【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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  L( R4 ?, c% Y7 M7 j( G' k# |: w+ [我另将歌词附在此。
7 \( q) ]- \# s) f% N2 `2 v9 lThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  a! }* @+ F4 o; H7 i. [/ xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
' q+ e+ @3 i8 t& ~% B+ ^# G1 F9 qWe meet and talk everyday,
/ X# T; q1 ?# l; g. Y5 Y3 |But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' A) I8 K& d. e6 m' `, Z. IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 ^! f, C' W: J0 a9 v4 D; T# ?5 wI want to confess that I love you,
6 A# p+ X  S  B7 V1 V+ }  ZBut I never did
# }" T, Z7 X& k( h+ J# jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( Y# N- M& l* r. _8 jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 k* B4 _4 p+ V+ m& c1 p- f8 E4 EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& E7 M7 H2 w* {2 e8 nCan I entrust it to you?
' `& K: b: ?) N3 t# g5 |8 IEntrust my love within your heart
; j7 [% w" B: d5 i: jLove… just the word love
8 E% W' \$ a9 q2 tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 X+ A3 C: T2 a( t+ `/ b4 MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* H: d5 b/ m7 S1 i) aIf today isn’t too late,
" `7 \3 \4 _7 s' X2 @0 YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: X' A6 W- O. s6 H. ?& hEntrust my love within your heart
4 K0 e5 h. i. q: E! Q6 PCan I entrust it to you?
$ G9 Y! @9 h9 A& I' S) Z) Q+ i0 ~; dEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

7 [# e, k' c5 }3 o; q5 ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 m, c5 f5 l+ r  m9 ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 |# G% @& Z. k* K$ g. ]/ C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ O6 v. p# C1 }/ E4 q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% ^0 a) O  r3 @9 Y% {/ H& j' q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ J: L5 |  s" x7 i& ]7 z( U9 K<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 m  s* @) o4 K3 I4 M<P>但我不会</P>
) }2 b8 e" n; W* C, k$ P; k- @2 E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* c, |  @& l0 X& X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" k5 v8 {  l% s; d( q2 ^<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, H" G& y8 ?, B7 g$ |" d  X/ f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  L* @2 V2 Y% P9 _3 `* S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* z3 B! `$ G5 A- P! M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
0 L# r8 b! c2 M9 x/ k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" @) B& b5 P9 [# o( F+ y: `" C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) {9 j+ K9 L; `. U3 V2 s9 \3 g<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ _3 t  E: s3 g8 Q: y7 T4 k; s<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. j3 s1 u% ?  v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 v" {; F( b4 A1 }( n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
0 Y# M' a& a" J# M  D  Q<P>但我不会 </P>
; r7 v+ R6 B; |: L! n5 i$ f2 h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- m' Q7 Z: ~- s4 M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 V5 s7 ^1 Z- _& @! q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 ^" `! H5 q# K* }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 E( `: i% [% P  G8 b4 ^7 `<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' \1 B. j7 u) Q! x4 [" u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ t, j9 ~# g) ?/ X8 z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>