【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" L. e, g! B' u0 ~' H% h3 g; J0 I# CFrom the first moment we met,
4 @5 X& I+ o! r, h( d( dI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
* m9 m, v, g$ j2 q( X4 CBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ y: q- N: R$ R2 z) }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 @! M# P# k: x5 w( Z* a  O+ lI would probably know how you feel
9 @0 b* r+ {: g! c5 qLove… just the word love
- i0 g5 ?% l2 ?# }2 TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' F2 ~/ r0 [$ I# OBut I never did
/ x, t% I7 E& T/ mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
+ ^6 j% S! i: i" CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
' f! C# |" G1 n" u! uWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 v4 ?; }5 r/ QI want to confess that I love you,
; t% F6 z5 o" I& J) z0 w8 MBut I never did
  O; G  ]0 i5 C: B6 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 t- q2 x# T/ eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' t1 h5 s" i* @: C2 a* PCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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+ z: J. \2 P- F* S! d* F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" s9 i. \% @' ]' r. E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- k. F4 Q4 c+ Q  Q<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; ~4 C) w. F% B. }<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: O5 H. O# D6 H/ @4 C<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. ^" ?- i. C1 w2 f8 P; Q+ W<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" e. V; ~1 ?& b4 M/ Q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ ^. |! v, W) x: n0 R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. P  j) Q4 U3 |4 c3 u2 g# c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
6 J$ _; `1 P1 k2 Y3 E4 W# M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) R8 V' I$ F' |+ r; p3 ~6 O<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; T$ `9 ~" M! @+ {<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: w# ~( F8 c: B' _! N: Q3 d1 V<P>但我不会</P>
8 s8 x& q9 s4 ?1 z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 b& Z, x0 W# E  [2 {- L) a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 S8 E  s# z- n3 o' g4 B<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* W9 G: w% e" `7 X/ r  e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* Z2 {' B3 `; ]6 R8 p# g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% `& b+ K7 V* s. r  h9 n) Y+ Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; h- m2 o; o' I# Q  h5 ^$ s<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ `5 S% T; D( v  S, O' V: E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! N* F( f$ a7 ]( s; f" ~<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
5 Y) w, _+ J* R! b2 B3 V+ p1 k<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! T. d" n3 t& k. c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; j; N+ `8 i, T+ z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ h  _1 M2 w6 Q" Z9 @+ Q* k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" j: R  x; ]: \$ T  R) ]  N' X<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% L2 e* C% k' w. H+ ~4 F& ]9 K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>