【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* e' P+ K# b1 v, `5 N3 MFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
+ `$ q( R0 E  J6 }4 ZWe meet and talk everyday,
% t( h' ~6 [3 X3 J/ e& BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 s: o' Z) @8 j/ W% V6 ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 {# ^3 Q/ t( b# G' X! b# oI would probably know how you feel
, H# \2 a4 a; q! p( P* HLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ O0 H# p  N* L: OBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ v. ~! Q0 |1 t1 a6 s9 Y( dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 C/ G- y3 K# _8 ~. K. v3 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" t* u' R  @) N1 |, gBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ W- M/ J. K; ]3 \6 Q5 ?, ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 F3 G, [0 [' E6 F/ TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! _' x7 }7 o  A' Z; ?/ }+ z' VCan I entrust it to you?
2 v$ @! ~: V' y( f. M5 ^& `Entrust my love within your heart
* Q8 E) J" r. I. W5 J. {" RCan I entrust it to you?
# _& W7 O2 Q/ bEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  n+ o9 U, H' g0 E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) Y# h: F. K+ L7 u; _  \8 }+ R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ p& I; W& \$ W/ R/ L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  F( s0 B8 {& X9 m5 v, ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# s: v/ L- S8 R4 j0 I1 k<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
3 s/ S. f! w+ T% b<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 K" t: P) v( k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- A: J2 y. |% Z2 ?3 E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& W. s) e/ W1 u& k" T+ r3 N& K9 y4 Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" L! m3 F  x  C: `8 C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! C' Y3 k! x5 {6 L- b" W<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( m5 ]! T# @' ^5 g- @' W$ I7 \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% ]; r1 Q0 T6 u6 ]" U<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& S# l' N6 u- l  @$ K<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 `2 i( g7 [% v  R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. x8 f) Q) v- B<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! H) N( [+ g4 u. a9 [4 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% w3 a2 K9 T* \# B' D* B( j. L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- q5 s; U2 n9 G6 F8 D7 z: Z; f+ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( T+ m3 _( B' x& N1 W5 T$ n% K8 y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; h. Z5 e9 Y. Y  B<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; i% d. ~) {  I& u3 I+ i- C<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" e, G; F) Z6 g& V, g4 {<P>But I never did </P>
8 Z  s( I4 y" {% `. f<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- n0 q& F6 z+ x  D2 |: Q2 B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  x) X" C) \0 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, w3 B' L" N  |' A$ j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: `6 y5 x, X2 L: \+ Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 L+ G9 c: a( D- t8 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  M; m% C- g( E. [$ i, R7 \1 e<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 M1 d: h( C* @8 d- o7 @* I<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>