【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
0 U& m$ h! T$ y2 {The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* v, h6 ^3 \9 I! t% q3 r  ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ I( A* Z# \! U- E1 f& R. WFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. v* C2 G/ t- ~, l- xWe meet and talk everyday,
& e4 E6 A, y7 `8 m1 E( |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; y9 I7 y5 ^' ~3 Q& _If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 `( O% [4 [) _) f  F! H: m6 VI would probably know how you feel
* L5 I( ~7 b9 I: t  w+ {- g. gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 j9 ^; C2 H5 S7 [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
( |1 |3 m+ N2 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! A) ~7 R6 D( F  L; dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: [4 O3 E" O2 J# Y/ C- rWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 i6 d9 g. i& D$ G) K2 fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' N6 K0 z) l  P6 b  N" p6 f9 y# u! {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ T4 P) ^/ Y+ k/ x& TIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 P6 q2 B; ^. K/ X& i$ eEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
: \3 W- I1 i; G8 [0 J. J+ |Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 R5 {) r" Y' ^$ Q/ V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 d4 ]: i% g  N! a% v+ U0 ]/ O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- O' v& \7 E- d' a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 [$ c* d* q: q: I1 ?# L2 t/ F- u2 C# x- ^<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ G+ ^. Q9 ~9 [( c$ L8 N$ z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ B* \. `" }: r& @2 k2 ~8 q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ D8 g) W- ^& V" @6 r" {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 G6 s. m, F* m+ S4 {5 y* f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; s: K# n8 a' {' `8 G9 }<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 c5 t8 i$ t6 W! b6 K- X2 F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# T- [- o1 e: r1 g<P>但我不会</P>
5 v: w6 n/ O# h<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 }, ^8 d( k) ]% ]3 q6 w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! t! s1 B$ L* p& q+ q$ o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' G5 n/ x& `- T* E2 F, Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 D1 u' P# C+ J; R, b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; Z2 n9 L4 R3 H  m$ I) r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 W; S& D: B; [3 H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 J, @7 m& E5 u" ^8 S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' m3 f3 d0 `, x6 ]/ R<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 `6 W: Y, x1 E4 [2 I4 n<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" E' O  e8 R% ?9 X6 V9 A5 c9 ]0 ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" k" d  K0 Q- W, o0 q/ F<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* W. ^5 Q9 L9 Q8 _, Z0 h) k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& K' }. g% P$ _5 f" Y" C, k9 n& ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# M! g, B! W5 v4 [<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 }& N0 m. S. ~' B5 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  y& b+ b  |. p: P& _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ ?/ `* @0 S# e# ^. s5 [<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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- y& i' k2 z) ]% D( c% Q* p6 B这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 c- H/ A- I$ Q4 c这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' F1 `" U( f" a* ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>