【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" z: g$ t7 q) FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ g5 Z% K9 t, B' m) _6 E; nFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 U% w6 M# G/ Q* f# e8 D, pI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ ^" n+ j- l: _; h- J( G4 P% [Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* h& }9 R/ C1 Q! F! q! ~9 t* v+ x# `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& B4 U1 e; @" W! e  Q* OWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 f2 J3 @! ]& l- N6 s7 t4 HI want to confess that I love you,
% Y- V% E4 M! X3 kBut I never did
' T) K& y7 g0 q  R! {, d: BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 [8 ]: O( E  Q, v$ o# [8 mCan I entrust it to you?
' n+ c+ p6 ]4 ZEntrust my love within your heart
9 n$ g( r' A4 u8 p" s1 uCan I entrust it to you?
0 I, s, K8 S5 P9 I9 WEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 q. K$ U9 E& K4 N/ G2 H. n<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 {7 W8 d  a5 z$ z5 p3 _/ t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 E' g) ^' J! g3 \/ \' z" \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; f( ?9 k, c  W& l% P<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; q' V* ~/ U0 ~6 g" t. c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! a' G$ `2 B. @2 T  X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
+ P8 {* e, h) U2 l' ]4 J; F6 a<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ q+ w- y; e* ~! O' `' c! C<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 R0 _  t+ D* B+ k+ u+ o) @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 P9 K2 D2 k& {+ s, Z" o+ M2 }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% `# L( d; D8 l' C. x+ l<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ R: o1 m" e# v+ S( D" i<P>但我不会</P>
: B1 d6 V/ A0 ]: I& u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, e8 B& F! u" m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! e& n0 u1 v" q+ Y/ N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 \% @* P$ m  U; t9 H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 l% V3 \+ B5 m; j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: Q  p' r4 }+ G) o2 v1 e; h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 O6 c1 E4 ^3 H9 x+ ~5 d, S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  b3 `9 o. P5 x0 j8 M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, ?) I- [1 U5 z7 I; t. H3 L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- [: j/ r, W" O3 s# O/ R<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ `2 a+ p2 y9 e6 b/ O<P>But I never did </P>
+ I) D6 w/ K& x/ N<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. `& ^3 D4 U- d3 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 A* y2 J3 [2 d- p  _5 I: {9 M, W* r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ o0 g$ r- U  b! @$ K<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 k8 V8 n% B- Y. t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. S8 u% ~, P7 i% P; Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- [" }! u; j2 R* N! E, B3 V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  ~1 r& H4 y+ T7 E* }+ F  a) }( t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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8 ?5 A8 I+ g5 ?9 U+ X' b5 o这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: ~3 S+ I! c( C. W这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ \, f: E# ]) U2 S$ q* m! @<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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