ z# }" U0 Y. `* b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 P; r8 w+ k% Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 h. a  h6 m1 c& C; x& K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
( n7 q7 k/ r8 m9 D9 `6 M
+ k/ u% G  ^. Z: j1 l, m/ q; Z2 M我请你剖开它
/ A6 c( {; }+ d
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>