【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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# m, `9 y1 b: X" U; u! ^我另将歌词附在此。
8 {/ Z; r) q+ `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- s3 l! H$ p' G1 CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 d# j! ~% G' F; Q4 m( vI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ t% m3 c5 p  CI want to confess that I love you,
9 E0 k* z0 E' }0 X* h9 p4 M$ `( z2 tBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; L5 o' d: x8 M7 W' }( uIf today isn’t too late,
) Z9 a  |; ?# Q! eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' o: {. G. x! B% w* S. rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
2 H  G5 W+ U+ m  a& H0 R" ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 M6 }9 v3 {0 O% X5 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 \: ~7 F* D% w1 @  {7 B7 R/ DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% B- q5 c# Q2 }0 `1 A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 v; C& y5 ~7 A, j) h<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# @. }  I4 q8 @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& t5 ^" Q; R1 D7 C3 G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 z+ A' E9 V1 G8 L. _<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 g9 \+ ]  ^; W) A+ z3 C. l, p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ a, S7 g" E& f. q' n; ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ x0 R6 X, t) Y<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 J5 Y6 {/ ?( @. U% {2 z<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 u9 f- ^: e# m9 W5 H4 Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# A5 U3 Y0 c" [0 D, v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  w/ Q/ N5 x7 {! ?# k" q/ X" v<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; d& }( m: r. T1 A% w% e# g/ Q" o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ s$ j+ ?$ ]- [<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 b/ F: d1 g* f0 k+ M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 b2 f( @) n# Q* P4 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 T" W& |! ?( E. J, F7 U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& a2 ?* Q5 g- z0 b+ U+ R+ v1 X9 O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 F: I4 w; v. d& f- _, b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# c  O6 N/ H0 D% t; }4 Y3 a4 E  u6 b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 v: C( g5 j5 R/ b3 h5 O9 d9 l<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ O# z" Q/ Y- f4 W9 ]3 x<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! H7 C% d6 r) s<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 S2 V* y' A$ k& j<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' \! h7 N' w6 E( U4 a3 j0 X8 l% n. `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 R# O. U6 M0 v, S5 C* r: ?3 {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 F) H; `* v( B# a7 A" Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 ^9 c* x% V( e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ R8 k1 D, N/ i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 S3 |" A: {. p: F" {<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 Y6 l& \, |" b, @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

8 ?9 t1 d! [- G' ?& P/ N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  E5 F( M/ @# j9 g& D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>