【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& R# i" |. k4 UThe moonlight is shining brightly,
8 f! W9 D6 x/ w. AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. r% o4 R# o% x/ k. d; [5 Z- HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ r4 {6 U/ F! R6 i4 y  S9 S$ EWith the moon kissing it every night
4 w% c, W7 C& Y( d' sSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# |  Q; L8 r  H& W; t1 {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: B" w' {. v5 f" j% l. J0 v8 ]Every other word you utter is love
8 T1 w# f6 L  n( [. O+ zI really want to know just how much you love me
7 |" Z, G" u/ m# G/ c2 b, C- |! oI love you I love you with all my heart
7 `, i* M' i1 J# E9 Y$ O1 gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. ]( R$ [9 j5 R- }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ t& s% U* }; @, tI want so much to see inside your heart
$ D9 v! ]  Z: a6 Q+ iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: Q' W' U( ~  DI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) s1 @5 I, W' `' f! s8 ~2 {- CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 |6 l3 ?! s* r+ rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
; K4 \8 Y( N8 b4 ^2 G, A( s" kRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 v& Z# d: u) V# y& m<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
  U3 s% F% R5 b8 o! B: w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; I/ q5 j; \+ r7 \: j) n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 b2 c) J+ a  o5 P% R  ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  i" }  n; Y! F# x0 |, R<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) W/ m4 a5 ]0 D# ?( Z8 A, F) h) Y2 A<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. H; @' W: J, W* P/ i<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 m/ A5 Z  s& V% G7 S<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 g' L5 d; y$ [* S9 d8 A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 a& [- D% I* J6 a6 E# G; v4 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ s% U8 k/ m6 N7 W: [<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 s# u# D$ X) v" X6 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. t# W! m. A* K% |9 O& X<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( V& R) g, {2 Y3 m<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& m& C! s7 Y% l2 u, R# u3 ]# K<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 r9 N+ j, f- Z0 l% Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  M) k' X; {4 R6 U- ^& t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. H9 i5 X! v. [4 G3 A+ D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( M% z5 a# W8 A; u, a  R/ `, m( _<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  b! m5 X5 f' D<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 \5 x/ s" T- e( A; d* e3 ]/ X( h<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" E* p- u) }5 k0 p/ |4 }8 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
+ b( k4 t1 y2 \" L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ W! R) R# S  i4 A" `<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& ?: j9 k' C: o, \. Z. W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# @* P8 r; f" z* L3 B/ t- q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ H" x! C! z  ~' H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 H- r! b% }8 Z- f3 [. y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& Q8 P+ R4 p8 U# h4 T<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 H4 c5 ]4 U* P0 f" ?  E<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& z" m+ B. t/ R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  u, ~! j: p) n* s5 \) i<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ n' q: r1 U$ p. M* A5 m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>