【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
0 U0 ^  H3 y+ Z3 NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
9 r: O7 |) E. XThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# n9 c3 _6 Q/ yWe meet and talk everyday,
8 P# L2 C: S0 `2 q# tBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 B. X$ ?0 l5 ~+ {& ?* d0 R9 ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" V' A# u2 l/ |  f1 c4 VWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% X% [9 H2 Y# C( R% uEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: @& h# G* `$ d7 Z3 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 m$ R  t- w  Z8 a+ P  b! LBut I never did
7 L' d' Y3 V7 ^$ o5 [2 ]& UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, z; _  z" Z+ X% P. r3 y) T( CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* t1 J+ X/ n8 t) ]5 q0 d1 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 ]; m2 s4 n8 I, H: i7 j0 C" T- |2 ^Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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/ L+ Z+ ^" t+ e6 }* N[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' k! ]" }, Y4 j1 i<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 [! U1 H. {  R( h# w, {0 h% C. y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  k- _: H, P; I8 p/ t) g1 S9 o<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: ~. v8 u  f' I% `) l, K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: P* v" S2 t) p<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' z! @* y1 _$ V+ k% }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# a: I6 j/ v% w5 V& ]<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& q- b4 R. W5 v% a6 p  u, ^1 C; e- [: R<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( E2 ~( P8 o  P8 m' {; V<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 h: X' x" l6 l4 B6 b2 V<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  D9 G/ x5 ^5 @6 D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 A& s+ T5 o4 N" o1 x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! Z" ~' r( k( ^& d# |; k* ?<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, R+ ~+ ]" d" j7 ~+ f9 h4 `<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# t- [8 @, O) W/ l- ~' h0 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 L1 T- ?2 z! x9 R5 |+ x<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 N$ d7 k$ p$ z5 Y( `3 v6 M4 T) o- V<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 ^- E5 [9 C5 {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 |/ k: A& u( N" m4 o( F: ~<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( V. e/ k. S( {" |* v<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& K! O" z9 W+ B<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 ]+ c$ r6 D* Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 d; G. \/ m: Y. `  S% u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- o7 B+ r2 Q/ W5 \<P>But I never did </P>
& r" Y# w: W9 S<P>但我不会 </P>
8 ?9 L* f, I! Y" O5 W+ k1 T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 w1 v" A6 O8 N0 R, e/ G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 S  X$ m% p, O$ v/ E<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! e7 F+ d, H. w2 n' D4 p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 R0 I  e% J! ?0 ?9 o5 X% }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 V! X8 W8 y+ l- W$ v8 ~- i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
( X8 m( ?+ ~8 k+ O  T9 s<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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% \$ ?; n/ @+ ]# }3 G8 q  E这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 c' v: D% M5 q2 {6 z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; T; Y/ n& r9 c  w6 S3 O/ y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>