【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 L% Q' g7 [# J& Z4 L* o5 B0 Z: RThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
1 n1 e4 C* K6 |9 I) m) tWe meet and talk everyday,
: ~& Q% w0 z6 h( d# _0 TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% y: A9 h# @$ X7 A9 rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) Z: x, B* B. {% x6 T7 a& I% @" y( w4 }I would probably know how you feel
* {/ ~: U. u7 z& e7 U. |1 t( z0 w; MLove… just the word love
4 p( S& O) E3 m' L- C' XWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 @  a6 G9 s8 J* o, r- l# y3 TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- B0 G" i7 f, I, M7 p" w8 Q) zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% D+ d3 x. \% E) X- F/ sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: P; g( T, i5 _' [% R# m+ UEntrust my love within your heart
) }( o7 X' [, Z) Z5 GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 x. E$ Z4 Q! qIf today isn’t too late,
$ N8 h1 y6 q2 G$ @$ I7 \3 E  \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) F" ]" ~& o( |( B$ @# _' wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 t3 @. C5 s; O7 t" Y# \& b) u% dCan I entrust it to you?
8 F' z1 Z  ]: c7 k6 H/ Y- H4 A( AEntrust my love within your heart
& L+ }+ f# W, O/ W+ X9 T" ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' D: Q" }$ w* A+ o1 W5 z7 ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 r# Y$ H1 a- g" i) a; T$ l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ i2 ^, B  c$ ^5 p5 p4 ~3 t+ c( F3 c<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 W4 v, f8 r  [4 m1 C* X6 F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 k8 Y# e$ T) s% R$ ?. Z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# }1 r7 S' Z& `6 r. [* J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ J  F# ^; u" U<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% b( M" j- {+ |" ~<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ m8 s8 _: u: a9 L1 o# q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
: F0 g) b; X. E3 z# O2 P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ q0 U' X4 [: F# J/ q4 ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 ^7 ?3 F/ d# m/ K' @. T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- i0 z, ]5 M( Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 O' E* O/ L8 B- L2 {' P0 T$ \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- p/ N3 Q( n) D" ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 o  C9 D! G" C& I! U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: t( L+ I' z  S# Y' U<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 J% M4 v$ Z2 x" I% X) W<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( ~9 ?2 C) F0 o9 `<P>But I never did </P>
$ F# y/ T' y1 Z9 s3 ?% O7 h  r<P>但我不会 </P>
0 X! k/ |1 s, }0 m4 t9 S  e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  H$ ~8 i2 ]  q2 @6 ?<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& _& u) p. C* d! \, j/ V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: F# ?! F  P: C* W7 j<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 t. f2 ?! C& Z+ G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ D) f, ^! n; N' q9 W. t; l<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& e5 H: f% o. L& ?9 ^! B+ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ X: q& Y% w! G, i<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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$ F: k5 P$ O% [8 f8 K, A' Q- }) \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>