【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
- G# M' V0 x: D4 }' TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, L3 ?& k7 I  ]) K: jMaking the sky glitter like gold,
0 C9 X* \. B2 v1 N; b+ }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ |, k  s8 ]: Z  F9 {The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& }& A! C9 e. V! lThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
0 M0 L3 D0 V/ r/ Q7 t5 ~" TSeeing the sky content with its love
  C6 i% r$ h/ M% C  y+ PIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 y9 }; _. w6 J& l! F- I" W0 @# @9 a3 B" bMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 T: E/ [# R2 e, l" tEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! ]9 C: z2 I- P! N4 F7 v. ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 V* |* ~8 X) v. ~8 vI want so much to see inside your heart
! X& ?# `2 Z/ q4 s6 P7 S0 M5 b3 E+ DI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
' ~2 k) |- {& ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ _2 k: u+ m& C) U0 U# ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
' {. w) D, X6 lIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 t1 Y" W! q9 h, s! \8 ~; I<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 K, ~) }7 g) ~% V" Y8 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' p7 ?; r# ^+ Q" p  l7 V4 R) X9 ^  ?<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 v8 _# L, }1 }# q- J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ C; B7 [( W! C" t! K) B1 [/ s) M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 d2 p& d* \5 }- b! s8 H- H<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, U+ W5 A2 q, j, d<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
- _# L- s. t6 h3 O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; M! [! E% y- U( n; x) _0 a9 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" c* h3 q8 Y) H# X, {+ M* ~<P>你无需担心</P>
1 U: B; a9 K5 w) ~  J& P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 s6 P8 m# a, V; M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
* s, w* i" `7 T* v" U<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ e. m, ?3 U- i) z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
" I' [4 p5 J! U5 D6 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) Y; t) b) W6 O* W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 c) _% h( _2 n2 _4 N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 G0 O8 J- {3 ], K  I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* ^  M' ~' o4 @1 _( d& Y* B$ H4 S5 }<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
; x8 d, i5 Y; Y/ c; Q3 a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
( }9 a! w! B" b7 J0 M* m3 F<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ W" q7 Z3 y9 m3 M<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% Q, Y' K9 ~. @5 Y& ]$ b4 n" J<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( Z* A1 j9 M8 Y+ W7 k2 l  B- n<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. ^& ?2 `0 F" H5 d2 M<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 n. x+ E$ k$ d  \, v& ^<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- V" D0 T' ]' c) G7 q' ^<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 K' @& r  ?# i3 @<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 }3 v, l7 m/ D# u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! k/ g; Y, m, P5 Q. J+ ?<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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0 N* @# ?, S' \, k3 y1 X% `+ d 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>