【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
  b! n& `) w9 o- f8 L$ T% Y$ r( bThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 ^1 w6 x& ~3 B  ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% ], |# f+ K5 [  N% X, u2 g; U+ ~From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
  E7 a9 p4 Z* k* @5 FWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 e( ]9 f: ~) d8 hIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% R# c! D, u+ S8 Z2 b% z" g) _Love… just the word love
1 `9 l# d5 e, s9 {1 }" V: h7 dWhy is it so difficult to express?
* U) q$ }' _/ ?( Y6 V8 s$ J5 O: jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% l! p& F+ }1 N) N4 K9 }* KOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ ?8 E1 A$ `# _7 q$ y3 `' H$ LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 Y% c. U1 l! h1 s& `; J4 ~1 S, BCan I entrust it to you?
7 U  ~% p" x4 B: ^* Y, z: G  |5 Q$ U4 @Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, @: Z1 X5 f4 }Why is it so difficult to express?
& e* A1 {& w0 k/ F- B% q8 pI want to confess that I love you,
( w; x. I$ p  j( LBut I never did
/ P7 l" G1 R5 L8 }3 H7 m" |One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 _7 R& V& u0 i1 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) U# d* b2 _  w3 C' L; q- D; ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; {- _$ r" u& S$ @9 TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% D, k3 C. F% X7 J  x/ B1 }4 u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 o+ J1 {0 C0 r# P0 o  j1 K* e. B<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ k" P* u1 {: `: }+ I<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
+ ^8 a1 v, @+ T( d2 S4 G<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  ^5 K! g8 Q: R0 v! J* `. y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 p& C5 J. ?, [+ \8 h: a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 q4 {! u$ e' k9 P<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 E4 q/ m; J5 }3 \! Y! D$ ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ O( c) R/ `* d* ?<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: Y5 K9 V6 E( ^+ L8 j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% }6 W' I1 ~" ]3 ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* ]8 F2 a: Y* ^" M6 o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 k% a/ m! H. f/ Y( G  G8 d/ v, }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* p) F3 R% d" g! C$ [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
1 C. o9 H0 r5 ?. p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  p$ {: T0 F9 z; E/ |2 l- b<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" L9 W  h8 S+ R3 B8 v+ o* @" s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" \$ h, K" S$ x& O. J8 k( p; Z9 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! l" V* Z3 O, j  R5 K0 i<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' T& y0 _% A6 ]$ E( ?& K6 q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% _. e0 Y+ e. R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 Y; E- j3 l; c3 i0 U& i* \/ z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. B( j9 Q' M- u<P>But I never did </P>
$ B" d" j1 [7 ~8 I7 T<P>但我不会 </P>
$ \$ k: q7 n% ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. n* T9 ]  F) d: a% s. y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 @0 y, k" I/ r6 T- u& [- G* H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 Y& A5 U8 Y0 ^! P8 E1 Q3 A7 u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- ?: D) B* Q; f  b0 x% C+ s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* `' Y- N9 K, ~7 p- P  j6 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) ?- G  ]  Z# P8 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) Z' r6 u9 `9 ~) m7 a9 \# S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- i9 O0 s- K+ H) ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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2 D- g& ~2 G, D# _! q5 X3 J 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 h; G, x& \% M5 u! ]7 P: ^% H9 f<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>