【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
7 h" \& d! Y$ O! S' z9 RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 T; l2 \0 ?2 N5 P. zFrom the first moment we met,
3 b' t8 t. ]$ m/ J: {% b0 C; N. cI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ ]8 C! U2 w; E; n# F# L$ OI would probably know how you feel
: z2 r$ ~- ^$ h6 p. o1 s8 e3 LLove… just the word love
0 A; Y/ |5 Z5 [( ]Why is it so difficult to express?
+ t( v  [3 X0 W. Z2 q: p4 ~9 bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 {# C, y* D% I+ f* |6 e. yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 a+ s, D2 B+ ]6 s$ lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% m1 ]! d( y& b+ T. c4 A! _Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
" l' d/ Y% P' f& UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) h5 R2 b9 E- X8 {, U$ PIf today isn’t too late,
( B$ Y, b% D% _: y5 V! J* T0 WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& J# W+ l* T" A- X* p3 VEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

' t* _# G& l. u$ P3 t" |0 T4 o0 n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# g( p+ v7 u% a' K<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% j# v5 o; Q: t, t- s  Y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' G, t6 f0 [9 f7 D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, i0 h" b2 O" h. ~0 e<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& F  j. x: P* A  z( A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# [8 d- O& B( @0 \* l6 k3 e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 I, L" {, n/ ?+ M. d, ^5 E7 z! I<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 j* ~8 l, k# B/ _" r( X<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 ~4 ^9 C( e" D<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- E2 O6 ^/ H6 G<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 N/ y8 H. s! f  @& L( ~<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 V; R, N' ^" t$ z  i" |! j. a  \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 |0 {8 ]& x8 z" p<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% E, n* y: J& a3 V" U! b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" |+ ]/ P6 U: {) j, p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
3 y% x4 z; ]( y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) S8 A; a4 A! y) I! J! V5 u<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 B( i* U& f4 d5 W  A2 z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; I' N# ~4 @) `" C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 t% m1 e+ O/ D; X. Y3 X) G<P>But I never did </P>
! t2 a7 }) G( i/ _, g' q<P>但我不会 </P>
% }$ u! h- K- l  s. O<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ D% E" M6 @, b! k7 G; u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: o$ [- o$ D0 i; W<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ B9 ^. {6 E9 a5 G7 H4 w  z  p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 _9 _# }" F3 h/ {- Y- X% P( e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, L! P  i% i+ ?) `0 j" T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, z6 k4 X" e$ B% ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 t8 a% u$ t. X3 b/ E<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 g6 G6 V4 k. S4 \. q<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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+ Z% y% }% S  v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, C8 _9 n6 T2 V7 M0 p0 P. ~% w  \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& w" S0 s: j6 L) n. Y2 i4 U<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>