【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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+ q4 k5 s/ B, Q* [; P歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& R/ H( }1 ~8 }2 T) u  KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; Z7 z: w& X! [! xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% ]9 G: ^2 f) o; T0 M5 X! jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  o+ [/ L7 s( e5 U# _+ hIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; t9 u& c; v- K+ V% f2 O5 DYou needn’t fear anything
$ g) q/ A0 F/ X" JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 F- m0 l, o7 M: n9 CEvery other word you utter is love
4 q2 a- U& C' E% J/ wI really want to know just how much you love me
# _7 T1 \9 U1 q7 A+ |I love you I love you with all my heart
4 b( \+ R7 M/ DNothing can compare to my love
% f4 J' B4 E+ {+ Q6 Y" TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! C7 w' `1 Q8 d* u) ~% {- |8 y& ?The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  f* J; Y% ]& _! C' ZI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
6 I% t, g) h7 M, H( M0 xYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 H) h% z: y1 V1 ~, ~! MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ Y+ j$ R" }: w. h. G& D, }<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 s. S4 m) U1 [5 b; l% P<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' @6 E, u5 Z2 b% a7 A; k<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' m4 e) c7 @, C0 @" X. f9 C3 R<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 i2 e4 k) \" {& t2 K<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
3 k. }$ V1 ]: f9 Z* L4 c0 j<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; G5 Z; |( s2 n0 r$ q: r6 k" o<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  _0 d' }& l3 w6 ?; g5 Q<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
+ g3 ^9 r# B' D6 M9 k<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ O6 ~: Y0 v7 `/ u$ c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 H5 ~: ~' q  a  I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& _% W% I& q1 N- ]) {# c  `6 ^8 Q<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
3 B! b; b; v, G5 s" Y% T* [+ T+ M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 p' b3 }& i, _" t; a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& k1 f5 b8 L- ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 g6 r% d- k  P% f! O- w3 `<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: @/ p6 ~- b. Z! O: K% z6 k9 @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
9 s" x$ y# a9 B/ S" ]" j8 O<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  h1 ?1 g- B0 `# X" j5 x. q: D3 X<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
/ k# `1 U. s4 S! A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 g2 [7 p- J. l, \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 f" R' h6 v  F/ P, u5 o; n<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# H% t5 l& ^$ F' J( X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 H' K0 p7 S* k# G7 K, q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( z; i, N2 W+ t! ?4 l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
; G: Q5 q! h! e3 D( _<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 ]$ O/ a% \5 S<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  B( ^: G, V* T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

& c& y' ^! n2 P  b; |9 l: V 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>