【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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: d& W% Y+ N7 R+ t0 |5 M我另将歌词附在此。
2 r4 z, d3 O: j) v7 GThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 T$ }8 y' y6 J! l2 RThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* f$ Q5 k! V. w% ]4 i, aFrom the first moment we met,
8 }6 N6 m9 k8 KI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, K& c( J! a3 ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; N- y; q: p* @8 gI would probably know how you feel
- s* U% `. J6 W% d$ @Love… just the word love
! ?4 O6 ^5 t$ O5 k' KWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- C$ `* k' Y% O; iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; y! A+ M/ F9 n" I, RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 G$ s/ M0 P- k% Q4 wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  a" w% L! X7 tCan I entrust it to you?
; Q! @. E- n4 _& CEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
( {! `& z: r* J4 Q. }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
1 L" J# Q# \/ l4 s* i/ j: qBut I never did
# B3 `# ?+ X8 E0 [' j- U" d$ F: y- MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 L8 f; u# J. o. z+ aI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' L( t0 F8 ]' c0 A0 i2 ?Can I entrust it to you?
% \- R/ L7 v6 kEntrust my love within your heart
! z1 G. I. J1 y" _' |Can I entrust it to you?
% z! F4 V2 w) KEntrust my love within your heart
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- }0 n- Z+ C' F# p* V- {+ {[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
; v7 n7 Y; @5 r8 A0 N<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( {- x9 k; f, L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ u* N; A# v; G+ `<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; \& ]; @. l' E/ i; c7 {4 x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* z- H. p$ h5 `2 ~# e# T3 N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, |& U6 h) Q5 ]<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 [; {/ F+ ^" X" l  e. H& U, U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 g+ @. V7 z" j! I" K2 O% P  f2 L* Q! {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: J" u: _( |. {( M) w$ e<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* F  V% y. ~* U; V* W  j- v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 @8 P( p1 n8 z7 H& K. M<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 l. n) R$ K3 B8 y- n9 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! Y+ I( o$ b0 X0 ]8 a) d<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" D0 z" |' \1 e& h* R( S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) X9 f8 a3 ]$ @) i; N+ \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, N' Q6 p2 H7 {9 A: P: `% o& Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. K# ]2 I7 Z+ w# V5 Q/ a% I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" k! d% U) W4 F/ p9 M% h9 K3 p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- a7 i' N3 t9 i3 n, B) v# }# G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 O) |& G$ M! M& J3 m, o; H6 G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! p) H% ]* o3 R( F$ H7 ^# ?<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- W& M0 v- m- ~' \" v* ^. i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* V7 \, O- Q8 [: R) {, F# x<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& W, b3 D* {3 M) F2 `& f$ d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" D" ~2 i& I- w0 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  K- X7 ~; J1 I/ e6 Y7 y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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9 D# _1 O; B: Z2 A* {. b这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ t+ s+ w1 ^3 j: B: @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>