【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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2 Y# @+ s/ N1 C/ _, O2 M我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' \9 S5 G$ P8 t; p4 w8 iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 @5 S4 H" g7 E/ `$ |/ B/ Q$ q& T0 ZWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ I( a* ?$ b4 f; R% c4 S0 sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 P! U" @$ }8 T. ~# H" T2 tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, ~  S# V9 u, C' \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 U* l" N* ^3 }1 @1 lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) H" Q' X# c, `' lCan I entrust it to you?
! S' q- D% ]/ p) N# \1 [Entrust my love within your heart
, h( b+ U* q: {0 {" jLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 |/ V3 s+ j, {* l* K' [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) I* l+ U/ P6 g4 K0 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 L6 k, d# I- R0 r4 R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 V+ y, g2 d# y8 {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( B7 ]' H; o2 V4 c9 _<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: o1 ?4 ?0 g9 m1 n# A; r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 C7 s* O7 f0 n0 j, L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 D  o: H& b  j9 w<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( f3 p1 b1 J$ t8 z5 z  j7 _3 E4 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ s: Q( a, M* F& F# ], j<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: q- h; ~' C4 H5 W1 f( O( Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! P; K& S! c# q: b: p1 V( n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 I& X5 ^8 E& M6 n$ @6 F4 ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, N  i2 f; f# k) n# P6 {; p<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 o8 h# S8 _2 {+ L) X% x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ Z& D& L  v! ^& o" ~. m3 Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 l1 h# u- g( u1 G5 K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( Q8 {5 \# h4 \# z) z$ u: _5 l% N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. N' Q/ c3 I# R/ o  d$ n$ r3 t! k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 Q* X: I, e7 G- P# Z: |<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ B! l4 Y) k. E) c7 @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: H/ \: @" N1 m4 H& q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  y% ]+ A+ m5 F& M# \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 m3 K2 s- [5 I. q, n/ R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
1 N2 Q6 j; y9 L$ F8 L<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
7 @0 L) d9 Z0 S! w9 G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% M" B0 [, [" @2 J7 n0 Q: F& H1 A<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ L$ h: p+ `; G1 s' T- p4 X7 P; U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* e4 d& d  F- j) [4 z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 Y9 x) }% I) q0 {4 f$ i3 L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 i# j. ^, i$ _$ w2 u* {. r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 W9 C+ v6 s4 X8 r. q3 K8 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# k+ K3 x0 W9 z4 x9 H2 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 L7 P, W8 P+ ^. @- T: ` 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 F# |% i% I$ |/ `; g这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 t" L4 @- i1 ]$ i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>